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Hi! I m a new writer.. hope you will like my story.. Its part 1.. I'll post part 2 soon as possible..

BLAST IN BUREAU Part 1

Scene-1

(

A car stops in front of bureau.. A man wearing black coat steps outside..After two minutes he was in bureau)

Unknown:

May i talk to Acp pradhyuman..(A smile on his face)

(Each and every officer looks at the stranger. Daya and Abhijeet step towards him)

Daya:

Aap??

Unknown:

Mera naam Arjun khana hai.. mujhay Acp sahb nay bulaya hai..

Daya:

(Looks at abhijeet) Acp sahb nay??? Kyun???

Arjun:

Woh main aap ko nhe bata sakta... unhoon nay mana kia hai..

Abhijeet:

Kia?? Mana kia hai... Aesi kia baat hai jo woh humain nhe batana chahtey..

Arjun:

Woh aap ko jald pata chal jaey ga (again a strange smile on his face)

(On the other corner Freedy and vivik were having a disscussion asusual)

Freedy:

Abay! yeh lamba choora admi (pointing Arjun) Acp sahb say kyun milna chahta hai..

Vivik:

Pata nhe sir! lekin zaroor koi baat ho gi..

Freedy:

Mujhay to yeh garbar lagta hai..

Vivik:

Woh kyun sir!

Freedy:

Aik to itni garmi hai uper say kaala coat.. Ya to is ka deemagh kharaab hai ya phir ab tak is ki shaadi nhe hoi..

Vivik:

Lekin sir! Shaadi ka aik coat say kia taaluq??

Freedy:

Abay...(he stops as Acp enters)

Acp:

(watches Arjun, Daya and Abhijeet)Daya, Abhijeet, woh documents tyaar karo.. Mujhay kal tak chahyain aur Arjun tum merey office main aao..

(Arjun followes Acp to his office.. Abhijeet and daya still confused)

...(After half an hour Acp and arjun comes out of the office smiling, this again draws every one's attention)

Acp:

Daya, abhijeet, tum loog abhi bhi yeh sooch rahey ho gay keh yeh aadmi hai koon..

Daya:

Haan Sir! koon hai yeh??

(Arjun again gives his strange smile which now becomes awkward for Abhijeet)

Acp:

Yeh hain humaray naey Phorensic Doctor Arjun khana

(Daya and abhijeet stares each other)

Abhijjeet:

Kia?? Phorensic Doctor..

Acp:

Haan Phorensic doctor.. yeh kal say he Cid join karain gay..

Arjun:

Nice to meet you all.. Umeed hai keh aap ko mera kaam pasand ayey ga..

Arjun:

Ok sir! ab mujhay chalna chahye.

Acp:

Theek hai.. tum jao

(Arjun exits while smiling)

Abhijeet:

Ab is ki kia zaroorat thi sir??

Acp:

Zaroorat thi Abhijeet! Tum to jante ho keh crime rate double ho gaya hai aur ab to salunke bhi...(Acp stops and reminds previous case)

TWO DAYS BEFORE..

Acp:

Salunke! yeh kia hai?? (Acp is holding a paper)

Salunke:

Mera resignation..(tears in his eyes)

Acp:

Kia kaha tum nay?? Resignation?? Salunke to Cid chor raha hai??

Salunke:

To aur kia karoon?? Tang aa gaya hoon main is ilzaam say... Bus ab main aur bardaasht nhe ker sakta..

Acp:

Lekin baat to...(stops)

Salunke:

Nhe acp! Ab aur nhe.. kitni baar samjhanay ki kooshish ki keh main neh woh laash ghayib nhe ki lekin media ki tarah tumhain bhi shayid yehi lagta hai..

Acp:

Dekh Salunke! Kia Cid chornay say sab kuch theek ho jaey ga?? bata mujhay??

Salunke:

I dont care.. Main jaa raha hoon.. Good bye..(Salunke lefts crying while Acp stares at the resignation letter)

TWO DAYS AFTER..

Acp:

(continous)...aur ab to salunke bhi nhe hai... Do din ho gaey, lekin us ka kuch pata nhe.. aesay main mujhay yehi behter laga..

Freedy:

Per Dr Salunke ki jaga koi aur kese??

