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Tumhe rote hue Bhai pasand hain 😲

Originally posted by: DUOlover123

Aww sorry Bhaijaan for being so late.. but you know the reason na..😆
Well coming to the story it is an another master piece of yours..
It feels like all this would have happened when Badey bhai lost his memory.
You showed everything gradually and that is what I loved the most.
Loved to see Rahul here and then how he understand the position of Abhijeet in Daya's heart.
I totally loved this line.
'Agar mer koi bhai hota to Abhijeet jesa hi hota na..'
Aww how much cuteness and innocence..😳
Loved how the calls of Abhijeet sir changed gradually to Abhijeet then to Abhi... lovely attempt.
and that was quite painful when Abhijeet come to know about the reality of Daya' parent.
Good job Bhaijaan.
Thanks for this refreshing and super cute story.
I wish FW could have enough brains to show such cute moments sometimes in the show apart from the rubbish. i really wish to see some of the scenes on screen. but chalen imagine kr leta hun... 😆
Thank you..

Originally posted by: Sonali.

Tumhe rote hue Bhai pasand hain 😲

Originally posted by: mano86

OMG


see.. there ll b TSUNAMI at my place in a few moments

EMOTIONAL ATYACHAR

wo bhi itna zyada

~~~~~~

jokes apart


⭐️assumption for the spaces left behind by FW⭐️
👏lovely perception n wonderful characterization👏
😛even FW would not have done it that beautifully😉

DAYA Sir ko rulana kam krdo buddy
though he's a Macho with a soft heart
but still a COP
(NOM)


😃
dicky ache se chk ki thi.. tumhare senior ka screw kahi gir toh nahi gaya

TOM n JERRY convo was juz awesome
ye billi nahi he.. billa he

😃

the way u showed the TRANSITION of DUO BOND n the HUG

👏

the way u penned down the evolution of CID down the years

👏


from ur side once again
⭐️

amazing story dada😃
very very nice

Read the story GD. this story is a fantastic idea. Like Sonali said, I wish you had not made Daya cry so much...I wish his silence had spoken more.This is purely my view...I wish there were no Rahul. 😛...I wish it had been Freddie or maybe Asha who could recognise Daya's anguish...lots of maybes...your idea was great. I got a lot of ideas from your story...but no time to write anything. 😒

awesome plot GD, and very well-written!👏👏 thanks a lot.😃

First of all a big big sorry Dada for such a late review😒.. Busy with studies, Puja etc. etc. .. Please accept the sorry of your baccha.. Now coming to the story..
Well what can I say.. Just enjoyed the time travel from the core 😳 😳. What a soothing, pleasing effect it gives to the reader's mind ⭐️ ⭐️.. The concept itself is MASTERPIECE ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️. Like Neha di said truly you filled the gap 👏 👏. Abhijeet sir...Abhijeet...Abhi This gradual transformation⭐️⭐️😳.. An amazing experience reading itself🤗 🤗. Thank you so much for this Dusshera gift Dada 🤗 🤗 🤗.

Originally posted by: .Nishi.

amazing story dada😃
very very nice