my EFFORT's..... STORIES

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey ppl...

i m here with some of my PLOTS.... jo ro ro ker mujh say keh rahay thay kay now MUST complete US... so... this TIME i m really NOT waitin for ANYONE's FEED BACK.... just relax and be patient... may be these are NOT as good as the last one.... i really enjoyed to portrayed the character of DIG SHAMSHER... i knew that character was done excellent.... even B.P SINGH Sir nay tou us ko AMAR ker diya hay... i just cut only a slice from that role... its was well portrayed by sum IF writers... i m SO SORRY... if anyones intentions hurts.... i m obliged to those who tolerated my STORIES.... 😉
NOTE: CRITICISM will entertain on prior basis.... thanx


XPRESSASIVE XPRESSIONS

DAYA sat on his quallis… he saw a plain envelope in his quallis passenger seat…. He opened it… find a plain bit burnt paper…. He keenly saw it but there was no one suspicious around… he placed it on dashboard and move to bearue… he is in quite happy mood so his singing ability is on…. After few minutes a kid comes against his car unexpectedly… he pressed his feet on break and come out from the car… he see the kid thoroughly but did not find anything serious… the kid was quite fine even he did not take any interest in that accident… he say…

KID: mian theek hun UNCLE.. aap jao…

DAYA was very impressed with this attitude and he feels that the kid is very brave even he did not tense in that bad situation also and get back to his work casualy… he be back to his quallis… suddenly he felt a hard rod touches on his head and his eyes turn off their lights….

At bearue….

ABHIJEET: ye DAYA nahi aaya abhi tak… FREDDIE zara phone tou lagao DAYA ko… pata bhi tha kay jana hay PARESH ki taraf…. Magar!!!

FREDDIE: Sir DAYA Sir phone nahi utha rahay hain???

ABHIJEET: hain… ye kiya chakker hay… acha phir tum meray sath chalo… DAYA tou najany kitna late aayey…

Before ABHIJEET and FREDDIE leaving the bearue… the bearue get a call…. VIVEK pick it up…

VIVEK: CID bearue…

VIVEK: kya bakwaas ker rahay ho??? Kaun ho tum??

VIVEK(in anger): agar tum nay un ko kuch bhi kiya tou acha nahi hoga….

At the moment ACP enter and ask VIVEK…

ACP: kaun tha VIVEK??/

VIVEK: Sir, DAYA Sir ko kisi nay kidnap ker liya hay???

EVERYONE: kiya???

VIVEK: Sir wo keh raha hy kay RASHMI BUILDING kay 4th floor per DAYA Sir ko bomb say baandh diya hay… bacha saktay ho tou bacha lo…..

ACP(in hurry): chalo….

They reached there and saw DAYA was sitting in a chair and the chair got the bomb… they take BOMB SQUAD as well with them… ABHIJEET and VIVEK with the BOMB SQUAD rushed to 4th floor…. DAYA saw them…

DAYA(bit irritation): ABHI… tum log yahan kyun aayey ho… jao…. Jaldi… bus 4 minutes bachay hain… yaar in logun ko bhi lay jao….

ABHIJEET(with tension): DAYA tum pareshan na ho… ye log abhi BOMB difuse ker dein gay….

DAYA: magar yaar….

ABHIJEET: DAYA chup ho jao… un ko apna kaam karnay do…

After few sec,,, one of BOMB SQUID team member said that its quite difficult to difuse it in 3 minute… so try to move away as early….

DAYA(tense): ABHI… VIVEK… jao…

ABHIJEET(in anger): DAYA tumhara dimagh theek hay… tum ko liyey bina mujhay nahi jana… baaqi jo jana chahay…

He and VIVEK try to threw the BOMB atleast… but the BOMB was tighten by a leather rope so its hard to lose it…

DAYA(wet tone): ABHI… bus jao… move… VIVEK utho….

ABHIJEET(in rash): DAYA chup raho….

But DAYA still convincing them to go and leave him… just to deviate from his chat… ABHI lightly slap on his cheek… VIVEK bit shocked… either DAYA stop talking… ABHIJEET take out his knife and cut that leather rope and grab DAYA… they all run as fast and jumped from 4th floor to the jumping bed…. And just the BOMB BLAST voice heard by all the area…. All comes near…

ACP: tum log theek hona…

ABHIJEET: yes Sir….

ABHIJEET: DAYA tum….

DAYA: main tum say naraz hun… tum nay mujhay maara na!!

ABHIJEET after grab his hand….

ABHIJEET: abay chal… kitni haddiyaan tooti…

DAYA: do....

After see ABHIJEET wrist…. He says..

DAYA: arry ABHI tumhari ghari… main abhi lay aata hun…

ABHIJEET: DAYA tum pagal ho kiya… arry meray pass aur bhi gharyaan hain….

DAYA: magar wo tumhari favourite thi…

ABHIJEET: tum say zyada nahi… ab chalo….

On next morning… ABHIJEET found a WATCH CASE on his desk… he opened it and found the bit similer watch he was lost yesterday accident… he saw DAYA with smile… DAYA came near…

DAYA: chalo pehan lo…

ABHIJEET take out his own and tied the new one….

ABHIJEET: achi lug rahi hay na??/

DAYA: haan… lao 1500 rapay nikalo…

ABHIJEET: hain…. Kyun??

DAYA: ghari kay… tum nay mujhay kal thapper maara tha na… tou gift shift band… lao do…

ABHIJEET: arry ye achi zabardasti hay…

DAYA: theek hay… main sub ko bata deta hun kay parsun tum aur TAREEKA restaurant mein DATE maar rahy thay…

ABHIJEET: hain… main kub DATE maar raha tha….

DAYA: sub yaqeen ker lein gay… meri baat per…

ABHIJEET: DAYA kay bacchy… ye achi black mailing hay…

DAYA(ignore him): arry FREDDIE tum ko malum hay parsun na ABHI…

ABHIJEET grab DAYA and say….

