Beyond Investigation (Ep. Name : Behrupiya)...(New Story@page 48)

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#321

Originally posted by: visrom

Because GD asked me 🤣

I'm stuck between a and a 🤣

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Shilpam56

@Shilpam56

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#322

After about hiw many years after I am reading...

Aacha laga ..

Aaise likha karo ...

Aaise likhoge, tab hme thode thode padhne milte hai...

But aap hai ki sirf bhav khate hai

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Shilpam56

@Shilpam56

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#323

After about hiw many years after I am reading...

Aacha laga ..

Aaise likha karo ...

Aaise likhoge, tab hme thode thode padhne milte hai...

But aap hai ki sirf bhav khate hai

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Swathi

@swathi17

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#324

Welcome back Diya di! Loved the whole scene! It was realistic and relatable too! Glad to see the veterans of the forum as well 😛 Keep writing more! GD, Vis di and Shreya di are the trio of this forum for now 😉

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#325

Originally posted by: Shilpam56
After about hiw many years after I am reading...
Aacha laga ..
Aaise likha karo ...

Aaise likhoge, tab hme thode thode padhne milte hai...
But aap hai ki sirf bhav khate hai

Thank you Shilpam.😃

@bold, Forum itna soona soona hai...kiske liye likhu?

Edited by 23Diya - 7 years ago

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#326

Originally posted by: swathi17
Welcome back Diya di! Loved the whole scene! It was realistic and relatable too! Glad to see the veterans of the forum as well 😛 Keep writing more! GD, Vis di and Shreya di are the trio of this forum for now 😉

Thank you Swathi. Glad to see you here.😃

@bold, Yup...and I'd like to see them solving some cases again like the on-screen trio, won't you agree?😉

Edited by 23Diya - 7 years ago

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DUO-MRF.

@CIDlover-01

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#327

After don't know, how long, came here and this beautiful surprise was waiting for me... 😃

Tight wala hug guriya for sending me the link otherwise I wouldn't be able to search this beautiful piece of work, thanks a ton deary... 🤗

Have read your sweet effort sweetheart, after so very long as I really miss your writings, have told you in PM too... 😳 😳

The OS was awesome, I loved it to the core, enjoyed it thoroughly and you really remained successful on bringing back that angry Abhijeet sir, I could see him storming out from the Bureau again, hehehe, I just love my angry dude... 😉

Wish you lots of happiness in you life guriya, khush raho hamesha...

Stay safe, love you... 😊😊

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23Diya

@23Diya

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: CIDlover-01

After don't know, how long, came here and this beautiful surprise was waiting for me... 😃
Even I don't remember how long it is...But you did come at the right time😆

Tight wala hug guriya for sending me the link otherwise I wouldn't be able to search this beautiful piece of work, thanks a ton deary... 🤗
Return tight wala hug...
Well, there are a few other Story links in your PM too that I had sent last year and earlier this year. Please read those too if you have the time. If you are reading, you can also get the links of stories from the first page in this thread. Hope you enjoy😃

Have read your sweet effort sweetheart, after so very long as I really miss your writings, have told you in PM too... 😳 😳

The OS was awesome, I loved it to the core, enjoyed it thoroughly and you really remained successful on bringing back that angry Abhijeet sir, I could see him storming out from the Bureau again, hehehe, I just love my angry dude... 😉
Thank you so much...It really makes me happy to see people liking my work and nothing can be more encouraging to write more.😳😳
Yeah...that's my favorite character as well, remember...😉

Which PM di? I didn't receive any recent PM from you😕

Wish you lots of happiness in you life guriya, khush raho hamesha...
Stay safe, love you... 😊😊

Edited by 23Diya - 7 years ago

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DUO-MRF.

@CIDlover-01

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#329

Originally posted by: 23Diya

Yeah so very right sweetheart, thankfully came here at the right time... 😃

Hehe, thank you guriya, khush raho hamesha...

Oh, thank you baita jaan for telling me about all this, will surely check your other works too... 😊 And will share the feedback with you... 😈

Love you pyari doll... 🤗

Hahaha yeah baitu, I do remember... 😉

Baitu jaan, not a recent one, as I am not coming online from god knows how long... 😛

I am talking about that decades ago time when we used to chat on FF... 😆 😆

Wish you happy and safe life sweet doll, take care... 😊

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1.KRITTIKA

@1.KRITTIKA

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#330

kal ki episode dekha? woha firse ACP ne Abhijeet ki loyalty pey ek sawal kiya.. and when some of fans were discussing they were angry with acp

but I was looking at it from different point of view.. koi jab kisi pey bahut bharosa krta to usse koi bhi chuk expect nahi krte na accept kr pate. aqsar elder siblings ko parents se yea face krna parta

most of the stories ignore ACP ki mentality and ignore this point
😭

you showed it very beautifully 👏

and yadeein taxa or diya yaar.. WO gari scene yaad agayi
Daya manaoying and Abhijeet ankhe dikhaying.. coatless Abhijeet babu ko firse miss bhi krwa diya 😳