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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 13 years ago

Long time since we had one...I understand everyone is busy. 😛I hope to get at least 8 responses. (Till then I will not close this contest 😈)

Those who want this this contest to finish and who are interested in getting the results fast, please push the others.

Rules:

The last date for the contest is Sunday, 16th Sep 2012 3PM IST OR 8 entries on this thread, whichever is later.

Please post the Entry number along with your scene (check the previous entry and use the next number)

Participants are allowed to post more than one entry.

The order of the pictures can be changed.

No chatting allowed on this thread. All discussions can be held on the General Discussions # 32 thread.

So, here are your caps.

Clarifications:

Originally posted by: Shagnika

Check one of the previous contests. Here is one :

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/cid/2975147/write-a-scene-contest-results-on-page-6

You use your imagination and create a scene with these pics. Anything 😊

Will see if I can participate this time. I have enough time but unfortunately very less creative when it comes to this 😆

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astonish

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Posted: 13 years ago

Entry 1

In the Qualis

Everyone is Silent...
Daya is calm and composed...😛

Everyone seriously thinking
ACP (thinking) : Bechaara Daya... Kis musibat mein phas gaya hai... !!!

Freddy(Thinking) : Daya sir bhi na.. samajhthe nahi.. Ithne bhole rehne se... kaam nahi chaltha... thoda strict hona chahiye sir ko

Purvi(Thinking): Bechaare Daya sir... Kithne sweet hai... Ek bhi shikayat nahi... Pata nahi.. kaise manager kar lete hai sir...👏

Nik(Thinking) : Mujhe peeche kyon bithaaya hai... Daya sir... Pehle mai chada tha gaadi mein... 😭 Kuch baat bhi nahi kar rahe hai...

Daya(Thinking): Abhijeet yaar... tayyar rehna... aaj kisi bhi haalath mein mujhe is musibast se bachaana hoga tumhe...😈

Finally all the way feeling bad for Daya sir.,,, the team of Daya sir,,, ACP sir,, Freddy Purvi and Nik reach the bureau

In the bureau

As soon as they enter they find Abhijeet standing there in anger.. waiting for them... and the next second Abhi sir turns his face and starts walking away

Daya: Good Morning Abhijeet!!!😛
Abhijeet: Aisa kya good hai is morning mein... huh...bahut kaam hai... lag jao kaam pe😈
Nik confused!!!

Daya: Kya hua Abhijeet.. Ithne ukhade hue kyon ho??

Abhijeet(angrily) : aur kya karoon??? Laadu pede baantoon... ki Daya ke yahaan ladka hua hai?????? 😡

Daya(trying to act serious): yeh kya keh rahe ho Abhijeet???

Abhijeet: ab bas hogaya...Daya !!!! Nikhil.. ab kuch jyada hi ho raha hai... tum hum logon ki khaamoshi ka faayda utha rahe ho...😲

Nik(already in tears): sir.. maine kya kiya???😭

Abhijeet: mujhe aur Daya ko aaj subah ek investigation ke liye jaana tha.. aur ab waqt dekho... baarah(12) baj rahe hai... yeh koi time hotha hai office aane ka???

Nik: sir... lekin baaki sab log toh abhi mere saath hi aaye hai... unko toh aap kuch nahi keh rahe hai...😭

Abhijeet: haan kyon ki... woh log shayad apne aap aa jaathe bureau time pe... agar tumhaare liye Daya ko poore sheher ka chakkar nahi maarna padtha... Jab ki Daya ka ghar bureau ke ithne nazdeek hai... in sab logon ke gharon ke saamne se guzarna padtha hai,,, tumhe pick up karne... !!!!

Nik: Lekin sir.. mai kya karoon.. Mujhe yahaan ke local trains.. aur bus routes samjh nahi aathe.. Daya sir hi mere Bade Bhai hai..pita hai..guru hai... sab kuch hai... mai aur kahaan jaoonga sir...🥺

Nikhil bursts into tears😭

Nik: theek hai sir.. aap kehthe hai toh mai kuch kartha hoon... 😭
Nik leaves the bureau!!!!

Next Day at Forensic lab

Dr Salunke: Arey ACP saab.. aap ithne subah subah ... kya hua .. aaj kal Daya ke saath nahi aa rahe hai kya😛

ACP: nahi ... Daya ka driving route change ho gaya... Nikhil ne apna ghar badal diya😉

Dr Salunkhe: arey waah.. 😃 yeh toh acchi baat hai.. nahi toh bechaare Daya ko roz subah Mumbai darshan ho jaatha... Good job Abhijeet... accha kiya daant diya tumne use ... 😆

ACP; Pata nahi Salunkhe ... accha kiya ya nahi... 😆 kyonki mumbai darshan toh nahi kartha Daya abhi... lekin paagal khaane ka darshan zaroor kar lega.. 😈 kyon ki Nikhil ne Daya ke ghar ke baaju waala ghar liya hai... keh raha tha.. ki use.. sirf professionally nahi...personal life mein bhi Daya jaisa bannana hai ... 😛

Edited by astonish - 13 years ago

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Menrva

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Posted: 13 years ago

ENTRY 2

Abhijeet (in an angry mood): Aaj toh woh gaye.

