Beyond Investigation (Ep. Name : Behrupiya)...(New Story@page 48) - Page 8

Originally posted by: visrom

Finished reading both parts and this is acvery good one! The kidnapping and holding Abhijeet to ransom was like a few other stories I have read here and in fact the speaker on Abhi's shirt was like one of my own stories. However, the twist in the end and the motive for kidnapping was totally unexpected and unique. The reactions on Abhijeet's face and all were written very well and I could visualise it. 😃

Your style is easy to understand and makes reading effortless. Please write more stories. 😊

diya...I've been here for 5 years. we had a Duo kidnapped story contest in 2011. we had 16 entries! so I can't name one. 😳


My own story is not like this but the idea is ...if you have time do read ...😊

www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3906087



Btw I have not read any story from FF forum.

Originally posted by: gadhadada

hahahhaha...😆😆
u tried alot to make Abhijeet Sir, Sauve Hero...😉😉
but sadly, RONY stole that Role... heheheh...😳😆
really His Reason of Dushmani was Perfect and Correct...⭐️⭐️
Somehow the way U beaten Him was Not Appealing...😉😉
as CID Team was late which is Confusing for Me...😕😕
BTW, U did not Tell how Abhijeet Sir got GURU...😕😕
I like that U restrict Both Cops for Fighting...😉👏👏
Good but CID Team Late Entry little Disappoint Me...😛
Rony Confession was Nice...😳👏
DUO Conversation at Hospital and ACP Sir Specific Tease was Jaan of This Chapter...⭐️⭐️
really Missing these Flicks...😭😭
its was an Unexpected Story Junior...👏👏
i Loved that Riya Selected U for Executed it...⭐️⭐️
cz Her Selection is Best...⭐️⭐️
U really Worked Marvelous and satisfactory in This Story...⭐️⭐️
Keep it Up Baccha...👏👏
a Big Thank You so much...😳😳

Originally posted by: visrom

diya...I've been here for 5 years. we had a Duo kidnapped story contest in 2011. we had 16 entries! so I can't name one. 😳


My own story is not like this but the idea is ...if you have time do read ...😊

www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3906087



Btw I have not read any story from FF forum.

Originally posted by: 23Diya

Ain...!! 😲

Itna emo to nhi laga likhte waqt...

Phir sab aisa kyu keh rahe h...

Jyada ho gaya kya...😕

Chalo good that u liked it...

Thnx for the review...

(FF ka fb IF pe)😆😉

mujhe toh parte waqt emo laga.

Originally posted by: 23Diya

What senior does after finding my story on IF...

OMG...!! Diya ki story😲...(open it)...ufff...phir wahi purani wali...😡 Chalo abb phirse FF kholna parega...(goes to ff jldi jldi...) Arre yaar, itni sari love stories k beech me ye choti si stry kaha dhundu...ek to itni puraniy post ki h, dhunda bhi mushkil ho gaya h...itne pages dekh liye pata nhi kaha chupa diya h...😡...aha!! Mil gayi...(open review section)...mera review to sabse upar hi hoga😉...ye raha...(copies it, comes back to IF n paste it)...ho gaya kaam...short me...smart parrot😉...(looks at watch...) Ye kya...10 minute lg gaye😲...itne me to isse double type kr deta...

Sorry senior, don't mind...I was just using my creative brain...😆

Thnx for d review...😳

Originally posted by: aditya_anjaana

mujhe toh parte waqt emo laga.

Rony mera fav OC criminal ban gaya ab.

Post that OS here too...others can enjoy the emo then.

Originally posted by: gadhadada

🤣

Excellent Use of Junior Creative Brain...👏👏

Thank You so much...😳😳