~~ ! CID 16th Anniversary Special POEM Contest : Voting Begins ! ~~

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Hello Everybody! Before CID completes its journey of 16 long years, its time to see all the lovely entries for the POEM Contest sent by the talented poets of our forum and finally select the best among the lot. As you are already aware, we had 3 Themes for the contest :





1- Memorable moments of CID which makes it special

2- Women Power of CID

3- Forensic - Integral part of CID

There have been in total 7 entries.

Theme 1 : 2 Entries

Theme 2 : 3 Entries

Theme 3 : 2 Entries

Now, there have been mixed number of entries for each topic. However, since the response to every theme has not been up to the mark, we cannot hold the voting on the basis of each theme. Thus, YOU will have to vote for 3 best entries from among the entire list of poems that is posted below.

example:

MY VOTES: ENTRY 1, 5, 6.

or

My VOTES: ENTRY 1, 2, 4

The LAST DATE of voting: January 19, 11:59 p.m.

The Poems will be posted in the next few posts. Read them and please vote in the pattern mentioned above. If anyone votes for less than or more than 3 entries, that vote will be discarded. If there is any confusion, feel free to post it here or PM me(Shagnika).

So, here we go. Start reading the beautiful creations by our very own talented Poets!



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THEME 1

Memorable moments of CID which makes it special

ENTRY 1


A middle aged Man entered with Two of His Sub Ordinates

its the First appearance on Screen CID Head, ACP Pradyuman's

(kissa raat kay shikar ka)

Sr. Inspector Viren hurt when His Junior DAYA being Emotional

He trapped in a case and ACP backed Him with Proud and Rational

(the case of Missing Bullets)

1998 is the year of return of Sr. Inspector Abhijeet

ACP Pradyuman feels His strength gets Doubled with this Greet

(the case of Stolen Dynamite)

Viren and Jayent back to their Previous Origins

when CID having jori of Abhijeet and Daya in positions

(March to June 1999)

Sudhaker accussed but Fredrics is always at His back

the Juniors showed concern with each one and their Duties deck

(the case of Framed Murder)

the Girl tried hard but cant have any Next option

the Martyr of Aditi always remember as pride for the Nation

(Mad Bomber)

ACP turned Blind in Accident and bound in a Painful shell

but its not lower His Zeal and He worked with Great Will

(the case of Blind Witness)

Anjalika coming in Forensic, with rage and doubted on ACP

feeling Guilt when find ACP was not a Murderer of Her Hubby

(the case of Deadly Proposal)

Rocky comes inside CID swiftly wearing a Mask of Abhijeet

Daya got Him first but its output coming in shape for His Death alomost

(Behropiya)

Abhijeet arrested ACP and fired at Him inpresence of all in Bureau

its a Weird Plan of Trio, without inclusion of Team irespective of any Scenario

(ACP Pradyuman's Giriftar)

A Sweet, young, Bubbly Officer Tasha shoted by a Culprit during Fight

She Lost her life and completely Vacant the Specific place and Post

(Kahtre mein Tasha)

Freddie screams, Daya grabbed and Abhijeet comes in mid of Call

the Bullet had the name of Daya entered inside His Buddy chest wall

(Abhijeet in Coma)

His Blue Stripes Shirt dipped with Blood stains due to Shot laid at roadside

when His Companion coming, wrapped Him, loudly calling and crying sat beside

(Abhijeet ka Inteqaam)

Daya arrested in Murder, His Buddy be there to prove Him Innocent and Deary

when Abhijeet Lost memory and accussed for Murder, His friend repeats the Same Story

(Daya aik Qatil) (Khatre mein Abhijeet)

Rajat kidnapped Tareeka to Safe His father and Himself with Solid Proofs

Vineet arressted by Officers Hurts all but Duty always comes in their Life firsts

(Guhegaar CID Officer Rajat) (Giriftaar CID Officer Vineet)

When Fredrics wife Manesha comes under CID interogation and Doubts

KD pathak comes to safe DCP Chitrolay when He was presented as Culprit in Courts

(CID virrudh Adaalat) (Freddy ki Biwi Aik Khooni)