Daya: Kaun?

Nikhil: Haan kaun sir?

Abhijeet: Nikhil kya tumhe Daya ko haar waqt copy karna zaroori hai?

Nikhil: Nahi sir.

Abhijeet: Toh chup raho.

Daya: Boss, itna gussa kyun ho?

Abhijeet: Baad main bataongi.

Abhijeet leaves the bureau in a huff. Daya calls ACP sir, who brings Purvi and Freddy with him and the 5 head out after Abhijeet.

Daya: Sir Abhijeet bahut gusse main nikla tha.

ACP: Lekin yeh jaa kahan raha hai?

Daya: Pata nahi. Bas itna kaha tha ke aaj toh woh gaya aur phir Nikhil pe gussa huya aur chala gaya.

Purvi: Abhijeet sir ne right liya hai.

ACP: Kuch nahi hoga. Dekh lena.

Abhijeet stops in front of the forensic lab. Daya follows suit. Abhijeet gets off and goes in. ACP tells Daya, Purvi, Freddy, and Nikhil to wait and he follows Abhijeet.

Abhijeet walks into the forensic lab and ACP follows. Abhijeet sees ACP and asks: Sir aap yahan?

ACP: Tum yahan itne gusse main kyun aaye ho?

Dr. Salunkhe: Kyun ki maine Abhijeet ko iss murde ke file ke baje kuch aur de diya tha.

ACP: Kya?

Abhijeet hands over the file to ACP with a smile. ACP flips to the first page.

Dr. Salunkhe starts singing: Munni badnaam huyi darling tere liye...

ACP flips another page.

Dr. Salunkhe (still singing): My name is Sheila. Sheila ki jawani. Main tere haath nahi aani...

Flip.

Dr. Salunkhe: Humka peeni hai, peeni hai, peeni hai...

ACP shuts the page and looks at Dr. Salunkhe. Dr. Salunkhe turns around and says: Kya?

ACP: Yeh sab kya hai?

Dr. Salunkhe: Arre tum logon ki zindagi main thodi si masti laa raha tha.

Abhijeet: Kya masti hai sir.

Abhijeet and Dr. Salunkhe laugh, while ACP watches with an amused look.

Edited by khota_sikka_sri - 13 years ago

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Padmpriya

@Padmpriya

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Posted: 13 years ago

ENTRY# 3

IN QUAILS...

ACP is thinking : ye Nikhil kahi bhi jaye Daya ko chipke kyun rehta hai pata nahi...😒

roj daya abhijeet mein jhagda laga deta hai...😡

DAYA thinking : pata nahi abhijeet mere bare mein kya soch raaha hoga... mein toh iss nikhil ke vajah se abhijeet ko inform karna hi bhool gaya😔 ke ajj iss nikhil ke car chalane ke ajeeb tarikhe se bore hokar acp sir ne mujhe subah unko pick karne bhulaya tha...

FREDY: yee ye acp sir toh hamesha aage baithte hai aur upar se aab tak mujhe promotion nahi diya ...😡

PURVI: aaj daya sir relieved honge ki atleast nik piche baitha hai aur acp sir ke samne toh woh apna FAN puran bhi nahi chalu karega...😃

NIKHIL: mujhe daya sir ko bolna padega ki woh mujhe bhi car drive karna sikhale..😊..warna ye acp sir mujhe demote bhi kar sakte hai...🤢

IN BEAURU

NIKHIL: daya sir...woh !!! kya aap mujhe drive karna sikha sakte hai please... aapke jaise...😃

DAYA: arrey nikhil...

ABHIJEET(inturupting): NIKHIL>... tumhe driving licence kis baat ka mila hai...hein??/

kya roj, daya sir ke peeche lage rehte ho...😡...aaj tumare vajah se hamara plan flop ho gaya...

NIKHIL: par sir...(very sad)😭 woh toh ACP sir ne hi daya sir ko bhulaya tha pick karne to...

ABHIJEET: nikhil waise inn dino ACP sir ki kuch batein mujhe sunne mein aayi thi ke wo kuch tumare transfer ki baat kar rahe the...😊

NIKHIL: nahi nahi ye nahi ho sakta mein aaj hi driving school join karta hoon...

IN FORENSIC LAB:

SALU: mere sunne mein pada hai ki ye hamare daya ke FAN , nikhil bhaisaab driving school join karne ka soch rahe hai...❓

ACP: haan haan bhai salunkey tumein toh sab bohot jald information mil jati hai... woh hamare abhijeet ka dimag hai ...usko daya se dur rakhne ka...😃

ABHIJEET: (all smiling)😃😃😳😳😃😃

~ THE END~

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

ENTRY 4:

ACP: Salunkhe, aaj itne dino baad Sunday shaam ko free time mila...tum ghar nahi jaa rahe ho?

Salunkhe: Haan lekin Shukravaar aur Shanivaar ko tum log laashon ki dher laga dete ho mere lab mein. Mujhe fursat kahan milti hai?

