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Next Morning, RAJAT, SACHIN and FREDDIE be back from City Hospital; as CID already taken off all Surveillance from there as after ABHIJEET Mysterious Escape from there, it's totally Waste less but now All Three Officers Examine the Entry and Exit Routes, Parking, all areas Footages, Interrogations with Employees of Hospital and Patients, their Families and those Shops, Stalls and Pharmacy Shops around that Hospital that might be Anyone seeing any Glimpse of ABHIJEET Re-Entry at CITY Hospital from any Route but All Going to Vein and this Updating really increase the Tension of ACP...!

SALUNKHY coming out from Lab and entered in Bureau Main hall with Some Papers and CD at Evening; He looked at All and takes ACP aside with...

ACP: Nahi ACP, LIE DETECTOR TEST ka koi Faida nahi hua, ABHIJEET abhi bhi Wohi keh raha hay aur haan Us ka DNA, BLOOD, FINGER PRINT, IRIS even Us ki Allergies kay baaray mein Dr. RAJEEV aur Dr. ASHOKE say bhi Help lii hay, even kin Medicines ko Wo Use Nahi kr sakta hay kisi Ingredient kay karan kay sath sath, Main nay Un saaray Cases ki Files aur Un mein Maujud ABHIJEET ki Medical Files bhi check ki hain jin mein ABHIJEET ko koi Bullet lagi ho, ya Us ki Koi haddi Tooti ho ya koi Operation hua ho; wesay Medical History mein Memory Loss aur Comma kay Symtoms milein hain (irritate in loud) ab batao, agar kuch aur bhi reh gaya hay tou kr lun...

ACP (straight): kya aisa Nahi ho sakta kay ABHIJEET sy kisi nay Hypnosis kay zaryey ye karwaya ho...?

SALUNKHY (flicking Pages of Files as): ho sakta hay, magar Blood mein Drugs ya kisi Anti Depressent kay Symtoms Nahi mily; ye bhi ho sakta hay kay Asar Khatam ho gaya ho aur Tumhari Jaankari ky liyey bhi Bata dun kay ye bhi Possible hay kay Hynosis mein ye Kaam karwanay kay baad, Memory ka kuch Part Lost bhi ho sakta hay ya ABHIJEET Bhool bhi sakta hay; sub kuch Possible hay magar yahan is ka Sabut nahi hay...

ACP (turn with): kuch samjh nahi aata SALUNKHY, kuch samajh (look at DAYA keenly) (suddenly said to SALUNKHY) SALUNKHY, Tu DAYA ka Test kr sakta hay kya..?

DAYA (in a Big Shock): Sir, Aap... (after a second relax and say to SALUNKHY) Sir plz...

SALUNKHY gives an Angry glance to ACP after placing ABHIJEET Reports with CD on FREDDIE desk and Leaving; Internally He knew that ACP tried Every aspect to prove His Officers Innocent at any Cost...!

ACP Sir with RAJAT and Others starting Interrogating Session with ABHIJEET at Interrogation room; He started Cross Questioning...

ACP: aakhri Baar Tum Mujh say kub mily thy.?

ABHIJEET: jis din Main City Hospital mein Us Telephone Booth waly Bomb Blast mein Behosh honay kay baad Hosh mein aaya tha...

ACP: Booth mein Tum ko kis nay Bulaya tha..?

ABHIJEET: Booth mein Mujhy Nahi bulaya gaya tha, Mujhy Wella Bay kay baaray mein Meray Informer ROSHAN nay Phone kiya tha aur abhi wo is kay baaray mein Jaankaari day hee raha tha kay Mujhy Us ki Ceekh Sunai dii...

ACP: Tumhein DAYA nay aakhri baat Us Hospital mein kya kaha tha..?

ABHIJEET: Staff ko zyada Pareshan Mut karna...

ACP: Tum Booth mein Ghusay kyun thy..?

ABHIJEET: Main Booth mein Ghusa hee nahi tha...

ACP: DAYA kay Subhao mein Tum nay kuch Ajeeb Mehsus kiya...

ABHIJEET: haan thora Stiff tha, magar kyunkay ye ek Undercover Mission tha aur Hum pr IB ki nazar bhi thi tou Subhao mein Farq tou hoga hee...

ACP: Tumhein Aajeeb Nahi laga kay HQ nay Tum logun ko Pehli baar is tarah ka koi Shootout diya, On Spot...

ABHIJEET: haan, magar ye koi Pehli Baar nahi hua hay, aaj kal wesay bhi Gandagi saaf karnay ka (tease) Bara Junon carha hua hay...

ACP: phir bhi ye Tumharay Career ka tou Pehla aisa Undercover Mission tha jis ki File Tum ko Meray bajayey DAYA say mili; main nay koi Discussion tou Dur kisi tarah ka koi Hint bhi Nahi diya tha Tum ko; HQ nay pehli baar Victims ko On Spot Urany ki Baat ki thi aur...

ABHIJEET (interrupts): Pehli baar, Meray Personal Cell number pr, ID pr Check bhi rakhwaya gaya tha; pehli baar hee Meray Head nay Mujh say aik baar bhi ye Nahi poocha kay Tum nay Wella Bay pr nazar rakhnay ka Apny Informer ko kyun kaha tha aur Pehli baar hee ek Direct Attempt to Murder kay baad bhi Mujhy Hospital mein koi Survellance nahi dii gayii koi CCTV Camera bhi Nahi (teasingly smiles ) Sir kafi kuch Pehli baar hee hua hay is mein...

ACP (standup with): kya Tum ko Yaqeen hay kay is Pooray Statement mein Tum nay kahein bhi koi Ghalat Biyani (stress) chayey kisi aur ko bachany ya Us ka Ilzaam Apnay Sar lany kay liyey ki hay..?

ABHIJEET: Jee Nahi Sir, Mujhy is Biyaan pr itna hee Yaqeen hay jitna Apnay Zinda honay pr...

ACP completely Exit out from the room with His Subordinates and Picking those Reports and CD of ABHIJEET from FREDDIE desk and went to His cabin...!

Next Day coming up with Some Information CID gained from their Informative Network and now Updating it to all as...

FREDDIE: Sir, RATAN MISHRA, Mumbai mein 1982 mein Jodhpur say aaya, pehly Choti moti Mazdori ki magar Baray Aadmi banny ka Sapna Dil say Bahar Nahi la paaya, yahan jis Construction Company mein Kaam krta tha, Us kay Malik ka Apnay Manager ki Wife kay sath Affair is ki Nazrun mein aa gaya aur wahein say isy Blackmail kay is Khail kay Dau Pech seekhnay ka Mauka mila; Baat ek Construction Company say nikl kr Businessmen aur phir Assemblies tak pohanchi; kabhi Aik Political Party waly kisi Dusri Political Party ka Kacha Citha kholnay kay liyey isy Apni taraf kartay, is ko Paisay day kr Dusrun kay Affiars ki Jaankari letay; tou kabhi Dusray aur is ka Baray Aadmi ka Sapna Shahkar hota chala gaya aur itna ho gaya kay aaj is kay Pariwar ka koi bhi Shaks India mein nahi sub Bahar kay deshun mein Choona lagany mein Magan...

ACP (smiles): yani Tax Hum Bhar rahein hain aur Faida koi aur Utha raha hay...

SACHIN (now started): BALA BHATACHARYA, Mumbai ka Purana Basi, Rufigee Camp say Nikla hua ek Bigra hua aur Gharam Dimagh ka Larka jisy sirf Gussay ki Bhasha samjh aatii, Najany kub kahan isy RATAN MISHRA ki Taiz narzun nay Dhoond liya...

ACP (shock): matlab ye Dono Mily huay thy..?

SACHIN: haan Sir, Dono kay Taar Aik hee Fuse Box sau Juray huay thy magar ye kisi ko malum nahi tha; RATAN nay BALA ko aur Us kay Gussay ko Hukum kay Ikky ki tarah Istaimal karna Shroo kr diya; Aksar Affairs Planted bhi hotay, bus Media tak Khaber, phir Blackmailing say Alug paisa milta aur Munh band rakhnay ka Alug aur kabhi kabhi tou is Plant Affairs Bonus bhi Mil jata kyunkay kuch Political Parties, Businessmen even Media Groups Khas apni Popularity kay liyey aisay Affairs Stunt stage kartay...

ACP: matlab ye log sirf Marital Affairs tak nahi rahy..?

FREDDIE: nahi Sir, Marital Affairs in logun nay Buht Kum Plant kiyey hain, magar haan kisi Business mein Apna Banda, Political party mein Apna PA ya Media Groups mein Apna Freelancer Reporter etc, Ghusa dena in kay aam Dhandy thy...

ACP: malab Charge Sheet Buht lambi hay...

SACHIN: Sir, 317 Cases tou sirf Thanun ki Filun mein maujud hain...

ACP: tou Pakray kyun nahi gayey...

FREDDIE: Sir Parkay kesy jatay, jub kabhi Arrest honay ki baari aany wali hoti, koi na koi Leader ya Bara aadmi Bacha hee leta; sub kay kacchy cathy jo in kay pass thy...

RAJAT: kya in Political Leaders ko malum tha kay ye Dono ek dusray say Juray huay hain...

ACP: RAJAT, agar aisa hota na tou Fuse aik sath hee Fuse ho jata, Alug Alug Nahi...

NIKHIL: matlab Sir...

SALUNKHY (entering): matlab ye kay NIKHIL, Dono ko Aik hee jagah Ura diya jata, Alug Alug Nahi kyunkay is tarah Un ka Aapus mein taluq paida karna Asan hota (to ACP with Giving Reports and CD) lo bhae ACP, jesa gaya tha wesa hee wapis aaya hun; DNA, IRIS, FINGER PRINTS, BLOOD Group, DAYA ki Aankhun ka Same number; koi Allergy, DAYA ki Medical Reports pr maujud ek ek haddi kitni baar Tooti hay; kitni Goliyaan Us ki Chati mein Cheer gayii theen aur haan us ka Ankle Bone bhi toota mila hay; Steel ki Rod samait; Heart Beat aur Nervous Breakdown kay Symtoms bhi mily hain aur LIE DETECTOR TEST bhi Negitive hee aaya hy...

ACP takes a Big Sigh after placing Reports and CD over desk; His all Focus on those Sketches, Murder Spot, Wounds pictures clipped at Clip Board and He ordered PUNKAJ to bring DUO here with...

ACP (to SALUNKHY): kya CLONE Nahi ho sakta... kyunkay Us ka DNA tou Same hoga aur shayed Allergies and Disease bhi...

SALUNKHY: magar shayed Memory Nhai; Un kay bachpan say ly kr; CID ki Joining; Case Histories; jo bhi Spherical Personal and Professional Data Humaray pass hay, sub ko Verify kr liya hay Boss...

ACP: wo Dono Humein Bewakoof bhi Bana saktay hain SALUNKHY, Tu BELAPUR OPERATION aur NEETA ASSYLUM Mut Bhool...

