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Jackles

@Jackles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

What a mind blowing piece of a verse composition...👏

Loved each line to bits...😃

Terrific portrayal of a strong affiliation between the two...

Indeed a perfect interpretation of the bond...😳

These lines were brilliant..👏👏

In the line of duty, you shall never see me flinch
Nor shall I uphold anything over my duty's call
But when it comes to those I love, then in a pinch
My entire being collapses like a brittle wall

These were heart warming...😳

know you taught us the importance of sacrifice
The spectre of death leaving doubt if we'll survive
I care not about myself, but feel chills cold as ice
For I cannot even think of my family not being alive

Bro, you are blessed with an adroit pursuit, a whole lot grip on poetry👏👏👏

This was beyond any reproach...😃

Thanks a ton...🤗

Edited by saman0 - 11 years ago

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misha.as

@misha.as

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Wonderful poem Ravi bro... Amazing...
Thank you so much..

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..optimist..

@..optimist..

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Lovely poem Ravi!! 👏⭐️

Very nicely portrayed the relation! And loved the siggie! ⭐️

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Ravi

@Jurassic_Shark

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Thanks everyone. 😊

Here's the VM I had been working on for AS^2's birthday contest but unable to finish on time. I still had to omit many scenes due to lack of time and disk space, but hopefully managed to include a good number of highlights. A small token of appreciation for Ansha di and all her well-wishers on her 3rd CID anniversary today... and praying for countless more.

4shared link:

Dailymotion link: http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x22etuy_happy-3rd-cid-anniversary-ansha-sayed-inspector-purvi_people

Youtube link: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n9ZQb8n1jdo&feature=youtu.be

Edited by DemonStar - 11 years ago

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Padmpriya

@Padmpriya

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Incredible VM Ravi bro.. soo wonderful music and Great clips..
Realy WONDERFUL..
👏👏👏👏

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Secret

@Twilight123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

wow Ravi Bro...very nice VM...😛

i was watching and kab khatam ho gai pata hi nahi chala...😛

loved all the scenes and pics and you know i always love the bg music you choose...😛

how beautifully you showed Purvi mam's bonding with the team,fights,skills everything was fantatsic...⭐️😛 the siggy in the end was superb...😛👏 keep making more such VMs...😛👍🏼

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Jackles

@Jackles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Finally watched it...

Must say, i enjoyed it; luxuriating in every scene with close attention and rating it highly...

Finest choice of scenes e.g Her Action scene from Sabooto ka Rahasya, Acrobatics from Diamond Robbery, Sword fight from Jadoo Punar janam ka, Plus superb entry from Kissa pagal aashiq ka, Praiseworthy pursuance from CID ki kidnapping and esp Rahasya dweep where she delivers my favorite dialogue "Cid officers khatroon se bhagtey nhe un ka saamna kerte hain" and my fav scene i.e AKI where she proves reverence and love for seniors👏👏

I loved the music. It is super fascinating...😉😛

After a strong grip over stories and poetry i guess you are master in VM making too...😉😊

Lovely start off via inspiring quotation and end via sublime siggy...👏👏

Thoroughly entertained by your VM...❤️

Thanks mucho! 🤗