Acp:

Freedy! Salunke ab Cid ka hisa nhe hai... We have to think forward...Ab jitni jaldi ho sakey usey bhool jao..

(Acp lefts)

Scene-2

(A new murder case...Cid was informed about a dead body found in a garadge)

Abhijeet:

(To garadge's manager) Is laash ko ghor say dekho... Yeh pehle kabhi yahaan aaya hai??

Manager:

Nhe sir! Main to isey jaanta tak nhe (Fearfull voice)

Abhijeet:

(to workers) Aur tum loog???

One of the worker:

Nhe sir! Hum nay bhi isey nhe dekha..

Kaajal:

SIR!!!! (calls Abhijeet)

Abhijeet:

Kia hua kaajal??

Kaajal:

Sir is admi per peechay say waar kia gaya hai... Yeh dekhye sir (shows him wound on head)

Abhijeet:

Hmmm!!!(examines the wound)

(Sachin and vivik comes)

Sachin:

Sir! Is aadmi ko garadge main kisi nay bhi atay hoey nhe dekha..

Abhijeet:

Kamaal hai! Khoon hua hai lekin kisi nay dekha nhe (Nodes head in dissapraval)...Aur kuch pata chala???

Vivik:

Sir! Is keh paas aik page tha jis per aik number likha hua tha Sir, jo keh is waqt band aa raha hai..

Abhijeet:

(Thinks) Kis ka ho sakta hai yeh number...Vivik! Is laash ko phorensic lab bhejo..

Vivik:

Yes sir!!!

Abhijeet:

Sachin! Kaajal, is admi ki photo her akhbaar aur news channal per day do... koi na koi to zaroor ayey ga (confidence in his voice)

Sachin:

Ok sir!

(Abhijeet walk towards his car but stops... he watches someone standing far away and looking at him but Abhi couldn't see him clearly)

Scene-3

(In phorensic lab)

(

Dr sonali is examining the wound of the dead body...Freddy, Daya,kaajal and Abhijeet enters in the lab)

Kaajal:

Kia hua Dr sonali?? Kuch pata chala is admi ki moot kab aur kese hui??

(Dr sonali was going to give the ans but eventually stops)

Arjun:

(Comes from behind, one hand in pocket) Is ki moot taqreeban 10 bajay keh qareeb hui ho gi...(Every one looks back).. khooni neh is keh sir per kisi nookeeli cheez say waar kia hai jis say is ki moot ho gai..

Freedy:

Lekin humain garadge main aesi koi cheez nhe mili..

Daya:

Freedy! Yeh bhi to ho sakta hai keh khooni hatyaar apnay saath lay gaya ho.. (to Arjun) By the way Welcome sir!

Arjun:

Thankyou!

(Abhijeet looking at arjun critisizingly)

Kaajal:

(to Arjun) Aur kuch pata chala dr??

Arjun:

Haan! Is admi keh haath per humain gun powder key traces milay hain!

Daya:

Kia?? Gun powder?? Is ka matlab is neh goli chalayi thi lekin kis per..

(Daya's cell rings.. he picks up the phone.. It was Sachin)

Daya:

(after listening the phone).. Abhijeet! is admi ka bhai aaya hai beauro main..

Abhijeet:

Chalo! Koi to aaya is keh ghar say..

Daya:

(to Arjun) Ok sir! thankyou very much..

Arjun:

Its my duty.. (Again the same smile)

(Abhijeet stares at arjun for a while)

Scene-4

(In bureau)

Brother:

Sir mera naam Deepak hai.. Aap nay jis admi ki photo news channal per di thi woh mera bhai hai Kunal!

Sachin:

Yeh batao ke Kunal ka kisi keh saath koi jhagra tha??

Deepak:

Aik ho to bataoon..

Daya:

Kia matlab??

Deepak:

Sir! Kunal ka aaye din kisi na kisi keh saath jhagra hota tha... khaas toor per us ka boss jis keh saath us ki bilkul bhi nhe banti thi..

Daya:

Acha! to yeh baat hai.. Naam kia hai us keh boss ka??

Deepak:

Sir! us ka naam Prashant hai..

Daya:

Prashant!!

Deepak:

Aik aur baat sir!!

Daya:

Kia??

