Short Story : The Missing Links

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-SNEHAL-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Hmmm.. Smart enough 👍🏼

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Jackles

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Quick-witted and quite inventive. One of the best IF stories ever. I adore this case a lot. Your story reminded me of its recap. We all know FW didn't show some of the scenes and Behrupia; though a splended case up till now but still seemed incomplete but if they had shown it in exact your way, they would have knocked dead😆

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Gamayun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

I usually read stories when I'm on the bus or stuff, but since it's related to Behrupiya I couldn't hold so I read it right away.

And oh my it was so good! I loved how you showed how Abhijeet sir and Daya sir just understood each other so well!

Di love your stories! 😃

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gadhadada

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Achiever

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Thank You DII that U tried to Fills those Loopholes Left in Behropiya by CID...😳👏

just One Confusion😕, How did ABHIJEET Sir got the Car Registration Number... cz when Goons taking Him away, He was still in that Building and requested about going to Washroom, so how did He saw that Car or its Registration Number...😕😕

Simple and Apt...👍🏼👏

Thank You again...😳👏

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

GD, I think I wrote ' The goons dragged him out of the house towards the car' before Abhijeet said he wants to go to the washroom. He was not blindfolded then. He saw the car, you know...

Is it confusing? 😕

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Vis... sab se pehle a big thank you... Meri wish poori karne ka bahut bahut shukriya...🤗

Coming to the story... It was all so fab... I love Abhi-Daya understanding and it was portrayed so well in your story... Your stories are a treat to read... Regarding the YSPT at the end, it was understandable coz you showed Vivek helping Daya sir, But like GD said regarding the registration number of the car, it is basically where the engine is right? so how could Abhijeet reach there? If even it would have been number plate wala number it would have been easy to understand..

But loved the story each part, especially the part where Daya wanted to ask something but he jus made Abhijeet ask it... I loved that part, it showed respect towards ACP sir yet uneasiness of why he was doubted...Loved it ⭐️

Thanks a ton for writing this Vis 🤗

Edited by Sonali. - 12 years ago

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hey bhagwaan...I meant the number mentioned on the car's number plate wala number only. That's the registration number. The other number is called chassis number!

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: visrom
Hey bhagwaan...I meant the number mentioned on the car's number plate wala number only. That's the registration number. The other number is called chassis number!

Haa Haa Haa I thought registration number is at the engine... I did not know woh number plate wala number hain... 😆 Apologies...