SALUNKHY: phir tou Bhagwaan hee bulwayey tou bulwayey; Mera Tumhara Bus Nahi chaly ga Boss...

DUO coming with PUNKAJ from Different Places as after ABHIJEET Revealing at CITY Hospital again after that Mysterious Escape; ACP completely Separated them as still Both are Suspects and Doubtful althouth ABHIJEET tell to be a Murderer too and ACP still Thinking that Both Playing with them... DUO with Head down mode while ACP starting the Statement...

ACP (to DUO): Mujhy Nhai malum kay Main kya kahun; (look at both keenly) kis say kahun tou saaf baat krta hun; itnay saalun ka Experience ye tou Tum logun ko samjha chukka hoga kay aagy kya hoga ya kya ho sakta hy; ABHIJEET nay Qatal kiyey, Wo isy Maanta bhi hay magar in Qatal ko wo ek (teasing tone) (ABHIJEET became Rash but He Composed Himself and His Total Focus on Clip board having Sketches and Caps in front of Him) Undercover Mission ka Roop bata raha hay, jis ka sirf ek Gawah hay aur wo hay DAYA; jisy Khud (harsh) (DAYA more headdown Himself) kuch Nhai malum aur jo yehi kahy ja raha hay kay is Undercover Mission tou choro; Us ko tou in Dono Victims kay Naam tak nahi malum aur...

ABHIJEET (suddenly): ain; ye Body...

ACP (look at Him): kya hua Body ko...

ABHIJEET (completely ignore ACP and ask to SALUNKHY): Sir, ye Bodies kya isi Haal mein mili theen...?

SALUNKHY: haan Police ki Investigation yehi batati hay...

ABHIJEET: Ohhh My Gauddd... pr aisa kesay ho sakta hay... kyunkay Main nay tou Body ki Position change hee Nahi ki aur Na hee DAYA nay aur na IB kay Vehicle kay Us Driver nay aur Sir is Bandy ko (signal to RATAN MISHRA Cap) Main nay Baahar ki Seerhyun pr Goli maari thi; Right Kanpatti pr Goli maari thi tou Usy Utli taraf Girna tha aur ye Hath ki Position aur is (signal to BALA BHATACHARYA) is ko Sar kay Beech tou ye Gira tou Peechy hay magar is ki bhi hath ki Positions aur ye Fingers aisay kesay; aur Sir Marny (look at ACP and Stress to Hurt Himself More) matlab Meray in ko Maarny ka Time bhi ye Nahi tha (to DAYA) hain na DAYA...

DAYA (complete anger): Mujhy kya malum; Mujhy in Sub mein mut ghaseeto aur na phanshwao; na main nay aisa kuch kaha Na Kiya aur na hee Tumhara ya kisi ka Sath diya... Samjhy...

ABHIJEET (total anger): haan Mujhy malum hay Sahab ko Akelay Plan banany ka kitna Shauq hay... (to SALUNKHY) Sir, Ye Bodies...

SALUNKHY: ABHIJEET, Police Investigation kay Hisaab say Bodies isi tarah payii gayii hain aur haan Tumhari Baat bilkul Theek hay; Maut ka Time Ghari mein bajay Time say Alug hay aur Humara khayal hay ye Fingers aur Time Difference koi Sandesa hay Humaray liyey; Magar filhaal ye Nahi samjh aa raha kay ye sub kis taraf ishara kr raha hy...

ABHIJEET continuously seeing the Fingers and then Clocks; his Minds working on Every Aspect of these Two WAYS which Sent any Messages by those who had done it with DUO... He really Understanding that it's a Big Net of Trap where Not Only He trapped badly but DAYA without doing anything (his mind sparks) was really DAYA not doing anything...?

ABHIJEET: Sir, RATAN MISHRA kay Aik hath ko Jism kay neechy Chupa diya gaya hay aur Dusray Hath ki Paanchun (5) Ungliyun ko jis tarah Dikhaya gaya hay, matlab 5 koi Important Number hay ya Alphabet matlab...

DAYA: E...

ABHIJEET: hmmm... BALA BHATACHARYA kay Dono Hathun ki Unglun ko Aik (1) aur (4) Numbers mein bataya gaya hay, yani Number 14 ya 41...

DAYA: 14 matlab, Alphabet O... lekin Boss 41 tou koi Alphabet Nhai hoga aur ho sakta hay ye koi aur Number ho...

ACP: Nahi DAYA, 14 ya 41 dono ka Equal (1+4=5) (4+1=5) yani 5 hee aata hay aur agar aisa hota tou Insani hath mein 5 Ungliyan hoti hain...

ABHIJEET: magar Na 5 tareekh ko Qatal hua Na 14 ko... Month bhi na 5 aur na 14 aur Year bhi Na 5 aur na 14...

RAJAT: aur Sir, 41 tou ho hee Nhai sakta...

ACP: RAJAT, abhi isy 14 hee lo; agar Us say kuch Nahi hua tou Hum 41 pr baat karein gay...

DAYA: RATAN ka Qatal hua 11 ko, magar Sandesa mila 5 ka aur Qatal ka Waqt tha Subah kay 8:21, magar Ghari mein Waqt hay 8:04...isi tarah BALA ka Qatal hua 8 tareekh ko, magar Message mila 14 ka aur Qatal ka Waqt tha Dophair 1: 16 magar Ghari 8:09 minute Baja rahi hay...

ACP: aur ek Baat Note ki Tum Dono nay... (DUO look at Him in Shock) Dono Gharyun mein Time GMT kay Hisaab say hay, halankay Pehla Qatal Subah aur Dusra Dophair ko hua hay...

DAYA: magar Dono mein GMT, India kay hisaab say raat ka Time bata raha hay aur ANALOG Clock wo bhi GMT kay hisaab say Main ny pehli baar kisi kay Ghar lagi dekhi hay...

ABHIJEET moved ahead, He Clipped another Paper over Clip Board, Divide it in 4 Boxes by making Horizontal and Vertical Lines and wrote Information found from Investigation and then Wrting and added in Speech as...

ABHIJEET: yahan agar Hum RATAN ki Actaul Date of Murder yani 11 ko is Ungliyun ki Tadad (ginti) say Replace kr dein tou ye banta hay 5 aur 11 ko Month bana do aur is Clock Timmings ko Year bana do yani 2004 tou ye bana...

DAYA (instantly): 5th November 2004...

ACP: Correct...

ABHIJEET (added writing): aur isi tarah BALA kay Murder Date yani 8 ko 14 aur Month 8 bana do aur Murder Time ko Year bana do tou ye bana 2009...


DAYA: 14th August 2009...

ACP, ABHIJEET, SALUNKHY, FREDDIE and VIVEK turned their Heads in Jerk towards DAYA who feels their Gaze in Confusion while ACP ordered VIVEK instantly...

ACP (order): VIVEK, in Dono Dates ki File Record Room say Jald lay kr aao...

VIVEK hurried to Record Room; DAYA feeling their Gaze so in little Back asking in Confusion Tone...

DAYA: kya hua...

ABHIJEET (whisper): ROCKY...

DAYA Freezed at His Sopt; New Commers really in Tense but Quiet stage; VIVEK brought Files and after go through in Both Files; ABHIJEET Throat throw a Shock but Scary Whisper again...

ABHIJEET: SONALI...

DUO really exchanged a Big Glance; Two Main Culprits coming in those Two Cases, where first DAYA had Trapped by SONALI and in Next one, DAYA was Accussed and Suspected by Team because of ROCKY...!

Now, what; Same repeatation; DAYA was Accussed and Doubtful to Trap ABHIJEET and ABHIJEET again Playing the Role of Betrayer, which had done by ROCKY in Mask of ABHIJEET...!

ACP and ABHIJEET now really in Trouble; All those who associated in these Two Cases and still in CID Mumbai trying to find out any Clue and Connection between in these Two cases...

ACP (in a bit): FREDDIE, jaldi say Pata karo, SONALI ki Saza kay Baad Wo kahan hay; Last Address Uthao aur wahan VIVEK kay sath ja kr Pata karo; shayed Us ki koi Identification bhi Police Station mein ho, koi Rashan card ya Driving Licsence etc; Us ki Copy bhi Nikalwao.. (hurry) Jao...

FREDDIE after Reading the File having the Police Station where the Culprits after that Dealt; Called there and after getting Information, tell this to TRIO...

FREDDIE: Sir, SONALI 22nd September 2009 ko Apni Saza mukammal karny kay Baad Release ho gayii hay; Sarkari Gawah banny kay karan Us ki Saza mein Kumi kr dii gayii thi; Main Police Station say File aur Saari Information lay kr aata hun...

ACP nodded in Yes and FREDDIE after Signaling VIVEK who was in Confusion as this Name was New for Him too but the panic at FIVESOME faces told Him about the Seriouness of Case so without any Query, He Rushed away with FREDDIE... Here SALUNKHY asked the Big Query having in TRIO minds too...

SALUNKHY: ye SONALI ka ROCKY say kya Rishta hay..?

ACP (rubbing Forehead and in Tension): malum nahi... (after a minute, keenly look at DAYA and told) 2009 mein jub ROCKY ko CID mein Plant kiya gaya tha tou siwayey DAYA kay koi bhi Us pr Shak Nahi kr paaya tha, balkay Hum nay tou...

SALUNKHY (added in sad tone): DAYA ko hee Mujrim qarar day diya tha...

ACP: haan aur ab 2014 mein; kya (look at Three and said) Humein Ek aur ROCKY kay liyey Tayyar rehna chahyey...

There is a Meaningful Silence; Obviously ABHIJEET was Unaware of what DAYA bore in that Case as still they can't Understand about the Entry of FAKE ABHIJEET as ROCKY in CID...!

They gave so many Excuses when going through that Time where DAYA was in Hospital although Solving Other cases but Still at End moment they accepted about so many Faults in System as well Security lapse too...!

SALUNKHY (to DAYA): DAYA, sirf Aik Sawal, Tum nay ROCKY ko kesay Pehchana tha..?

DAYA (coming out from trance with jerk): Sir, bus kuch aajeeb, najany kya, Main bata Nahi sakta; shayed Us ka Andaz ya Us kay Jumly ya Lehja; phir Main nay isy Confirm krny kay liyey Us kay Finger Prints Paani kay Glass mein liyey aur phir Usy Apnay Forensic Database say Tele kiya tou malum hua kay Wo ABHIJEET kay Finger prints Nahi hain...

ABHIJEET totally Dumbed as He did not know anything about all these Investigations of His Buddy, He was in Unconcious state at that time while ACP Sir softly but strongly stated...

ACP: kaun jany, lug bhag 5 Saal kay arsay mein Un logun nay kya kya Naya seekh liya ho (DAYA look at Him in Shock) (ACP changed His gaze and ask to SALUNKHY) kyun SALUNKHY...?

