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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#761

Dada an amazing story from you once again 👏

No words to describe the duo moments as they were great as usual.😃 And I can imagine the most handsome Truck Driver of this planet.😛 This story cheered me up and I really miss Duo/Trio+Freddy moments now a days in CID. I didn't find any loop holes in this story and this time it's proved that you

can write good stories even in a single day.😊

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baccha this is the MOST BEAUTIFUL LINE/SENTENCE😳😳 and it really vanished all my SAD feeling abt fininshing the story in rush... i m feelin SO HAPPY🤗... how many FANS of MY BHAI makes him n me the MOST HAPPIEST PPL of this PLANET😃😃...
THANK YOU baccha👏👏... so nice of U😃😃...
BHAI request sum PUNKTIYAAN from UR side on HIM😉😉
i told HIm... U are an AWESUM POETESS na⭐️⭐️😉...!!!!

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Sakshi.. Angel..

@Reserved_angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#762

Originally posted by: gadhadada

THANK YOU so much betajee😃😃
i tried to give SUM GOOD STUFF but as being a WRITER ...
i must admit to finished it in HURRY😡..
all A+ for me...😉
so wat for MY CHASHMA😆😆😆

aap key chasme k liye.. ye box...

isme apka chasma rest karega.. coz usko meri requests puri krni h na...😆

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#763

Originally posted by: daya_angel

aap key chasme k liye.. ye box...
isme apka chasma rest karega.. coz usko meri requests puri krni h na...😆

where is the BOX😲😲
kiya mera CHASHMA ANDHA ho gaya hay😕😭

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halfbloodprince

@Wistfulness

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Posted: 13 years ago

#764

Oye hoye! Kya baat hai 😳
Dada aur Daya sir ke liye kuch bhi! 🤗

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Sakshi.. Angel..

@Reserved_angel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#765

dada this is ur case for ur chashmah...

Edited by daya_angel - 13 years ago

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#766

Originally posted by: daya_angel

dada this is ur case for ur chashmah...

kiya😲😲

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

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Posted: 13 years ago

#767

great job GD!👏👏👏 the investigation part was very nice. really enjoyed the story.😃 but, I could not understand the role of Kajal. didn't she know about Daya sir's presence in the company? and the human trafficking part should be more detailed. otherwise, ver well-written.⭐️

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gadhadada

@gadhadada

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Posted: 13 years ago

#768

Originally posted by: shreela
great job GD!👏👏👏 the investigation part was very nice. really enjoyed the story.😃 but, I could not understand the role of Kajal. didn't she know about Daya sir's presence in the company? and the human trafficking part should be more detailed. otherwise, ver well-written.⭐️

i was anxiously waitin for UR comments KD😉😉... CASE bhi tou chalna hay na😆😆... yup all UR POINTS are valed⭐️⭐️... first... NO BARAY BHAI only entered KAJAL... did not briefly told her abt the case n presence of BHAI... cz both still did not have any SOLID REASON... and abt HUMAN TRAFFIKING... yaar i did not treat it like URS😭😭... cz i did it in ONE day and NOT research it much😭😭... yaar plz KD... apni AWESUM STORY say isay na milao🤢🤢... baaqi THANX BOSS😃😉!!!