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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
'Couldn't forget anything shown in the past ' was about story which happened . Not like copying fireworks flaws also πŸ˜† Pls take it on a lighter note 😊
But yes I liked the story . Shreya's thoughts & dialogues were good 😊 Much better than what actually happened in CID
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
I thought you guys restricted us to 5000 words!
Generally speaking I tried to show what exactly was shown by FW on both Shreya's and Daya's front. In one of the episodes we see Siddharth proposing to Shreya but all Shreya's eyes show her is Daya. Siddharth gets a doubt and he asks her but Shreya shrugs away the question and leaves the place.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#13

Really a Big and difficult Challenge...😲
i can Understand as Reading This was a Big Imtaihaan for Me tou Writing pr Aap Logun ka kya Haal hua hoga...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

First the Story Title and TAG is really Wonderful...⭐️⭐️

Story started with Good Point...πŸ‘πŸ‘

As I m Totally Unaware of that Track so i dunt know kay kya hua tha aur ye SID kaun hy ya Kya...πŸ˜•πŸ˜•

but I Like the way, U Unfold that Secret against Sherya...πŸ‘πŸ‘

the Meeting of Abhijeet Sir and SID was little Filmy...πŸ˜‰πŸ‘πŸΌ

Daya Sir Overhear was Good...πŸ˜†πŸ‘

the Narration is really Nice...πŸ˜³πŸ‘

Straight, Simple Confession giving Nice Flair...πŸ‘πŸ‘

Sherya Family very Easily Surrendered...😲😲

all and all a Wonderful Attempt Guys...πŸ‘πŸ‘

Thank You so much...😳😳
Edited by gadhadada - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Dada, you read it!!! I'm surprised πŸ˜› .. Thank you for feedback 😊 ..

Sid is Shreya's would be husband..they were engaged..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

Dada, you read it!!! I'm surprised πŸ˜› .. Thank you for feedback 😊 ..

Sid is Shreya's would be husband..they were engaged..


with Long Brakes...πŸ˜†
Contest Story thi na...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
If I didn't knew the author very well, I would have skipped review πŸ˜†
I felt I should come and review due respect to your hard work 😳
I really loved the way you started from where it was left off and managed to pull a decent story with an ending as requested by the task. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
A great applause for not making OTT or SID the villain guy 😊
I really loved DUO convo at home esp when Daya says he was thinking about Abhi 😳 😳 😳
chalo isi me mei ne apne khushi doond liya πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
I really don't think there is a better way than this for required ending

Coming to down side
When Shreya doesn't love Sid and is in love with someone else, Shreya and Sid wedding would still ruin lives even if there is no debt thread attached to it. It would have made more sense if Sid was shown taken back for this reason as well.
Daya listening over Abhi and SId convo was little filmy, but I support you for it so that story doesn't look dragged or have retelling the told things ...

all in all good job ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Nice story.πŸ‘
Daya vent his emo hugging Abhi..that part was very nice.😳
I like the ending. Sweet, simple.⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

We got the challenge of writing a story to reunite Daya and Shreya from Team Abhishek and Kulasya.

We tried our level best to reunite them starting from where the track had been left by FW on the show which wasn't a easy task for us. πŸ˜†

Please read and review πŸ˜› ... fasten your seatbelt and here you go πŸ˜‰ ...

Reshma and Angel

Excellent story😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
What do I say! πŸ˜†

Not my favourite theme but very well written and has a feel-good factor to it. I wanted Daya to apologise properly and he has done it here. The rest of it... well... no comments. πŸ˜›
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
What do I say! πŸ˜†

Not my favourite theme but very well written and has a feel-good factor to it. I wanted Daya to apologise properly and he has done it here. The rest of it... well... no comments. πŸ˜›[/QUOTE]
hahahaha true πŸ˜†

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