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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi frnds😛
i wrote something nd wanted 2 share wid u all😊
😉😳
Badi ajeeb hoti hai, jise umeed kahte hain
tootte hain hazaron baar tootkar phir se bante hain.
badi ajeeb...
kisee ko pane ki hoti hai, kahin na khone ki umeed
kisee ko maut ki chahat, kahin hai jeene ki umeed
ye kaisee dor hai jaane,bandhe sablog rahte hain
badi ajeeb...
dubnewalon ko hoti hai jaise ek kinare ki,
girnewalon ko hoti hai jaise ek sahare ki,
kahin ye deti hai khushiyan kahin ban aansu bahte hain.
badi ajeeb...
sukhe rat ko jaise hai rimjhim si phuharon ki,
toote patton ko umeed hai jaise baharon ki,
tamnna hoti hai puri kahin sapne hi rahte hain.
badi ajeeb...
musafir ko hai manjil ki,herr moujon ko saahil ki
andheri raat ko hoti hai jaise ek ujale ki,
ye aisee raah hai hanskar jahan se sab gujarte hain.
badi ajeeb...
ye aisee now hai yaaron jo bin patwaar chalti hai
kisee ki doob jaati hai, kisee ki paar lagti hai,
na jaane phir bhi hain esme sawar log rahte hain.
badi ajeeb hoti hai, jise umeed kahte hain.
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ gadhadada
Wonderful Poem⭐️👏.Thanks a lot for sharing.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ DUOlover123

A very lovely meaningful poem.👏⭐️
True we can never return what our mom does for us.Mom is God's best gift to us.
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Posted: 12 years ago
That is very nice Cutie. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie006

Hi frnds😛

i wrote something nd wanted 2 share wid u all😊😉😳
Badi ajeeb hoti hai, jise umeed kahte hain
tootte hain hazaron baar tootkar phir se bante hain.
badi ajeeb...
kisee ko pane ki hoti hai, kahin na khone ki umeed
kisee ko maut ki chahat, kahin hai jeene ki umeed
ye kaisee dor hai jaane,bandhe sablog rahte hain
badi ajeeb...
dubnewalon ko hoti hai jaise ek kinare ki,
girnewalon ko hoti hai jaise ek sahare ki,
kahin ye deti hai khushiyan kahin ban aansu bahte hain.
badi ajeeb...
sukhe rat ko jaise hai rimjhim si phuharon ki,
toote patton ko umeed hai jaise baharon ki,
tamnna hoti hai puri kahin sapne hi rahte hain.
badi ajeeb...
musafir ko hai manjil ki,herr moujon ko saahil ki
andheri raat ko hoti hai jaise ek ujale ki,
ye aisee raah hai hanskar jahan se sab gujarte hain.
badi ajeeb...
ye aisee now hai yaaron jo bin patwaar chalti hai
kisee ki doob jaati hai, kisee ki paar lagti hai,
na jaane phir bhi hain esme sawar log rahte hain.
badi ajeeb hoti hai, jise umeed kahte hain.


CUTIE Baccha, I really Loved UR Work...👏👏
magar haan Is Lines mein Maza nahi hay...
Tum nay Qafyey ka khayal nahi rakkha hay...
is tarah banao na jesay Pehla baya hay jo RED FONT mein hay...😳😳
Theek, baaqi Shandaar hay...⭐️⭐️
Thank You so much...😳😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful poems friends ⭐️⭐️⭐️.. Each and every poem is mesmerizing⭐️😳. Thank you so much 🤗🤗🤗.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie006

Hi frnds😛

i wrote something nd wanted 2 share wid u all😊😉😳
Badi ajeeb hoti hai, jise umeed kahte hain
tootte hain hazaron baar tootkar phir se bante hain.
badi ajeeb...
kisee ko pane ki hoti hai, kahin na khone ki umeed
kisee ko maut ki chahat, kahin hai jeene ki umeed
ye kaisee dor hai jaane,bandhe sablog rahte hain
badi ajeeb...
dubnewalon ko hoti hai jaise ek kinare ki,
girnewalon ko hoti hai jaise ek sahare ki,
kahin ye deti hai khushiyan kahin ban aansu bahte hain.
badi ajeeb...
sukhe rat ko jaise hai rimjhim si phuharon ki,
toote patton ko umeed hai jaise baharon ki,
tamnna hoti hai puri kahin sapne hi rahte hain.
badi ajeeb...
musafir ko hai manjil ki,herr moujon ko saahil ki
andheri raat ko hoti hai jaise ek ujale ki,
ye aisee raah hai hanskar jahan se sab gujarte hain.
badi ajeeb...
ye aisee now hai yaaron jo bin patwaar chalti hai
kisee ki doob jaati hai, kisee ki paar lagti hai,
na jaane phir bhi hain esme sawar log rahte hain.
badi ajeeb hoti hai, jise umeed kahte hain.


Classic style👏... Wow! Keep it up dear😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
I wrote it in my break today😃 Hope u'll like it...!!!!

A far cry from various flatfoots...!!!
Angel eyes and glistening boots...!!
Arresting personality and dazzling suits
Conquering storms without bumbershoots😆

Procuring hearts by remarkable acting
Even boring episodes caused no abating
You were at the bottom of show's rating
Come in my house, your fan is awaiting

Whenever in class i get a backseat...!!!!!
I spend my time thinking, when we'll meet???
I start visualizing a coffee on a love seat😳
Soon it fades away not you; Inspector Abhijeet!!!!



Edited by saman0 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow that's very nice Saman. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely lines Saman 👏👏. Its every Abhi sir fan's feelings 😳. Keep up writing dear 👍🏼.
Edited by ANGELICEYES - 12 years ago

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