Dr Salunkhy Accused, arrested either Killed by His Best Buddy

whereas Tareeka also got in trouble so many times without being ready

(the case of Clinching Evidences) (Aropi Dr Salunkhy) (Khatre mein Tareeka)

Purvi proved as Traiter in CID when trying to search Her Past from Case Clues

Sherya comes Under Pressure while Nikhil trying to fight for his Mother health Sakes

(CID mein Ghaddar) (Sherya ka Shaitan) (Nikhil ki jung)

He was Screaming as Loud as He can, when the Plam lost the Grip

Abhijeet fall at Satara but rescued as His Friend and team be there in Trip

(Kaash Special)

He shoted in Boarding, boomed His body with bomb blast but cant move to an Exit

As His Pal rushing towards Him and takes Him in time without loss of any minute

(Daya ka Dewali Dhamaka)

They roaming Nationwide for investigating so many Cases and hanged the culprits

Manali, Goa, Rishikesh, Haridwar, Kolhapur, Kolkata, Pune, Aurangabad, Shirdhi and Satara as their Favroutes

(Chase Series) (Kolkata mein target Daya) (Mission Shirdhi) (Mission Goa) (Manali Murder) (Reshikesh mein Aprash) (Haridwar mein Khoon) (Kaas Special)

Worldwide their Appearance tensed and scared Big Dons who Shiver Once a Bit

when Trio Chasing behind and went to London and Switzerland with complete kit

(Trail in London) (Aakhri Chinauti)

They are always present in Every Aspect of Society where Crimes occured and Humanity haphazerdeneous

either its Azadi Special, Bhaidooj, Dewali, Holi, New Year or any Religious Celebrations

(Azadi ki jung ACP Pradyuman kay sang) (Khoon ki Dewali) (Happy New Year) (khoon bhari Holi) (Ravan Dehan) (Mahabharat)

the Emotions, expression, care, concern, friendship, Love, Respect, Loyality and Responsibility

these people does not fullfill the Duties but living a Strong Bound which make it Special for all and me


ENTRY 2

CID ne yunhi nahi ek sunehra itihaas bana daala

Jaane kitne anginat lamhon ne ise khaas bana daala..

Har wo ek chehra jo is show ki pehchaan hai

CID ke chaahne waalon ki mano jaan hai...

Apne liye toh unse juda har lamha khaas hota hai

Jinhe dekh har baar nayepan ka ehsaas hota hai..

Un lamhon ko dekh ke hum sabke chehre khil jaate hain

Jab bhi saath milkar ve hanste hain gungunaate hain...

Kahne ko ek team hai per dekho to ek pariwar hai

Desh ki khaatir har pal jo mar-mitne ko tayyar hai..

Yun to ek duje ke liye ve jaan ki baaji lagaate hain

Lekin duty ke aage rishte pichhe reh jaate hain...

CID ki investigation ka andaaz sabhi ko bhaaya hai

Jis saahas aur soojhboojh se inhone harek case suljhaaya hai..

Koi bhi suraag inki nazron se bach nahi paata hai

Kitna bhi shaatir ho muzrim aakhir pakra jaata hai...

Par jab bhi musibatein hamare officers pe aati hain

Dil se nikalti hai duaayen aankhen nam ho jaati hain..

ACP sir ki leader ship ne is team me jaan daali hai

Har mushkil haalaaat mein aage badhke kamaan samhaali hai...

Jisne CID ko hi hai sabkuchh apna maan liya

Farz ki khaatir apne rishton ko bhi hai kurbaan kiya..

Daya - Abhijit ke naam se yun to sare muzrim tharrate hain

Par apne dilkash andaaz se ve hum sab ka dil har jaate hain...

Inki dosti ne is show ko aur bhi khaas banaya hai

Kitni shiddat se in dono ne is rishte ko nibhaya hai...

Aisa atoot bandhan hai ye jo tode se toot nahi sakta

Saansen chhoot jaayen lekin ye rishta choot nahi sakta...

CID ki success me forensic doctors ka bada yogdaan hai

Jinki informations ne sada viewers ka badhaya gyaan hai..

