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Posted: 12 years ago
#51
Thank you too Neha di and Sonali di😳😳. Neha di,what a sweet and lovely poem⭐️⭐️... My dil goes😒 remembering one of my old friend.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
I know Angel, we all really miss our old buddies and new ones too sometimes...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
**WHEN GOD LOOK UPON ME**
When you are still in sleep with your teddy,
I clean cups and plates with red eyes,
When you mom calls you to get ready,
My madam shouts at me to cook hurriedly,
When you get board on your school bus,
I set out with my brother for coal mines,
When you attend your class with books and pencils,
I expand my hands for a paise to pedestrians,
When you have lunch from tiffin box with friends,
My master throws a burnt bread over my face,
When you play video games with soupy noodles,
I return home collecting stale items from market,
When you enjoy cartoons on tv,
I get slaps and kicks for breaking the showpiece by mistake,
When you do your homeworks in front of your teacher,
I really try hard to stop my empty stomach aching with water,
When you go out with your parents to spend holidays,
I beg to your father for service with a shoe polishing kit in my hand,
But still I have a hope when God will look upon me,
I will also get to play.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
@ Angel : Lovely lines dear...👏👏👏 so touching and true...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: ANGELICEYES

**WHEN GOD LOOK UPON ME**
When you are still in sleep with your teddy,
I clean cups and plates with red eyes,
When you mom calls you to get ready,
My madam shouts at me to cook hurriedly,
When you get board on your school bus,
I set out with my brother for coal mines,
When you attend your class with books and pencils,
I expand my hands for a paise to pedestrians,
When you have lunch from tiffin box with friends,
My master throws a burnt bread over my face,
When you play video games with soupy noodles,
I return home collecting stale items from market,
When you enjoy cartoons on tv,
I get slaps and kicks for breaking the showpiece by mistake,
When you do your homeworks in front of your teacher,
I really try hard to stop my empty stomach aching with water,
When you go out with your parents to spend holidays,
I beg to your father for service with a shoe polishing kit in my hand,
But still I have a hope when God will look upon me,
I will also get to play.

Maine bhi sapne dekhe thay,
Ek chhota sa ghar, pyaar ka ujaala,
Kitaabon ke saath duniya ki baatein,
Doston ke saath khushiyon ka mela...!!
Lekin meri kismat pe rota hai dil,
Duniya ki bheed mein yeh dil akela,
Ab toh khel se bhi darta hai dil,
Zindagi ne mere saath yeh kaisa khel khela...!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
Thank you so much di😳. Today I went to temple with my parents and after getting out papa gave money to the begars outside. One man passed by saying his friend these people make the begars greedy and get on your nerves. If you have money keep it to yourself. I just can't do anything only but fuming in anger. How could they say so?? 4 or 5 lil kids were just running behind me saying di one coin to me please... It hurts me a lot coz I can't do anything for them😒😒😒.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
Yeah I know... it hurts...
But what I personally feel that such people, especially small kids, should not be encouraged to beg or ask for money... They should not be grown in such environment... They might think that this is the only way of earning...
You are right, we must ofcourse help them...
Even I feel like handing them something... But I dont know how this can be changed.. I really dont.
Edited by neha_dna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
@ Neha
i just lvd ur poem truely from my heart 😊
just fantastic 👏👏
Thank u 4 sharing😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
@Angel
amazing poem dear👏
@ Neha
wonderful lines u said 😊
Lvd it⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Aftr read ur poems nd comments i have smthng in my mind
which is


Ae dosto
zindgi ka khel h nirala
kisi ko deta h chaabi to
kisi ko deta h taala

kisi ko sb kuch deta h siwaaye dil ke
to kisi ko dil ke siwah kuch deta nhi

arey kisi ke paas itna h
ki unse smbhlta nhi
to kisi ke paas smbhalne ke liye kuch hota nhi

sacch yr
zindgi ka khel h nirala
kisi ko deta h chaabi
kisi ko deta h taala

Edited by anjali_mahajan - 12 years ago

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