ABHIJEET: abhi ye 1200 rupees hee hain meray pass…

DAYA(taking): chalay ga… boss… main sub ko PIZZA khila dunga… tumhary liyey mangwaon??

ABHIJEET(in anger): ghalati ki main nay… kal tumhein thapper kay bajaye tumhara gala daba deta na… tou acha hota….

DAYA(with smile): ohhhh… boss… chance miss ker diya… bad na…

ABHIJEET try to grab him but DAYA slipped from his hand easily….

At evening when DAYA and ABHIJEET back to bearue… after stepping down… ABHIJEET bit drizzle..

DAYA(after grab him): phir start ho gaya tumhara ye chakker… aaj tou main tum ko pakar ker lay jaonga kisi achay doctor kay pass… tum pata nahi kis doctor ko dikhatay ho kay theek honay kay bajayey aur pagal ho jaatay ho…

ABHIJEET: ho gaya!!!

DAYA: haan…

ABHIJEET: abay chakker nahi aaya tha… is ki wajah say thora disbalance ho gaya tha… (watchin him some stones)…

DAYA(with smile): boss… tumhara kuch pata nahi hay… kub kahan kitnay chakker aa jayein…

ABHIJEET: buhat din ho gayey DAYA… maar nahi khayii hay tum nay mujh say…

DAYA: ye tou hay… boss..

On next day…. At FORENSIC lab… ABHIJEET fell down without any reason in the lab… he took to the hospital by the team…. When talking to the DR….

ACP: DR kuch pata chala ABHIJEET kay is tarah behosh honay ki wajah??

DR: Sir filhaal tou kuch samajh nahi aa raha… may be koi stress ho…..

ACP talk to DAYA about that… but DAYA does not identified any unusual with ABHIJEET… they bring back ABHI at night…. But at NIGHT he again lose and turned into unconscious state…. DAYA as fast as can took him to the hospital and after an attentive checkup… DR found strange thing… ACP and team also present due to DAYA's phone….

ACP: acha hua DAYA tum ABHIJEET kay sath hee thay… warna…. Dekho DR kya batata hay…

DR: ACP sahib idhar aayey….

DAYA try to coming up with ACP but DR give him a bad look… ACP allows him to come inside… he say…

ACP: DR ye ABHIJEET ka BHAI hay… plz… aap ko jo bhi kehna hay… kahyey…

DR: ACP sahib… ABHIJEET ko zeher diya ja raha hy….

ACP n DAYA: kiya!!!

DR: jee haan… kafi strong poison hay…. aur dekhyey is ghari kay neechay kuch green/blue sa hay… shayed yehi zehr hay… aur is ghari kay through gaya ho body kay ander….

DAYA in shock state after grab that WATCH… he does not understand what to do… he saw ACP in absent mind….

ACP: DAYA kiya hua…. Tum!!! Kuch kehna hay….

DAYA: Sir ye ghari main nay ABHIJEET ko gift ki hay kal….. mujhay samjh nahi aa raha hay kay aisa kesay ho sakta hay…. kay ghari kay through zeher ja raha ho body mein….

ACP: FREDDIE ye ghari SALUNKHY kay pass bhej do aur kaho achi tarah is ki jaanch karay… mujhay foran report chahyey… ok

FREDDIE: yes Sir….

DAYA: Sir mujhay samajh nahi aa raha kay ye kiya ho raha hay….

ACP: DAYA tum nay ghari kahan say li thi??? Kahein isay akela chor diya tha… dukaan mein….

DAYA: nahi Sir….(after few sec)… Sir shayed… haan… dukaan walay kay pass change nahi tha tou main ghari dukaan mein chor ker doosri shop say change leenay gaya tou ghari wali shop ka larka meray pass aaya… mujhay laga kay usay shop walay nay bheja hay kay kahein main ghari liyey bina na bhaag jaon… is liyey main nay usay wahein paisay diyey aur ghari lay ker chala aaya….

ACP: chalo us shop per chal ker dekhtay hain….

ACP ordered VIVEK to be there at hospital with ABHIJEET… while DAYA took ACP and SACHIN with him… when he entered inside the shop… the shopkeeper instantly said…

SHOP KEEPER: arry sahab… aap tou ghari liyey bina hee chalay gayey…. Main nay tou buhat intaizaar bhi kiya aap ka… magar phir kal ek aadmi wo ghari lay gaya… khareed ker…

DAYA: koi aur larka hay aap ki dukaan mein??? In do larkun kay ilawa???

SHOP KEEPER: nahi sahab bus yehi hain kyun!!!

DAYA: nahi theek hay… ok…

They came out from the shop…. Suddenly ACP get a call…

ACP: haan SALUNKHY… kuch mila!!!

ACP: acha hum abhi aatay hain….

All three sat on quallis towards FORENSIC LAB…. DAYA talked to VIVEK about ABHIJEET state… he said that ABHIJEET is still unconscious… DAYA advise him to be there….

At FORENSIC LAB…

ACP: haan salunkhay… bolo…

TAREEKA: Sir ABHIJEET kesa hay???

DAYA: abhi bhi behosh hay….

SALUNKHY: ACP haan is metal mein ek chota sa suraakh(hole) hay… aur ager is metal cover ko kholo tou is kay neechy zehr ki ek choti sii tabloid hay… bus isi hole say zehr andr gaya hay ABHIJEET ki body mein…. Us kay wrist per koi CUT hoga jabhi zehr aaram say ander chala gaya….

DAYA: Sir meri samajh nahi aata kay kisi ko kesay pata chala kay main ABHIJEET kay liyey ghari lunga!!!

ACP: DAYA isi sawal ka jawab hee tou dhoondna hay….

SALUNKHY: wesay mera khayal thora doosra hay…

ACP: matlab???

SALUNKHY: DAYA bacchay zara apni wrist dekhao…..

DAYA show his wrist which also contains some wounds and cuts marks due to bomb blast accident…

ACP: tumhara matlab hay us ghari mein zehr DAYA kay liyey lagaya gaya tha….

