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Posted: 11 years ago
#21

First, A Big Thank You PUJA DII for Coming Back...😳😳
Now without Wasting Time, coming to Ur Story...😊😊
I Like the Flow of Ur Story...👏👏
the Twist Turns really gripped the Reader...👏👏
abhi Ek Problem Solve Nahi hota tou Dusra Tayyar...😆😆
I Like Culprits Ideas to Shattered CID Team in Many Ways...👏👏
Its also Good to have Open Challenges especially through Media in presence of Viewers (National either International)...⭐️⭐️
the Idea of DUO Missing were Good but Not Convincing...
I dunt Understand that in this 20 days Gap, Nobody consult DUO... kya ACP Sir ko Pata nahi laga kay DUO wahan PUNE pohanchy hee Nahi SHAMSHER ko ly kr...😕😕
In 20 days mein DUO kay Ghar kisi nay bhi Check Nahi kiya...😲😲
Na Un kay Call Records sy ye pata chala kay DUO ka Phone kub Khula n Band hua tha...😕😕
kyunkay ABHI Sir jub Bureau aa kr bolty hain kay main tou Ghar mein Soya hua tha tou kisi Team Member nay ye Nahi kaha kay Kub... Hum tou Ghar gaye thy aap kay...?😕😕
isi tarah DAYA Sir nay Apnay Cell sy Jub Us Rest House ka Photo Khencha tha tou Mobile Switch On hoga na... ye Pata chal skta tha kay Wo Us Waqt Kis Area mein tha..?😕😕
ABHI Sir nay Bureau aa kr kaha kay Main DAYA ko Phone Try kr raha tha pr Us nay Uthaya Nahi... tou kis Phone sy..??? kya Landline sy..??? wo Cell kyun Nahi ly kr Bureau aayey...?😕😕
the Same Set Idea with Different Wallpaper was also Good...👏👏
I Loved Media Role...👏👏
the MISFIT Officer was Awesome...⭐️⭐️
the 2 Man Killing Idea was Nice...👏
I Like Salunkhy Sir Searching about Finger Prints through Neck...👏
then Team Investigation was Really Adorable...👏👏
I Like that ACP Sir Headed the Case and Never Let Down His Second in Command whether always with Back Up of His Boys and side by side Inter connected with Each One...⭐️⭐️⭐️
the Involvement of Whole Team in Solving Case was Appreciable...👏👏
The Killing and Daya Sir trying to Convincing Abhi Sir was Nice...😊
The DR part was really Informative...👏
Tea Stall, Garage, Colony, Bungalow and Secret way through Pool was also Good... 👏👏
Loved that Poison Searching Clue which worked during 6 hours...⭐️⭐️
that Antidote, Ambulance and Salunkhy Sir Idea was the Best Part...⭐️⭐️⭐️
All and All, A Good Gripped Investigative Case I Read after Long and Enjoyed it All...👏
I m so Sorry to U and Ur Fans to Point Out Some Loopholes in Ur Story...😊😊
Otherwise Its really Zabardast...👏⭐️👏
Thank You so much DII...😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for ur comment. I will try to clear ur doubts.
1st scene tha jisme ACP sir ne kaha ki unlogo ka kuch pata chala. Wo log Abhi Daya Ko hi dhoondh rahe the. Maine detail nahi likhi ki un logo ne kaha kaha or kaise kaise duo ko search kiya.
2. I m so sorry maine us phone wale loop hole pe dhyan nahi diya tha. Mujhe bilkul dhyan me nahi raha phone wala part. I m sorry aage se dhyan rakhungi nd thank u tumne meri mistake ko pointout kiya.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: poojaluvnbt

Thanks for ur comment. I will try to clear ur doubts.
1st scene tha jisme ACP sir ne kaha ki unlogo ka kuch pata chala. Wo log Abhi Daya Ko hi dhoondh rahe the. Maine detail nahi likhi ki un logo ne kaha kaha or kaise kaise duo ko search kiya.
2. I m so sorry maine us phone wale loop hole pe dhyan nahi diya tha. Mujhe bilkul dhyan me nahi raha phone wala part. I m sorry aage se dhyan rakhungi nd thank u tumne meri mistake ko pointout kiya.


ab yahan GD ki Entry ho gayii hay na...😉😉😆
arry Nahi Nahi Chalta hay...👍🏼
Aap nay Buht Buht Acha Likha hay...👏👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I like ur stories...i read all old stories...i will try to read this one soon..
I have just added the links to the archive.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: raokrithika

👏👏👏 no words I can just say Superb ⭐️

aisa laga ke mein cid dekh rahi thi 👏 i was getting glimpse is each n very scene n their expressions 👏


thanks kriti. U r so sweet main accha likhu ya bura tu humesha accha accha bolati hai.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gadhadada

ab yahan GD ki Entry ho gayii hay na...😉😉 arry Nahi Nahi Chalta hay...👍🏼 Aap nay Buht Buht Acha Likha hay..

thank u GD. Ur comment r always important 4 me. By the way u r on Fanfiction Blog na?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: poojaluvnbt

thank u GD. Ur comment r always important 4 me. By the way u r on Fanfiction Blog na?


Yes, I m reader of Some Writers Only DUO Stories...😳
I Posted Some of My Stories too there from DAYA DAREDEVIL and KRITTIKA IDs...😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Am so sorry Di.. I had read 2nd part but forgot to post the review..
Well, coming to story, the ending was nice. I liked it.. Thank you, atleast here ACP sir said in favour of Abhijeet infront of DCP.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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DAYA DAREDEVIL maine to iski sari stories padh dali specaily funny wali. Maine wo blog new new join kiya hai.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: poojaluvnbt

DAYA DAREDEVIL maine to iski sari stories padh dali specaily funny wali. Maine wo blog new new join kiya hai.


acha...
us mein YAAR KO HUM NY JA BAJA DEKHA, CONFUSION/CONFESSION, WATERY BEAR, DUO UNDERSTANDING, HAPPY DEWALII aur GIFT TO MRF... Meri Stories hain...
aur KRITTIKA ID pr.. KUKKU N BABA aur GIFT TO DAYADAREDEVIL Meri Stories hain...

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