ACP: In laashon ko kal subah dekh lena...aaj mere ghar mein party de raha hoon sabko. Chalo.

Abhijeet: Sir party???

ACP: Haan Abhijeet. Aaj main sabko apne haath ka banaya hua bhindi bhaji khilaaonga.

Salunkhe: Cough... cough...

ACP: Kya hua? Khaansi ho gayi hai tumhe?

Salunkhe: Nahin...iss acid se dhuaan nikla...uski wajah se hua.

ACP: Isliye toh keh raha hoon...is acid ko chodo aur mere ghar chalo...bhindi khaao.

Salunkhe: Boss, tumhare bhindi se yeh acid zyada behtar hai.

Abhijeet : Kya hua Dr Salunkhe? Aap ACP sir ke haath ka banaya hua bhindi pehle khaa chuke hain?

Salunkhe: Woh...main...

ACP: Salunkhe, bas karo...tumhe achcha nahin laga toh iska matlab nahi ki Abhijeet ko bhi pasand nahi aayega.

Salunkhe: Haan haan...Abhijeet, zaroor kha lena bhindi bhaji...kal pet kharaab hua toh mujhe phone karna.

Abhijeet: 😈

Daya: Abhijeet, hum sab ACP sir ke ghar jaa rahe hain aur tum yahan bureau mein baithe ho?

Abhijeet: Tumlog jaao, main thoda busy hoon.

Daya: Lekin Abhijeet ACP sir ne mujhse kaha ki Abhijeet ko pick up karke aao.

Abhijeet: Haan, lekin main iss waqt free nahi hooon.

Daya: Kyon?

Abhijeet: Woh...tumhe baad mein pata chalega ki main kyon nahi aa raha hoon.

Nikhil: Sir...late ho rahi hai sir...bohot bhook lagi hai. Chaliye na sir.

Daya: Chup raho Nikhil, Abhijeet zaroor humse kuch chupa raha hai...Abhijeet, kya baat hai? bataao warna main yahan se nahi jaaonga.

Abhijeet(to himself): Daya nahi jaayega, toh yeh Nikhil bhi nahi jaayega. Bureau mein baithkar mera dimaag khaayega.

Abhijeet(To Daya): Kuch nahi Daya, bas ek khabri se milne jaa raha hoon.

Daya: Khabri se milne? Main bhi chalta hoon.

Nikhil: Daya sir chalenge toh main bhi chaloonga sir!

Abhijeet: Daya mera BP mat badhao...main akela hi chala jaaonga. Mujhpar daya karo, please!!!!

Daya: 😕Theek hai Abhijeet, koi problem hai toh phone karna.

Daya; Sir Abhijeet kisi khabri se milne jaa raha hai. Lagta hai koi achcha case haath mein aane wala hai.

ACP: Koi khabri-wabri se nahi mil raha hai. Salunkhe ne use kuch keh diya...

Daya: Salunkhe sir ne??? Kya sir?

ACP(to himself):Sach bata diya toh yeh log bhi nahi aayenge. 4 kilo bhindi waste ho jaayega..

ACP:(to Daya): kuch nahi...un dono ke beech mein koi jhagda chal raha hai...hum beech mein kyon pade?

Freddie: Sir, aaj kya khilaane wale hain aap?

ACP: Main tum sab logon ko bhindi bhaaji khilaane wala hoon.

Freddie: Sirf bhindi????

ACP: Haan bhindi khaane se buddhi badthi hai. Tum sab logon ko iski zaroorat hai.

Freddie: Haan sir meri wife bhi kehti hai...aur Nikhil ko bhi iski zaroorat hai...lekin Purvi toh kaafi intelligent hai...use bhindi ki kya zaroorat hai?

ACP: Woh baar baar museebat mein phas jaati hai, isliye.

Freddie: Sir...Daya sir ko bhindi ki kya zaroorat hai? Woh toh kaafi sharp hain..???

ACP: Nahin Freddie. Daya pehle jaisa sharp nahin hai.

Daya: Yeh kya keh rahe hain sir...main sharp nahi hoon??

ACP: Haan...pehle tum aasaani se Abhijeet ko manakar laate the...aaj tum Abhijeet ko manakar mere party mein nahi laa sake isliye tumhe bhindi ki zaroorat hai. 😈

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

ENTRY: 5

ACP Sir entered with ABHIJEET into Forensic Lab, SALUNKHY Sir doing some Working😊, looking Quite Quiet😉 and in an Off mood😉... ACP Glance on ABHIJEET and Initiates...😉

ACP: kya hua SALUNKHY, Girl Frnd say Larai ho gayii kya?😉

SALUNKHY: nahi haan...🤔

ABHIJEET: arry tou itnay udaas kyun lug rahy hain?😉

SALUNKHY: nahi Udaas tou Nhai hun...😊

ACP (to ABHIJEET): arry ABHIJEET Girk Frnd nay pooch liya hoga kay Bhae SALUNKHY ye Baal Asli hain ya Naqli...😉

SALUNKHY: dekho ACP...😡

ACP: main kya dekhun (teasing😆) dekh tou teri Girl Frnd nay liya hay... Tera Wig...🤣