SALUNKHY: yes boss…. magar kyunki zehr laganay walay ko malum hee nahi tha kay DAYA ye ghari apnay liyey nahi balkay ABHIJEET kay liyey khareed raha hay… tou zehr ABHIJEET ki body mein chala gaya… wesay tou zehr strong hay… magar kyunki DAYA thora strong baccha hay tou shayed is zehr ka asar us per mazeed ek do din baad hota….

SACHIN: Sir aap kisi ko bata ker gayey thay kay aap ghari leenay ja rahay hain???

DAYA: nahi SACHIN… magar Sir jub main blast walay accident say nikla tha tou he soch liya tha kay ABHIJEET kay liyey ghari leeni hay….

Suddenly he got the call of VIVEK who told him about ABHIJEET coming back in conscious state….

DAYA: haan main aata hun….

DAYA and FREDDIE leave the lab….. DAYA remember something… he picked out that envelope from his dashboard… that envelope he got yesterday evening after bomb blast accident… same plain envelope with a paper bit wet with green/blue color… he was bit tensed… FREDDIE ask…

FREDDIE: DAYA Sir ye kiya hay???

DAYA: haan… nahi kuch nahi….

They reached at the hospital…. ABHIJEET coming out with the help of VIVEK… he is looking much better…. But after saw DAYA… he feels something wrong with DAYA… he asks him through his eyes but DAYA signals him to talk to him later… they all reached at bearue where ACP was right there for the latest news…. When they left at night…. ABHIJEET move with DAYA… and now…

ABHIJEET: DAYA kya baat hay… subah say pareshan lug rahay ho???

DAYA opened the dashboard and take out both letters and give it to ABHIJEET…

ABHIJEET(after grab letters): ye apnay love letter mujhay kyun dikha rahay ho…

DAYA jus smile… but don't say anything… jus signal ABHIJEET to open them… ABHIJEET was quite confused… he opened both the letter…. and DAYA …

DAYA: pehla letter jis mein jala hua paper hay… wo mujhay us subah mila tha jub wo bomb blast wala incident hua tha…. main ghar say nikla tou gadi mein tha…. ye letter…. aur ye doosra wala letter mujhay kal evening mein ghar ki doorstep per mila tha… jub main tumharay liyey ghari leenay ja raha tha…. ABHI tum ko pata hay… us ghari kay neechay walay metel cover mein ek hole hay jis kay through tumhari body mein zehr gaya hay… isi wajah say tum dono baar behosh ho gayey thay….

ABHIJEET was shocked to hear this cz still he thought that his headace was come back again…

ABHIJEET: tum nay ACP sahib ko bataya???

DAYA move his head in NO… he asks something in bit hesitation…

DAYA: ABHI… tum ko mujh per yaqeen hay na….

ABHIJEET(in confusion): kya matlab….

DAYA: wo ghari main nay tum ko di thi!!!

ABHIJEET after a while… turned his face towards window…. and say…

ABHIJEET: kafi achi soch hay tumhari meray baaray mein… good….

DAYA after grab his hand….

DAYA: yaar main tou… bus yunhi khayal aa gaya….

ABHIJEET take out his hand from DAYA's grip and say…

ABHIJEET: haan… saheh khayal aaya hay…. main itna hee bura hun kay tum per shak ker sakta hun…

DAYA: yaar mera wo matlab nahi tha… main tou….

ABHIJEET: DAYA bus yehen mujhay utaar do….

DAYA was quite ashamed but did not stop the quallis…. he dropped him at his house… he try to talk to ABHIJEET but ABHI just move to his house without a minute loss….

On next morning… when all are there except DAYA… CID bearue get a call that one of his officer was admitted in hospital and he is quite critical…. All reached there… ABHIJEET was so tensed… he instantly think about those letters…. At hospital… DR said…

DR: ACP sahib…. Kafi buri halat hay aap kay officer ki… magar phir bhi… shayed wo apni gadi say kood gayey thay is liyey bach gayey… magar sarak per ghaseetnay ki wajah say body kafi hurted hay… magar phir bhi wo hosh mein hain…. aap mil saktay hain un say…. all move… enter in room… DAYA's eyes search someone and after saw ABHIJEET… he feels relaxed….

ACP: DAYA kya hua tha???

DAYA: Sir bus gadi kay break fail ho gayey thay… wo tou main gadi pair say takranay say pehlay kood gaya… warna yaqeenun aap ko meri laash hee milti…

ABHIJEET give him an anger look… DAYA smile….ACP console him… FREDDIE looks so sad….DAYA say…

DAYA: VIVEK zara meri gadi tou QUINS ROAD say POLICE GARAGE bhej do….. aur FREDDIE main theek hun… ro mut… abhi nahi ja raha main tum ko chor ker….

Before the team left…. DAYA grab ABHIJEET wrist when he moves near to his bed silently…. all move outside except ABHIJEET…

DAYA: boss… yaar sorry na… maaf ker day… warna…

ABHIJEET(in anger): warna!!!

DAYA (unexpectedly hugged him): warna main tum ko chorun ga nahi…

ABHIJEET: aur ainda aisa hua tou!!!

DAYA: acha na….. aainda aisa hua tou…. ulta latka dena mujhay…. bus…

ABHIJEET: haan ye theek hay… kya hua tha???

DAYA: boss…. aaj phir ek letter mila hay… gadi kay dashboard mein hay… tum dekh lena… bus paper buhat kata phata sa tha…. Phir main gadi mein betha… race dii… aur jub break per pair rakkha… tou kuch nahi hua… main gadi ko sunsaan sarak per lay gaya aur bahar kood gaya magar phir bhi itni choutein lag gayein… mujhay ghar tou lay chalo….

ABHIJEET: abhi yahan raho… DAYA mera khayal hay humein ACP sahab ko bata dena chahyey…. ..

DAYA: haan zarur…. tum un ko bata do… aur ABHI mujhay ghar jana hay… main theek hun…

ABHIJEET: no bakwaas… aaram karo… bye…

When he tries to leave… jus stop and asks ..

