~DEMONSINGH'S CORNER~ CID IPL Special Part 1 (Page 24)

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nsapo

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

OMG this is the heights of glory of satirical comed🤣y...brilliant is all i can say ravi da and poorvisingh👏Keep Writing...

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nsapo

@nsapo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

And i finished..arre apart from funny it has subtle good messages also😃

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Soni.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Sorry for the delay in reviewing Ravi and Shrishti. What a story yaar. Haas haas ke pet dard karne laga. It was fab mixture of wittiness, humour and sarcasm. It was heiights. Planet YSPT and Moon OOT hey bhagwan. Uff, still my stomach is aching badly with laughter. Loved every single bit of the story escpically Salukhes 2 minute expirements and the Alieno being looto over Purvi. His hindi dialogues were cute. I can seriously imagine her reaction. Superb work done by both of you. Amazing concept and incredible plot. Thank you so much for such a laughter dose.

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SofiyaSam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

So funny. Amazing story. :)

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Omg...what was that!!! 🤣🤣 🤣

You are giving them dangerous ideas! I happened to see shapath promo saying khatarnaak dinosaurs se mukaabla...your story may not be far from becoming a reality.

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ice-cold

@ice-cold

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

OMG 🤣🤣
All of u r amazing Demonsingh and poorvi..
Enjoyed it...especially the song clips😆🤣
good effort👏👏Keep writing guys!!😊
I agree with u Vis di😆

Edited by -Souj- - 11 years ago

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Srishti

@Srishti.

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

thanks friends for the lovely comments😃

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mano86

@mano86

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

awww..
the story's really very hilarious
😆

imagining the scenario one can go

(NOM)

NIKHIL n ANTAKSHARI
part was juz
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n what to say abt PURVI's ASHIQ
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SALUNKHE Sir's 2 min inventions
😆

DEMONSINGH
👏

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misha.as

@misha.as

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

OMG So funny. Amazing story 🤣🤣
Enjoyed it and song clips😆🤣
great👏👏
Thanks Poo and Ravi bro 😊

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Padmpriya

@Padmpriya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#100

OMG... What a Fantastic Story Ravi bro...and Srishti dear... I was Laughing like anything ... And Best Parts were:

He turned to Purvi, who was trying to stand at the back of the team, and again caught her and began to sing: Arre tore pyaar mein ho meri Purvi hum kuch bhi kar denge! Hey tore khatir Zombies aur Jhingalalas se bidh lenge! Purvi joined in angrily. Arey kaise yakeen main kar loon jo keh rahe ho who kardoge? Tera kya hai kaun barosa, dhoka de sabko kha loge! Alieo was now trying to dance with her. Tose pyar karte hain gori, jaan bhi de denge re! The aliens were going wild now and cheering for their former queen. 😆

And all at that ACP SIR -SALUNKHEY SIR SINGING AND OUR DUO...😳

And even i loved this song the most:

Purvi finally broke free of Alieo and joined them: Chalein jaise Goliyan sanan sanan Udein jaise Missiles gagan gagan Aadamkhor phool jaise chaman chaman Phodun Alieo ka sar main dhadam dhadam! Main Purvi CID ki rani, haar se anjaani Aage badhti hoon, kar deti hoon, jo hai thaani! (The song surely suits her a lot...)

And Its an awesome Story.. i dont think todays case will be in any way better than this haha😊

Edited by Padmpriya - 11 years ago