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Originally posted by: kkkloveu

I already read it once..😉😆

reading it again...

again... omg😆😆

going to same ups and downs of emotions..😳

ride se gire to nahi na...😆😆 plz make me assure...😆😉

feeling same fear..👏

omg .. kaisi ladki hai... 😕😕 she used to laugh ... when she is scared...😆😆

like me ...

*** same pinch***

same happiness..⭐️

😳😳😳

cuteness and sweetness...⭐️

😳😳

I like the idea, the plot..⭐️

Thank you...😛😛 a great acheivement for me...😃😃

though i feel it was bad to give him "pitaai" on his birthday..😆

i know but...

sab kuch meetha meetha...

arey abhi sir ko diabetes ho jati to...😲😲😲

na baba na... *** touching my ears***

But enjoying the story as it's nice, and yaar it's actually A BIT LONGER VERSION OF SHORT STORY...😆

nice innovative short long story na...😉😆😆

I like team arrangements and excitement for his birthday...

and vivek wala...🤣🤣

I like the birthday gift daya sir gave to abhijeet...⭐️

daya sir ne jo diya tha...😛😛

Though you know, i feel this topic repeated too much..shreya ones, but it's nice and lovely to read always...though i expected this, but i wanted a different gift..😉

different mind me aaya hi nahi...😕😕

Well that's my point of view, you see..😉

Overall a nice lovely story, you adopting my pattern of story posting..😉😆

nice nice...😆

oye kounsa.. 😕

Thank you so much for the lovely story..🤗

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

Nice story Pari di.. Birthday toh death day bante bante reh gaya.. In the last part timing was quite confusing..still I enjoyed.

Originally posted by: .Nishi.

Congrax on 1st writing pari.
Amazing story. Love it. It's really nice to read such story. Keep writing and thanx 4 it.

Originally posted by: gadhadada

OML! its too Short Parriii Baccha...😉🤣

dada bus ek aap hi reh gaye the...😔😔😡

its really SHORT...😉

okay bada.. u all decide...

now happy...😛😛

Sweet and somewhat Nice too...😳👏

but i didn't add sweets in it...😕😕

I really Enjoyed the Ride...😃👏

u tied ur seatbelt tightly na... aur popat ussko to kas ke pakda tha na...

my sweet and innocent parrot...😳😳😛

the Length at some place bored but its OK as Ur First attempt...😊👍🏼

okay .. will take care...😊😊

Thank You so much Baccha...😳😳

Originally posted by: kkkloveu

😲😲

pari..😉

Originally posted by: visrom

Nice attempt Pari

thank you di...😛😛

Nice to see some khoons and khabris in a birthday story thread.

haahaa..

thats why the tittle is ...

something different...😆😆😆

I wish you hadn't injured Abhijeet on his bday

i know... sorry for that...

, but since it's your first story it's ok. 😊

thank you...😃😃

Do write more. 😃

Originally posted by: KhotaSikaShreya

Pari a lovely story and welcome to the writing world of CIDians. 😉

thank you di...

waise hum to bin bulaye hi tapak padhe...😆

I loved reading the story.

thank you di... i'm delighted...😃😛

You had a lovely duo conversation at the beginning. And including young Shreya was great. It really felt good to read this with everything going on in CID right now.

Congrats Pari sis on completing one month and also turning Goldie...😃😃

Congrats Pari for turning into goldie nd completing 1 month in IF🥳
thanks 4 the rockkingg party😃
those dishes r really very tasty,tumhare haathon me toh sachme jadoo hain pari😉😆