ABHIJEET: DAYA baqi do letters kahan hain??

DAYA: dashboard mein… yaar mujhay lay chalo na…

ABHIJEET see DAYA…. put his finger in his lips and left…. He calls VIVEK and ask about his location… and then move towards POLICE GARADGE… he checks the quallis with VIVEK in great detail but found nothing… after checkup he takes out those three letters and move to bearue… tell everything to ACP and then with ACP and team move to FORENSIC lab…. SALUNKHY checks the FINGER PRINTS…

ABHIJEET: Sir meray aur DAYA kay finger prints tou hongay hee… dekhein kisi aur kay bhi hain kya???

SALUNKHY(after few minutes): nahi bhae…. aur kisi kay tou nahi milay….

ABHIJEET: aur tou koi suraagh bhi nahi hay humaray pass….

Suddenly he takes out his cell and after watch it… he says to himself….

ABHIJEET: arry ye cell VIBRATE per kyun chala gaya….

He saw lots of DAYA's miss call… bit worried… call at DAYA's cell but DAYA did not pick the call…. at the moment… ACP gets a call….

ACP: ACP Pradyuman here….

ACP: kiya…. hum aatay hain…

ABHIJEET: kya hua Sir….

ACP(in tense tone): DAYA ko kisi nay hospital mein goli maar di hay… jaldi chalo….

Everyone was quite shocked…. ABHIJEET was totally stunned… SACHIN take the keys from his hand and all rushed to the hospital… the DR wait for them at corridor…

ACP: Dr DAYA theek tou hay na….

DR: haan… Sir wo bach gayey hain… magar halat theek nahi hay…. shoulder per do goliyaan lagi hain… kafi khoon bhi beh gaya hay… ICU mein shift ker diya hay… dua karein….

ABHIJEET and everyone saw DAYA from the ICU room glass door… everyone was so tensed… ABHIJEET was feeling himself helpless… he saw his cell again… and tears comes on his eyes…. ACP place his hand on his shoulder…

ABHIJEET(in fear): Sir DAYA theek ho jayey ga na!!!

ACP(in tension): haan ABHIJEET… usay theek hona hee hoga….

ABHIJEET: wo mujhay madad kay liyey bulata raha… aur main!!!

ACP: ABHIJEET sanbhalo khud ko….

Everybody spent those 4 hours in great pain… worry… tension…. after 4 hours… DR come out and give them a good news of DAYA's out of danger condition…..

ABHIJEET: DAYA ko hosh aa gaya… hum us say mil saktay hain kya???

DR: abhi nahi… jub hosh aa jayeyga tou mil lijyey ga…..

After an hour… SALUNKHY and TAREEKA also joined them…. DR allow all of them to meet but be patient…. All come inside his room… he was laid in his bed… looking weak but happy…. All of them support… encourage him with their cheering… DAYA grab ABHIJEET hand in whole time…..

DAYA: boss…. itnay phone kiyey tum ko…. tum phone hee nahi utha rahay thay…

ABHIJEET(in low voice): phone vibrate per chala gaya tha…

ACP: wesay DAYA tum ABHIJEET Ko phone kyun ker rahay thay???

DAYA(seeing towards ABHIJEET): Sir wo…. mujhay aik aur letter mila tha… tou main isi kay baaray mein ABHIJEET ko batana chahta tha….

ACP: kahan hay wo letter???

DAYA: Sir wo tou….. wahan mujhay apnay room per mila tha….

ACP: VIVEK pata karo… letter kahan gaya???

VIVEK: jee Sir…

ACP: phir kya hua???

DAYA: Sir bus jub main phone mila raha tha ABHIJEET ko tou achanak do log meray kamray mei aa gayey… unhun nay DR masks pehnay huay thay…. un logun nay fire kiya… main bed say neechay gira aur phir kuch yaad nahi….

ABHIJEET: Sir ye jo bhi hay….

ACP(interrupts): khel raha hay… ABHIJEET…

DAYA: magar Sir mujhay lagta hay… wo CID say nahi balkay sirf mujh say khel raha hay…..

ABHIJEET: koi yaad hay….

DAYA(with smile): boss…. 13 saal… kis ko yaad rakkhun….

VIVEK comes with the LETTER… again same plain envelope… but this time the paper consists of lots of BLOOD drops… sprinkles…. ACP took it and then advice ABHIJEET to take DAYA in a safe place…. And order to FREDDIE to checkout those criminals caught by DAYA…. ABHIJEET took DAYA in xtra security… DAYA was so irritated but ACP and ABHIJEET both give him anger look and ABHIJEET also grab his hand in every place either he may leave the spot in irritation….

DAYA: yaar kya hay ye… tum log…

ABHIJEET: DAYA main soch raha hun…. Kahein SONALI ya PURVI mein say tou koi nahi???

DAYA: kya boss… tum bhi na…

ABHIJEET(in smile): bhae suna tou hay… ladies ka revenge buhat zabardast hota hay…

DAYA: hahahah… boss kya baat hay tumhari… bari information hay tum ko… ladies revenge kay baaray mein…. Hmmmmm… TAREEKA ko batana paray ga…

ABHIJEET: acha DAYA…. bahar bhi security hay… koi call nahi receive karna siwayey team members kay….

DAYA(interrupts with smile): aur agar kisi larki nay call ker li tou!!!

ABHIJEET: DAYA… baaz aa jaa… main itni serious baat ker raha hun aur tum… khair… bina poochay darwaza bhi nahi kholna… ok…

DAYA(bit anger): ABHI… tum ja rahay ho… arry is say tou acha hay mujhay bearue ki jail mein daal do… boss agar koi mujhay yahan say lay gaya tou…. yaar main yahan bore ho jaonga…

ABHIJEET: aaraam karo… fridge mein khanay ko sub kuch hay….

DAYA(in deep thinking): wesay boss… jo bhi ye ker raha hay na… us ka maqsad kuch aur hee hay???

