MY STORY: FRIENDS FOREVER PART 2 @pg no 17 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

thats so sweet of u
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32
hello
gwentlend
me new hr
nyz story lvd the way u showed duo's frndship
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
Wow awesome story...
Really Love It...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
my poem abt clouds
plz comment

CLOUDS

look up the skies
there goes the clouds
running towards something
without a pause rushing
nobody knows why
they are in a hurry
they are destined to restore
life in the earth's core
in the form of rain
just like a candle it burns
and melts for others
even the last drop of their
life is sacrificed for earth
they r of kindness,mercy
sacrifice and caring
but nobody knows how they feel
for their struggle in the world
in this busy world
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
another one of my creation

HUMAN MIND

the human mind is something
that u won't understand
its like a dense forest
with furious wild beasts
who r waiting for their prey
Also there is beautiful flowers
which makes us elated and pleased with their gorgeous appearence
but behind the flowers hides
poisonous thrones which could hurt us
but we r not aware of them
and the danger they posses
human mind is full of surprises
its a mystery which can never be solved
despite these the love and kindness towards fellow beings
is the evidence of goodness
a few with these in their mind
are born great and can be
recognised as true human and thrust worthy
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Zindagi

Zindagi ek bulbule ki tarah hothi hai

Har bulbula ek doosre se alag hai

Wo sab har kisi ko khush rekhthe hai

Jab tak wo sahi salaamat hai

Jab koi ek galat raaste pe jaye

Tab unki zindagi bhi khatam ho jaati hai

Ve ye koshish karthe hai ki

Sab sahi raaste pe jaye

Waise hee humari zindagi bhi

Sabke zindagi ek doosre se alag hote hai

Lekin magsad sirf ek hai

Doosaron ki madad karna

Jab hum apaneliye kuch karte hai

Ek baar peeche moondkar dekhein ki kayi

Humari khushi ki aansoo kisi aur

Keliye dukh ki na bane

Kyo ki humari zindagi ek hai,

Anokhi hai,sabse alag aur hazeen

Use isa hee banaye rekhna hai

Jo bahut mushkil hai

Kisi aur ki ek aansoo ki ek boondh se

Ye hazeen zindagi

Sabse dardnaak nar bhi ho sakthe hai

Jo hum bhul rehe hai

Sab kuch jaanthe huye bhi anjaan banna

Yehi humari badi galthi hai

Aur yahi galthi humareliye

Wo kaante ki tarah hote hai jise har bulbula darta hai

To wahi karo jo acha hai

Sirf humareliye nahi doosron keliye bhi

Humare diye huye ek khushi

Humare zindagi ko sau guna haseen banathi hai

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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
DOSTI

Dosti sabse haseen shabt hai
sabse gehra sabt hai
kisi ek ko do banate hai
har rishte ki buniyaad bhi hai
Rishta jo bhi ho usse
mazboot bannane wala dosti hee hai
jis rishte mein dosti ki kami ho
wo rishta syada der tak nhi hoti
Jaise taare chaan ki saath
kabhi na chodthe
jaise bhul pavan ke saath
naachna nhi bhulthe
Jaise paani apni bahaav
kabhi na badalthe
Jaise samunder darti se
pyaar karna nhi chodte
waise hee dosti bhi
dosti se humari har mushkil dur hoti hai
dosti duniya ki sabse badi khushi hai
aur sabse badi dukh bhi
dosti ek rubber band ki tarah hota hai
agar ek chode to doosre ko dard hote hai
lekin agar hum ise sahi tarah nibhayein
to ye sabse badi khushi banthi hai
dost rehe ya na rehe
lekin unki dosti humesha rehta hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
DIL AUR DIMAAG

Dil aur dimaag dono hee
manush keliye pyaari hai
dono hee hum banate hai
dono ke bina jeena mushkil hai
dono hee har kisi ke paas hote hai
lekin hum dil ko bhulkar dimaag
ke sahaare jeene ki koshish karte hai
lekin hum ye bhul rehe hai
dimmag dil ke sahaare use karein
to har mushli kaam aasaan ho jaate hai
dil har kisi ke naram hote hai
kisi ka bhi dil padhar jaise nhi hota
dimaag hee dil ko padhar banata hai
log dimaag ke kehna sunkar
dil se poochna bhul jaata hai
kyon ki dil hee har raaste ko aasaan banata hai
dimaag ke baat kabhi kabhi galat hote hai
lekin dil humesha sahi hota hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39

@GWEN... very Nice attempt...👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: gadhadada


@GWEN... very Nice attempt...👏👏👏


thank u dada

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