Deepak:

Prashant neh Kunal ko job say nikalnay ki dhamki bhi di thi..

Sachin:

Dhamki di thi?? Per kyun??

Deepak:

Woh to mujhay Kunal nay nhe bataya..

Daya:

Acha tum abhi ja saktay ho.. zaroorat hui to phir bula lain gay..

(Deepak lefts smiling)

Sachin:

Sir ho na ho yeh prashant hi hai sir!

Daya:

Mujhay bhi aesa hi lagta hai.. Is kunal keh office chalna chahye!!

Scene-5

(

Abhijeet stops his car in front of Tarika's house and enters inside)

Abhijeet:

Kia baat hai Tarika?? Tum nay mujhay kyun bulaya??

Tarika:

Baat he kuch aesi hai Abhijeet!!

Abhijeet:

Any problem??

Tarika:

Woh...mujhay...Dr salunke ka phone aaya tha..

Abhijeet:

Kia?? Unhoon nay tumhain phone kia tha??

Tarika:

Haan!

Abhijeet:

Kuch kaha unhoon nay?? Mera matlab hai woh is waqt hain kahan??

Tarika:

Abhijeet! woh keh rahe they keh un ki jaan khatre main hai..koi hai jo unhain maarna chahta hai..(cryfull voice)

Abhijeet:

Maarna chahta hai (shocked)...koon?? kuch bataya unhoon nay??

Tarika:

Nhe.. bus itna keh rahe they keh koi un ki jaan ka dushman hai...woh to tum loogoon ko bhi batanay say mana ker rahe they!!!

Abhijeet:

Per kyun??

Tarika:

Shayid is liye keh woh ab tum loogoon per wishwaas nhe kerte...

Abhijeet:

Phir tum yeh sab mujhay kyun bata rhi ho??(angry)...unhoon nay mana jo kia tha..

Tarika:

Kyun keh mujhay un ki fiker hai.. aur aik tumhi ho jo un ki madad ker saktey ho.. i trust you...please!!

Abhijeet:

Mujhay to yeh bhi nhe pata keh woh is waqt kahan hai aur koon un ki jaan keh peechay para hai??

Tarika:

Shayid main jaanti hoon..

Abhijeet:

Kia?? Tum usey jaanti ho??

Tarika:

Wohi ho ga jis nay lab main say laash ghayib ki thi aur ilzaam Dr salunke peh aa gaya..

Abhijeet:

(silent)

Tarika:

Chup kyun ho gaey Abhijeet?? Kia tumhain bhi aesa lagta hai keh Dr salunke nay???

Abhijeet:

Pehlay lagta tha lekin ab shayid tumhari tarah mujhay bhi lagnay laga hai keh in sab keh peechay kisi aur ka haath hai..

Tarika:

Koon ho sakta hai??

Abhijeet:

Woh to pata chal he jaey ga..

Tarika:

Abhijeet! Dr salunke ko kuch nhe hona chahye.. Aj main jo kuch bhi hoon un ki waja say hoon.. please! unhain bacha lo..

Abhijeet:

Unhain kuch nhe ho ga Tarika! Main un keh dushman tak poonch keh rahoon ga.. its my promise!

Tarika:

Thankyou Abhijeet! Thankyou so much (Hugs him)..

(Abhijeet lefts the house and reaches towards his car)

Abhijeet:

(to himself) Ab mujhay he kuch karna ho ga.. pehley to yeh pata lagana ho ga keh ager lab say woh laash Dr sahb nay ghayib nhe ki to phir kis nay ki?? (suddenly Abhi again saws someone far away looking at him.. but couldnt saw his face..)

Scene-6

(Acp and Daya in Prashant's office)

Manager:

Aap loogoon ko under kis neh anay dia?? Security!!(calls security)

Daya:

Us ki zaroorat nhe pare gi.. Cid aap ki khidmat main hazir hai (a cute smile)

Manager:

Cid!!! (terrifies)

Acp:

Cid ka naam sun ker chehrey ka rang kyun ur gaya??

Manager:

Woh aesi koi baat nhe hai sir!.. is say pehlay kabhi humharay office main police i nhe.. shayid is liye...

Daya:

Yeh sab chooro... Humain Kunal keh baray main kuch poochna tha..

