~DEMONSINGH'S CORNER~ CID IPL Special Part 1 (Page 24)

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@.KupKakes

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: poorvisinghcd

Tysm pc! Of cours wer unstoppable bro n sis productions

sweet😳

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visrom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: DemonStar

Thank you so much, Sonali. Glad you liked it! Actually this story was all largely planned and written by Srishti here; I just followed her lead. It could never have been possible without her enthusiasm and innovation. 😃
Yes, we've planned to portray good bonding between Purvi and Shreya in our future stories. We have at least a thousand planned now... the challenge is getting the time to write them. 😆

Wow...thousand!!!!😲 😃

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Menrva

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Team Silver Trio

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

DemonSingh I must say you both are awesome writers! It feels like I'm reading a novel from the library or something!

The story was very gripping. For a while I lost myself in the story and then I realized that the story was over. 😆

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Sonali.

@Sonali.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: DemonStar
Thank you so much, Sonali. Glad you liked it! Actually this story was all largely planned and written by Srishti here; I just followed her lead. It could never have been possible without her enthusiasm and innovation. 😃
Yes, we've planned to portray good bonding between Purvi and Shreya in our future stories. We have at least a thousand planned now... the challenge is getting the time to write them. 😆

Eagerly Waiting 😊

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Muskaan

@Muskaan92

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Good one...

Will read when I get free from my college...

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@ANGELICEYES

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Fantastic story Ravi Bhaiya and Poorvi⭐️⭐️⭐️. Very well written, interesting..flawless description..👏👏. Loved how you portray Ansha mam's character👏👏👏. Keep coming up with more stories👍🏼.

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Finished reading it. The climax scenes - CID team inhaling poisonous gas, knife hanging on the professor's head...everything reminded me of some of Santosh Shetty's team-in-danger stories. But at least you explained how the gas didn't affect them. On screen this would never be explained.

Purvi was the hero of the story. Loved her...👏 We need some lady cop oriented stories once in a while.

Waiting for your next story. 😃

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misha.as

@misha.as

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Awesome story Ravi bhai...👏⭐️👏
Love the writing style, the language,⭐️ the flashbacks, the plot ...👏 👏
Everything is amazing...⭐️
Great work...⭐️ 👏

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Srishti

@Srishti.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: misha.as
Awesome story Ravi bhai...👏⭐️👏
Love the writing style, the language,⭐️ the flashbacks, the plot ...👏 👏
Everything is amazing...⭐️
Great work...⭐️ 👏

Ye kya o.O
Sirf bhaiyaa ko credit :D 😛 😉

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Soni.

@Soni.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Sorry for the delay in reviewing your story Ravi and Shrishti. This story was absolutely awesome. Your style of writing is just fab made me glued to the story. I felt like I am reading a novel. Everything seemed to be happening right in front of my eyes. The story was so much gripping. The concept, the investigation, the team bonding, Purvis strategy, flashbacks this was all a masterpiece. Purvi proved herself that she was also a brave cop just like the others. Overall a wonderful story waiting for more