ABHIJEET(standup): matlab wo tumhara dushman nahi hay…

DAYA: yaar dekho na… agar wo mujhay maarna chahta tou aaram say maar deta… gadi mein bomb laga deta…. Cynide day deta… abhi bhi us nay fire kiyey… magar right shoulder per… left per dil per maar deta… dimaagh per…. mujhay tou ye kuch aur hee lug raha hay….

ABHIJEET(convincing tone): kiya…. wo humein pareshan ker raha hay… khel raha hay….

DAYA: khel tou raha hay… magar wajah kuch aur hay…..

ABHIJEET: kiya???

DAYA: wo mujhay target bana ker panic create ker raha hay…. shayed wo humara dihaan hatana chahta hay… koi bari activity honay wali hay boss….

ABHIJEET: hmmmmm…. acha tum aaram karo… main raat ko aaonga…. Ok

DAYA: bye yaar….

ABHIJEET thinking in his whole way to bearue… he was quite convinced about DAYA's conclusion…. The UNKNOWN CULPRIT was quite intelligent and attentive too…. He called SACHIN and asked him about DAYA's residence security… SACHIN replied that nothing suspicious found there…. He moves to bearue… from where he goes to lab… ACP was there while SALUNKHY matched the 4 letters… but the result was same… the last letter only contains DAYA's finger print…. ABHIJEET tell ACP about all the chat specially DAYA's conclusion… ACP said that every team members contact to their INFORMERS and take out any CLUE about any big activity…. and he also ordered VIVEK to make a list of all big FUNCTIONS/CEREMONIES organized in coming days….

At evening… VIVEK present his list which consists of 4 big FUNCTIONS/CEREMONIES in next 2 days… all will attended by SOME BIG NAMES… ABHIJEET say…

ABHIJEET(bit irritate): mujhay samajh mein nahi aata aakhir baray logun ko itni PARTIES attened karnay ka itna shauq kyun hota hay… musibat mein humari jaan aa jati hay… ab kis kis ko security dein… (he saw towards ACP and say) Sir main DAYA say bhi kehta hun kay wo bhi apnay INFORMERS ko contact karay…

ACP: haan ABHIJEET…. DAYA say bhi baat karo… shayed kuch hath lug jayey….

ACP: FREDDIE us list ka kya hua???

FREDDIE: Sir list tou buhat lambi hay…. magar specifically 890 log hain… magar Sir un mein aadhy tou jail mein hain… aur baaqi ooper… ab un ka koi rishtadaar ho sakta hay… magar is ka pata chalana zara mushkil hay…..

ACP(himself): hmmmm…. Kaun ho sakta hay ye!!!

ABHIJEET call at DAYA's cell… but DAYA was not pick it up… ABHIJEET was bit tense… he calls to those security guards who were there but no one pick the call… he told everything to ACP and rushedly CID team move to DAYA's safe place… both of the guards found in unconscious state… while the door was locked… ABHIJEET call out DAYA name but no one opened the door so FREDDIE and SACHIN break the door… they entered… but DAYA was not there… the rooms looks awful coz blood…. things on floor…. everything shuffled from its place… ABHIJEET sat unhesitatly…. His ears got DAYA's voice….

"ABHI… tum ja rahay ho… arry is say tou acha hay mujhay bearue ki jail mein daal do… boss agar koi mujhay yahan say lay gaya tou…. yaar main yahan bore ho jaonga…"

Everyone comes in terriable state … at the same time one of ABHIJEET informer called him and told him that there should be a big activity in BLIND SCHOOL INAUGRAL CEREMONY by HOME MINISTER at ANDHERI side…. All CID teams really feel themselves helpless… DAYA was missing… all are feeling odd… ACP now took decision… he ordered…

ACP: FREDDIE tum aur VIVEK DAYA ka pata lagany ki koshish karo….…. Hum is HOME MINISTER walay case ko dekhtay hain… magar hum interconnected rahein gay… aik doosray say… ok… ABHIJEET chalo…

ABHIJEET did not move from his place… he saw ACP in shock… ACP knew his reaction… come near… and say…

ACP: ABHIJEET usay kuch nahi hoga… mera yaqeen karo… DAYA zarur jald wapus aayeyga… main jaanta hun…

ABHIJEET(in sad voice): Sir main DAYA ko dhoonta hun… aap FREDDIE aur VIVEK ko lay jaien…

ACP: nahi ABHIJEET mujhay is waqt tumhari zarurat hay… itnay saaray logun ki zindagi ka mamla hay… dekho humaray liyey pehlay logun ki jaanun ki hifazut hay… phir humaray rishtay… tum pareshan mut ho… DAYA hum sub ko bhi buhat pyara hay… wo saheh salamat hoga… jahan bhi hoga… na hee wo itna kamzoor hay aur na hum….

After that ACP signals FREDDIE and VIVEK to move on their work… while he moves with rest of the team… ABHIJEET still not convinced but does not argue more…. He took DAYA's cell which was there at the floor….

He opens his eyes…. saw a dirty floor infront of his eyes… he moves his eyeball… three man standing on his right side and two on his left…. but looking upside down… WHY???... he try to touch anything but he himself swing around with tied hands… now his mind understand that he is hanging upside down with a rope… initially he feels anger that who the hell are those culprits who hanged him like this… but after a while he smiles remembering something…. one of the man saw him on conscious state so hit a rod on his head and he again go to sleep….

Here the HOME MINISTER personal security… the POLICE security and now the CID security…. HOME MINISTER son give orders and cancel them… he is unnecessarily putting xtra tension… ABHIJEET was just calm himself forcefully… he knew that if DAYA was with him… he just burst out his anger…. ACP saw him… his panic and signals SACHIN to take out him from the scenario….

ABHIJEET: dil chaha raha hay kay is RAJ (HOME MINISTER son) ko do jhanper maar dun… najany kya samjah raha hay… jesay humein kuch aata jata hee nahi hay…. DAYA hota na yahan tou abhi isay sabaq sikha deta….