A Pindrop Silence increasing the Shattering inside Bureau as Everyone was Lost in Trail of Thoughts; so many Views moving in their Minds but the Final Thought coming on their Minds was a Big Dead End...!

FREDDIE and VIVEK coming back with More Information about SONALI as She is the Only Suspect Alive otherwise ROCKY was Dead on Spot by ABHIJEET Sharp Shoot at 14th of August 2009..!

FREDDIE: Sir, SONALI nay apni Saza poori ki; Last Address jo Us Police Station ki File pr darj hay, wahan pr ab ek Buht Bara Plaza ban chukka hay; Us Plaza kay aas pass walun say baat ki tou pata chala kay wahan maujud koi bhi Family kisi ko Nahi jaanti...

VIVEK: kyunkay Us Plaza ko banatay waqt Us Builder nay wahan kay saaray Ghar Khreed liyey thy, kaun kahan gaya, malum nahi; SONALI ka Driving Licsence Expired hay...

ACP: hmmm... aur koi Cell Number ya kuch...

FREDDIE: Nahi Sir...

ABHIJEET: aur kyunky 2004 mein AADHAR Card ka Initiation Nahi hua tha tou kuch aur malum hona Mushkil lagta hay...

ACP: wo Mumbai say Bahar bhi tou ja sakti hay...

SALUNKHY: ya Desh kay Bahar...

ACP (irritative tone to DUO): jub bhi Phansna, Dono sath hee Phansna ta kay Mujhy Dono Hath katwa kr Ghar Bitha do...

DUO Smiles after such Tense time although for ACP its Tough to Accept that Whose Real and whose Fake but right now the Maximum Verification through Medical Tests and LIE Detector tells Him to little Push this Doubt Behind and trying to Move on New Track...

ACP: koi aisa jis pr Tum Dono Shak kr sako ya koi aisa jo achanak aaya ho, Takraya ho Tum logun...

ABHIJEET (cutting): Ohhh My Gauddd...

DAYA: ohh NO...

DUO look at each one and this One Look having so many Stories Scene by Scene moving in their Eye cores...

ABHIJEET entering inside a Shopping mall, He was too much Irritating which showed by His Jestures and Murmuring till He went to the Counter as...

ABHIJEET (murmur): bus Mujhy Khali bethy tou Sahab dekh hee nahi saktay, ek tou Shahab kay liyey Apnay (stressing in anger) Paisun say Shopping karo aur jub dekhao tou Sahab dekhtay sath hee bol detay hain (imitate Sahab voice) " Boss, kya Bhangar Color utha layey ho, malum hay na Main Coat nahi Pehannta, magar aur Collar size bhi Kum hay Boss; aisa karo isy Kal hee Change karwa do, warna phir Change Nahi hoga" aur bus Sr, Ins ABHIJEET Sahab ka Hukum manny ko daur paray.. huh.. (to Shopkeeper) dekhyey Main ye Shirt Kal lay gaya tha, ye rahi Recipt (giving Recipt with) darsal Mujhy ye Shirt...

Shop Keeper (cutting): Sir, Kheedi hui koi Cheez Wapis Nahi...

ABHIJEET (irritate): O Bhai, Baat tou sun lo, malum hay Mujhy, Wapis karwany Nhai aaya hun; Mujhy bus Collar Size bara chahyey 15 n Half aur Color agar koi aur Mil jayey warna Yehi chaly ga...

ShopKeeper Nodded after taking Shirt from ABHIJEET hand who was Standing, Moving Neck around and suddenly feels a Soft touch over His Arm and as reflex He jerked His Arm and the Soft touch Hurts who changed the direction to Shop Keeper who was Back after Fulfilling ABHIJEET Requirement and asked the Next Person Stand beside and just grabbed ABHIJEET Arm few seconds earlier with...

Shop Keeper: Jee, Maam, Kehyey...

Girl (teasingly glancing over ABHIJEET and said to Shop Keeper as): Bhai, darasal Main Color Blind hun, Mujhy Red, Orange aur Green color Nahi dikhta (showing Shirts scattered at Her Front Desk and ask after Pick a Shirt as) ye Kaun sa Color hay, aap bata dein gay, Mujhy tou (teary smile) Grey hee dikh raha hay...

Normal Protanope Deuteranope Tritanope



[ A/N: its Color Blind disease classification ]

Shop Keeper told Her about the Color, ABHIJEET Shocked First and Hurt Last; He tried to Excuse but Girl moved Out in Hurry before He took Action on His Thought; He tried to Search the Girl but in Vein and coming back to Residence as well...

He threw that Shopper over DAYA after entering inside Residence who Caught it and say in naughty tone...

DAYA: oye hoye, itna Gussa; (wink) ek Shirt change karwany pr, Log tou Dostun kay liyey Jaan tak Qurban kr detay hain...

ABHIJEET (rash): haan kyunkay wo Petrol say sasti hoti hay...

DAYA (laughing): hmmm, ye Dhuwaan kahan say... (checking shirt and comes near to Him with) arry Boss, itna Gussa bhi Mut karo kay aaj Mujhy Ek hee banday ka Khana banana paray (ABHIJEET Pushed Him and DAYA asked in Serious tone) kya hua ABHI...?

ABHIJEET look at Him and then Repeats the whole; He was really feeling in Regret; DAYA trying to Console Him with...

DAYA: ohh, acha koi Baat nahi; Tum nay jaan kr ye nahi kiya yaar (pressing His Shoulder with) Ghalat fehmi ho jati hay; kabhi Dubara Mil jayey tou Excuse kr lena ya isy Life say seekha gaya aik Acha Lesson samjh lena...

ABHIJEET Smiles on this and then DAYA moved inside His room, coming Back with a Track Suit and a Bag; ABHIJEET look at that and Tease after Relaxing at Couch...

ABHIJEET: ohhh tou Sahab ko Yaad aa gaya (picking Remote and On TV with) kay Sahab kisi Zamany mein Gym bhi jaya krtay thy (DAYA Embarrass) (ABHIJEET asked during Shuffling Channels) wesay Sahab ko aaj achanak Daura kesay Par gaya...?

DAYA (shy smile): SAM nay kaha hay kay agr Main nay Gym aana nahi start kiya tou wo Meri Membership Cancel kr day ga; kyunkay (moving with low tone) Log Mera Weight aur pait dekh kr Us kay Gym mein Admission nahi ly rahy...

He Exit Immediately after hearing a Big Big laugh from ABHIJEET Throat; ABHIJEET still Busying in Watching TV...!

Next Morning, DUO coming after a Hectic day, on DAYA Request; ABHIJEET dropped Him at Gym and moved to Residence; He stepped Out and point out a Figure and rushed in Fast Steps as seeing the same Color Blind Girl arguing something with AUTO Driver and before ABHIJEET be at Spot, She was completely Free from that; ABHIJEET initiated...

ABHIJEET: Excuse Me Maam; Maam...

Girl turned Neck, Look at Him and after a Keen Look, stressing on Her Forehead and start to Move; ABHIJEET be at Her Side and started in Low tone...

ABHIJEET: I m really Sorry Maam; I knew shayed Sorry Aap ka Wo Hurt Na Mita saky magar Main sach mein Buht Sharminda hun...

Girl looking Him from the Corner of Her Eyes and find a Regret and Guilt even Shame too on ABHIJEET Tone, Sentences, Eyes and Body language so Replied...

GIRL: koi Baat Nahi, ho jata hay (after a second) Mujhy bhi is tarah aap ka hath nahi pakarna tha, pr darasal (sad tone) koi Apni Beemaari kisi ko batana Nahi chahta (ABHIJEET Hurts, Girl again) Aap sath Kharay thy, main nay socha Chupkay say aap say Pooch lun gi, magar...

ABHIJEET (again in Aplogy tone): I m Really Very Sorry...

Girl (with smile): its Ok, btw I m (forwarding hand) SONALI... (signaling house) Main yahan nai Shift hui hun...

ABHIJEET: acha ABBAS Sahab kay Ghar, wesay Main ABHIJEET...

His Phone started Ringing and He Excused with the Girl, back to Vehilce and moved to Spot while Girl moving with Small Steps ahead...!

Ahhh, sound caught DAYA attention who was Excersizing with Some weights inside Gym and now rushed to that place where a Young Guy trying to taken out that Weight Lifting Equipment which fell on Him...


[ A/N: Lifter image ]

The Instructor moved to take a Break and tell Him to take some Break too but the Guy did it on His Own Behalf; DAYA rushed and taken out it, placed it on its Stand and giving Support to Guy with...

DAYA: Chout tou Nahi lagi na...?

GUY: Nahi, Bach gaya...

DAYA: haan aisay Akelay Nahi Uthana tha, Tum shayed Naye ho...

GUY: Jee abhi 5 Haftun pehlay hee Join kiya hay...

DAYA (wiping Sweat after picking Towel with): arry tou Pehlay Muscles ko Khulnay tou do; aur khas kr Lifter kabhi Akelay Mut uthana...

GUY (moving to Locker room with DAYA and said): Jee Zarur; hr baar koi Aap jesa Bachany tou nahi aayey ga...

DAYA smiles and taking His Bag with Forwarding His Hand towards the GUY and Introduce Himself as ...

DAYA: DAYA...

GUY (shakes hand with): ROCKY...

Both stepping Down with Stairs, and DAYA moved towards Parking to get His Bike while ROCKY taking Steps; DAYA slow down Bike in front of Him and giving an Offer to Him for Dropping but He denied that He would Prefare to Walk as He Lived just from Two Lane; DAYA smiles and Both Wishing a Bye to each other and moved to their Respective Directions...!

DUO back on Current; the whole Team hearing that FLASHBACK with Open Mouth either DUO Personally Shock that Why they did not Doubt either Discussing this to each other; ABHIJEET said...

ABHIJEET: DAYA nay Mujhy ROCKY ka bataya tha aur main nay Us say SONALI ka Zikr bhi kiya tha; Hum Log Waqtan fawaqtan Hello/Hi bhi krtay; magar ek pal ko bhi Hum nay isy Socha Nahi kay is ka Taluq Humaray Past say bhi ho sakta hay..

ACP (to DUO); Tum Dono SONALI aur ROCKY ka Sketch banwao...

Both Nodded and enaged with Two Different Sketch Artists Separaetly who were coming to Join their Duties; DUO engaged with them and after an Hour where All Busy or trying to be Busy with Other Reported cases...!

After an Hour DUO back with their Sketch Artists and Sketches too; ACP looked at them; Both Sketches are Different from the Girl named SONALI they met at 2004 and ROCKY at 2009; First on ACP Sir Order VIVEK checked them in their Criminal Database but found No Record so ACP giving Sketches to Officers with...

