Short Story : The Missing Links

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Bhavanab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

The story was very muh Vis style ... end mein aake she even added the FW style of Yeh Mera Plan Tha ... 😛 ... I liked it ... fw ka hi tarika, fw se behtar tareeke se !!

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gadhadada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: visrom
GD, I think I wrote ' The goons dragged him out of the house towards the car' before Abhijeet said he wants to go to the washroom. He was not blindfolded then. He saw the car, you know...

Is it confusing? 😕

oh, I m really Very Sorry...

I missed that Line...

so Sorry again...

Thank You for Correction...

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Jackles

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Another confusion. If Vivik knew about the truth then why at the end he was showing hatred towards Daya sir as though he is fake😕???

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visrom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Well...he only pointed a gun at someone who was pointing a gun at ACP.

even he wasn't sure what was going on. He had seen a picture of Daya on the plastic surgeon's OT. He thought there was a fake Daya too. Daya talked about the fake Abhijeet and said waqt aane par pata chalega...so even he wasn't sure whom to believe and whom not to.

Edited by visrom - 12 years ago

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Ravi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Just read it... excellent work, Vis. 👏 👏 👍🏼 Your stories are always an absolute delight to read and this one is no exception. A midquel of sorts to Beherupiya which covers the loopholes very well indeed. Loved the level of understanding between duo and the way Abhijeet sir leaves clues. Vivek's convo on phone and the final trio scene are highlights as well. I wish FW took even 1% of the care you do while writing even the simplest of stories.

Loved it. 👏 ⭐️

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Lakshay

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Very Nice Story. Your Matter Is Awseme.
All The Charaters Are Awseme.

Thanks.

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Reshma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Just read it. It was awesome Vissy..!!👏

I knew it had something related to beherupiya after ur prologue. But i just found time. It was soo good. The clues Abhijeet had left for Daya and the way you described it was superb. 👏

Thank you so much for this dearo..🤗

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ControlledChaos

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Awww just finished reading this..
It's really good.
The way you showed the bonding and the power of understanding between DUO is simply amazing.
Loved how Abhijeet left the clues for Daya and how he was sure that Daya will come in search of it.
Though the reason why Acp sir doubted Daya was hard to digest but leaving that, the whole story is good.
Thank you for this di..
God bless.

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ice-cold

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Nice story Vis di...short and sweeet👏👏
Its a pleasure to read your stories keep writing😃😊
Good explanations for the doubts😉

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SAGNIKA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Sorry for the delay in reading this !! Its excellent... After so may days did I get to read something like this 😃 A perfect Trio show..!!! Thank You Vis for reminding me about this. I loved how you explained every single detail. Abhi-Daya trust, everything has been so perfect. yes the last scene where ACP explains was a bit unexpected, but a lovely twist. Vis, waiting for your incomplete story! Please complete it asap..😃