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Abena Motianim

@Minionite

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Posted: 15 years ago

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

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Posted: 15 years ago

yeh parts mein story update karne ki aadat i sooo 😆... please finish it off soon !!!😊

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

⭐️👏 wow! what an apt pre-tasha cid era scenario. u have portrayed the characters really well! carry on! will gv review after that! u have written like some of the older member writers here!😃😊

also ure hindi is crystal clear and some of the mannerisms are just what the characters have! its a wow and i really enjoyed it so far!

Edited by suhaani.cid - 15 years ago

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Nandini

@NandiniRaizadaa

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

Oops it incomplete. Please complete it!!!!

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neeme

@neeme

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

Shreya i can't beleive this its u..................i will definatly read this....

but please complete it soon yar.................

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Abena Motianim

@Minionite

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey all CIDians,

Here's part two of the story.

To be continued....

Okay...edited above...added more of the story...

Edited by luv_cid_shreya - 15 years ago

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Abena Motianim

@Minionite

Channel Moderator

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: neeme
Shreya i can't beleive this its u..................i will definatly read this....
but please complete it soon yar.................

Yes Neeme...This is me...Stories are my passion....Hope you like it. 😉

More parts to come. 😊

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

Shreya....please 'EDIT' the first post of this thread and add the second part after the first part. It becomes difficult for us to search for various parts in different pages of this thread. Otherwise, as you keep adding more parts the whole story goes into several pages and it gets cluttered.

Edited by visrom - 15 years ago