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Posted: 13 years ago

#921

hey dada
ist of al m sorry for giving late feedback
now coming to story
kehne ki jrurt nhi hai ki mujhe story main sbse
jyada kya pasand aya😉
u knew na...
DAYA sir ka dialouge...
fir nhi kehnaKI TUMARE
REHNE YA REHNE SE KOI FARAK NHI PADHTA😭😃
again superb one

hats off u..
see meri hat v clapping kr rhi hai😉

abey yaar ye kya
DAYA SIR ko kyun nhi bataya une neend kaise aai😆
vechare soch soch kr pagal ho jayenge😡😆

ur stroy is juz brilliant👏

thora bhut FW valo ko v sikha do😉

now SUMTHING for my enemy😡
kya kre majboori hai
story likhne main iska v CONTRIBUTE hai na😈

n in last for you😳

Edited by AmanDeep24 - 13 years ago

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neeme

@neeme

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Posted: 13 years ago

#922

Originally posted by: gadhadada

thatswhy I m NOT intrested to POST it!!!

NAHI DII...

But u tell me, u changed The story or Not..reply me what i asked Above

except sum EMMOTIONAL DIALOGUES i did NOT CHANGE anythin... wesay DII PEHLA PART bhi hay... agar aap SAVE ker lein tou DONO sath parh lein... cz sub ko main yehi keh raha hun...

i will try But can't say.. u knw i m busy with Contest Much and also busy with someOther stuff so..Fill hal Not Possible.

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Chashmish

@VevaH

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#923

so DADA ! finally u hav completed de story ! hmmm😳 itna INTEZAAR krwaya❓, chalo koi baat nhi jao MAAAF kiya 😉 well its so Creatively Written ,& so all i can say that its jst

de Investigation & Research part was so NICE, jst a small gift 4 U

Edited by vevah - 13 years ago

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halfbloodprince

@Wistfulness

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Posted: 13 years ago

#924

Wow! I'm back and next part already up :)
Will read it tonight.

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#925

Yaar GD, meri comment mein shocked honewali kaunsi baat hai?😲 yeh part waqei bohot achha hai. rahi baat tumhari satisfaction ki, yaar aapni story se koi bhi satisfied nehi hota. mujhe bhi aapni story bilkul pasand nehi aayi thi, jab use post kiya tha (isiliye toh dusre id se post kiya)!😛

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#926

Originally posted by: neeme
But u tell me, u changed The story or Not..reply me what i asked Above

except sum EMMOTIONAL DIALOGUES i did NOT CHANGE anythin... wesay DII PEHLA PART bhi hay... agar aap SAVE ker lein tou DONO sath parh lein... cz sub ko main yehi keh raha hun...

i will try But can't say.. u knw i m busy with Contest Much and also busy with someOther stuff so..Fill hal Not Possible.

ok DII... jub WAQT milay😊

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#927

Originally posted by: shreela
Yaar GD, meri comment mein shocked honewali kaunsi baat hai?😲 yeh part waqei bohot achha hai. rahi baat tumhari satisfaction ki, yaar aapni story se koi bhi satisfied nehi hota. mujhe bhi aapni story bilkul pasand nehi aayi thi, jab use post kiya tha (isiliye toh dusre id se post kiya)!😛

yaar KD... sach mein mera TEMPO NA TOOT gay tha😡.. is liyey ye PART mujhy NA likhnay mein MAZA aaya aur NA he PARHNY mein😭... kahir i dunt want to RELEASE any of MY CREATIVE WORK from ANOTHER ID😛 cz phir ISSUE kesay CREATE hoga😉😆 aur FORUM ka MAHUL kesay GHARAM rahay ga🤣

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#928

Originally posted by: vevah
so DADA ! finally u hav completed de story ! hmmm😳 itna INTEZAAR krwaya❓, chalo koi baat nhi jao MAAAF kiya 😉 well its so Creatively Written ,& so all i can say that its jst
de Investigation & Research part was so NICE, jst a small gift 4 U

VIVA... buht saar SHUKRIYA😃... even ME NOT liked it much as much as PART ONE.😭..

wesay YE kiya BHEJA hay😲... jahan MERA CHASHMA KHANY jata hay ye APNI SHAKAL change ker leta hay😕... CHASHMA is getting ANGRY😡 😡minute after minute...😉

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#929

Originally posted by: AmanDeep24
hey dada
ist of al m sorry for giving late feedback
now coming to story
kehne ki jrurt nhi hai ki mujhe story main sbse
jyada kya pasand aya😉
u knew na...
DAYA sir ka dialouge...
fir nhi kehnaKI TUMARE
REHNE YA REHNE SE KOI FARAK NHI PADHTA😭😃
again superb one

hats off u..
see meri hat v clapping kr rhi hai😉

abey yaar ye kya
DAYA SIR ko kyun nhi bataya une neend kaise aai😆
vechare soch soch kr pagal ho jayenge😡😆

ur stroy is juz brilliant👏

thora bhut FW valo ko v sikha do😉

now SUMTHING for my enemy😡
kya kre majboori hai
story likhne main iska v CONTRIBUTE hai na😈

n in last for you😳

khair STORY was BORING in MY VIEW...😭😡

abt LIKING it... kiya kahun...😉

wo DIALOGUES😊!!! OTT😉😆

abt that HAT😊... haan ye acha hay😳... magar is ka LEVER kaun khench raha hay😲😕

CHASHMY nay is CHOCOLATES ko KHANY say INKAAR ker diya😛

he contacted Dr SALUNKHY for CHEKING POISON in it...😉

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Mini :)

@--MINOZ--

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#930

SORRY 4 LATE reply dada:-(:-(... Sorry i m from mobile now so a CHOTU comment;-);-)... Jus read your story :-) Wowww AMAGING STORY DADA:-):-)... A BIG HUG for YOU n for your Sweetu chashma FROM MY CHICHORA CHASHMA;-);-)... What a story dada LOVE YOU AND YOUR BHAI A LOT:-):-)...

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