STORY CONTEST - 5 (RESULTS ON PAGE 26) - Page 7

Originally posted by: visrom

You know what GD., you go OTT with everything...be it your apology or whatever.

If you keep aplogising all the time and demeaning yourself, even when you genuinely apologise, people will not be able to feel it. Just take it as a constructive feedback.

All of us here have loopholes in our stories, but I am sure all of us feel proud of our efforts. Believe me, one person has given me the least marks ever given to anyone in a story contest. But I am at least 70% satisfied with my work, I am happy with what I wrote and I know that everyone has their likes and dislikes. I am not going 😭 about it and apologising to everyone. Neither are the others.

Now please do not apologise to me or reply to this message with a page full of 😭 smilleys or say that you will not 'roam around this forum' or use such terms. I will run away if I hear any more sorrys from you.

My doubt was - when that screen was closed, how and why did some one in another screen shout 'bomb bomb'? I may have missed something...

Originally posted by: visrom

My doubt was - when that screen was closed, how and why did some one in another screen shout 'bomb bomb'? I may have missed something...

Originally posted by: visrom

Ok...this was confusing in the beginning...maybe a line or two to clarify it would have been better.

And sorry, I just couldn't read the last part...maine bataaya na...I am tired of OTT stuff esp after the Goa disaster.

That's why I stuck to pure khoon story.

Originally posted by: luv_cid_shreya

Exactly. It's just better to show with pics rather than try to explain. You know the pics reminded me a lot of something that Dr. Salunkhe would do to show the connection.