Apne Dr.Salunkhe ke paas knowledge ka khazaana hai

Unke bina toh impossible koi bhi case suljhaana hai..

ACP sir se unki tu tu-main main fake lagti hai

Sach pooch toh Jodi unki laakhon mein ek lagti hai...

Show me twist lane ko jab DCP bureau me aate hain

Apni teekhi baton se ek aag laga kar jaate hain..

Bada maza deta hai Freddie ka aatmaaon se darna

Aur abhijit sir se kehna, plz meri wife ko phone mat karna...

CID ne naari shakti ko ek naya mukaam diya hai

Purvi aur Shreya ne bhi apne farz ko khoob anjaam diya hai...

Sachin apni smartness se fans pe jaadu chalaate hain

To Nikhil aur Pankaj apni baaton se sab ko gudgudaate hain..

Aur bhi kitne officers aaye-gaye in solah saalon mein

Chhod gaye kuchh yaaden jo bas gayi hamaare khayaalon mein..

Chaahe wo Sudhaakar ho ya ho Inspector Asha

Vivek,Rajat,Vineet ho,Muskaan ho ya ho Taasha...

Unki maujudgi ne bhi kai lamhon ko yaadgaar banaaya hai

Aur CID ke is safar ko aur bhi shaandaar banaya hai

Apni dua hai ye safar kai saalon tak chalta rahe

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THEME 2

WOMEN POWER OF CID

ENTRY 3

They felt like a flower struggling to bloom

Like a caterpillar in a cocoon

Nobody could see God's hidden work

Until the day they broke through, spread their wings

And Arose as butterflies do.

Inspiring a generation, she paved the way

4 Rinas, The Dying Statement, a list as non-exhaustive as her talents

An inspiration to all she was with her manner, her disposition, her swagger

Never short of style, never devoid of panache

Inspector Asha was the phenomenon of the early years, her departure a painful dagger.

Many came and went, until the next bright scintilla dazzled

Inspector Muskaan, smart, chic and palpably charismatic

Her bonding with the team a joy to behold, her voice could stir the dead awake

Known for her dauntless strides, and a brazen personality, she became one of us

Until the mother of all evils struck, and she was left trailing in it's ruthless wake.

The empty hip flasks in our heart were crying out for another Elixir

Right on cue, she pranced in, sanguine and raring to go

Misunderstood she was at first, but as always, the truth was out in no time

And Inspector Tasha filled the gaping chasm in our hearts

A plethora of unforgettable memories, her bonding with the team, with the viewers

She was fearless, daring, gutsy, determined, the adjectives are too many to express

Her joy, her tears, her smile, her frown sent ripples through her legion of admirers

Until that moment, surrounded by her 'family', she breathed her last

A travesty, sending waves of doom and gloom all over, sending her fans deep into the mire

Bringing genuine tears in our eyes, leaving us gasping for one last glimpse.

We waited and we waited, our hearts yearned for another phenomenon

Along she came, 30th July 2011,

Masquerading as a night-club goer, she formed an instant rapport with the Stalwart

Going from strength to strength,

Inspector Purvi, the wondrous beauty, is an embodiment of life's joyous essence,

Delighting us, week in week out, with her quintessential effervescence.

A daughter to the tough-as-nails ACP, a sister to the legendary Duo

Fabulous bravery embroidered with the finest gossamer silk

She is unflinching in her duty, indomitable in spirit

Blessed with an ethereal smile, and a dulcet voice

She has the unbridled love of her devoted fans, she is like a blooming flower

A perfect follow up to the previous legends, a shining example of CID's Women Power!