SACHIN(calm him): Sir DAYA Sir mil jayeingay…. VIVEK aur FREDDIE kaam per lagay huay hain na… main VIVEK say pata karta hun….

He calls to VIVEK but VIVEK reply him in NEGITIVE… ABHIJEET grab SACHIN phone and talk to VIVEK…

ABHIJEET: VIVEK mujhay her lamhay ki report dena… jo bhi khabar milay DAYA kay baaray mein… main nay apnay INFORMERS ko bhi DAYA ko dhoondnay per laga diya hay… theek hay… acha chalo bye…

HOME MINISTER CONVAYEY move with high security… ABHIJEET move with ACP and his eyeball move here and there in search of any unusual… they reached at their destination… RAMANANTH BLIND SCHOOL… all security checked the whole place before HOME MINISTER entry again…. All security people mingle with the guest…. When the HOST invited the HOME MINISTER to come on stage and give his precious words… he takes step in stairs… one… two… three… four… in his every step… ACP heart beat miss beat by beat… everything looking normal… but now ABHIJEET feel a strong activity in his mind… his body became more stiffed… his eyes movement was bit fast… his senses was much alert… he saw ACP and at the moment a masked guy come to the stage from the back stage and put a GUN on HOME MINSTER head…. There must be a chaos created… The guest and specially the BLIND kid hurridly move inside the place… running… screaming… the culprit do not do anything except hold HOME MINISTER on gun point… he does not speaks but his eyes speaks… his eyes challenges ABHIJEET… then ACP… ABHIJEET saw on ACP side… the culprit eye move there and in micro second ABHIJEET try to fire on culprit hand but RAJ scream and jump to snatch ABHIJEET gun changes the situation…. Now the culprit in anger start firing here and there but fortunately no one hurted with that… culprit took HOME MINISTER step by step from the tent…. When he moves beside of ABHIJEET… ABHIJEET intentionally pushed RAJ (who was still there after ABHIJEET snatch gun incident)… due to this act the culprit grip was lose by bit and the HOME MINISTER rushed to his left side…. The culprit runs with open fire on upstairs…. ABHIJEET saw him… his eyes again speaks… he puts his gun on his own head… ABHIJEET and everyone tried that he does not did that act… the culprit eyes smiles… ABHIJEET eyes changes his tone… mind click… DAYA…. culprit eyes smiles changes its shades into laugh at… ABHIJEET eyes mingles with the expressions of fear…. scare… pain…. anger…. suddenly his mind strikes and his heart miss a beat with the voice of fire… and the culprit head out of its shape…. everyone comes near… ABHIJEET move back without any intention… his eyes still focused on culprit head out face… and his mind jus hammering… HOW COULD BRING BACK DAYA NOW!!!

After wrap up all the evidence about case… CID team be back at bearue…. Everyone was gloomy… they all ask themselves how they bring back DAYA now…. ABHIJEET mental state was very bad…. He is bit angry with ACP as well coz in his view point ACP prefare HOME MINISTER case upon DAYA…. although HOME MINSTER case was looked by any security forces…. He unintentionally dail DAYA's cell number….

"DAYA……. main ABHI…."

Voice of ABHIJEET comes from DAYA's cell as ABHIJEET ring tone…. ABHIJEET eyes get swells… he was lose his control on himself now… he starts crying… ACP comes near but ABHIJEET try to leave the place… at that moment… 2 security guards come in CID bearue…. They looked very scared… even they did not talk normally thatswhy VIVEK gave them glass of water and sat them as well…

ACP: aaram say paani piyo…. Kiya hua hay??? tum log itna daray huay kyun ho??? Bolo… dekho ghabrao nahi… haan…

GUARDS(scared tone): sahib wahan aik laash hay…

ACP(in shock): kahan???

GUARDS: sahib hum log KAMAL INDUSTRIES mein SECURITY GUARDS hain…. Wahan per aik haftay say UNION ka strike chal raha hay… kal raat un ka strike kahtam ho gaya tou hum logun ko MALIK nay phone kiya kay ja ker factory khool do… (after pause) hum log subah factory kholnay aaya tou dekha kay …. Sahib wahak ek laash jhool rahi hay… hum tou bus dar say bhaag ker idhar aa gaya…

ACP: acha chalo… dekhao humein wo laash….

All move in that direction… ABHIJEET also move with them… he is still wipes his tears which come on his eyes in intervals… when they reached and enter inside…. All CID team shocked…. Stuuned…. They saw their dear member swinging with the rope…. ABHIJEET unhesitately call….

ABHIJEET: DAYAAAAAAAAAAAA……

His eyes never believe on this scene even his mind break down all his intentions… voice's and picture shuffled and mixed in each other….

"acha na…. aainda aisa hua tou…. ulta latka dena mujhay…. Bus… the culprit laughing at eyes…. tears…. Scream… running…."

ACP also shuffled…. VIVEK and FREDDIE place down the body at floor with crying shivering hands……. ACP fingers tingling before touching DAYA's nerve… but after touched it… he release a relax sound….

ACP: DAYA zinda hay… VIVEK… FREDDIE… uthao DAYA ko… foran hospital chalo…. SACHIN is jagah ko filhaal seal ker do… hum baad mein dekhein gay…

VIVEK and FREDDIE grab the body and place it on JEEP and rushed towards the hospital… KAJAL call to the hospital for emergency prepration…. ACP come… touched ABHIJEET shoulder… but ABHIJEET still focused his eyes on that place where they found DAYA hanged…. He was totally absent mind… ACP just grabs his hand and take him without any word… he knew that ABHIJEET did not understand anything right now either he will see or meet with DAYA himself… ABHIJEET tears falling even he does not wipe them… SACHIN was driving so they will be there on time…. DAYA was taken inside the OPERATION THEATRE… VIVEK and FREDDIE pray with the GOD… ACP sat ABHIJEET on banch and sit next to him… SALUNKHY will be there and also stand near to ACP… ABHIJEET tears… FREDDIE crying… VIVEK prayers… SACHIN and KAJAL tensions…. After 2 hours of xtreme pain… DR came out with good news…

DR: Sir he is now out of danger… buhat zyada maara tou nahi gaya hay… magar behosh buhat kiya gaya hay… sar per kafi gehray choutun kay nishaan hain… hum un ko kuch der baad room mein shift ker dein gay… wesay your officer is very brave…. His will power still working… jo buhat acha hay… now be relax…

After shifting DAYA back on conscious state… DR allow them to meet him but with care….

