Silent Promise !!! (Concluding Part @ PG 147) - Page 112

IInd part is too awesome yaar

I feel like its plan of Abhijeet (FW ka aasar hai sab YSPT hi najar aata hai)

per haan yeh jarur pakka hai ki ABhijeet me meta hospital jane ka or case solve hone ka koi na koi relation jarur hai

I am feeling bad for Daya

The way he said... Musaper ghussa ho toh bas muse hurt karo OMG made me emmotional

and that last HUG from ACP to Gentle Gaint... Is to much touchy for me

Originally posted by: NicoleWoods

story is blooming up just good guys ...take care of those parts where u 'll have to describe the scene ...just some minor clarity issues ...

coming to the story ...i cant seem to recollect but is this dr ashok, a character from

any previous story ...is that why abhijeet was shifted to that hospital rather than city hospital ?

and yes , i am quite inclined to believe that abhijeet is not literally mad

or if so, then it would have to be an induced one.

i have a feeling that something is not proper with that asylum and

all this is probably an investigative scam probably with acp s knoweldge .

sorry if this is way out of the road ...but this is the picture i get from the story so far

I kind of liked this story rather than previous one. Only complaint is you are showing abhijeet a very angry and irrational person since past few stories. I think you are loosing the character there somewhere. But again thats only a frank opinion. Hope you understand.

good plot and very well-written.👏👏 Abhijeet sir is surely not mad, but I guess that he wants to enter to the mental asylum to investigate in his own way. am I right or am I right?😉 but still, his behaviour and Daya sir's helpless condition, is truely heart-breaking.😭

Originally posted by: shreela

good plot and very well-written.👏👏 Abhijeet sir is surely not mad, but I guess that he wants to enter to the mental asylum to investigate in his own way. am I right or am I right?😉 but still, his behaviour and Daya sir's helpless condition, is truely heart-breaking.😭

btw, u had introduced a charecter named "Shatru Ahuja". how can a person's name be "Shatru"?😲😆

complete the story ASAP. I m waiting.

Originally posted by: Shreya_luvs

Guys I just read both parts...and why do you write concluding part in the title GD? 😆

Anyways back to the story. Loving it...the suspense is awesome. And the duo are just fab. Do continue it soon. 👏

Originally posted by: snehal.

I kind of liked this story rather than previous one. Only complaint is you are showing abhijeet a very angry and irrational person since past few stories. I think you are loosing the character there somewhere. But again thats only a frank opinion. Hope you understand.

Coming to this story.. I think abhijeet will be back as he is.. cause without him there will be no daya and without both of them there will be no cid..

Eagerly waiting for next part :)

We worked according to the Plot dear...what is the need of the plot we have to show that... we have nothing abt abhijeet...But if our plot is something like that then we have to show character like that... I don't think we are loosing the Abhijeet character... We always shows Abhijeet as more sharp and intelligent COP then FW... and that irritation and anger that is fixed for daya... that is his LOve and concern for his Best Buddy...FW never shows any strong Friendship behavior of DUO... GD tries to maked itt ..and we continued that in our combine production as well... THAT DUO FRIENDSHIP is not copied by FW ...that is our own style... And ABT THIS STORY... that irritation and Anger is part of a mental person for now... We are showing what a Mental person can do.we are not showing abhijeet.I hope I m clear for now...Thanks for the True feedback...🤗

Originally posted by: gadhadada

aap ko ATSHUK karnay kay liyey SHERYA jee...😆😉

Originally posted by: Shreya_luvs

Atshuk my foot. 😡 😆

Complete the story guys...