ENTRY 4

Shoulder to shoulder, together in arms

Walking along on a singular path

Resplendent with their unique charms

But latent with fiery wrath

Behold them, the women of CID

No less than their male counterparts

Each one a legend and prodigy

Skilled in all impressive arts

The incomparable Asha, that original legend

Raised so high the bar that none could reach

Brave, sharp, agile and perfect, defying every trend

Her bonding with our trio to us did many a lesson teach

With exquisite charm and overreaching appeal

Incredible Tasha upheld their glory playing an amazing part

With her quiet dedication and valour that made foes squeal

Her tragic end painfully tore apart every viewer's heart

With her dazzling display of power and astounding strength

Muskaan, with her great camaraderie, set a great example

The brave Aditi, her dedication discussed at great length

Her noble sacrifice such agony, it left us in a shamble

Along with Shreya, Purvi now takes up the baton

To uphold justice and prove the feminine glory

With her strength and power she battles the agents of Satan

With great bonding and charm makes a mark in every story

Many others have come and went, making many a contribution

Mridula, Lavanya, Anushka, Devyana, Priyanka to name a few

Helping in their own way and justifying their inclusion

Kaveri, Kajal and many more adding their fiery hue

The forensic department owes them too great gratitude

Dr. Anjalika, a character acidic and yet undoubtedly vital

Sharp and quick, impressive despite unfortunate attitude

Earning a well-deserved place in every story's recital

Dr. Niyati, an unforgettable character most beloved

Intelligent and bold to have things done her own way

A perfect bonding with the cops, even the ACP though frosted

Her absence stabs us harder by each passing day

Assistant to the legend, Dr. Salunkhe himself

Dr. Tarika makes her presence felt everytime in the lab

Working hard to find vital clues on the crime spot itself

Dr. Sonali too in her brief stay did attention grab

With each episode did these wonderful women

Prove their excellence and great competence

Going up against powerful foes, even other men

With valour, intelligence, and loyalty without pretence

For everything they did, for all the inspiring effort

For all the incredible work, a humble salute to them all

May they serve as an example to all as they confront evil criminal dirt

To believe in themselves and unhesitatingly attend to duty's call.


P.S: ... Entry 3 in the next post, as the size limit of the post is crossed.

Edited by Shagnika - 11 years ago
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... THEME 2 CONTINUED


ENTRY 5



For most of history, Women was anonymous

A slow boat to china, facing much of arduous

Let's pat on the back of Bernoulli's equation😆

We pressurized the boat to speed expedition😃

This is how a women gain much potential⭐️

Holding sway over others, being differential😳

Standing at the bottom of man's achievement😛

After a long haul, it emerged as eminent👏

Fireworks shaped this beauty in 1998😃

Enchantresses popped in and increased the rate

The magic filled air with fine and dandy air😉

Alike appetizing brownie with a creamy layer😛

What is power? A virtue? An aptitude?

However, they showed for keeps. Dude!!

Criminals were dog tired in the encounter😆

They flew white flag, and capitulated after

They were highbrows, panning out ideas

Never dashed hopes in one by one areas

Smelling out even a little dead give-away

They battered criminals who forgot their birthday😆

They never eat the dust😃

Luckily they were first👏

Giving us impetus

Sending space on airbus😆

Aditi, Muskaan, Anushka, Asha

Purvi, Kajal, kaveri and Tasha

Names of much-publicized power

Their skills were higher than Pisa tower😆

Without a paddle, they drive the car

It was up the creek but made them star⭐️

Beyond shadow of doubt, the car won race

Even if there was a shadow, it was grinded and deface

Offender wanted them out of gas

But brushed up on one word i.e. Alas!

Long-Haired washed off their desires

Behind bars they find their gasless tires

Boost may be a secret of one's energy

But not of the whole, they may catch allergy😆

For Women of CID, what is hugger-mugger?

A bottle of boost or enthusiasm/struggle?

She is running swiftly since 16 years

Exhibiting know-how, burying tears

She has become the synonym of Talent

Offender lefts home and lives on rent

Women of CID earns word of praise

They shine like a sun, scattering the rays

They show us the ropes in each episode

It heats us gently like rays of cathode

Happy Anniversary to Alluring charm😃

Thoes who always ring Power's Alarm😉


THEME 3

Forensic- The Integral Part of CID

ENTRY 6


Bullets,kicks and duels to eliminate evil,

Not only they form CID's pride.

For the tireless tests and results by the experts,

All the work in the lab can't be set aside.

Intriguing and baffling deaths encountered,

Weird and impossible ways of murder,

Leaving no stone unturned our doctors check,

Sometimes the revelation becomes weirder.

