AANSOO pukaary...!!!(NEW VM at PG 148)!!

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Moner_Radio

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Posted: 13 years ago

#941

@ GD :

whoa !! huge update. finished reading just now. the way you handled so many things together is really commendable. i was giggling throughout the lab scenes and the 'gyaani doctor' part😆 ..it was so gud !!👏

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Chintan

@ArRoGaNT-CHINTs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#942

Hey DADA...
first of all to say only...

For the SUCCESS of your another story...

👏your STORY PLOT is ...REALLY...👏

👏Your INVESTIGATION PORTION is...👏

👏Your STORY DESCRIPTION is... also...👏

BUT... BUT...

as per your WHOLE STORY , i think this END is not SUITABLE.. not at all MATCHING with the ENTIRE one...
I thought that END was also Good before READING.. but after READING i am not SATISFIED..
your END is very Much RUSH...

I SINCERELY hope 4 the best ENDING ...

Edited by Chints09 - 13 years ago

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#943

Originally posted by: polly_03
@ GD :
whoa !! huge update. finished reading just now. the way you handled so many things together is really commendable. i was giggling throughout the lab scenes and the 'gyaani doctor' part😆 ..it was so gud !!👏

😆😆... yup MY CHASHMA also TIRED after WRITING that BULK😆

abt COMMENDABLE😊... ME SHYING😳... THANKS alot!!!😃

and abt GYANI DR😆... kya kahein BANDA her ROLE mein FIT ho jata hay...😉😆

😆

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#944

Originally posted by: Chints09
Hey DADA...
first of all to say only...

For the SUCCESS of your another story...

👏your STORY PLOT is ...REALLY...👏

👏Your INVESTIGATION PORTION is...👏

👏Your STORY DESCRIPTION is... also...👏

BUT... BUT...

as per your WHOLE STORY , i think this END is not SUITABLE.. not at all MATCHING with the ENTIRE one...
I thought that END was also Good before READING.. but after READING i am not SATISFIED..
your END is very Much RUSH...

I SINCERELY hope 4 the best ENDING ...

shuker😊... shuker😊... its 2ND CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM POST after NEEME DII...😃

yup CHINTS... U are absolutely CORRECT...👏

i lost my FOCUS, INTEREST n FLOW...😭

jus WRAP UP it...😡

but buddy... i felt that sumtime in CID SILLY MISTAKE done😉... cz sume times ERRORS comes as HUMAN BEINGS...

sum RELATIONS cumes...

like ABHI SIR give that SEDUCTIVE...😉

DAYA Sir that FAKE ACCIDENT...😉

sum CULPRITS MISTAKES...😉

so... but yup all UR CRITICISM are RIGHT
👍🏼

i'll try to MINIMIZE it in my FUTURE PROJECTS...

(dada... DUA karna TERI BACHAT rahay... warna!!!!😉🤣)

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#945

Krishna, everyone has heard what you think. If you don't like the stories, please avoid this thread.

Any more comments to hurt anyone's feeligs will result in increase of WL.

To others - please don't discuss ANY FURTHER about Krishna's post. Please continue other discussions. If anyone turns this into a fight again, I will have to raise their WLs too.

Edited by visrom - 13 years ago

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

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Posted: 13 years ago

#946

GD ... you never add a '/' to the membersonly and nocopy codes in the end of the post ... it has to be same as the starting one and in capitals 😊
like
[MEMBERS_ONLY] [NO_COPY] without the _ while posting !!

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670778

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Posted: 13 years ago

#947

@dada
ur concept is different n i appriciate ur efforts👏
bt its too much senti😭😭

Edited by AmanDeep24 - 13 years ago

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Debasree

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Posted: 13 years ago

#948

I appreciate ur wonderful idea of this VM but the Daya sir pics is not clearly shown as it is too small...if u do some zoom effect then its looks fabulous...otherwise really good job 👏 👍🏼
I love the song 😃