SALUNKHY (to ABHIJEET): dekho apnay Boss ko samjaho😡... ye Meray apnay baal hain... Noch kay dekh lo...😉

ACP: Nochny ki kya zarurat hay ABHIJEET😉, aisa karo is ki Girl Frnd say pooch lo... us nay tou Noch ker hee Dekhein hongay na...😆😆

ABHIJEET (to ACP): Sir kya Aap bhi.😳.. (to SALUNKHY in Whispering Tone) wesay Kaha kya tha SALUNKHY sahab...😉

SALUNKHY: nahi bus keh rahi thi... Motay ho rahy ho😆... kisi Coat ka Button Nhai Band hota...🤣

ACP and ABHIJEET really tried Hard to Hide their Big Laugh🤣... here after seeing their Laugh.. He want to say more but got a Call so pick the call and say...

SALUNKHY (in Call): theek hay baba... bhej do...😊

after cuts the Call He said to ACP and ABHIJEET Both...

SALUNKHy (to ACP): yaar ACP ek Kaam karo... Main ek Fax Tum ko Bhej rah hun... Ek Picture hay...😊

ABHIJEET (tease): Pait ki ya Coat ki...😉🤣

ACP really Give a Smily glance to ABHIJEET😉 and look at SALUNKHY who bit angry but Continued...😡

SALUNKHY: Meri Girl Frnd ko ek DULHAN ki Saari aur Gehny buht pasand aa gayey hain😳... plz Yaar Dhoond do... dekho CID apny Dostun ki Help kay liyey bhi tou hay na... plz...😊

ACP: acha Theek hay... Per BHINDI khana paray gi...😉

SALUNKHY: Done... 👍🏼

ACP Sir Ordered ABHIJEET to move to Bureau and got SALUNKHY Fax Picture and He moved to DHULHAN House after taking the Address from SALUNKHy to get the Wedding pictures of Them with the Rest...!!!😊

ACP sat with the Rest members at quillas moved to their Destination😊... all poured in their thoughts...🤔

PURVI: kya ACP Sir bhi😡... acha khasa abhi Kidnap honay wali thi😆😆... fazul mein la ker yahan Bitha diya...😆😡

FREDDIE: ahhh... aaj tou Subah bhi Do Plates reh gayii theen😭... ab Ghar ja kker aur bhi Dhoni parein gi... KBC bhi nikl jayey ga😉... ye ACP Sir bhi na... kabhi Mujhy Meri Wife ki Nazrun mein Acha Nhai banny dein gay...😆😉

NIKHIL: is baar Salary milein tou DAYA Sir jesay Google lunga...😳

DAYA : kya boss... wahan ABHIJEET Bureau mein Mazy ker raha hoga... AC mein aur yahan Hum log...

ACP: Mera khayal hay 4 Kilo Bhindi Kum paray gi😉... agar SALUNKHY apnay Girl Frnd ko bhi lay aaya tou...😆😆

DAYA trying to ask ACP Sir a Query as...

DAYA: Sir kahan chalna hay...😕

ACP: DULHAN dhondnay...😉

Here after ACP Investigates about the Wedding Family... He Ordered DAYA to move to Bureau with NIKHIL as ABHIJEET Waiting for Them with a Fax😊... and Leave Rest with Him at his Home as He needs PURVI for cutting 4 kilos BHINDi😆 and FREDDIE for Cleaning the Crockery😉 who were in Stnnud phase...😲

DAYA and NIKHIL entered inside Bureau😊... ABHIJEET looked at them and turned His Face with Murmur...

ABHIJEET: aa gayii Guru aur Shishya ki sawari...😡

DAYA: ABHIJEET kya hua, ACP Sahab bata rahy thay koi FAX aany wala hay... kahan hay??❓

ABHIJEET: dekh lo Table per para hay...😉

DAYA looked at the Table and got a Picture of a Bride wearing Saaree and Jewels😆... He asked...

DAYA: kaun hay ye???😕

ABHIJEET: DULHAN...😈

DAYA: haan haan nazar aa raha hay... main poch rah hun kya Kidnap ho gayii hay..???😉

ABHIJEET: Irada tou hay...😆

DAYA: ya Murder??😕

ABHIJEET: buht Jald...😡

DAYA: arry hay kaun... Naam kiya hay...😕

ABHIJEET (in anger😡): apnay SHISHYA say poocho...😡

DAYA: NIKHIL batao kaun hay ye😲... Jaantay ho kya isay...😕

NIKHIL try to give look of Shy and appeared that Boyish Grin which is the Identification of his Guru🤣... but Failed so Just Smile and gives His toothche Gap😉 and say..

NIKHIL (Shy and say with Smile): Sir Main...😳

DAYA was in Shock😲... ABHIJEET who just Look at NIKHIL after turning and find that NIKHIL trying to look Shy and just Copying DAYA with that embarrass look😉 so again turned and Order in anger to NIKHIL...😡

ABHIJEET (complete Rash): NIKHIL... Dant ander...😡😡

DAYA was still in Shock 😲where as NIKHIL hide His Toothche😉 and also in Shock😲 mode obviously Copying DAYA and Think...

