ENCRYPT/DECRYPT (STORY for CONTEST)...!!! - Page 7

Originally posted by: visrom

GD, the investigation part and the idea you have and the research you have done for this is really appreciated. It was really interesting to get the track of Daksh's brother. You get some brilliant ideas.

The only issue...you divert from the case by adding senti scenes. I love to see our cops as mentally strong guys and not break down. I would say the same to some of the recent episodes they are showing on TV too. Anyway, this is just my personal view.

And yeah...you need to add some gaps between the paragraphs...otherwise it causes eyestrain. I mentioned this on the first page too.

1. Please don't use shortform or SMS language. It's really hard to read at points. Also it would be nicer with some space between paragraphs.
2. I loved the idea of Daksh's brother. That was awesome.
3. The research for the plot was awesome as well.
4. I liked the senti scenes, but I like tough cops a lot better.
5. Now some points of confusion: actually they are the same as Debasree mentioned above.

Originally posted by: vevah

again done great job dada 👏

story ws as AWSOME as alwayz 😳

luved 2 read it but it took so much tyme bcz my Lappy ws Beemaar n my Chashmaa ws Laachaar 2 read it by my cell 😃 but finaliy got both them back n read it 😊ur so so so much ACHA PURUSH WRITTER 😉 👍🏼

Originally posted by: 394duo7

Sorry 4 late rply. GD aaj toh meine aapke do stories parhi.
GD aapne kaha tha boring hei. Mujhe toh nhi lga.
*Bahut acha title.
*Nice start.
*Superb interaction wd team members ,especially Duo.
*Forensic part 's superb.
*right clarificatioo 4 each and evry thing.
Ab toh aap FW ko stories bhej hi dijiye. Thank you so much for the story.
Waiting 4 ur NEXT STORY..