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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES
Nice story Dada.. Liked the way you incorporated golden memories in the conversation.. Bringing Asha was a lovely surprise and 'Sorry' was done perfectly too.. Thanks for the refreshing OS and thanks for the idea Vis di.

Yes, First I wrote that with Oldie DUO then realized that Oldie DUO not present in that case...😉😉

then wrote VIVEK name but find it ODD...🤔

Lastly Sparked with ASHA name...😃

I tried to Done that Perfectly baccha...😳😃

Thank You so very much...😳😳

Thanks to VIS DII too...👏

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: debasree04
Nice one GD 👏

But one question - Sudhakar calls Daya sir by his name? 😕
SUDHAKER (embarrass tone): Jee nahi, aur Apni Nahi bata rahy... yahan Main DAYA kay liyey Coffee banany gaya aur wahan DAYA Drawer say Gun nikal kr Farar...

Hope U get the Answer of that SUDHAKER and DAYA Query...😉😃

Thank You so much Yaar...😳😳

Thanks to VIS DII...👏

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: bluetides

And big thanks to u and Vis...🤗

Awww...😳😳

A Big Thank You so much MAO...🤗

Thanks to VIS DII too...👏

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Guys plz Dunt gets Worry...😃

@DEBA,... SUDHAKER said DAYA Sir as DAYA in Missing Bullet that Specific Scene I mentioned in Story...
I m Really Sorry that I Forgot to mention that case in Glossary...

@ANAMIKA... Yes... SUDHAKER said DAYA Sir as DAYA in MISSING BULLET not Because DAYA Sir in Sub Inspector as SUDHAKER is also Sub Inspector... I think just coz of Young Age...😉

Ok dear...thanks for telling...😛

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misha.as

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Very nice story GD...
simply awesome...lovely chit-chat...really refreshing OS with Golden era episodes and short too... ;) Thank you...

Vis Di very nice idea...thanks...

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nsapo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Lovely GD Loved every word of it🤗Very nicely characterized...hope all this comes back...false hopes I know but still😭

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nsapo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Thanks Vis di for suggesting😛

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Himani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Beautiful! Very nicely written and perfectly executed and how you incorporated scenes from the old episodes is something that is praiseworthy ⭐️👏. I liked the maturity shown by the two and others and also that there was no exaggeration of any moment. I didn't feel odd at all while reading it. The glint of naughtiness in the talks between the team is another highlight. I loved the talk between Sudhakar and Freddy sir, it made me feel as if they are quite comfortable in each others company.

Amazing one. Great attempt. And of course, thank you Vis di for the idea 😊.

Edited by ..Himani.. - 10 years ago

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gadhadada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: misha.as
Very nice story GD...
simply awesome...lovely chit-chat...really refreshing OS with Golden era episodes and short too... ;) Thank you...

Vis Di very nice idea...thanks...

matlab U like it More because it Short...😉😆

Thank you so much MISHA Baccha...😃😳

Thanks to VIS DII too...👏