CID CHAIN STORY - pls join!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Welcome to the CID chain story thread. 😊


Here I start the story and someone else takes over, writes a few lines and it continues like that.


Rules :

1. A person should first reply saying 'I am continuing' and then edit that post and take the story forward. This is to ensure that there are no two different branches from the same point by two people.

2. Please post the 'I am continuing' only when you are sure about what you are going to write.

3. Pls take the story forward and don't drag on a scene for too long.


4. Keep your post length reasonably small, and don't write more than 10 lines...let others get a chance.

5. If no one replies for more than 2-3 hours, you can continue but this rule doesn't apply late at night and early morning.


6. PM discussions are welcome.

7. Each post should include a part of the story...u may add some comments if reqd in the same post.


Enjoy...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene: Daya's house


Daya is having dinner and watching TV when a pebble crashes onto his window. He goes to see who had thrown it. He finds a paper on the ground saying 'meet me alone in Apsara bar right now-Shilpa'.
Edited by visrom - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Daya wonders who this 'Shilpa' is. He tries hard but is unable to recall any girl named shilpa in his acquaintances. He finally decides to go to the bar.
Place: Bar
Daya parks his bike. He finds only one girl sitting in the entire bar. Rest are men. But he finds it weird to approach the girl as she doesnt signal him or show any signs of knowing him.
Edited by pvkd - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Daya thinks she only must be the girl and tries to reach her by waving his hands and by calling the girl 'Shilpa' in a low voice but fails there will be no response frm her.Daya thinks it is waste of time and decides to return to his house.But when he approaches his bike he finds a letter there stating 'kal raat 8 baje ek CID officer ko goli lagne wali hei'.
Edited by Namratha. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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i am continuing
he is totally confused n will be dillema . then he will see the paper in his hand nd says shayad iss se kuch pata chal sakta hein..
SCENE: AT BEAUREW
HE IS TOTAALY CONFUSED he drinks sme water nd will sit 2 find smethng frm the letter.then he comes 2 knw tht paper was xeroxed he will scan it so he will get a no03071996
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ACP: Daya, kya hua kahan kho gaye ho?
Daya: Kuch nahin sir...
ACP: Nahin Daya...tum kuch pareshaan lag rahe ho...
Daya: sir pata nahin yeh sach hai ya kisi ne mazaak kiya hai.
ACP: Kya hua?
Daya: Sir mujhe yeh note mila tha...
shows the first note
ACP: Tum Apsara bar gaye the?
Daya: Haan sir...lekin wahan yeh shilpa nahin mili...lekin jab bike ke paas pohoncha toh yeh note mila
shows the second note
ACP: Ek baat bataao...yeh Shilpa kaun hai? Tum use jaante ho?
Daya: Haan sir...pehle yaad nahin aaya, lekin ab yaad aaya.
(please continue)
Edited by visrom - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ACP:kaun hey ye DAYA??
DAYA:sir vo meri khabri ki bivi he sir...jab mera khabri muj tak nahi pohoch pata vo apna bivi ko bhej deta hey
ACP:aaj tak usne koi paaki khabar di hey kya??
DAYA:haan sir jo bhi khabar usne di hey aaj tak kabi galat nahi hua hey...isliye mujhe toda darr lagraha hey...
ACP:CID officer ke mooh se aisi baat??
abhijeet enters...
ABHIJEET:kya hua DAYA?? tum parishan lag rahe ho..??
daya shows the note to abhijeet..
ABHIJEET:yeh sab kya hey DAYA???
pls continue...
Edited by Namratha. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Daya: pata nahi shayad kuch bura hon wala hai kynki iski khabar hamesha paaki hoti hai
Abhi:to hum aab kya karen
ACP: sabhi ko meeting ke liye bulao
AFTER HALF AN HOUR
all are present in office except Daya
Edited by Soniya..Shapath - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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ACP: Abhijeet, sab log aa gaye?
Abhijeet; Haan sir, conference room mein aapka intezaar kar rahe hain.
ACP and Abhijeet walked in. The rest of the team members who were talking anxiously suddenly fell silent.
ACP: Daya ko khabar mili hai ki...looks around
Daya kahan hai?
Freddie: Yahin toh the ek minute pehle. Yeh dekhiye unka mobile yahin hain...table par.
They wait for 10 minutes.
ACP: Kahan gaya Daya? Freddie, zara washroom mein jaakar dekho ki Daya wahan hai kya?
Freddie leaves.
Edited by visrom - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Freddie enters washroom...He doesn't found anyone...He checks every corner... Besides washroom he checks outside the beaureo.. While entering the beaureo's gate, he found some blood spots...

Freddie(to himself) : hey bhagwan, ye kya h?? Lag to khoon jaisa raha h...

He calls for ACP sir...
All moves to freddie...

Please continue...
Edited by daya_angel - 13 years ago

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