ACP (giving ROCKY Sketch to SACHIN and VINEET with): DAYA, SACHIN aur VINEET ko Apnay GYM ka Address do, Apna aur ROCKY ka Locker number aur Apnay GYM kay Malik SAM ka bhi Number do (DAYA gave all and ACP ordered to SACHIN and VINEET) DAYA kay Locker aur Us ROCKY kay Locker ko Achi tarah Search karo, Finger Prints Uthao balkay Pooray Locker Room kay Hr Darwazy say bhi Finger Print Uthao, Gym Equipment say bhi; wo Towel bhi lay kr aao jo ROCKY ya DAYA nay Use kiyey thy, ROCKY ki Saari jaankari, aur Us kay Ghar kay Address pr bhi jao, agar koi Phone number hay tou pichly Aik Saal kay Us Number kay call Records bhi Nikalwao, jald az jald...

ACP (again to PUNKAJ and VIVEK after giving them SONALI Sketch): aur Tum Dono, Us Ghar mein Check karo, koi bhi Finger Print ya kuch bhi; Us State Agent ka Pata karo; ABBAS Sahab ka aur Us Mall ka bhi jis mein Wo ABHIJEET ko pehlay Baar mili thi; Pata karo wo Regular Customer hay ya Nahi aur wahan kay CCTV Footages bhi Uthao, Bill ki Copy ho tou Wo bhi Nikalwao aur (to ABHIJEET) ABHIJEET in Logun ko ABBAS Sahab ka Number do aur Us Mall ka Pata bhi...

ABHIJEET giving it to Both, while ACP added One More Query to DUO before Officers Leaving the Bureau as...

ACP (to DUO): Tum logun ko Yaad hay kay Us din Tareekh kiya thi..?

ABHIJEET: Sir, shayed 6 March thi.. haan 6 hee thi...

ACP (to Officers given that Task): 6 tareekh pr Zyada Zor dena...

Officers Nodded while SALUNKHY turned to Both and now asking Query to ABHIJEET as...

SALUNKHY: ABHIJEET, kya Tum ko wahan yani Undercover Mission mein Hosh aany kay baad kuch aajeeb laga ho.. ya kuch bhi Yaad ho..?

ABHIJEET: Yaad, Sir Zahir hay, DAYA kay (look at DAYA and change the Words as) matlab jo Shaks Mujhy DAYA ban kr Wahan mila tha, Us kay Subhao mein Farq tha aur...

ACP (cutting): wo Jagah jahan Tum ko Rakkha gaya tha, ya Us kay aas pass ka Area..?

ABHIJEET: Jagah, malum Nahi Sir aur Bahar tou Nikla nahi aur jub nikla tou Gadi mein, wo bhi Black Sheeshun wali, Aas Pass kuch Khas dikha Nhai kyunkay Gadi is tarah Khari ki gayii thi kay Car ka Door Us Ghar kay darwazy kay pass hee tha, aur bus wahan ja kr On Spot Un Logun ko maara...

He Stopped for a Moment, All feeling He was trying to Remembering Something as He started rubbing His Finger over His Lips and said...

ABHIJEET: Sir, Main keh Nahi sakta magar Us Murder Spot say Wo jagah matlab jahan Mujhy rakkha gaya tha, wo Zyada Dur nahi thi, Mujhy achi tarah Yaad hay, jub Hum Log (again correct) matlab Main us gadi mein Betha tha tou Meri Nazar Gadi kay Speedo Meter pr pari thi aur Us mein Milage pr 3654 likha aa raha tha aur jub main wahan Spot pr Utra tou Gadi ka Meter Milage 3668 bata raha tha... (straight) agar Spot Wohi hay tou; kyunkay agar Body ko hataya gaya hay ya Us ki Position Change ki gayii hay tou main Exact Spot ki Nishaandahi nahi kr sakta...



[ A/N: its Car Speedometer Image ]

ACP: hmm, ho sakta hay (to FREDDIE) FREDDIE pata karo kay RATAN ya BALA ka Phone Aakhri Baar kahan Locate huay hain ya Un ki Gari khas kr RATAN ki, ka GPS System kya batata hay...

FREDDIE moved and Engaged in His Task while RAJAT asked the Query to ACP as...

RAJAT: Sir, GPS aur IP ko bhi Change kiya ja sakta hay...

ACP: Haan RAJAT, magar kahein say tou Shroaat karni hogi na...

RAJAT Quiets while ABHIJEET asked the Supplimentry Query linked to His Attempt of Murder as...

ABHIJEET: Sir, RATAN kay Driver ka kya hua..?

SALUNKHY: Us ki Garden Toot chuki hay...

They all again Lost in Thoughts till FREDDIE backed after Done His Work and Updating ACP in Excitement as...

FREDDIE: Sir, RATAN aur BALA Dono kay Phone Apni Maut say 2 Ghantay pehlay Switch Off ho gayey thy aur Un ki Aakri Location Un ka Ghar hee tha, Car ki GPS Do Din say Kharab thi magar Sir bus ye pakka pata chala hay kay RATAN ka Farm House tou nahi, magar haan Wo SUBHASH Farm House kay peechy wali zameen 2/3 Din mein Khareednay wala tha aur aaj kal isi mein laga hua tha...

ACP (Ordered Him): FREDDIE, Qareebi Thane ko Ittila karo, Humein kuch Sipahee SUBHASH Farm House pr chahyey aur (to DUO, RAJAT, SALUNKHY and FREDDIE) Aik Chance Hum bhi lay letay hain...

All Moved after Nodded their Head, They moved after leaving NIKHIL at Bureau to Entertain if Any other case coming on their way as well checking Countrywide Database about these Two Sketches with Hope but only One Person moved with Slow Speed and a Big Scare, Yes That was none other than Only DAYA...!

CID Team in SCORPIO drived by RAJAT reached at SUBHASH Farm House found Some Police Jeeps with Constables headed by an Inspector named Inspector SALIM... ACP after reaching told All His Team...

ACP: ABHIJEET nay bataya tha Speedo Meter pr Milage kay beech Kum az kum 14 KM ka Farq tha (all nodded) (ACP look at CID Vehicle Milage meter and added) is waqt Humari Gadi ka Milage meter 6614 pr hay, ab Hum aagy ki taraf pooray 14 KM barhtay hain... Dekhtay hain kay kya Milta hay; sub Hoshyar rehna...

All moved Head in Yes, ACP Signaled Inspector SALIM to Follw their Vehicle while He signaled RAJAT to start the Vehicle with Fixed Eyes over Milage meter...!

RAJAT moving Vehicle and DAYA Body started to wrapping in Feary Sweat while ABHIJEET in Excitement to atleast find Something which Makes Him Innocent and when SCORPIO Stopped with a Jerk at 6628 after Coverage of 14 KM; they found a Deserted House completely Stopped DAYA Fast Beats...!

All Team with Police coming out in Hurry and Alertness; CID Officers wearing Gloves and Cocked their Guns; DUO did not have a Gun but their Experience and Expertise are Equal to their Guns; Police Surrounded the Place with Slow moving on ACP Sir Silent Signals with Strong Order Not to Hurt anyone..!

Till the Door of that House after covering only a Stair, nothing they found; ACP Sir signaled RAJAT to Open the Door but before He moved the Knob with His Gloved hands; ABHIJEET clutched His Wrist and tell DAYA...

ABHIJEET: DAYA Tum darwaza kholo, magar haan Bina Gloves kay...

SALUNKHY (whisper): is tarah Finger Print Zaya ho jayey ga..

ABHIJEET look at Him and told Him to First took the Print from Door Knob and Window pans or said from Surroundings; SALUNKHY Irritated; Officers Confused but ACP Sir felt a Tingue in ABHIJEET tone so nodded in Yes to All and with Help of Officers and Police Constables too; they first picked the Finger Prints from Outside either Seaching any Vehicle marks, Clues but found Nothing even No Finger Prints too..!

SALUNKHY Nodded ACP about Finishing the Work as it Takes More than Usual Time so now again ABHIJEET repeats Same order to DAYA who Look at all Stare to Him but with Shivering hands He moved the Knob but No Click Voice appeared; All gives a Glance to ABHIJEET who now Opened the Door with Gloved hands and Door opened with a Click while ABHIJEET taking a Sigh or DAYA comes in More Scare...!

They entered inside; Cobweb Welcomed them and DUST giving them Warmth; its really looking like More Deserted then Outside Look; ABHIJEET Switching On Lights but Nothing Happened so Switch On their Torches...!

Same Scenario infront of ABHIJEET Eyes and His Eyes Telling All that He already Visited that Place; He trying to check Kitchen to Searching Coffee Mug; Cheese Bottle but only Empty Slabs trying to Laugh on Him...!

They all Searching and in that A Light Switch On when a Constable trying to Search the wall and the Switch Hidden behind Bed Switched On; ABHIJEET instantly Ordering All to Leave House in Silence; ACP was just Following Him as He Felt that His Sharp Shine using His Bright Mind so there is No Need to Interrupt Him Unnecessaray...!

ABHIJEET grabbed DAYA arm which was Little Swollen He Felt and this gives a Ray of Happiness and Hope Sparks at His Eyes but still He pushed DAYA inside the room which Light was Switch On by Constable and Backing Him with a Releaving Sigh...!

They all are moving back and suddenly a Whisper travelling from a Mouth to an ear with Worry as...

DAYA (whisper): ABHI...

ABHIJEET turned and found Him Fixed at Spot and when He moved in path of DAYA Gaze found DAYA tapping Floor with His Joggers Toe..!

ACP Alerts Everyone; DAYA bit back and now all trying to search that Wood Opening point; FREDDIE got that and with much care All moving Down and DAYA Fast Beat completely Quiet for a Moment while His Body Jerked Loudly and Badly after seeing a Body in Lights of so many Torches...!

The Return Journey was filling a Scare inside Hearts of Five Officers belonged to CID department while ACP Sir leaving the Police Party with a Big Thank You from the Exat Spot after Sealing the Place and engaging Some Constables there...!

Mostly Officers feeling Hurt and Scare after seeing the Body Height, Built and Scatterred Face still having Reminance of DAYA Facial features which gives them a Bad Thought that might be they Lost their Deary Officer Sr. Inspector DAYA or in another side; They all feeling a Hope too after seeing DAYA seating with them that might be their Hurt and Scare is Meaningless as still this man sitting with them as DAYA did not have any Doubt about His Fake Identity...!

DAYA feeling Extreme Fear with Pain; He cant Understand Anything; He did not have any Solid Reason to Tell all Proudly and Strongly as DAYA; those people who plant ROCKY behind ABHIJEET mask in 2009 and after that Mission Failing; was not Working on their those Points which was the Issue of that Mission Failure so in that time when that Gang back; it will come with Proper Planning and especially Work on those Pros and Cons which they Missed in 2009 Mission; He felt a Current of Goose Bumps and trying to Compose although wiping His Tears which Comes on His Eyes and He tried to Hide them from His Best Buddy who just looking at Him with Tension and Pain too...!

After reaching at Bureau Parking; SALUNKHY moved with Body to Forensic Lab instantly; while ACP Ordered FREDDIE to take DAYA to Bureau Jail while others went to Main hall of Bureau where those Officer who were moving to their Respective Task back to their Originals and when FREDDIE joined them after Wiping His Tears; He heard...