Manager:

Kunal?? Koon Kunal??

Acp:

Aray! Tum Kunal ko nhe jaante?? Tumharay office main kaam kerta tha na woh??

Manager:

Sir! yeh aap kia keh rahe hain??Main yahan keh her staff member say wakif hoon...Kunal naam ka koi admi yahaan kaam nhe kerta..

Daya:

Kia??? Aesa kese ho sakta hai??

Acp:

Tumhain poora yakeen hai??

Manager:

Haan sir! aap chahain to kisi say bhi pooch saktey hain??

Daya:

Acha yeh batao keh is company ka malik, mera matlab hai yahan ka boss koon hai..

Manager:

Is company ka malik usually out of country hota hai..

Acp:

Naam kia hai us ka??

Manager:

Mr Rohit Sharma!

(Acp and Daya stares each other)

Daya:

(to acp) Sir yeh kia chaker hai..

Acp:

Lagta hai Deepak nay hum say jhoot boola.. Na to Kunal is company main kaam kerta tha aur na he is company keh boss ka naam Prashant hai..

Daya:

Phir to shayid yeh bhi jhoot ho keh Deepak Kunal ka bhai hai..

Acp:

Ho sakta hai.. Is deepak ko pakro, wohi bataye ga keh maamla kia hai (angry)...

(Acp and Daya lefts while manager gives a smile)...

Scene-7

(Abhijeet is in his car waiting for some one.. he looks at his watch several times)

Abhijeet: (to himself) Yeh abhi tak aaya kyun nhe??

(After a while, a person comes and sits in his car)

Abhijeet:

Kia hua itni dair kyun laga di anay main??

Khabri:

Sir woh aik zaroori kaam yaad aa gaya tha..

Abhijeet:

Mera kaam tumharay liye sab say zyada zaroori hona chahye..

Khabri:

Maaf ker do sir! Ayinda yaad rakhoon ga..

Abhijeet:

Acha yeh roona band ker aur bata keh kuch pata chala??

Khabri:

Sir! is waqt woh aap ko aik he jaga per mil sakta hai..

Abhijeet:

Kahan per??

Khabri:

(tells in his ears)

Abhijeet:

I see...Acha! tum jao...lekin phone on rakhna Samjhe!

Khabri:

Theek hai sir!

(He gets out of the car...Abhijeet starts his car and suddenly he notices the same man again looking at him..he gets out of his car but the man was already gone)

Abhijeet:

Akhir hai koon yeh??

Scene-8

(

In bureau)

(Acp, Daya, Freedy and Kaajal's conversation)

Daya:

Sir! Is Deepak nay to apnay ghar ka bhi adress ghalat dia..

Kaajal:

Aur to aur apna mobile number bhi...

Freedy:

Sir! Yeh Deepak to humain ullu bana gaya..

Acp:

Usay kia lagta hai keh Cid us tak nhe poonch sakti... us ki is sooch ko ghalat saabit karein gay hum..

(Vivik and Sachin enters)

Vivik:

Sir! Jo number humain Kunal keh paas say mila tha woh number Alisha naam ki aik ladki ka hai sir..

Daya:

Yeh Alisha rehti kahan per hai??

Sachin:

Sir hum us keh ghar gaey they lekin wahan per taala laga hai..

Acp:

Kia taala laga hai??

Vivik:

Haan sir! Paroosiyoon ka kehna hai keh woh teen dinoon say ghar nhe i..

Daya:

Sir teen din pehlay to Kunal ki laash mili thi..

Acp:

Is ka aik he matlab ho sakta hai Daya! Alisha ka kunal keh khoon keh saath zaroor koi relation hai..

(Acp phone rings)

Acp:

Hello Acp pradhyuman here!!!!...kyaaa??? kahan per??? theek hai hum abhi poonchtay hain..

Daya:

Kia hua sir??

Acp:

Daya! Shopping mall main Blast hua hai...(every one shocked)...humain abhi chalna chahye...

Scene-9

(Abhijeet in a hotel)

Abhijeet:

Excuse me!!! Rome number 134???

Girl:

One mint Sir! (looks in her register)... ahhh! 2nd floor...

Abhijeet:

Thankyou!

