CYBER CRIME Vs. CID ----- 57 - Page 15

sure
i'l wait for UR upcoming findings...

@Dada- I have one bullet proof jacket. We will go for an encounter. Will you join?

hmmm... WOW...
i also place U infront of mine and ran away behind U...😉
KESA!!!!!!!!!

Mere paas bullet proof jacket hai and I'm brave CID fan.

ab yaar kya karein
bullet proof jacket tou aik hee hay na
tumhein bachany kay liyey mujhay un ko apni taraf tou lagana hoga na...

Originally posted by: gadhadada

ab yaar kya karein
bullet proof jacket tou aik hee hay na
tumhein bachany kay liyey mujhay un ko apni taraf tou lagana hoga na...

Honestly Speaking a very good story...duo relationship is described very well...investigation part is also very good...Abhijit sir's character is described very well...guest appearance of Muskaan is very good...ACP sir is missing but acc to ur story ACP sir must be missing...so that's ok...I enjoy ur story 😃...Waiting more from u ...keep it up 👍🏼
Only one suggestion hope u don't mind plz try to improve the language Hindi as well as English...though I'm not the expert but I feel it when I read ur story...becoz it affects ur story...just remember that...hope u understand my point...

@ loveDAYA - another nice story from you...totally loved it... the way Abhijeet narrated the hotel - receptionist scene, could have been a bit more clear...but otherwise its awesome...way better than recent CID story line...keep going...waiting for next one...👍🏼

Originally posted by: aadrika-

@ loveDAYA - another nice story from you...totally loved it... the way Abhijeet narrated the hotel - receptionist scene, could have been a bit more clear...but otherwise its awesome...way better than recent CID story line...keep going...waiting for next one...

Hey thank u so much... I will surely add some more clearity in my next story

Originally posted by: debasree04

Honestly Speaking a very good story...duo relationship is described very well...investigation part is also very good...Abhijit sir's character is described very well...guest appearance of Muskaan is very good...ACP sir is missing but acc to ur story ACP sir must be missing...so that's ok...I enjoy ur story ...Waiting more from u ...keep it up

Only one suggestion hope u don't mind plz try to improve the language Hindi as well as English...though I'm not the expert but I feel it when I read ur story...becoz it affects ur story...just remember that...hope u understand my point...

Thanks a lot... Regarding hindi and english... Ya i know its really need a improvement... I m trying hard... I will try at my level best...