Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147) - Page 90

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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved it x 2 emotional x i nearly cried x 2 gud x hope da next part is loaded soon x
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Posted: 12 years ago
read the story yesterday only bt due to some reasons i was unable to comment
it was a lovely story full of emotions n duo's frndship
dis story is fantabulous dada
luv u n ur story 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Really a awesome story Dada..
Was literally crying while reading how that khabees burya treated my cutie pie Daya sir..😭😭
How dare her???
Just KILL her😡😡

Its such a beautiful mixture of Emotions..
Lovvved each part of it..❤️❤️
Keep going ...!!!⭐️⭐️.⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
GD what should i say... im just lost for words... i dont know how to praise u in differet way... U R THE BEST GD... it was so dificult to hold back my tears when i read that what happened with daya sir in his childhood... the emotions feelings hurt friendship u portray these brilliantly like always...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: -De.De-

Wow!! Simply Wow! I absolutely love this and hats of to you for touching this topic. 👏👏 Seriously abhi bhi time hai think about my offer... 😎😉



Serious note: Absolutely wonderful GD... loved it, it brought tears in my eyes along with a trip down to ML..


Thank You so much IQRA...🤗
it was a SHASHKA kinda Story...😉
matlab avayein...😆
najany kyun ye point main nay try kiya...😕
khair chalo Pasand aaya...😳
apnay liyey yehi Honor ki baat hay...😃
hope to Learn something from UR style soon...😃
I loved UR style...🤗
kaash meri ANGREZI itni Lush hoti tou main kuch ker pata...😉😉

baray byabro ho ker teray kochy say hum nikly...😈
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Forfriend

Ya I am expecting this one as your next story... when I read Deadly Herb... when you mentioned some orphanage scene there...


After reading it... I am speechless... what to say and what not say... i am searching words...

Just clapping is not enough... Just hats off to you

👏

Bas story ke liye itana hi kue ki issase jada mai kuch keh hi nahi paungi... U only made me wordless

one thing just want to ask you... AAP ya toh Hassate hasste pet dard kara dete ho ya phir rulake jate ho...

I thing ab se jabhi bhi aap ki stories padhungi Mai ek rumal aapne sath hi leke baithungi...😉

and yaar ab woh Tarika ji wala FLASK aapne bade bhai ke liye chod do

aap or aapke bhai dono jan najar hata lo uss per se...😆

Very nice BH

just to sooth our hearts

BIG BEAR 🤗


pehlay ye bata ye BIG BEAR kya rastay say Kidnap ho gaya hay jo mujhy Mila nahi...😆😆😆
about RUMAL...😉
hmmm... i think contact KD for that...😆😆
jitnay RUMAL wo aansoo khushk karnay kay liyey deta hay na...😉
ufff...
Thank You yaar...🤗
mujhy khud nahi malum 😕
main nay ye kyun likha tha...😊
bus najany bhejy ko kya click hua...🤔
khair chalo... buht Saara SHUKRIYA..🤗.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Maxxx

DADA this is for you😉


haaa...😳😳😳
Thank You 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Crystalx

GD i have said this so many times and will repeat it again - you are a wonderful writer. i read this story all over again and i got tears in my eyes, such a awesome story line. the emotional bits the investigation bits, the dialogues everything was perfect. Abhijeet investigating Daya's past was truly heartbreaking when he found out what happened to Daya in the orphanage. Daya's reaction to finding out that Abhijeet knew his past was very filmy but i loved it. I seriously don't have enough words to praise you for this. Overall i am speechless i don't know what else to say about your inspiring story. You showed us what true friendship is between Abhijeet and Daya. Hats off to you for choosing this type of topic. i just love this piece of story. GD you are an all rounder. you make us emotional, happy, sad, shocked and make us feel hatred for the villain in each one of your stories that's what makes you so special.


Get Well Soon GD I will pray for you


i m player of Words CRYSTALX😉 but U know U and all my readers are the True Fans🤗 even now i termed them as Crazy Fans😆 cz who always Adore my same Words, same situation, same scenes ...😳😳
abt that Filmy Scene, yaar bus kuch mil nahi raha tha...😆😆
pata hay ab mujhy Tumhein Thank You, Shukriya kehtay huay afsoos hota hay... kyunkay mujhy lagta hay Tumharay Feedback kay aagay ye Lafz Pheekay par ja rahy hain...😭
per phir bhi Buht Buht SHUKRIYA...🤗
aur PRAY ka tou buht saara SHUKRIYA...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shreela

I am speechless! though it's heart-breaking to imagine such things happen with Daya sir, but... I am really touched!🤗🤗 actually I expected this. after finishing ur previous story, I felt that u will write something like this.😊 but yaar, ur latest writings, "truth behind the scene", "deadly herb" and now this "cold hunger", in sab ne humein bohot rulaya! ab next story bhi agar aisa raha, humare yahan toh flood aa jayega!😉 zara sochna iske bare mein! 😆


yaar dada, tumhari baat theek.👏... so no rona dhona ab...😉😉
aur Boss except this both the other Stories was not Mine, wo NEEME DII ki theen...😉
tou Mujhy un kay idea say bhi kaam krna tha na...😊
wesay bhi un kay Deadly Herb ko tou main nay ragar hee diya...
chalo ab No AANSOO...😉
sirf QATAL hee QATAL...🤣
Deadly GD is back...😈
Thank You for UR Lovely Feedback KD...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aastha94

speechless, it is just mindblowing GD i had tears in my eyes reading this. Like i have said before you are an amazing writer...hats off to you 🤗


Thank You so much AASTHA94...🤗
I m really SPEECHLESS after reading this... 😳😳

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