Girl:

You welcome..

(Abhijeet wents to 2nd floor...And their it was 'Room no134'...he opens the door and enters...He founds a man, having his back at him)

Unknown:

Koon hai?? (fearfull voice)

Abhijeet:

Dariye mat, main hoon Dr salunke (a smile on his face)

Dr salunke:

(turns his back and looks at Abhijeet) Tum?? Tum yahaan kia ker rahe ho???

Abhijeet:

Yeh sawaal to mujhe aap say poochna chahye..

Salunke:

Ohh!!! To Tarika nay tumhain sab kuch bata dia.. Mana bhi kia tha usay (anger)

Abhijeet:

(comes closer) Kia baat hai Dr??? Aap mujh say kia chupa rahe hain???

Salunke:

Silent

Abhijeet:

Main jaanta hoon keh aap bekasoor hain..

Salunke:

(looks at abhijeet in surprise) Kia?? Tumhain lagta hai keh yeh sab main neh nhe kia??

Abhijeet:

Haan! Balke Acp sahb ko bhi aesa he lagta hai... woh to sirf aur sirf is baat say naraaz hain keh aap ko Cid nhe choorni chahye thi...

Salunke:

To aur kia kerta main... Waisay bhi mere paas aur koi raasta nhe tha..

Abhijeet:

Tarika neh bataya keh koi aap ki jaan keh peechay para hai..

Salunke:

Haan, yeh baat sach hai..

Abhijeet:

Koon hai woh?? Aap jaante hain usey??

Salunke:

Nhe! lekin kaeen dinoon say aik car mera peecha ker rahi hai.. aik baar to mera accident hotey hotey bacha..

Abhijeet:

Aap nay pata kernay ki kooshish nhe ki keh woh koon hai aur aap ko maarna kyun chahta hai??

Salunke:

Car ka number noot kia main neh... lekin pata chala keh car choori ki hai..

Abhijeet:

Ohh! to yeh baat hai.. waisay aap neh us admi ka chehra dekha..

Salunke:

Nhe...

Abhijeet:

Mujhay to lagta hai keh in sab keh peechay usi ka haath hai..

Salunke:

Kis ka??

Abhijeet:

Usi ka, jis neh pehlay lab say woh laash choorayi takay ilzaam aap per aa jaey..

Salunke:

Lekin woh meri jaan kyun lena chahta hai??

Abhijeet:

Yeh to pata lagana pare ga..

(Abhijeet cel rings)

Abhijeet:

Haan Daya bolo...Kia??? My god...Theek hai main aata hoon...

Abhijeet:

Sir! Shopping mall main blast hua hai... is liye mujhay jana pare ga lekin jab tak main na kahoon aap yahaan say hilain gay nhe...Aap ki jaan ko khatra hai..

Salunke:

Meri fiker mat karo... Mujhay kuch nhe ho ga..

Abhijeet:

(puts his hand on Salunke's shoulder and lefts)

Scene-10

(

Cid team at the crime scene of blast)

Daya:

(looking at the dead bodies) Sir! mall main to kaafi loog they..

Acp:

Haan Daya! (sits and touches a blood spot at the floor) khooni nay shayid isi baat ka fayida uthaya aur urra dia pooray mall ko..

Abhijeet:

Sir! lagta hai is keh peechay kisi terrarist ka hath hai..

Acp:

Mujhay bhi aesa he lagta hai Abhijeet.. yeh terrarists to her jaga phelay hoey hain is mulk main..

Sachin:

Sir! yeh hai is mall ka malik Mr kaval...

Acp:

To yeh mall tumhara tha??

Kaval :

Haan sir! main he is mall ka malik hoon...(cryfull voice)

Abhijeet:

Jab yeh sab hua to tum kahan they??

Kaval:

Sir! main mall main he tha phir achanak mujhay meray bhai ka phone aaya, signal na honay ki waja say main kuch dair keh liye bahir gaya, us keh baad blast ki awaz suni aur jhatkay say gir gaya, hoosh aaya to pata chala keh poora mall tabah ho gaya hai...sab kuch khatam ho gaya sir! (cries) main to poori tarah say barbaad ho gaya...

Acp: Hmmm!!! kaval kia tumhain kabhi aesa laga keh koi tumharay mall per nazar rakhay hoey hai??