VINEET: Sir, DAYA Sir nay jis Gym ka Adress diya tha wahan koi ROCKY naam ka Banda hy hee Nahi... Sketch ko bhi kisi nay Identify Nahi kiya; wahan koi Watchman Nahi aur CCTV Camera sirf Recption pr hee hay jis ka CCTV Footage (giving CD) Hum lay ayein hain; Hum nay aas pass kay Dukanun ya rehnay walun say bhi Investigate kiya magar kisi nay is aadmi ko nahi pehchana...

ACP: Expected; phir...?

SACHIN: Sir, Hum nay socha kay shayed Us larky nay Apna Naam wahan Counter pr kuch aur Likhwaya ho (ACP nodded in Yes) (SACHIN added) is liyey Hum wahan kay Saara Data ki Information ki Soft Copy and Hard Copy (forwarding USB and Register with) Dono lay aayey...

ACP (taking it and starting to Flicking after giving CD to FREDDIE to Put it inside Drive): Good Job...

VINEET: Sir, Hum nay Pooray Locker Room say saaray Finger Prints Utha kr Dr. TAREEKA ko day diyey hain...

ACP nodded and signaled the Next group to tell about their Investigation; those started as...

PUNKAJ: Sir, ABBAS Sahab pichly 3 maheenay say Apni Family kay sath USA mein hain, kyunkay Un kay Bhai ki Heart Surgery hui hay; Unhun nay kisi bhi State Agent ko Apna Ghar Rent pr Uthany ko nahi diya hay; phir bhi Un ki Permission ly kr Hum nay Un ka Ghar Khola...

VIVEK: Sir; Ghar mein sirf ABBAS Sahab ka Saman hay jo wo Humein SKYPE kay through TAB mein dekh dekh kr bataty rahy; phir bhi Hum nay Un kay Ghar say saary Finger Prints Utha liyey hain aur Dr. TAREEKA nay Un ko AADHAR Card kay Data say Tele bhi kr liya hay; wo ABBAS Sahab kay hee Ghar walun kay Finger Prints hain; phir bhi Hum nay Society kay saaray State Agents say bhi Baat ki ky kisi nay bhi Us Ghar ko Chupky say bhi Rent pr tou nahi utha diya magar kisi nay bhi aisa Nahi kiya hay; Hum nay Society kay logun say bhi Baat ki magar kisi nay bhi Us Sketch ko nahi pehchana yahan tak kay Watchman nay bhi Nahi...

ABHIJEET: Watchman nay bhi Nahi dekha, aisa kesay ho sakta hay...?

VIVEK (low tone): Sir Us nay bola kay agar koi Burqa ya Scaraf mein ho tou wo keh nahi sakta...

PUNKAJ: Sir, Hum nay Mall ka Footage Khud bhi Check kiya aur Un Logun ko bhi Dekhaya, magar koi Faida nahi hua... magar Hum Mall kay pooray 3 Months ki CCTV Footages ka (giving CD's) Stock lay aayein hain..

ACP: hmmm... matlab ye Saaray log hee Plant kiyey gayey thy; acha (to ABHIJEET) ek Baat batao ABHIJEET, kya hamesha ye Larki yani SONALI Tum say Akelay mili thi ya kabhi koi Sath bhi Dikha tha is kay ya Tumharay sath koi ho...?

ABHIJEET (low tone): Nhai Sir; hr Baar ye Larki Mujhy Akelay hee mili thi; yahan tak kay Na Main nay kabhi is ka Ghar dekha na is nay Mera; Mujhy tou ye tak malum Nhai ho paaya kay ye Parhti Warti hay ya koi Kaam krti hay...

ACP: acha... (to VIVEK) VIVEK, DAYA ko lay kr aao...

VIVEK moved while SALUNKHY stormed inside the Main Hall with Shinny eyes which Relieve the Head and Smiles comes in Every Lips when He said after grabbing ACP Palm as...

SALUNKHY: ACP; Wo DAYA Nahi hay...

ACP gives Bigger Smile with Teary eyes to His Buddy whereas ABHIJEET eyes falls some Tears with Precious Smile and before all giving this News to the Person who was in Most Panic state, heard a Loud Scream from VIVEK Throat...

VIVEK (scream): ABHIJEET Sir, ACP Sir...

Both rushed inside and after seeing the Scene; ABHIJEET Scare turned to Reality which He felt from the time where they went to that Deserted House; He knew in coming Minutes; He dealt that Scenario so just Ordered all to Shift Him to Vehicle and rushed to Life Line Hospital while ACP Ordered SACHIN, VINEET, NIKHIL and PUNKAJ to check in Detail about those CCTV Footages and Hardcopies too...!

He Opened His Eyes and seated with Jerk either Someone Wraps Him around Himself; DAYA trying but the Scare was too much and now He wanted to Expel that Pain, Hurt and Fear over His Buddy Shoulder; ABHIJEET weaving on His hairs with...

ABHIJEET: kya DAYA; itna Dar gaye (Smily tone) halanky Darna tou Mujhy chahyey, Do Do Qatal ka Ilzaam hay Mujh pr...

DAYA (departing and hit punch on His Shoulder with): Bako Nahi...

ABHIJEET (smiles): wo Body Fake nikli...

DAYA (scary tone): Pakka...

SALUNKHY: aaj tak koi Kacchi Report tou di nahi hay DAYA...

DAYA now moving Head around and finding His all Family around Him; ACP Sir was Entering with Discussing Something to Dr. RAJEEV and then come close to DAYA, smiles after looking at Him and say...

ACP: lo bhae, Mera Bahardur Sipahee tou Pehlay Round mein hee Chit ho gaya...

DAYA Embarrass while All Officers Smiles and after taking Permission from Doctors; they all taking DAYA to Bureau again; ACP did not allow them to move to their House; He feels Bureau is the Safest place for them right now; SALUNKHY in that Journey Updating ABHIJEET as...

SALUNKHY: ABHIJEET, DAYA ki is Frozen Shoulder walay Maslay kay baad tou Shak ki Gunjaish bhi Khatam ho gayii kyunkay DAYA kay Pichlay Medical Reports ye bhi batatay hain kay Usy NEOMYCIN say allergy hay jub kay ye Dono Baatein Us Fake Body ki Reports mein Nahi dikhy... (after a second) wesay Tum nay wahan Us Ghar pr DAYA say Darwaza kyun khulwaya tha...?

ACP turned His Neck with SALUNKHY Query towards ABHIJEET as He also Wanted to Ask this; ABHIJEET look at Both His Heads and tell...

ABHIJEET: Sir, jub Main wahan tha, Us (low tone) DAYA kay sath tou najany kyun Mujhy feel hota tha kay jub Wo room say bahar aata tou room ki Light Low ho jati aur jub Ander jata tou Glow; isi tarah jub Darwazy ka Lock main nay Kholna chaha tou wo Khula nahi halankay wo Knob Ghoom raha tha pr jub Us nay aa kr Khola tou Khul gaya (after a second) Mujhy lagta hay Us kay Jism mein lagy Sensors ki wajah say aisa hua isi liyey Main nay yahan DAYA say darwaza khulwaya aur Us ko room kay ander aur Bahar bula kr dekha pr aisa kuch Nhai hua...

ACP: hmmm, magar ye bhi tou Ho sakta hay kay is Bandy ko Maar kr Un Logun nay Sensors badal diyey hun ya Un ko Nikal diya ho...

SALUNKHY: haan, kyunkay is Body ki Skin ko Jalaya ya kaho Jhulsaya gaya hay; ta kay Body ka Hr Cell Mar jayey tou ab tou agar Us kay Jism mein Sensors lagy bhi thy tou ab is Baat ka Jaana Namumkin hee hay...

ACP and ABHIJEET nodded in Yes whereas All reached at Bureau again and now after telling All to DAYA about SONALI and ROCKY backgrounds; ACP asked the Officers engaged their Tasks before they Left Bureau to Hospital to Check Out DAYA...

ACP: haan Tum logun ko kuch mila..?

SACHIN: Sir, kuch aisa Nahi jo is Sketch say Match karay...

PUNKAJ (added): aur Na hee Hardcopy ya Softcopy say...

NIKHIL coming inside and after watching DAYA Fit and Fine with Team; feels Relaxed and giving a File to ACP Sir with...

NIKHIL: Sir, Dr. TAREEKA nay ye Finger Prints ki File di hay jo SACHIN Sir aur VINEET Us Gym kay Locker Room say Utha kr layey thy, magar sub ka Record AADHAR Card say mil gaya hay kyunkay ye saraay Us Gym kay Perminant Customers hain aur inhun nay Apni Identification Proof ki Copy wahan jama bhi karwaii thi jo Humein Un ki dii hui USB say mil gayii thi...

ACP (nodded and turn to DAYA with): DAYA, yaad kr kay batao, kabhi ROCKY Tum ko aisay waqt mila hay jub Tumharay Sath koi aur bhi ho..?

DAYA (after a minute): haan Sir, ek baar SAM Khara tha Meray sath aur Hum ROCKY say baat kr rahy thy...

ACP (to VINEET): Tum Logun nay SAM ko Sketch Dikhaya Nahi...?

DAYA (cutting with): Sir, SAM Apny Cousin ki Shadi attend karnay Thailand gaya hay...

ACP: ohh, ye tou...

Suddenly they All heard a Fax Machine voice; RAJAT taken out Prints and Reads it, Officers felt Something Wrong from His Face Expressions, before anyone asked, He forwarded them to ACP with...

RAJAT: Sir, ab koi Faida Nhai... 2 Din Pehlay ye Larki SONALI Ahmedabad mein Ek Accident mein Mar chuki hay aur ye Larka ROCKY ek Jhagray mein Chakoo lagnay say Mar gaya...

ABHIJEET (standup with): kya...!

RAJAT: haan Sir, NIKHIL nay Countrywide Database check kiya tha; Missing Persons ki Site der say Update hui hay aur (giving FAX to ABHIJEET with) jub Un Logun ko Sketch mily tou Unhun nay Confirm kr diya...

ACP (taking tense sigh with): yani, Na Gawah, Na Sabut...

DAYA: Sir, aisa kesay ho sakta hay...? Un kay Hum Logun ko Trap karnay ka Maqsad tou Samjh aa raha hay magar kya Wo itnay Bewakoof hon gay kay Saray Sabut bhi Khatam ker dein...?

ABHIJEET: haan Sir, Koi na koi Sabut tou hoga Un kay pass aur shayed Wo Isy Saheh Waqt aany pr Istaimal bhi karein aur Main (whisper tone) Suli pr carh jaon...

DAYA (strong): khair aisa tou hoga Nhai... SONALI kya samjh rahi hay, (angry) ek baar phir Main Us kay haatun Khilona ban jaon ga aur Tum sub Log (rash) Meray karan Phir Musibat mein Phanso gay... (to ACP) Sir aisa is baar tou Kum az Kum hoga Nahi... Main...