NIKHIL: ABHIJEET sir ko kya hua???!!!😕😕

Note for VIS DII...😈

NiKhil ki Picture Do Caps mein day ker aap nay Humara Imtaihaan kyun liya hay Jee...😆

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neeme

@neeme

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

ENTRY 6:

ACP and Abhijeet enters in Forensic lab.. ACP asusual in hurry

ACP: Han Sarlunka kuch Pata chala??

Dr.Sarlunka: Kye Acp humesha Gora pa he sawer ho ka ata ho... Kabi Quaills ki raftar sa b ayea karo..Humesha sochta hon kabi tu late ayo ga..Traffic ma panso ga..per traffic b tum sa Darti ha.😆😆

Abhijeet to ACP: Sir lagta ha mood karab ha ajj..

ACP: han lagta tu ha..Kyun Sarluka..Mood karab kyun hai ajj??...

Sarluka: tu aur kye karon boss😡.. Roz 2, 4 lasshen la ka rak data ho mera samna.. Kud tu maza sa Investigation karta rahta ho..kabi yahen kabi wahen..muja dako aik room ma Band ho ka in lasshon sa baten karo..

ACP feels Sarluka in really bad mood so tries to change the Topic to feel him relax..

ACP: han Sarluka yah tu ha..Tum b meri taran intelligent hota tu Ajj yahen na hota.😆😆.

Sarluka smiles little bit...😊

Sarluka: han boss yah tu hai.. Khere main tu kahta hon main jo hon wo b tumari he mehrbani ha😆😆..

ACP: han bilkul 😳

Sarluka: Acha tu tum asa he sochta ho😲... Kyun abhijeet tumara kye kyeal ha iss bara ma???

ACP winks to Abhijeet:😉

Abhijeet: han han Bikul...asa he lagta ha muja tu Sarluka Sahab😆😆...

Sarluka makes the sad mood again 😔

Sarluka: Kye😲 tuma sach ma asa lagta ha??...

Abhijeet and ACP both smiles and tries to hide their smiles from Sarluka😆😆😆

ACP: han tu dosti ka aser tu hota ha na😉..abi dako Daya ko..Wo b tu abhijeet ko kitna manta ha😉..kahta ha wo jo b ha Abhijeet ki waja sa he ha...😆😆

Sarluka: acha😲..daya na asa Bola 😲😲...

ACP: han tu aur.. main na daka ha😉..Daya ko abhijeet sa seekta hoe... abi tum na b muj sa seak lyea tu kye hoe sarluka🤣...Dosti ma sab chalta ha yar 😆😆...

Before sarluka Says anythng to ACP in anger..ACP and abhijeet left the forensic lab immediately 😆😆 after saying...

Abhijeet: acha sarluka sahab kuch pata chala tu phone kar dijyea ga ACP sahab ko 😆😆

All in Quails moving for investigation purpose..here all thinking..

ACP: Yah Nikil ajj peecha kyun beta ha..wasa tu sab sa Zid lagya beta rahta hai ka Daya sir k sath jana ha..Muja aga betna do.. aur itna peecha bet gaya.. Kuch tu garbar hai ... Kuch tu garbar hai 😆😆😆

Purvi: ajeeb baat ha ajj Tu Nikal ana he nae cha raha tha😲.. Daya sir ka peecha achanak kasa chor dyea uss na.. Kuch tu garbar hai 😆😆

Freddy: Yah jo ajj maine daka kye wo sach tha 😲😲 kahen sapna tu nae tha..😆😆 Daya sir na nikil ko bola chalu..aur uss na zid laga di ka wo breaue ma he raha ga 😲😲 asa tu pala wo Daya sir ka sath jana k lyea karta tha...tu per ajj kye hoa Kuch tu garbar hai 😆😆

Daya: Kye yar... Breaue ma he rah jata.. ajj tu zara driving ka mood nae tha.. Nikil sa kah data hon wo kar laga Driving..

Daya to Nikil...

Daya: Nikil Ma Gari rokta hon..tum zara drive karo aga... ma thak gaya hon...

After saying so he thinks..

Daya: oh yah maine kye kah dyea😲.. kahen Nikil na sab k samana mera hath peer dabana shuru kar dyea tu 😲😆😆 main kasa jan churaion ga...😆😆

Nikil: Nae daya sir.. app freddy sir ko bolya...

Daya: kye 😲😲 tum mera kahna nae mano ga??

Nikil: asi baat nae ha sir.. per app Freddy sir ko bolya...

Daya and All shocked

Daya: acha rahna do..hum wasa b pochna he wala han..

After few seconds..all heard someone crying slowly..

Daya: Freddy kye ho gaya 😲😲 Wife sa jagra ho gaya tha kye ajj subha??..

Freddy: nae sir... asa kyun poch raha han app??? 😕

Daya: muja laga tum ro raha ho...tum nae tu per kon ro raha ha???