Kaval:

Nhe sir! aesay kisi admi ko main nhe jaanta..

Sachin:

Sir! Yeh dekhye (he shows him a piece of cyanide)

Acp:

Ohh!! to khooni nay is ka istimaal kia bomb bananay keh liye..

Daya:

Haan sir! yeh kaam aik admi ka to ho nhe sakta (Suddenly Abhijeet looks at the man again, observing Cid team from behind a car) Is keh peechay kisi gang ka haath ho ga Sir!..

Acp:

Tum theek keh rahe ho Daya... yeh kisi gang ka kaam he lagta hai (Abhijeet move towards the car)

Acp:

(to kaval) Dekho kaval! woh terrarist tumharay mall main bomb laganay to zaroor aaya ho ga, kia aesa koi admi nhe jisey dekh ker tumhe aesa laga ho keh yeh admi garbarr hai... (When Abhijeet reaches towards the car, the man was already gone...he again missed him but found a ring on the floor, he picked up the ring and gave a smile)

Kaval:

(thinks)...haan sir! aik aesa admi dekha tha main nay..

(Daya and Acp stares each other)

Woh kaafi jaldi main lag raha tha aur us keh paas aik bag bhi tha sir..

Daya:

Bag?? (Abhijeet comes back)

Kaval:

Yes sir!

Acp:

Kia tha us bag main..

Kaval:

Woh to mujhay nhe pata, kuch dair baad us nay woh bag waheen rakh dia aur phone per kisi say baat kernay laga...

Daya:

Kia baat ki us nay, tum nay kuch suna??

Kaval:

Nhe sir! woh kaafi door khara tha..

Acp:

Tum nay us say baat ki??

Kaval:

Is say pehlay keh main us keh paas jaata, mujhay aik costomer nay awaz di aur main us say baat kernay lag para..

Acp:

Yeh kis waqt ki baat hai..

Kaval:

Sir! taqreeban 4 bajay...

Daya:

Aur blast hua 5 bajay..

Abhijeet:

Sir! ho na ho yeh bomb usi bag main rakha hua tha..

Acp:

Tum theek keh rahey ho Abhijeet...woh admi us mall main blast kernay he aaya tha..

Scene-11

(

In bureau)

Acp:

Woh admi mall main enter hua, 4 bajay aur woh blast hua theek 5 bajay..

Daya:

Us admi keh paas kaafi time ho ga, bomb rakhnay aur waapis jaane keh liye..

Acp:

Hmmm! us bag ka kuch pata chala..

Daya:

Sir Kaval nay us bag ka sketch banvaya hai, main nay vivik aur freedy ko her dukaan main bhej dia hai, kaheen na kaheen say to us keh malik keh baray main pata chal he jaey ga..

Acp:

(looks at Abhijeet who was thinking some thing) Kia hua Abhijeet?? kia sooch rahey ho??

Abhijeet:

Nhe sir! aesi koi baat nhe hai..

Acp:

Are you sure??

Abhijeet:

Yes sir!!

(Vivik and freedy enters)

Vivik:

Sir us admi ka pata chal gaya hai jis nay wo bag khareeda tha..

Daya:

Welldone... Hai koon woh??

Freedy:

Aap yakeen nhe karain gay sir!

Daya:

Kyun kia hua??

Vivik:

Sir! bag khareednay waley ka naam Deepak hai...

(Acp, Abhijeet and Daya looks at each other)

Acp:

Kia naam bataya tum nay..Deepak???

Daya:

Sir! kaheen yeh deepak wohi to nhe jis nay kunal keh baaray main hum say jhoot boola tha..

Acp:

Ho sakta hai..

Vivik:

Phir to sir us blast keh peechay deepak ka he haath hai..

Daya:

Lekin sir woh mall main blast kare ga kyun??

Acp:

Daya! jo insaan Cid say jhoot bool sakta hai woh kuch bhi ker sakta hai..

Daya:

Mujhay to aesa lagta hai keh kunal ka khoon bhi is deepak nay he kia hai..

Acp:

(to vivik) is Alisha ka kuch pata chala??

Vivik:

Nhe sir! ab tak us ka kuch pata nhe..

