AANSOO pukaary...!!!(NEW VM at PG 148)!! - Page 75

Originally posted by: neeme

What i want To say u abt ur story Almost U said In ur NOTE..

Well, Story was Not Bad..Plot was Good.and Investigation Style was Good also.But More Investigation was Needed...Thats The main Thing i feel..Also Why whole Team was Not in the action..😕

BUT PLOT AND INVESTIGATION STYLE WAS GOOD...👏

So, u r Working on other Stuff also..Good Luck For That...

Originally posted by: gadhadada

yup DII... i personally unsatisfied😭... cz i finished it in hurry😡... n abt the TEAM... due to the REPORT from HIGHER OFFICIALS and SUSPECIOUS MOVEMENT... ACP Sir only wanted to enter DUO😊... basically i wanted to put the idea that sumtime only PLANNING STAGE turned into an IMPLEMENTATION stage😊... all work in ELEVENTH HOUR... jus cz of sum UNEXPECTED SITUATION coming out😕...Yah Thats Y ..Also i think Story was short.More Investigation was needed.
like RONY entry😉... KAJAL BEWAKOOFI😉... etc etc... hehe Bechari ka kye Kasoor, Baki Team b tu Daya Ko nae pechan paye 😆😆 Getup he asa Tha k ma b Imagine nae kar pae This time 😆😆
but THANX😃... yup i'll try NOT to make it OTT like my CONTEST STORY😭... oops Dont Use This Smily..Everyone has Its Own Style of writing..
khair phir bhi AAP nay parhi... byhad SHUKRIYA😳... No No, Infact i need To say Thanks To u..U provided me Stuff to read 😊 When I was geting bore..Also U mentioned Me That U write it for me Too..So THANK YOU 😃

hey DADA

Originally posted by: Soonaali

hey DADA

my name

must say

Bas thoda or Investingation chahiye tha...

this time u handle emotions verry gently

for u

The way u handle Daya Abhi bond...

some Dance steps from my side just for u

some thing for u

This is for Sachin Kajal and that Criminals

Shibu

Originally posted by: Pradyy

DADA

DAYA sir must be looking like this

😊😊😊

very well written...👏👏👏

GR8 PLOT 👏

MY CREATOR

Chalo iss bar kuch teasty khilate hai aap ko

AMAN THANKS