ACP To Nikil

Nikil: Daya ko gari chalana k lye mana nae karna tha na..dako ab rona shuru kar dyea tum na..😆😆

Daya: 😲😲

Nikil: nae sir.. Main tu...

ACP: kye main tu???

Nikil: kitna kam ha Breaue main..aur abhijeet sir akala han..kasa karen ga Wo itna kam and he starts crying loudly 😭😭...

Nikil: sir main app ko akala chor k nae ana chata tha..per meri kssi na suni he nae..😭😭

Quails stoped with high speed jerk...

All faint... ACP pushed Daya..who was looking like he is In Coma 🤣🤣

In breaue...

Daya and Nikil enters.. Daya gives an anger look to nikil who reminds him.. that ACP sir gaves permssion to him to go back to breaue but don't cry at all.. ..

Abhijeet after seeing daya and then nikil thinks

Abhijeet: Yah Nikil per sa kahen ayea gaya😡.. wo b daya k sath😲...hey bagwan..ajj kitna kam ha muja.. Ab yah Copy cat ma nae dakh sakta..😆😆

He stands with complete anger...

Daya: wo abhijeet muja tum sa kuch kahna hai...

Abhijeet: kye kahna ha tuma.. Mera demag pala he karab ha..abi koe ulti seedi kaber na suna dana case k bara ma...aur tum log wapis kasa ayea gaya itni jaldi..

Daya tries to say somthing..but how he don't knw...

Nikil Seeing Abhijeet very carefully and now thinking..

Nikil: kasa kara hota han abhijeet sir 😃 ajj sa he una copy karna ha muja.. kal sa Aik coat be kareed lon ga.. her month ki salry sa aik coat😳😃.. hair style tu ajj he un jasa bnawata hon... aur muja unn jasa bolna b tu seekna ha... 😳😳😃 sab kar lon ga... Jab sacha jazba app ka sath ho tu koe cheez app ko roke nae sakti...😃😆😆

Abhijeet in anger speaks...

Abhijeet: Daya chup kyun ho..bolo b kye hoe??? muja pala he itna kam ha..

he moves behind and sees Nikil is watching him with complete Concern and attention... Abhijeet says

Abhijeet: yah tuma kye hoe Nikil..daya ko chor ka muja kyun gorna shuru kar dyea tum na 😲😲😡

Daya: woe tu main tuma batana ayea hon.. Nikil ajj sa tuma follow kara ga..

Abhijeet: kye 😲😲

Daya: han Wo forensic lab ma ajj tum na sarluka sahab ko btya ka main jo b hon tumari waja sa hon..nikil na wo sab sun lyea...aur uss ka kahna ha. wo aik aik seeri chara uss sa betar ha wo lift sa uper jaya 😆😆

Nikil with complete shy look speaks😳😳: han sir wo..ajj sa app mera guru...app muja apni sharen ma la lijyea.😆😆.. he tries to touch Abhijeet's foot.. arshirward dijeya sir apna Shishya ko..main app ko kabi nirash nae karon ga..😆😆😆.

Abhijeet tries to move and thinks...

Abhijeet: yah sab tu Nikil ko dakna k bad main na aur Acp sir na jan boj ka bola tha..ta ka Daya ki jaan chota..per yah Bala tu mera sir ann peri...😲😲

Abhijeet to daya instantly...

Abhijeet: Daya bechio ...

Daya: nae Boss... Meri tu kud Muskil sa Dua kabool hoe ha... iss bar maded k lyea muja na dakna plz..baki tumara lyea jan b hazir hai...🤣

Edited by neeme - 13 years ago

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Entry7

Abhijeet : Iss baar toh main nahi aaunga .. bilkul nahi

Nikhil : Kahaan sir, hum log kahiin jaa rahe hai kya ? Daya sir hum kisi party mein jaa rahe hai ?

Daya : Nahin Nikhil yeh koi choti moti baat nahi hai, Abhijeet kaafi serious issue ko lekar baat kar raha hai. Iss baar humein ek aur film ko promote karna hai, par ab aur nahi.

Abhijeet : Haan Daya, har hafthe ek film ? Humaara kaam mujrimon ko pakadna hai ya phir in actors ka bodyguard bane phirna ?

Nikhil : Par kaunsi movie sir ?

Daya : Nikhil Kareena aa rahi hai, par maine aur Abhijeet ne decide kar liya hai hum nahi jaayenge.

Nikhil : Par sir .. woh .. Kareena meri favourite hai sir, please aap bhi chaliye na.

Daya : Tumhaari favourite hai toh tum jaao, Mujhe kyun kheench rahe ho beech mein ?

Abhijeet (thinks to himself) : Haaye raam yeh kya keh diya tumne Daya, ab shuru ho jaayega yeh.

Nikhil : Sir ... !!! Sir main aapko choske kahiin jaa saktha hoon ? nahin na .. phir aapne kaise soch liya ?

Daya : Insaan ko soch mein toh khush rehne ka haq hai

Nikhil : Sir !!!

Abhijeet (interrupting) : Daya main ACP sir se baat karne jaa raha hoon, kahunga iss baar kisi aur ko use kare humaare jagah.

ACP : Salunkhe .. please na ..