Daya:

Sir! jis din kunal ka khoon hua usi din yeh Alisha bhi ghayib ho gai...

Acp:

Aur us ka number bhi to mila tha na Kunal kay paas say..

Daya:

Is ka matlab dono aik doosray ko jaante they..

Acp:

(nodes head in approval)

Abhijeet:

(thinking quite deeply)

Scene-12

(

Deepak walks above stairs into a room that was fully darken, he looks at a person sitting on a chair but couldnt see his face due to dark)

Deepak:

Aap jesa chahte they theek wesa he hua.. pooray ka poora mall tabah ho gaya hai, aik bhi saboot nhe bacha..

Unknown:

(smoking) Good job Deepak! tumhain is ka inaam zaroor miley ga!!

Deepak:

(smiles) Sir! aap ke liye to main kuch bhi ker sakta hoon..

Unknown:

Bus aik baar mera plan poora ho jaey us keh baad tujhay maala maal ker doon ga..

Deepak:

Lekin sir samhal k, woh cid walay bohat chalaak hain..

Unknown:

Jaanta hoon.. khaas toor per woh Acp...lekin tum fiker mat karo kyun keh is baar un sab ko aesa maza chakhaoun ga keh duniya dekhay gi..

Deepak:

Matlab??

Unknown:

Blast...

Deepak:

Blast??

Unknown:

Haan blast aur woh bhi direct bureau main...(laughs)

Deepak:

yeh bohat khaternaak ho ga sir!

Unknown:

Mujhay khatroon say dar nhe lagta balkey maza aata hai (laughs again)...

Deepak:

Sir! us ladki ka kia kerna hai??

Unknown:

Koon alisha?? filhaal to kuch nhe.. us keh hoosh anay ka intezaar karo..

Deepak:

Ok sir!

Unknown:

Baichaari! ager usey humaray plan keh baray main pata na chalta to aj us ki yeh haalat na hoti..

Deepak:

Is liye to kunal ko usey maarnay keh liye kaha tha lekin kia pata tha keh us bewaqoof ko us say pyar ho jaey ga..

Unknown:

Us ladki keh liye humain dhamki denay laga... acha hua jo usey raastey say hata dia..

Deepak:

Haan sir! (looks at his watch) ab mujhay chalna chahye, lekin jesay he us ladki ko hoosh aata hai main aap ko call karoon ga..

Unknown:

Theek hai jao..

(Deepak lefts)

Unknown:

(Puts the ash of cigrette in ashtray)

Scene-13

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Abhijeet calls his khabri)

Abhijeet:

Hello!!!

Khabri:

G sir! kesay foon kia??

Abhijeet:

Woh kuch kaam tha..

Khabri:

Sir! batayey kia kaam hai??

Abhijeet:

Woh darasal tumhain kisi per nazar rakhni hai..

Khabri:

Kis per??

Abhijeet:

(takes out the ring from his pocket which he found at the blast scene and stares at it) DR ARJUN KHANA PER...

Hope you liked this part.. give me your comments and suggest that should i post part 2 or not??

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Can you please reduce the font in some places?

Will read once I get some time after the contest stories.
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Hey... Welcome to the forum...
Please go ahead and post the other part of the story too...
We will surely read it
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nice to see another story writer here. will read it soon. and yeah, welcome to the forum.😊

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hmmm ... interesting title ... will read it as a whole 😊 ... please reduce the font sizes where you've given in bold huge lettering if possible 😃

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Will surely read this.
Please reduce the font size at some places.
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Interesting story...plz continue...plz do pm me whnvr u update :-)
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good attempt Sarakhan1 ...but the post needs a little formatting !
keep posting consequent parts...😊


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SujaLuvsMayur
What a signature -😆😆😆
'Every tear is a sign of - Onion... !! Every silence is a sigh of - Zero Balance...!! Every smile is a sign of - Daily Brushing...!! Life is simple...!! Dont make it Complex ...!!! '
Posting this comment here because you are new to this forum and may not be aware of the gen disc thread and all the usual conventions followed here.
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hey first of all welcome to the forum...
now abt ur story. good one... good narration and good investigation.. suspense handled very well...
and ofcoures u can post ur second part.. post it soon. many r waiting...

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