DR: Sir aap log un say mil lein… magar zyada baatein nahi karyey ga…. Aur (saw ABHIJEET) in ko mut lay ker jayein…

ACP: kyun!!!

DR: Sir patient apnay relatives ko is tarah rootay huay dekhta hay tou pareshan ho jata hay… aap in ko abhi mat apnay officer say milwayein… jub ye kuch relax ho jayein tou milwa dijyey ga…

ACP: DR isay nahi lay jaonga tou ander wala mar jayey ga aur isay bahar rakkho ga tou bahar wala…

DR: kiya matlab…

SALUNKHY(with smile): kya ACP tum bhi…. its ok DR… hum sanbhal lein gay…. You don't worry….

DR: as you like… batana mera kaam tha… ok….

ACP come near to ABHIJEET… grab his hand and take him inside…. He points his attention towards DAYA… ABHIJEET saw DAYA… his breathing… his oxygen masks… and specially his open eyes… where the color of recognition presents… he comes near… grab his hand… touched his cold fingers on his eyes and then realize what he is seeing is REAL…. All smiles a bit… DAYA ask to ACP through his eyes but ACP eyes told him to be patient…. All comes on normal mode… DAYA was still in hospital… ABHIJEET try to compose but its still difficult for him coz when he saw DAYA, he remember that awful scene of hanging DAYA with the rope…. On next day… he be with DAYA… but his eyes…. DAYA say…

DAYA: arry ABHI… tum ro rahay ho… acha acha… aur ro… wesay bhi TAREEKA kehti hay tum rotay huay buhat pyaray lagtay ho….

ABHIJEET stunned… DAYA wipes his tears… while FREDDIE was in shock state….

FREDDIE(shocking tone): sach mein DAYA Sir….

DAYA(naughty voice): tou aur kiya FREDDIE…. main tou khud hairaan reh gaya tha jub us nay mujh say ye baat ki thi… (he smiles) mujhay tou thori KHISKI hui lagti hay…

ABHIJEET knew that DAYA do this just to realax him and all and release him from that tense stage….

VIVEK(in smile): wesay DAYA Sir aap ko kesay pata chala kay DR.TAREEKA ko ABHIJEET Sir rootay huay achay lagatay hain…

FREDDIE(in anger): abhi tou bataya hay DAYA Sir nay…. tujhay sunai nahi deta VIVEK…. DR.TAREEKA nay khud DAYA Sir ko bataya hay….

DAYA: haan haan FREDDIE… ye jub bhi un say mil ker aata hay… rooni surat lay ker aata hay… dekh liya hoga kisi din bechari nay…

Everyone smiling including ABHIJEET… he feels happy after seeing DAYA… he enjoys his jokes… ACP enters….

ACP: shuker hay DAYA…. ABHIJEET kay chehray per hansi tou aaii….

ABHIJEET: Sir ye jo aa gaya hay… meri ROOH….

DAYA unexpectedly laugh a lot…. While ACP smiles as well….

DAYA(whisper): soch lo ABHI… tumhari ROOH tum say itni bari hay….. hahaha

ABHIJEET try to grab his neck but DAYA ducked his neck like a tortoise…. At that moment TAREEKA entered to meet DAYA…. FREDDIE now does not stop himself to ask…

FREDDIE: Dr. TAREEKA… kya sach mein aap ko ABHIJEET Sir…

ABHIJEET shaked DAYA…. DAYA smiles… his eyes reflect a naughty light…. ABHIJEET eyes in anger…

ABHIJEET: abay DAYA… rok usay……

DAYA(whisper with smile): pochnay do boss… poochnay say GIYAAN barhta hay….

ABHIJEET grab his wrist hardly… DAYA smiles… and now after watching ABHIJEET face call FREDDIE in hurry…..

DAYA: FREDDIE zara jaldi say ja ker meray liyey ORANGE JUICE tou lay aao… jaldi…

FREDDIE: abhi laata hun DAYA Sir…. Dr.TAREEKA aap jayeyga nahi… mujhay aap say ek zaruri baat pochni hay….

TAREEKA: acha FREDDIE…

After FREDDIE left…. She asks…

TAREEKA: kesay ho DAYA… aur ye FREDDIE ko mujh say kya zaruri baat karni hay???

DAYA: nahi… wo bus aisay hee… aap sunayey…. Kitnay aansoo jama kiyey… ABHIJEET kay!!!

TAREEKA(smiles): buhat saaray… wesay DAYA tum itna move mut karo… aur letay raho… tumhari head injury kafi khatarnaak hay…

ABHIJEET: main bhi isay yehi keh raha tha… magar ye maanay tab na…..

After a week DAYA released from the hospital… but his head injury pushed him to be at home and take rest…. At night when ABHIJEET is with him… they talked about the whole incident….

ABHIJEET: DAYA… wo log tum ko lay kesay gayey….

DAYA: boss… unhun nay enter hotay sath hee CHOLOROFORM ka spray ker diya…. magar boss… mujhay abhi tak samjh nahi aayii… kay us nay mujhay maara kyun nahi….

ABHIJEET: arry tumhein kiya… us nay tou kisi ko bhi nahi maara… HOME MINISTER us kay hath mein tha… yaar GUN ka BUTT hee maar deta… jub main nay RAJ ko us per phainka tou us nay RAJ per bhi fire nahi kiya… yahan tak kay open fire kartay huay bhi kisi ki jaan nahi li…. Bus us ki wo aankhein… yaqeen karo DAYA abhi bhi main us ki wo aankhein yaad karta hun na… tou khauff mehsus hota hay…. wo aankhein sub kuch mujh say keh rahi theen…. Tum nay saheh kaha tha kay wo tum ko target bana ker hum say khel raha hay…..