Salunkhe : Nahin boss mujhe iss jhanjhat se dur rakkho.

ACP : Dekh na, dosti ki kasam.. humesha toh bach nikaltha hai movie promotions se, iss baar tu chal na please.

Salunkhe : Bilkul nahin boss, yeh ek cheez hai jisme main tum logon se zyaada lucky hoon, aise avsaron par mujhe apni in laashon se baat karna hi zyaada pasand hai.

ACP : Yaar Salunkhe, yeh galat baat hai, Abhijeet mana kar raha hai, Daya mana kar raha hai ..aur tu bhi ..

Salunkhe : Sorry boss, iss baat pe toh main atal hoon.

Abhijeet (Looks at ACP sir requesting Salunkhe and smiles and thinks) : Kuch bhi ho jaaye main nahin jaaunga.

ACP : Lo Daya nikal pade hum movie promotion ke liye

Purvi : Daya sir aapne toh aane se mana kiya na ?

Freddy : Sir aap ne mana kyun kiya ? Mana toh mujhe karna chahiye, jaao aur joke maarke aao.

Nikhil : Freddy sir, Purvi Daya sir mere liye aa rahe hai wahaan.. kyun Daya sir ?

Daya : huh ...meri badkismati Nikhil meri badkismati .. iss maamle mein hum bade unlucky hai ACP sir, patha nahi Abhijeet kya jaadoo chalaata hai, humesha jab bhi koi guest aaye ya kuch bhi khaas ho DCP sir ko kuch na kuch kehke manaata hai aur gayab ho jaatha hai ...

ACP : Haan Daya, iss Abhijeet ka technique humein patha lagaana hoga, ki woh aakhir kehta kya hai DCP se jo jhat se woh maan jaathe hai iski baat ko, kuch toh gadbad hai Daya .. Pata Lagao.

Edited by Bhavanab - 13 years ago

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Entry 8

Abhijeet : Nahi karne waala main yeh firse ! Hargiz nahi...

Nikhil : Kya nahi karna hai aapko sir?

Abhijeet : Har baar mujhe fansa dete hain yeh channel waale. Mujhe nahi fansna isbaar kisi bhi jaal mein. Musibat se to mera janam janam ka rishta sa judd gaya ho !

Daya : Un logon ne firse tumse kaha apne aapko musibat mein phansane ke lie? Hey bhagwaan !

Abhijeet : wohi to! Tumhi batao, itne saalon mein kitni baar resignation de chuka hoon main CID se?... ! Ab aur nahi... fir se chakkar nahi aane lagenge mujhe, aur naahi kisi ka khoon karunga main. ateet mein bhi nahi aur naahi present mein !

Salunke : Ek baar bol diya na maine, ki main nahi karne waala aisa kuch to bas Pareshaan mat kar yaar Pradyuman.

ACP : Tere lie achha mauka hoga yeh ! waise bhi problem kya hai? bas kuch dino ke lie gayab hona hai tujhe...baaki hum sambhal lenge...

Abhijeet ; Haan haan... Aur nahi to kya !ACP sir bilkul theek keh rahe hain Doctor sahaab !

ACP whispering to Abhijeet : Maan jaega yeh...Magar shayad ungli tedhi karni padhegi..

Abhijeet to ACP : Haan sir. DCP sahaab se bulwa lete hain, maan jaenge yeh.

Salunke : Kya khusur phusur kar rahe ho tum dono. Jao yahaan se,.. dikh nahi raha main yahaan jaruri kaam kar raha hoon ! Aur waise bhi yeh Abhijeet ka department hai.. Mera nahi.. Mujhe mat phansai is sab jhamele mein. Jao ab !

Inside the qualis, everyone is thinking... silence inside the car.

ACP(thinking) :Pata nahi Salunke maanega ke nahi. Dekhte hain !

Daya(thinking) : Main to bach gaya .. warna Nik to peechhe hi padh jaata ! Sabke saamne meri izzat ka faaluda banata woh paagal.

Freddy(thinking) : 15 saalon se CID mein hoon aur saare naye purane logon ko special episode karne ko mil gaya siwwaaye mere. Mujhse to koi poochta tak nahi ek baar... huhhh

Purvi(thinking) : Main bach gayi !! Yay... Warna firse kidnap hona padhta hai... Shreya ko phone karke batana padega...

Nik(thinking) : Abhijeet sir nahi maan rahe hain to kahin woh channel waale Daya sir se na karwaaye yeh special episode ka series. Nahiii .. Aisa nahi hone dunga main.

(and without realizing he gives a loud shout, to which Daya brings the car to a sudden halt, and others look behind to see whats wrong in surprise 😲! )

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astonish

@astonish

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#10

ENTRY 9

At the Forensic Lab

ACP: Kya hua Salunkhe... Kaafi pareshaan lag rahe ho????😛

Abhijeet: aap ko phir se overacting scene mil Gaya kya?? Kahin phir se Nikhil pe goli chalaani hai????😉

Dr. Salunkhe : Arey nahi yaar... Singh Saab ne Abhie Abhie Mujhe aaake Bataya ki ek naya storyline yaani side track start karne waale hai... Love story!!!!