Be it the arduous task of DNA testing,

Or the test of Methyl isocyanide toxin

Or a rare snake from the Amazon,

Or the action of pepsin and HCl within.

Be it the case of 120 year old corpse,

Or an alien descent from Mars.

Right from the hair tip to the phalanges of the foot,

A thorough check by them it always was.

A cactus in the depth of the throat,

Or a snake in the duodenum,

No crack escapes their eye,

Including a minor break in the vertebral column

May their work be, forever, the best!

For loyalty and hard work, they sow the seed.

May CID's Forensic save many innocent lives

They are an integral part of CID indeed.!

ENTRY 7




Door was Opening with Swinging and something pushed inside

moved towards the main table, contained the Body wrapped in Red

without Delying, Doctors entered with Full Preparation

they wore Masks, Gloves and coat coming with Full Attention

they started First attempt after checking the Reports

which gives them Clues to start Post Mortem from Head to Toes

They cut the Wound with Scalper and check it in Great Detail

takes Samples of Weapon remains, blood and Flesh of Victim Shell

they confirmed about the Weapon of Murder by doing Chemical Tests

with the support of Past and Present Electronical Devices and Books

they Verified the Final results with Counter checking mention

trying not to Miss any Clues with Hurry and misinterpretation

They pointout small things and Examine the Body again

Complete their Work without Errors and Mistakes which Invein

they are Most Important Actively Instrument of main machine

Because without its Good Working status, the Case would not be termed as Fine

They provided the Actual reason of any mishap which help to catch Culprit

as FORENSIC is the Integral Part of any security forces, Undoubtedly its the Truth

Edited by Shagnika - 11 years ago
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The thread is ready ! Everyone please make an effort to read the poems and vote. The participants have taken so much of toil to write these amazing poems. We can surely spend some time in reading them! Hope to see many people reading and voting ...before the deadline ! 😊

And also, I would like to thank every participant for actually taking out time and participating. 👏 Thank you so much guys 😃 All the very best ! May the best one win 👍🏼 Please let me know if any entry is missing.
Edited by Shagnika - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I must say all the entries were really good! I was going through each one and as I read the next one I kept thinking "Oh my god how am I supposed to choose 3?"

After much thinking (and not sleeping on the bus on the way home 😆) I have chosen 3 poems. Please don't feel bad writers. It was really hard.

I choose Entry 2, 5, and 7...oh my god that was so hard!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aah I am finally done with the hardest job..
Each one of the entries is an excellent piece of poetry..
My vote - 1, 4, 6
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Excellent pieces of poetry everyone 👏👏👏

Entry 1: Nice way of picking out every single thing, but the concept where Gaddar comes... Purvi wasn't proved traitor, Purvi was thought to be a traitor and later proved innocent. Otherwise Great Job by you!! 😃👏

Entry 2: Beautifully written with feelings. Great job! 😃👏

Entry 3: Waah!! I love your choice of words and the way you chose to compare with similes. But you could have included all the women cops as the title says "WOMEN POWER OF CID" 😊 Great job!! 😃👏

Entry 4: Loved the rhyming pattern in your poem and the style of writing. Your chronological order of prominent cops and the mention of others including Forensics added to the essence 👏😃

Entry 5: Nice poem. Excellently written. I felt wishing Happy Anniversary wasn't necessary as it doesn't go with the theme. Great job! 👏😃

Entry 6: Good one! 😊 So many medicine related terms.. But felt you should have mentioned a few forensic experts. Great job! 👏😃

Entry 7: Very meticulously written from the crime scent to the lab and then to the vital role forensic plays! Great job! 😃👏

It was certainly difficult to choose yet voting

My votes : Entry 2,4,7
Edited by Reshma. - 11 years ago
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Oh gosh.. this was the hardest job... every poem is really really good.. you guys have put your heart n soul into it.. Welldone...!!! 👏
And now here's my vote..
Entries- 2,5,7
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all poems are superb👏
good job all⭐️
may the best win

my vote-
enteries-3,4,6

all the best😃

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