ABHIJEET (harsh interrupts): kya Main, haan kesay koi Sabit kr sakta hay DAYA; Na ye Larki jo Mujhy SONALI kay naam say Mili is ka koi Record hay aur na hee ROCKY ka; pehlay bhi ROCKY kis tarah CID mein shamil hua aur Us nay Meri jagha lii, Hum Us Gutthi ko hee Nahi Suljha payey aur ab tou (irriatation) DAYA, is baar Hum Buri tarah phanse chukay hain ya shayed kaho Main...

DAYA (angry): Jee nahi; koi Tum Phansay Nahi ho; Hum Log kuch na kuch Dhoond Nikalein gay...

ABHIJEET (painful smile): haan Meri Phansi kay Baad Meri Body...

DAYA (scream): ABHI...

ABHIJEET: kya ABHI; DAYA sub Dikh raha hay; Hum ek aisay jaal mein Phanse chukay hain jis ka koi Sira tou Dur Humein ye tak Nahi samjh aa raha kay Kaat bhi payein gay is Jaal ko ya Nhai; (asking tone) batao ROCKY 2009 mein Mar gaya; jo Fake ROCKY aur SONALI milay Wo bhi Khatam; jo Asli SONALI thi Us ka Na koi pata hay aur na koi Khaber; phir Kahan say... Khahan say Dhondein gay Hum Us ko...

DAYA (grabbing ABHIJEET arm): kahein say bhi, kahein na kahein tou hoga... haan shayed kuch bhi Mujhy...

He Stopped in a Bit; All Look at His Silence in Confusion; His Eyes Smiles and He said to ACP in Happy tone...

DAYA: Sir, SONALI ka Pata nahi Humary pass, Na Number, pr Us ka Chehra tou hay na... Us Case mein Wo Witness thi, Us ki Picture Is File...

ABHIJEET (again angry cutting): Sahab ki Bewakoofi ki Misaalein na ab Syllbus mein Parhani chahyey; kya Wo larki is Chehray kay sath Kaam karay gi; DAYA ek Kaccha Khilari bhi isy Janta hay; Us nay apnay Plan mein Buht Homework kiya hay aur ye Achy say Jaan lo kay Zakhmi Shair Zyada Khatarnaak hota hay...

DAYA (gives His Pure Smile with): Saheh kaha Boss aur is Case mein wo Zakhmi Shair Main hun kyunky SONALI ka na sirf Chehra Humaray pass hay balkay Us kay Finger Prints bhi...

ACP (pat on DAYA shoulder with): Fantastic DAYA...

DAYA: Sir, achanak hee Mujhy Dihaan aaya kay Wo Gun jo Us Club mein Us nay Chalai thi aur baad mein Is baat ko Accept bhi kiya tha; Hum nay Us waqt Us kay Finger Print liyey thy aur Wo abhi bhi Humaray Criminal Database mein hongay Balkay Us File mein bhi...

ACP: Right (to FREDDIE) FREDDIE Meray Cabin say wo Dono Files lay kr aao...

FREDDIE moved inside while ABHIJEET Connecting Some Small Bits of Investigation with...

ABHIJEET: aur abhi tak Usy ya Us kay Gang ko Fake Finger Print Saheh tarah banany Nahi aayey kyunkay ROCKY waly case mein bhi DAYA nay kaha tha kay Us nay ROCKY kay Finger Prints ko Meray Finger Prints jo Database mein hain Us say Match kiya tha aur Wo Tele nahi ho payey thy aur yahan bhi SALUNKHY Sir nay Us Body ki Report mein yehi kaha hay jo humein Us Ghar say mili...

ACP: haan, magar ye thori aajeeb baat Nahi...?

DUO shook Shoulders, FREDDIE coming with Files, ACP look at that and then moved them to DUO while Ordering RAJAT, FREDDIE and VIVEK with...

ACP: Tum log Visa Section say Is Finger Print kay through Investigation karo; 2004 say 2014 tak ka Poora Data nikalwao aur haan ye bhi Pata karo kay Foreign Office mein bhi is ka Koi Helping Hand hay aur Sponsor ka Pata bhi...

All Three moved Head and Left while ACP looking at DUO who were Discussing the Case after going through Both Files; He always gives Chances to Both His Officers to Argue with each one; He felt that this Arguing Session always gives Him a New way when the Road showing Him Dead end; He found that First when ABHIJEET arguing DAYA who accussed His Director Friend to Killed His Wife while always Experience it by giving them Delibrate Effort to take the Disscussion at that Point where Both have No Choice except Arguing to each one...!

After an Hour RAJAT, FREDDIE and VIVEK backed whereas this Hour was Spent by All in Quietness while ABHIJEET in Extreme Tension; ACP in Worry and DAYA in Regret and Obviously Pain; All coming Officers started as...

RAJAT: Sir, We got it...

DAYA (happy): Yes, Yes...

FREDDIE (with Smiles giving Visa Form and Passport Copy to ACP as): Sir, SONALI nay Apna Naam, Shakel, Address sub hee kuch Change kr liya aur agar ye Finger Print Nhai hota tou shayed Hum Khali Hath hee reh jatay...

ACP (after seeing VISA Form and Passport Copy with): Really, ye tou poori ki poori change ho gayii hy (giving Form and Passport having Picture to DUO with) Pehchanna tou Namumkin hee hay...

DUO seeing the Picture and saw a Completely Different Girl, She tried to Vanish Every Reminance of Her Facial Features to some Extent through Cosmatic Surgery, Some Botox and Hair style Change as well..!

The Next Party coming Up and Updating their Investigation which were a Bit Expected for TRO as...

VINEET: Sir, ROCKY ek Anath Alay say Taluq rakhta tha, Koi aagy peechy Nahi tha, is liyey Us Body ko tou kisi nay Claim bhi Nahi kiya aur Police walun nay Us ka Antim Sanskar kr diya...

PUNKAJ: Sir, SONALI Ek Struggling Actress banny Mumbai aayii thi; Kis Gaon say, is ka kuch malum nahi; Us ka Antim sanskar ek Sanhansta nay kr diya hay...

ACP: hmmm, khair chalo SONALI ka Pata tou BLUEMOON HOTEL bata raha hay, pr wahan Direct Raid maarna kuch Saheh Nahi; kuch aisa karna hoga kay Hum kisi Hangamy kay Bina SONALI ko yahan lay aayein...

ABHIJEET: Sir, Meray pass ek Plan hay...

DAYA: kya Boss...

ABHIJEET: Sir, sub say pehlay BLUEMOON HOTEL ka wo Room aur Floor pata krtay hain jahan SONALI filhal maujud hay, Us kay baad Hum kisi na kisi tarah Hotel mein koi Panic phaila saktay hain, like Us Floor ki Electricity Band kr dein ya Us Floor pr koi Bomb ka Threat...

NIKHIL: Sir, Us room pr Nahi...

DAYA: Nahi Usy Shak ho jayey ga... (to ACP) Sir, Electric Shortage zyada better Option hay warna Bomb mein Humein poora Hotel Khali karwana par jaye ga aur Hum Coverup Nahi kr payein gay...

ABHIJEET: haan, (to VIVEK and NIKHIL) NIKHIL Tum aur VIVEK pata karo kay SONALI kis Room mein Thehri hui hay aur wo Room Hotel kay kaun say Floor pr hay, jub Tum is ka Signal Humein do gay tab hee (to FREDDIE and SACHIN) FREDDIE aur SACHIN wahan Electric Board kay paas kisi Achy Electrician ko ly kr Kharay hon gay, aur Humaray SMS miltay sath hee Usi Floor ki aur Us mein maujud saaray Rooms ki Electricity band kr dein gay aur Us kay baad (to RAJAT) RAJAT, Hotel kay Management ki taraf say Announcement kr day ga aur haan ye kehna kay is Floor kay saaray Guests ko Hotel ki Dusri Branch mein Shift kiya ja raha hay aur SONALI ko Ek cab mein yahan lay aana... Hotel ki Cab Sevice hee Use karein gay Hum; jis Cab mein VINEET hoga Hum Us ka Number Tum ko SMS kr dein gay, Usy wahan ki kisi Lady Worker kay sath saheh cab mein Bithana Tumhari Zimmadari hay... (to Others) aur Tum sub bhi Apna Kaam bilkul Accurate karna, Koi Chook Na ho... OK

RAJAT: Jee Sir, Theek hay...

OTHERS: Ok Sir...

DAYA (to ACP): kya hua Sir..?

ACP (murmur): Najany kyun Mujhy... (jerking Head with) khair Chalo...

They all moving after making the Plan and Understand their Own Rules; First they contacted to Hotel Management in Private and after telling them their Plan by ACP Sir, Acted upon it and very Smoothly and easily brought SONALI to CID Bureau where TRIO Welcomed Her who totally after Supervision of that Plan coming to Bureau in early Time; She smiles during seated in presence of All of them and Complimented DAYA with...

SONALI: abhi bhi Dashing hee ho DAYA...

DAYA feels Something Hurt Him Deepdown but His Aggression Lower down when ABHIJEET grabbed His Wrist; ACP Sir come to Straight after sitting in front of Her in Relaxment...

ACP: SONALI ya MARIA, (She smiles as MARIA was a Name written on Passport) (ACP again) Bekaar baatun mein Time Waste karna Mera khayal hay (softly smile) Meray sath Tumhein bhi pasand nahi hoga... (She nodded in Yes) (ACP added) bus kuch aisay sawal jo Humari Un Guthiyun ko Suljha day... Pehla; Tum nay Humein Khud Apnay pass aany ka Mauqa diya na..?

Not only SONALI but DUO also Shocked on ACP this Query; ACP Sure tone told them that SONALI Replied must be in Positive and She was Not Descouraging them with...

SONALI: Jee, Buht Choti sii Kahani (with smile) kabhi kabhi Hum poori Film Direct kr letay hain lekin Humein zara bhi andaza nahi hota kay jis Actor ko Hum sub say Kum Paisay day rahy hain na wohi Humein aisa (rash tone) Choona laga jayey ga jis ki wajah say Hum Sarak pr aa jayein gay... (after a minute) jo DAYA ki Fake Body Aap logun ko mili wo is Film ka sub say Junior Artist tha magar Wohi Humara Titanic dabo gaya..

ACP (smily tone): kesay..?

SONALI: wo Wo Chip lay bhaga jis mein ABHIJEET ko RATAN aur BALA ko Shoot kartay huay Capture kiya gaya tha (Stressing) DAYA kay sath Mil kr...

ABHIJEET (happy Smirk): Bravo... Cupid nay Khud kay seeny pr hee Teer day maara (naughty) kyun DAYA...

DAYA (smiles): isy kehtay hain Ghar ko lagi aag Ghar kay Chiragh say...

SALUNKHY (entering with Team with): ya Ghar ka Bhedi lanka dhayey...

DAYA: ROCKY say Tum Logun ka kya Rishta tha...

