Short Story : The Missing Links - Page 2

Hmmm.. Smart enough 👍🏼

Quick-witted and quite inventive. One of the best IF stories ever. I adore this case a lot. Your story reminded me of its recap. We all know FW didn't show some of the scenes and Behrupia; though a splended case up till now but still seemed incomplete but if they had shown it in exact your way, they would have knocked dead😆

GD, I think I wrote ' The goons dragged him out of the house towards the car' before Abhijeet said he wants to go to the washroom. He was not blindfolded then. He saw the car, you know...


Is it confusing? 😕

Vis... sab se pehle a big thank you... Meri wish poori karne ka bahut bahut shukriya...🤗

Coming to the story... It was all so fab... I love Abhi-Daya understanding and it was portrayed so well in your story... Your stories are a treat to read... Regarding the YSPT at the end, it was understandable coz you showed Vivek helping Daya sir, But like GD said regarding the registration number of the car, it is basically where the engine is right? so how could Abhijeet reach there? If even it would have been number plate wala number it would have been easy to understand..

But loved the story each part, especially the part where Daya wanted to ask something but he jus made Abhijeet ask it... I loved that part, it showed respect towards ACP sir yet uneasiness of why he was doubted...Loved it ⭐️

Thanks a ton for writing this Vis 🤗

Hey bhagwaan...I meant the number mentioned on the car's number plate wala number only. That's the registration number. The other number is called chassis number!

Originally posted by: visrom

Hey bhagwaan...I meant the number mentioned on the car's number plate wala number only. That's the registration number. The other number is called chassis number!

Any more confusion? Please let me know.

Originally posted by: visrom

Any more confusion? Please let me know.