||The Lost Love||::Amazing Race Contest Entry - Page 2

'Couldn't forget anything shown in the past ' was about story which happened . Not like copying fireworks flaws also 😆 Pls take it on a lighter note 😊

I thought you guys restricted us to 5000 words!

Dada, you read it!!! I'm surprised 😛 .. Thank you for feedback 😊 ..

Sid is Shreya's would be husband..they were engaged..

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

Dada, you read it!!! I'm surprised 😛 .. Thank you for feedback 😊 ..

Sid is Shreya's would be husband..they were engaged..

If I didn't knew the author very well, I would have skipped review 😆
I felt I should come and review due respect to your hard work 😳
I really loved the way you started from where it was left off and managed to pull a decent story with an ending as requested by the task. 👏 👏 👏
A great applause for not making OTT or SID the villain guy 😊
I really loved DUO convo at home esp when Daya says he was thinking about Abhi 😳 😳 😳
chalo isi me mei ne apne khushi doond liya 😆 😆 😆
I really don't think there is a better way than this for required ending

Coming to down side
When Shreya doesn't love Sid and is in love with someone else, Shreya and Sid wedding would still ruin lives even if there is no debt thread attached to it. It would have made more sense if Sid was shown taken back for this reason as well.
Daya listening over Abhi and SId convo was little filmy, but I support you for it so that story doesn't look dragged or have retelling the told things ...

all in all good job ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Nice story.👏

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

We got the challenge of writing a story to reunite Daya and Shreya from Team Abhishek and Kulasya.

We tried our level best to reunite them starting from where the track had been left by FW on the show which wasn't a easy task for us. 😆

Please read and review 😛 ... fasten your seatbelt and here you go 😉 ...

Reshma and Angel

Excellent story😊

What do I say! 😆

Not my favourite theme but very well written and has a feel-good factor to it. I wanted Daya to apologise properly and he has done it here. The rest of it... well... no comments. 😛

What do I say! 😆

Not my favourite theme but very well written and has a feel-good factor to it. I wanted Daya to apologise properly and he has done it here. The rest of it... well... no comments. 😛[/QUOTE]
hahahaha true 😆