** Poems thread # 2 ** - Page 73

Created

Last reply

Replies

986

Views

83.2k

Users

47

Likes

2.2k

Frequent Posters

gadhadada thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Achiever Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saman0

I wrote it in my break today😃 Hope u'll like it...!!!!


A far cry from various flatfoots...!!!
Angel eyes and glistening boots...!!
Arresting personality and dazzling suits
Conquering storms without bumbershoots😆

Procuring hearts by remarkable acting
Even boring episodes caused no abating
You were at the bottom of show's rating
Come in my house, your fan is awaiting

Whenever in class i get a backseat...!!!!!
I spend my time thinking, when we'll meet???
I start visualizing a coffee on a love seat😳
Soon it fades away not you; Inspector Abhijeet!!!!




SAMAN, Break Time mein ye Haal hay...😉
Two months ki Vacations mein tou Aap Coma mein chali jati hon gi...😆😆
Abhijeet in Coma ki jagah Saman in Coma...😈
lovely Attempt...👏👏
Thank You...😳😳
Jackles thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks neha dear for appreciating😳
@GD: Bilkul sahi andaza lagaya janab. You always size up feelings correctly😃😉. Even hospital bed didn't stop me to hallucinate😆. Perfect analysis buddy and thanks😳😛
misha.as thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saman0

I wrote it in my break today😃 Hope u'll like it...!!!!


A far cry from various flatfoots...!!!
Angel eyes and glistening boots...!!
Arresting personality and dazzling suits
Conquering storms without bumbershoots😆

Procuring hearts by remarkable acting
Even boring episodes caused no abating
You were at the bottom of show's rating
Come in my house, your fan is awaiting

Whenever in class i get a backseat...!!!!!
I spend my time thinking, when we'll meet???
I start visualizing a coffee on a love seat😳
Soon it fades away not you; Inspector Abhijeet!!!!




Amazing saman...⭐️⭐️👏
Jackles thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks Reshma and Misha😃😳
gadhadada thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Achiever Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saman0

@GD: Bilkul sahi andaza lagaya janab. You always size up feelings correctly😃😉. Even hospital bed didn't stop me to hallucinate😆. Perfect analysis buddy and thanks😳😛


Wo Apna tou kuch aisa hee hay Boss...😉😉
buublly thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada



<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#6600ff">BUBBLLY Baccha, U must think about Publishing Ur Poetry...👏👏</font>
<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#6600ff">Absolutely Wonderful...👏👏</font>
<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#6600ff">U know when I read them...😊😊</font>
<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#6600ff">I feel Flavour of OLD URDU Poetry...😳😳</font>
<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#6600ff">Zabardast...👏👏</font>
<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#6600ff">Keep it Up...👍🏼</font>
<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#6600ff">Thank You so much Baccha...🤗</font></font>

Oh!thank u soo much GD:-) is izzat afzaai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya 😃 🤗 I'll definately take ur suggestions seriously in future:-D
buublly thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada



<font size="3" color="#ff0000" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif">Poet: QATEEL SHIFAI...</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#6600ff">Chara gar aye Dil-e-betab kahan aatay hain,

Mujh ko khush rehnay ke aadab kahan aatay hain,

Main to yak musht usay sonp doon sab kuch lekin,

Aik mutthi mein mere khuwab kahan aatay hain,

Muddaton baad usay dekh ke Dil bhar aaya,

Warna sehraon mein sailab kahan aatay hain,

Meri Bedard nigahon main agar bhoolay se,

Neend aaye bhi to ab khuwab kahan aatay hain,

Tanha rehta hoon mein din bhar bhari duniya main qateel,

Din buray houn to phir ehbab kahan aatay hain...????</font>

Wow GD! Dil khush kar diya aapne 👏 thanks 4 sharing:-D
buublly thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie006

<font color="#9900cc" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Hi frnds😛

i wrote something nd wanted 2 share wid u all😊</font>😉😳


<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Badi ajeeb hoti hai, jise umeed kahte hain</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">tootte hain hazaron baar tootkar phir se bante hain.</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">badi ajeeb...</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">kisee ko pane ki hoti hai, kahin na khone ki umeed</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">kisee ko maut ki chahat, kahin hai jeene ki umeed</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">ye kaisee dor hai jaane,bandhe sablog rahte hain</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">badi ajeeb...</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">dubnewalon ko hoti hai jaise ek kinare ki,</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">girnewalon ko hoti hai jaise ek sahare ki,</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">kahin ye deti hai khushiyan kahin ban aansu bahte hain.</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">badi ajeeb...</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">sukhe rat ko jaise hai rimjhim si phuharon ki,</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">toote patton ko umeed hai jaise baharon ki,</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">tamnna hoti hai puri kahin sapne hi rahte hain.</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">badi ajeeb...</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">musafir ko hai manjil ki,herr moujon ko saahil ki</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">andheri raat ko hoti hai jaise ek ujale ki,</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">ye aisee raah hai hanskar jahan se sab gujarte hain.</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">badi ajeeb...</font>


<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">ye aisee now hai yaaron jo bin patwaar chalti hai</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">kisee ki doob jaati hai, kisee ki paar lagti hai,</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">na jaane phir bhi hain esme sawar log rahte hain.</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">badi ajeeb hoti hai, jise umeed kahte hain.</font>





V V Nice cutie 👏 I really loved it:-)
buublly thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saman0

I wrote it in my break today😃Hope u'll like it...!!!!

<font color="#ff00ff">
</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">A far cry from various flatfoots...!!!</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">Angel eyes and glistening boots...!!</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">Arresting personality and dazzling suits</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">Conquering storms without bumbershoots😆</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">
</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">Procuring hearts by remarkable acting</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">Even boring episodes caused no abating</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">You were at the bottom of show's rating</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">Come in my house, your fan is awaiting</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">
</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">Whenever in class i get abackseat...!!!!!</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">I spend my time thinking, when we'll meet???</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">I startvisualizing a coffee on alove seat😳</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">Soon it fades away not you; Inspector Abhijeet!!!!</font>
<font color="#ff00ff">
</font>



Hey saman, it's amazing yaar 👏 Lovely poem:-)I think it's d best utilization of a break time 😛
Jackles thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: buublly

Hey saman, it's amazing yaar 👏 Lovely poem:-)I think it's d best utilization of a break time 😛

Exactly. Best utilization of a boring class too😆. And thanks😳

Related Topics

CID thumbnail

Posted by: Minionite · 1 years ago

Opening TRP is out. 1.4 is pretty good. https://x.com/GossipsTv/status/1872335699959263257

https://x.com/GossipsTv/status/1872335699959263257
Expand ▼
CID thumbnail

Posted by: Nikita_99503 · 1 years ago

Hello everyone!!! Welcome to the CID BTS, Social Media updates and spoilers thread. Kindly share all updates regarding the show here in this...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".