SONALI: Tumhein hairat hogi DAYA but ROCKY is My Bro.. (low tone) Mujhy tou Saza ho gayii aur Meri Saza Khatam hui 22 September 2009 yani Meray Bhai ki ( hate tone) Maut CID kay Sharp Shooter Sr. Inspector ABHIJEET kay Hathun 38 din pehlay hee ho chuki thi...

SALUNKHY: kyun Tumhara Bhai kya kabhi Tum say Jail Milnay Nhai aaya..?

SONALI (harsh): kya Gang is ki Ijazat deta, (after a minute) khair ROCKY ko kesay aur kyun CID mein Plant kiya gaya tha; Mujhy Nhai malum...

ACP: pr phir Tum nay DAYA ka Clone kesay banaya.. matlab ek tarah say Fake Clone..?

SONALI: jub Main Saza Kaat kr Nikli tou Gang already Mera Fake passport aur Visa banwa chukka tha; kyunkay Gang poori tarah Khatam Nhai hua tha; sirf Us ka ek Hissa CID kay haathun Pakra gaya tha; Gang nay yahan say Apnay Aap ko pooray tour pr Underground kr liya; main yahan say Japan chali gayii aur Mujhy ROCKY ka naya Chehra Us ki Maut kay 45 din baad yani Us Khaber kay bhi baad mein Dikhaya gaya, Meray saamny Sr. Ins ABHIJEET kharay thy aur phir wahan say MARIA nay janam liya; 2009 mein hee Aap logun ko (proud) Humari Taqat ka andaza ho gaya hoga tou 2014...

ABHIJEET: matlab, Tum log DAYA pr Buht pehlay say...

SONALI (cutting with Anger): Tumhein malum hay Sr. Ins ABHIJEET; Tumharay Dost ki sub say Bari Kharabi ye hay kay Wo Ek Look aur Weight pr nahi rehta... (all look at DAYA who was Emabarrss while ABHIJEET really Praised Him in Heart, He clicked that Point in just Few Words) (SONALI in Irritative tone) kabhi Baal lamby tou kabhi Takla (all forcefully control smiles, She added again) kabhi Weist dekho tou 42 aur kabhi 35, kabhi Monchein tou kabhi Darhi; kabhi French Cut tou kabhi Clean Shave... (irritated) Hum jub chahtay koi Clone Enter karein CID mein, DAYA Look change karwa kr aa jata; Hum phir Fail ho jatay warna ye Badla Buht pehlay Poora ho jata...

ABHIJEET: isi liyey Tum Logun nay DAYA kay Gym ko nazar mein rakkha...

SONALI (tease): haan aur aaj say Nahi Sr. Ins ABHIJEET; Pichly 4 Saalun say DAYA ki Body ki hr Measurement Humaray pass hay; DAYA ko tou Ilm hee Nahi; kabhi is say wahan Gym mein koi ROHAN milta tou kabhi DAVID, kabhi SAAD tou kabhi ARUN aur aakhirkaar jub plan Execute karna tha tou ROCKY...

(after taking water Sips from table having water glass and said) jis Larkay ko DAYA banaya gaya Usy Buht Sanbhal kr rakkha gaya; Us kay Features, Aankhein, Height, Built DAYA say Buht milti; Ireland mein mila Humein aur Plan ki Dor Bandhnay lagi; shuker karo Hindi samjhta aur Bolta bhi tha magar Zaban Saaf honay mein buht waqt lug gaya; yahan Hum nay Usi Fake DAYA kay through HQ ki Seal nikalwayii tak kay jo File Fake DAYA, ABHIJEET ko day Us pr lagi Seal Original hee lagy; Humein Sr. Ins ABHIJEET ka Pata tha; Khojna Un ki Hobby hay...

ACP: aur RATAN aur BALA hee kyun..?

SONALI (laughing): majbori thi ACP, jub Shikar karnay nikaltay hain na tou ye Nhai dekhtay kay beech mein Kitnay Khargosh Maaray gayey...

DAYA: tou Tum Logun nay Us Fake DAYA pr nazar kyun nahi rakkhi...

SONALI (look at Him and tease): Jesy Tum nay Mujh pr nahi rakkhi thi (DAYA Stunned and Hurt, He knew what She was referring) (SONALI adds) isy hee Chook kehtay hain DAYA aur isy say hee Tum Jesay Andhy Officers Jeet...

ACP Slapping hardly over table and She cant Finished Her Sentence; DAYA Quiets while SALUNKHY Initiated...

SALUNKHY: Tum Logun nay Facial features ko change karnay mein kafi Expertise say Kaam kiya magar Finger Prints Permanent tour pr Nahi Bana paye abhi tak...

SONALI: haan (smiles) Aap jesa koi Gyani Nahi mila na; Bad Luck... abhi tak gang is Wishy pr kaam kr raha hay...

SALUNKHY: haan Ceramics ho ya Tape ya Gummy Bears; Impression ko liya ja sakta hay aur kuch had tak Use bhi kiya jata hay pr wo Tukra Khaal kay ooper ek patli sii Layer hee hota hay jisy Temprory Skin Replacement procedure bhi kehtay hain...


[ A/N: its Temprory Skin Replacement ]

magar Excessive paseena; Buht Thandak ya Sakht Garmi say Us mein Print aana Mushkil hota hay aur Cracks parnay shroo ho jatay hain aur Finger ka Fake Print nahi saheh kaam krta isi liyey Usy Buht jaldi mein Istaimal karna parta hay...

SONALI: hmmm... aur Kuch... (to ACP) kyun ACP Sahab...?

ACP: Tumhein malum hay Humein Us fake Body say Kuch nahi mila...

SONALI: Humein bhi... Us Ghar say bhi nahi, Us gadi say bhi nahi (angry) najany Us Saaly nay kahan wo Chip Chupa dii; Collar camera ka Pehla Nuqsan aaj samjh aaya hay...

ABHIJEET comes close to ACP and tell Him Something Weird in Secret tone with Tension as...

ABHIJEET (secret tone): Sir, Kahein ye Log ye tou nahi samjh rahy kay Us Fake DAYA nay Meri Body mein Wo Chip daal dii hay...

ACP: haan SONALI ka yun itni Asani say chaly aana yehi batata hay aur (stressing) is ka itna Calm Behavior ye bhi bata raha hay kay ye Phansi pr carhnay Nahi aayii...

ABHIJEET (shock): tou Aap ka matlab...?

ACP shook Shoulders; He really take a Relieving Sigh as the Whole Session was Recorded Not only at One Place but Directly Telecasted to HQ and IB Official Devices through SKYPE...!

ACP: hmm, wesay Tum Logun ka Nishana Thora Chook gaya...?

SONALI: matlab...?

ABHIJEET: matlab wo Sabut Meray pass bhi nahi...

SONALI (standup in a Jerk as): kya...

She instantly broke the water glass and trying to Threatening Officer by Attempting an Murder on Herself with...

SONALI (threat): agar Tum Logun nay aagy Barhnay...

ABHIJEET (laughing smirk): Hum kahan Barh rahy hain SONALI; Tum hee peechy Hut rahi ho... wesay Mera Khayal hay Acha Nhai lagay ga; abhi Peon nay Safai ki hay; Bekaar mein Tumahray Khoon say Carpet ka color...

SONALI (trying to Threat more): dekho Officer, Mazaq Mut...

ACP (relax): SONALI; Is jagah aatay sath Main ny Tum ko kya kaha tha (SONALI confuse) (ACP again) Bekaar baatun mein Time Waste karna Mera khayal hay (softly smile) Meray sath Tumhein bhi pasand nahi hoga... (again) Tumhein Wo Radio Cab yaad hay, jis say Hotel say Tum yahan tak aaii ho (rubbing Forehead with) kya Gas thi ABHIJEET..?

ABHIJEET (hurry): Sir, Methanol (SALUNKHY really murmuring in harsh) (ABHIJEET added) Tum already marny wali ho SONALI (calm tone) bekaar mein Dusra Attempt Acha Nahi lagy ga Na...

SONALI Shocked; the Glass She Threw and Next second She completely grabbed by HQ Special Task Security Force who were there after that Live Telecast... They took SONALI with them; TRIO takes a Sigh and SALUNKHY Bursts Anger in ABHIJEET as...

SALUNKHY: ABHIJEET sahib, ye Methanol Gas kya hoti hay...?

ABHIJEET (embarrass): Sir, Mujhy kuch samjh Nahi aaya is liyey Bol diya...

SALUNKHY: arry tou soch samjh kr Bolna tha na; Naak Katwa dii Tum nay SALUNKHY ki aaj kay Us ka Colleague yeh bhi Nahi jaanta kay Methane Gas hoti hay, Methanal nahi aur Us say siwayey Aap mahashy kay koi mar bhi nahi sakta.. huh...

ACP: acha baba; ho gayii Ghlati; Maan liya na Us nay; Tu bhi SALUNKHY...

They were Busying in their Usual Fight while All Officers back to Their Desk; ABHIJEET turned Neck and found DAYA leaving the hall with Complete Silence...!

DAYA Quietly sat on Residence Stairs; ABHIJEET came from inside and after Jerking Head to See Him in that Pose from an hour; come close and sat beside Him with...

ABHIJEET: kya soch rahy ho DAYA..?

DAYA (sad smile): yehi kay kabhi kabhi Ghalati aasani say Peecha Nahi chorti...

ABHIJEET: Bako Nahi... (after a second) Khud hee Sahab nay kaha tha kay isy Life say seekha gaya aik Acha Lesson samjh lena...

He Standup and giving His Hand to Him.. DAYA look at that Hand; Always at Every moment This Hand He found in His 17 Years Life either on Professional or Personal bases irrespective of any kind of Circumtances; Arguments; Fights; Anger etc... He looks that Hand so Deeply so ABHIJEET tease...

ABHIJEET: Pooja ka Saman mangwaon...

DAYA Embarrass with Smile and grabbed that Hand so Strongly; He knew Mistakes giving Lessons But Some Lessons giving Precious Relations too and Relation always Suppress Lessons either Good or Bad...!

A Wordboy during Cleaning the Hospital Bed in Detail as He found few months back 500 rupees from Bed corner, His Greedinees Increases and this Time when His Hand trying to Search; His Fingers found a Chip; He taken out it and trying to Invaded it in His Mobile but its Wasteless for Mobiles; He went through out in Murmur and when taking out a Cigerrate from His Pocket; look at that Sim and in rash dumped it on Sanetary Lines with a Loud Slang...!

Sometimes without any Strong Effort Bad thing always Vanished away from Bad ways without Hurts anyone; Nature Rules...!

Here at Far away place...

Someone Snatched DAYA picture from the Grip of some Soft and Long Fingers and scolded;

Voice: U again; (irritate) U still in Love with this Man.

Soft Fingers just snatched the Picture and move away with a Smirky Smile and Singing as;

Muhabbat Baray Kaam ki Cheez hay, Kaam ki Cheez hay.!


