CID Story: Nakul Returns 2 - Page 2

first! I apologize to SHERYU and her every fan even every Reader of this story...😊😊
just take it as ONE READER, Feedback which you all easily skip, Avoid, Ignore or neglect...😛😛
SHERYU, the Story start nicely, I really enjoyed that letter part having puzzles...👏👏
The Queen Necklace puzzle...⭐️⭐️
It's gives good Feel that cops rather waiting for the accurate time if Blast as per threatening letter, started preparation to stopping it and went to marine drive...👏👏
The whole sequence of SEHAR as Parkour was outstanding...⭐️⭐️⭐️
It's one of highlight of your story...⭐️⭐️⭐️
somehow SEHAR character was more appealing for me than NAKUL...😉😉
I like her Every Move either giving dodging to cops! put SALUNKHY sir specs over his head and that KISS on her father in law Cheek...😆😆
Everything was Perfect even Her escape too...⭐️⭐️
BTW, here u did not mention that either she rushed away after Bursting Cops vehicles tires as after that Journey, ACP sir suggested NIKHIL about having another vehicle behind them...😕😕
Khair, now the second puzzle as MANHATTAN and EMPIRE ESTATE Building...👏👏
Seriously this us the Bestest part of your story boss...⭐️⭐️
excellent way to connect Manhattan with Nariman point...⭐️⭐️
well done SHERYU...👏👏
After that another, Letter and a small journey...😃😃
Now, my Criticism time...😈
ACP Sir casually ignored that security plan either it sent through DIG, was it not weird that He even thing to at least glance over it although knew about the importance when PURVI said that it Sent by DIG...
Another, it's feeling little unacceptable that cops did not know about sum Big buildings, outlets situated at Nariman point...😲😲
OK, I did not say that they sailed as it as... But somehow like.. Sir wahan ek bara conferencing hall bhi hy building mein aur buht outlets bhi...😕😕
Ab Mumbai itna bhi bara nahi hay Kay my main cheezein Yaad na rahein khas kr Business Hub area sy related Yaar...
NAKUL called his DAD, Ok from any number either it's khancha Sim, I international Sim, social Site call Apps but ACP sir or any officer did not say once to verify it...😲😲
same with that GIFT...
It's almost unacceptable that after such big backstab where NAKUL leave 3 months earlier either Leaving a gift, CID still waiting to watch it...
NAKUL fixed cameras over CID Bureau but u did not say about which officer or ny lower level staff either any witness, victims gives help to NAKUL or he fixed cameras on every room even evidence room too...😲😲
Why NAKUL was so sure that cops still not see that gift Box...😕😕
That Puzzle about gateway of India also good.. honestly I loved that board image uh used having the so same markers used on board more than puzzle itself...👏👏
CID cops played as a toys in NAKUL hands Yaar...
I m OK, if u saw them failing but all the time is not possible...KAPOOR Surname also a BullsEye ...⭐️⭐️

If Nakul has a faith that he knew his dad better, his dad also had this feel na which U completely Omitted...

Why SALUNKHY Sir at every spot with Cops...😕😕
The camera idea with self destruction was again a good Attempt...👏👏
The last airport scene was much FWish...🤢🤢🤢
Arry Yaar CID team be there before 15 minutes, evacuated the terminal either knew about the private planes but not blocked any way In and Out either not vanish those pilots prepared to flew those planes...
Staff dispersed people but give space to NAKUL to come with body guards with guns...😲😲
shooting started and NAKUL Won to knock out everyone...😕😕
I m surprised on that Last shot pierced inside SEHAR shoulder..😉😉😆
Sorry to say SHERYU but that end really saddened me regarding that...
If I Compare it with NAKUL RETURNS 1 ... I gave it LESS marks...😉😉
Thank You so much...😳👏👏
Again Sorry boss...😭😭
Hope You and your fans not Hurt and so sad and I ignore this feedback...😳😳