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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutie006

nice poem sonali👏

keep it up😛


Thank u cutie... glad u liked 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kashmir

Dharti par jab dhoondoge Jannat,
Nazar Jayegi bas Kashmir hi tak,
Haryali jahan lehrati hai,
Khushali jahan muskati hai,
Iss jannat par jab Aatankvad ki nazar pad jaati hai
Toh haryali aur Khushali dono khoon se lethpath ho jati hai,
Aise mein Kashmir hamara Jannat kaise ban sakta hai?
Jannat se baddal kar Kashmir ab jehanam ban jaata hain
Aatakvad aur siyasat mein peesa humara Kashmir pyara
Janne kab failega iss mein woh pyaar who bhaichaara

Note: This was when I was in school. But the topic is bit controversial and do not mean to offend anyone's feeling
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely poems Sonali...👏👏👏Loved them... 😃Keep writing and sharing... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks Neha... Feels nice to hear appreciation from a good poet like you 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
@Sonali


lines abt a beautiful place
👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you so much Mano 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonali.

Thanks Neha... Feels nice to hear appreciation from a good poet like you 😃

Awww...
Well, everyone has the thoughts... we just write them down... itna dekhte hain ki padhte samay achha lage... that's all... 😉
Actually anybody can write poems... There's a poet inside everyone...
And you will surely agree with this... right??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely poem sonali👏👏
this is d fact about kashmir😳 but what can we do yaar?😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: neha_dna

Awww...
Well, everyone has the thoughts... we just write them down... itna dekhte hain ki padhte samay achha lage... that's all... 😉
Actually anybody can write poems... There's a poet inside everyone...
And you will surely agree with this... right??


Yes I totally agree with you Neha' But I think it is not about having thoughts or penning them down,,, It is just about how you write them' That is basically the bifurcation between good poet or average poet. Isn't it?



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sonali.


Yes I totally agree with you Neha' But I think it is not about having thoughts or penning them down,,, It is just about how you write them' That is basically the bifurcation between good poet or average poet. Isn't it?



But that we can learn only when we write...😊... hai na??
And everytime we write something, we ourselves feel that maybe this could have been better...
But we wont understand this unless we write...!!
And I feel that every poem that comes straight feom the heart is a good poem... And every poet who writes from his/her heart is a good poet... 😃

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