AUTHORS COMMENTS...

I dunt know that My Readers like this Experiment or Not; I m trying to give a New aspect; here mostly Readers complaining that how ABHIJEET Sir did not recognised DAYA Sir, its Obvious...

I tried to tell U that what was the Main Failure of the plan that Gang, only the Finger Print Idea; here ABHIJEET Sir already in Seductive as mostly He used those Tea/Coffee/Meal provided by that Gang in that Undercover Mission...

The Idea of Undercover present just because to Wipe some Minor Jestures if ABHIJEET Sir felt during Meeting to DAYA Sir...

I want to Survive SONALI but somehow I think Ppl not accept that so Aressted Her or might be there is any Doubt... Who knows who is SONALI... the Girl met to DAYA Sir at 2004 was the Original One or the Girl arrested at Bureau by IB is the Real one... Mystery around everywhere!!!

Edited by gadhadada - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Haye Rabba!
After so Long i am the first one to comment on Dada's story..Yay😎😃
Now,Coming to business...😉
Fantastic story Dada...Lovved it...❤️
I just wished there were some Duo scenes when Abhijeet came back from that Hospital,Which could tell their state of Mind after such big blunder!
But yet i lvd it..
N Dat Sonali...Uff...Chudail..huh...😡

😆
But i likd that part alot "Ek style aur weight par nahi rehta"😆
Smhow i find in bit incomplete,dunno why!
khair keep cmng!
Edited by ..Candy.. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow final part
Thnx for the quick update 😃
Reading, review pending
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oya demag guma dyea tum na tu so manytimes I missed points and read it again 😆 well kasoor tumara nae ha..mai he raat ka 3 bja story par rae the 😆 my half eyes were open and I was like Story tu pori he par ka soyon ge chaya phr kuch smaj aya na aya 🤣🤣
Acha abi Story ka kye bolon.i missed so many points which I want to ask..i forget all Somehow I did not like Sonali come back idea much.. How Abhijeet vanished and then back in hospital?? that point was missing or I missed it😕
Clone idea and everything was nice..but somehow execution of that idea was not according to my expectations. Which u can do.. u can do much more better than this..i knew it very well.may be u r not agree with me but still I will say this was not ur 100percent...
I really like ACP Shak Part 😉...Duo anger towards each other..Irritation and concern in all that 👏
Nice Job Boss...I always loved ur experiments..Keep it up.. Part2 mai gooma gooma ka rak dyea tum na tu 😆 mai tu kabi 10 janam b loon tu b yah sab na soch sakti hn aur na likh sakti hoon.Ur mind is really creative..👍🏼 Thanks for the Story 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

The overall plot has been very well thought, planned and presented.👏 ⭐️

Well Done GD.Keep it up👍🏼

Great team distribution and nice dialogues.👏 Especially liked the forensic parts such as the part regarding the temporary skin replacement,finger prints etc⭐️.The ending scene between Abhijeet and Daya has been well written.👏Liked the way you described each team members feelings in different situations.👏 The part of Abhijeet having observed the speedometer of the car while being taken to that place and leading the team to that spot by this was excellent.⭐️ It is a very good way of showing the observation skills of a very intelligent officer.Also liked the manner in which Doctor Salunkhy worked together with the team. 👏 Especially,Doctor Salunkhy's reaction when ACP sir asked him if he could test Daya was nice. Abhijeet reply to ACP sir's questions where he pointed out that many things had happened for the first time in this case was good, a very nicely written dialogue. 👏

All Duo scenes,their conversations are very nice👏 ⭐️

The unclear part was, how was the gang, able to take Abhijeet out of the hospital and bring him back when there were CCTV cameras in the hospital though not in his room?

Thanks a lot for the story GD. 😃

Edited by beena.thomas - 11 years ago
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Hey GD kya khal chal hain? Kyun k itna twisting story likhne k bad toh yeh oochna toh banta hi hai 😆
U r very creative yar, mere pas toh aisi creativeness ka quarter bi nai hai 😒 seriously thw twist of time date month haye mje uper neeche piux dhek dhek k samjna para 😆 yeah so dumb na 😛
I really liked ur story and ur different idea connecting it with old two major cases awesome 👏 yar this sonali oh God 😡 or yeh end pe kya tha han a girl with daya pic 😲 or wo last wali lines?? Its mean the girl have been arrested is not a real sonali?? 😲 the real sonali is with pic and she will be back someday, oh no acha choro ise
I liked duo scenes, trio scenes and even i liked dr salunke actions nd reactions 😆 his irritation on methanol gas tht was geniune 😆
I liked the way acp sir said k dono ek sth hi phansna ta k dono bazo kata k ghar beth jaoon 😆 awe so sweet 😳
Abhi was so sweet when he was checking daya at that deserted house and then feeling relieved 👍🏼
And yes yes i agree with beena and neeme the disapearing part of abhijeet from hospital is not cleared in my mind too 🤔
Well jo bi ho i loved reading it, u have put alot of effort in it and tht s obvious 👍🏼 weldone yar ⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay so I ready the entire story in one go today on the bus. 😉

Sab se pehle I loved how you began slowly into the case. Bilkul jaise hona chahiye. 😉

Lekin yaar then you lost me somewhere in the middle. Aisa nahi laga ke yeh GD ne likha hai. Kuch missing tha. GD-ness missing tha. 😆 Lekin phir bhi acha tha. Smooth case, suspense, thrill...and of course the duo convo!

I loved the little mix around with date, time, and year aur jo forensics include kiya hai woh bhi bhadiya tha.

The description of feelings bhadiya tha aur ending toh ek dum mast thi!

And I'm pretty sure auron ne poocha hoga, lekin exactly how did the gang get Abhijeet out and back into the hospital with CCTV cameras in the hallway? Kya koi undar se mila huya tha?

Overall awesome!
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Originally posted by: ..Candy..

Haye Rabba!
After so Long i am the first one to comment on Dada's story..Yay😎😃
Now,Coming to business...😉
Fantastic story Dada...Lovved it...❤️
I just wished there were some Duo scenes when Abhijeet came back from that Hospital,Which could tell their state of Mind after such big blunder!
But yet i lvd it..
N Dat Sonali...Uff...Chudail..huh...😡

😆
But i likd that part alot "Ek style aur weight par nahi rehta"😆
Smhow i find in bit incomplete,dunno why!
khair keep cmng!



Hmm, After so Long, I m too the First One to give Reply on Comments of Chotu Cutie Pie...😆😉
about Ur Wishing; Every Story have Different Themes Baccha and On Professional Level, I dunt want to Show so many Personal Emotions...😛😛
I tried to make it Different and I like that Every One Missing that GD element...😳😳
I m Happy What I did...😃😃
hmm Incomplete, might be it Incomplete...😈😉
Chalo U Read it such Keenly, gives Ur Precious FB...😳😳
its Honor for Me...😳😳
Thank You so much Baccha... 🤗
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Originally posted by: neeme

Oya demag guma dyea tum na tu so manytimes I missed points and read it again 😆 well kasoor tumara nae ha..mai he raat ka 3 bja story par rae the 😆 my half eyes were open and I was like Story tu pori he par ka soyon ge chaya phr kuch smaj aya na aya 🤣🤣


OML! tou Raat ko 3 bajay aankhein khool khool kr Parhnay ko kis nay bola tha...

Acha abi Story ka kye bolon.i missed so many points which I want to ask..i forget all Somehow I did not like Sonali come back idea much.. How Abhijeet vanished and then back in hospital?? that point was missing or I missed it😕

No U did Not Miss it as I thought that Reader assumed the Idea... khair He backed like a Patient in Unconcious stae as U knew lastly He took the Coffee the Fake DAYA presented to Him...😉😉😉


Clone idea and everything was nice..but somehow execution of that idea was not according to my expectations. Which u can do.. u can do much more better than this..i knew it very well.may be u r not agree with me but still I will say this was not ur 100percent...


Nice, its mean I have still some Points of Improvisation, but Yes if U concider ROCKY, U already got this that Gang almost Had Done all in Cloning only the Finger Print they still cant make so Working on it, here, No Team, No Checking even DUO at Undercover Mission, they already cant Suspect to Each one because of Change in Behavior... but I feel Good that there are still Some Departments where I can try to Improve Myself and Skills...👍🏼😊
I really like ACP Shak Part 😉...Duo anger towards each other..Irritation and concern in all that 👏
That was the Most Logical and Real Part I m trying to Portraying and Thank You so much For liking that...😳😳

Nice Job Boss...I always loved ur experiments..Keep it up.. Part2 mai gooma gooma ka rak dyea tum na tu 😆 mai tu kabi 10 janam b loon tu b yah sab na soch sakti hn aur na likh sakti hoon.Ur mind is really creative..👍🏼 Thanks for the Story 🤗

Yes thats True, kyunkay aap ko Likhwana jo aata hay...😉😉


A Big Thank You... 🤗
I have Not a Creative Mind, its Just My Frnds, Fans and ppl Love and Concern and My LORD Blessings with My Family Dua and Support...😳🤗
and obviosly aaj GD jo kuch bhi hay NEEME ki wajah say hay...😉😆😆
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WHAT WAS THAT..*like Ron in Harry Potter 🤣*
sacchi is story padhne ke baad to mujhe apne course ki padhai asaan lagne lagi.. kamal kiya aapne bhi..
me to waise hi bhullakad hun kis janjaal me phasa diya mujhe..
Konsa point kaha miss hua I am unable to tell.. but this new experiment of yours, looks like a new grenade...
But anyways this one point is absolutely clear ke bada hi shaatir dimagh h is insaan me.. aur us ko use karne wala to mere dimagh ka pakka dushman h..
Anyways coming back to the story..
it was really good... i mean overall story was really nice.. the Duo talks and the way you showed Daya's mental chemistry.. hm that was totally giving your touch.. investigation and every other things was beautifully written.
But umm how to say that.. I mean.. i want you to write one more story..in your original way.. Matlab ye padh kr dil nahi bhara.. it was not your kind of story..😆 eh.. samjh gaye ha ni?? 😆
Anyways I don't have any questions..😆
Waiting for more stories..
Stay blessed..

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3 months ago

New promo out guys

https://www.instagram.com/reel/DJ36-WKvXM2/?igsh=NmNlOHRzbGxnNHVs Acp sir is back most probably

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Posted by: Minionite

3 months ago

New Promo - ACP Pradyuman's Return (More like a clickbait promo)

So I warned you in the title itself because this promo basically shows Daya feeling like ACP Pradyuman is alive and then ACP sir's feet and...

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Posted by: Wistfulness

3 months ago

New PROMO: CID falls apart with officers turning against each other.

https://youtu.be/h3iV8ilK0p8?si=kO1FvMRXpB16lGN3 After all this drama, I hope there's an actual traitor within the team and it's not the...

https://youtu.be/h3iV8ilK0p8?si=kO1FvMRXpB16lGN3
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