Adi Sir BDay STORY CONTEST -- **RESULTS on pg 16**

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Deepika

@ADreamyDeepz28

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

To Astonish & Visrom'di👏 👏
&
to all the participants...

Kaash consolation prize ya phir koi lucky draw winner bhi hota
Toh yeh kambakht kuch na milney ka gham toh jaata

Anyways,Biggest challenge is to write a story in any contest
so It was a very GOOD EFFORT by everyone 👏👏👏😃

Edited by DreamyDeepz28 - 13 years ago

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subha.

@subha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

🥳Congratulations to Asto,Vis and all the participants!!

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: gadhadada

Now I reveal the Suspence, STORY number 1 was also MINE including Story Number 6,
I m Sorry Astonish as I dunt know that keeping Eagle as a Pet is Illegal in India, as I dunt know abt that.!
the Second point which U and VIS DII both raise that Digest Abhi Sir remember His past, i just take it from Abhijeet kay ateet ka raaz where ABHI Sir only remember the Portion of His Past.!
khair I'll definately Care abt it in Future... wesay I m Happy that atleast I hide My Style to sum extent...😆

TO be frank...on the first glance...story no 6 was confirmed to be yours...I had no doubt...but when I read story no1, I felt the similarities...but didn't think that you might have written 2 stories.

Also you have written Abhijeet as Abhijit...on purpose, maybe...very few people use this spelling. Deba used to.😛 But see, you couldn't hide the 'samjhe'...you always write it as 'samjhy'...it's there in both the stories. 😈

The other thing is...story 1 has less of whatever I ask you to reduce in your stories...I am glad you have written it like this. Kept strato thing to a minimum. 👏

Edited by visrom - 13 years ago

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astonish

@astonish

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: visrom
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Kya hua??? Why 😒

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astonish

@astonish

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: visrom
😳 😔

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Uff... my internet is troubling me so much.. 😡Will take a break from my lappy for sometime.. !!!

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astonish

@astonish

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#146

Story 7

A nice fast paced khooni story in the beginning but at the end turned into an officer in danger case... But I liked the way daya sir saved Abhi sir... Pictures are a nice way to show your imagination to others.. without the picture ... the scene may not have been so effective 😊

But.. Wasn't your theme a serial killer theme 😆 Mujhe serial killer word use karne se mana kiya tha organizer ne.. because my story was of theme 1 and for you serial killing word was compulsary.. because story was of theme 2.. Anyways.. doesn't matter... 😆

Nice idea of a secretive project to hack online shopping sites and getting credit cards information 👏 Good use of FB.. I recently heard many cases where the real cops solved cases using the victims FB account ... I really wish FW also looks into this field for innovative cases...

Abhi sir ko injure karna zaroori tha kya😈 Getting inspired by SS 😉 well.. I didnt find the case lengthy.. it was perfect length.. All in all.. good one.. 👏 A totally non complicated.. simple ..yet interesting case 😊 Good Job👏

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

I have started reading the stories .. randomly starting with story 3 .. I'm really liking the way the story is progressing. I am going to read the top 2 in the end 😛 as an icing on the cake !!

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: astonish
Story 7

A nice fast paced khooni story in the beginning but at the end turned into an officer in danger case... But I liked the way daya sir saved Abhi sir...

That's what is given in the theme...I had to do it that way. 😆

Originally posted by: astonish
Story 7
Abhi sir ko injure karna zaroori tha kya😈 Getting inspired by SS 😉 well..

This was one question I asked myself...if he were not injured, he would have driven himself...there would be no need to get a taxi...if another guy was trying to find him and kill him, he would have been efficient enough to escape on his own...but the theme required that CID team has to save him...so I had to disable him somehow...

And look who's talking...even you shot him na? 😈

Edited by visrom - 13 years ago