Abhijeet: kya ek aur love story ???? Ohh shayad daya ki hogi... Aakhir hum Dono ko ek saath Jo shaadi Karni hai... 😆Chalo...accha hua... Daya ke saath saath Meri bhi love story Zara aage badegi... Kuch naye dialog bolne ko mil jaayenge...😉

Dr. salunkhe : arey nahi yaar,... daya ki nahi... Meri love story...

ACP: Kya!!!!! 😲

Dr. Salunkhe: Haan... Singh Saab ne kaha hai...ki story mein side tracks Kam hogaye hai... Waise abhijeet toh har baar forensic lab nahi aaatha... Toh Thoda side track add Karne ke liye nayi CID officer aayegi... Aur jab abhijeet forensic lab nahi ayega... Tab.. Woh nayi officer aayegi...

ACP: kya!!!!! Salunkhe .. Tum aur ek CID officer 😲 Hey ram

After sometime in Qualis

ACP: bechaara salunkhe ... !!!!😛

Daya: kyon sir... Dr salunkhe ko toh khush Hona chahiye... Thoda change milega unhe... Tarika aur abhijeet ko Dekh dekh kar bore ho Gaye honge...😛

Purvi: sir... Waise aapne toh Mujhe ek minute ka liye heart attack de diye tha...aaj subah Singh Saab ne Mujhe phone kar ke Bataaya tha ki unhe mere story mein twist ke baare mein baat karni thi... Mujhe toh ek minute ke liye laga... Ki woh lakdi Mein hi hoon😵

Daya: 😆haha... Acha... Waise story mein twist kya hai..

Purvi:. Kuch naha hai sir... Woh Bas ... Agle case mein mera ek boyfriend aayega... Aur Uske agle case mein mai kidnap ho Jaoongi...

Daya: aur agle case mein pata Chaltha hai ki ...boyfriend ne hi tumhe kidnap Kiya hai

Purvi:sir... Aapko kaise pata????😲

Daya: 😉😆

Freddy: arey Daya sir ,... Woh sab chodiye... Aap sochiye... Salunkhe Saab ki toh Nikal padi...

ACP: Freddy...kya Nikal padi... Ab is umar mein use romance karna Padega...😆

Freddy: sir... Yahi toh sab kuch Chaltha hai aaj kal... Humaara CID chodke saare serials mein... do Saal mein ... teen chaar shaadiyaan... Chaar paanch affair... Aur Che saath Bacche toh ho hi jaathe hai... sir Baat toh yeh hai... Ki Salunkhe saab Roz bar Roz Jawaan ho rahe hai...aur hum budde...

Daya: Tum apni baat Karo Freddy... Mujhe buddon mein shaamil mat karo... Meri toh abhi tak girl friend bhi nahi hai...😛

Freddy: wahi toh sir... Pandhraah saal hogaye... Ithne mein toh kisi aur serial ke main actor ki teen baar Shaadi aur saath aath Bacchae ho jaathe hai...

Daya: Freddy ... Tumhaari toh hogayi na...Mujhe yeh sab nahi sochna...Mai khush hoon... Mujhe abhijeet ke jaise dukhi nahi hona hai...woh toh soch Raha hai...ki Singh Saab se baat kare,,,...aur yeh flirting ka Kaam...sachin ya nikhil ok dede...

Nikhil: 😲

At the bureau

Daya: arey abhijeet ... Tum yahaan... Tum toh lab mein the na... Kyon salunkhe Saab ki nayi girlfriend acchi nahi lagi tumhe ...😉

Abhijeet: Daya ...tumhe mazaak sooj raha hai...Mujhe toh ithna gussa aaraa hai... Yeh DCP Saab... Yaani Singh Saab Bhi na,.,.. Pandhraah saal hogaye hai yaar...Logon ko toh yeh bhi bata Diya hai ki hum log chalees saal ke hai... Make up kar ke chote bhi nahi lag sakthe

Nikhil: yeh Kab Bataya sir...

Abhijeet: Jale par namak mat chidko nikhil... Yeh Singh Saab Jo sab ko bataathe hai ki CID pandhraah Saal se chal raha hai... Matlab...Mai aur daya ab chalees saal ke hogaye hai... Indirectly yahi toh declare Kiya hai...pachees (25) saal ki umer mein joining aur pandhraah saal...yaani... Chaalees saal hue na...

Daya: toh problem kya hai...

Abhijeet: problem ... Tum pooch rahe ho???? Mai Singh saab se yahi Kehne waala tha ...ki... Yeh Tarika Ji ke saath romance acha nahi lagtha hai...koi chaalees saal ki umer mein college me bacchon Jaise flirt kartha hai bhala????? Tumne kaha...Thode din rukjao... Shayad kuch change ho jaaye...kya khaak change hua... Abhi Salunkhe Saab se is umer mein flirting karwa rahe hai... Toh Mujh se toh abhi ped ke irdh-girdh dance karwaange... 😵

Daya: 😛🤣

Edited by astonish - 13 years ago