DAYA: us ka koi aur saathi pakra gaya???

ABHIJEET: nahi yaar… tum ko un kay chehray yaad nahi… jahan per tum ko latka ker rakkha gaya tha… wahan say bhi kuch nahi mila… siwayey ek IRON ROD kay jis per sirf tumhara blood sample hay… koi finger prints nahi… aur baaqi jo us bacchy jo tumhari gadi kay saamnay aaya tha aur jo larka jis nay tum ko gadi di thi… koi kaam na aa sakay….

DAYA: mujhay andaza tha….. wesay us aadmi ki IDENTITY KIT tou banwa lena tha…

ABHIJEET: arry hum nay usay dekha hee kahan tha… mask pehna hua tha us nay aur jub apnay sar per goli maari tou saara chehra hee kharab ho gaya…. Kaprun say bhi kuch nahi mila… GUN local hay aur aaram say mil jaati hay market mein… bus…

DAYA: wesay wo itni security mein ghusa kesay tha???

ABHIJEET: arry school kay watchman ko us nay kaha kay us ka baccha yahan parhta hay… watchman nay kaha card dekhao… tou us nay kaha card tou nahi hay… haan bacchy ko bula lao wo pehchan lay ga… bus watchman ander bacchy ko bulanay gaya aur wo ander aa gaya… koi common sa naam bata diya bacchy ka… ab watchman bhi ghalat nahi hay… kisi parent ko wo kesay rokta… usay hee baad mein bhugatna parta…

DAYA: hmmmm…. matlab case khatam…

ABHIJEET: haan… filhaal tou… wesay DAYA… jub say main aaya hun… tum kuch likh rahay ho… kya likh rahay ho???

DAYA: love letter!!!

ABHIJEET(questioning ): kisay???

DAYA(in smile): bus hay koi !!!

ABHIJEET(relax tone): hmmmm…. Pata tou kahir main chala hee lunga us ka… arry DAYA tum nay wo ring tone meri voice mein kahan say li….

DAYA: YOU TUBE say download ki hay… (bit rash)sub bata dun kiya….

ABHIJEET picks his cell and dail his own number from DAYA's cell…..

"DAYA jee aap smile kiya kijyey… aap ki smile buhat achi hay"

DAYA shocked… bit embarrass after hearing this…. He saw to ABHIJEET….

ABHIJEET(wink him): main nay bhi ye YOU TUBE say download ki hay….

Both laugh at the same time….

On next day…. ACP gets a letter…. He opened it and read it….. smile is there on his lips…

ABHIJEET: Sir kis ka letter hay??? aap kay kisi friend ka (think girl friend ka)???

ACP: ABHIJEET… DAYA nay application bheji hay…

ABHIJEET(strangely): DAYA nay… kis liyey Sir???

ACP(with smile): us ka kehna hay kay tumhari SALARY half ker dii jayey aur baqi half usay day dii jayey….

ABHIJEET: hain…… kyun???

ACP: kyunki usay tumharay aansoo ponchnay kay liyey buhat saaray RUMAAL (handker chief) khareednay hain….

Everyone start laughing…….. ABHIJEET remember DAYA naughty tone and include his shy smile with his team too…


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SAFE PASSAGE

Same day for CID bearue… DAYA and ABHIJEET talked about PARESH case… while VIVEK and FREDDIE doing some work in their respective PC… although KAJAL and SACHIN go for investigation purpose… suddenly DAYA's phone rings… he saw the caller identity and pick it up…

DAYA: haan RAHUL… bolo…

DAYA: RAHUL tum itnay pareshan kyun ho??? acha chalo main aata hun… acha sham mein miltay hain… ok… main aa jaon ga… bye..

ABHIJEET: kiya hua DAYA???

DAYA: RAHUL ka phone tha… buhat pareshan lug raha tha… sham ko bulaya hay… keh raha tha koi buhat zaruri baat karni hay….

ABHIJEET: acha… chalo dekhtay hain….

All team got busy in their schedules… DAYA at evening leave the bearue….

At night….

Someone rings ABHIJEET house door bell… he saw the clock… its 11:45 pm… he thought…

ABHIJEET(with himself): is waqt kaun ho sakta hay???

He opened the door and found DAYA… DAYA was looking very worried… he gives space him to enter…

ABHIJEET: DAYA tum is waqt… sub theek hay na….

DAYA sat on sofa and ask about anything for drink in sign language… ABHIJEET gives him a TIN and sit infront of him and ask…

ABHIJEET: bata na…. kya RAHUL … DAYA…

DAYA(taking sip): boss… bari gadbad ho gayii hay… RAHUL ka SERVICE REVOLVER kisi nay ura liya hay…

ABHIJEET(shock): kiya!!!

DAYA: boss… ek favour karogay…

ABHIJEET(in anger): DAYA maar khayeyga mujh say…

DAYA: yaar ACP Sir say baat karo kay wo is case ko thora delay karwa dein…. RAHUL per SERVICE REVOLVER khoonay ka ilzaam hay… tum baat karo un say… RAHUL buhat zyada pareshan hay….

ABHIJEET: kal baat kartay hain… dono chal ker…. tum nay BANDAGE karwayii apnay sar kii???

DAYA(careless tone): yaar karwa lunga na….

ABHIJEET: DAYA… itni laparwahi achi nahi… pata hay na HEAD INJURY kitni dangerous hoti hay…

DAYA: acha acha… kal chala jaonga….

ABHJEET: tum aaj yahein ruk jao…. Itni late night jaany ka kya faida…

DAYA(relaxed and close his eyes): haan boss…. main bhi soch raha hun kay main yahein shift ho jata hun… PARESH kay case ka kya hua….

ABHIJEET: automatic pISTOL say goli chali hay… shell mil gaya hay…. tum nay khana khaya???

DAYA: nahi….

ABHIJEET: main lay ker aata hun….

But when he back with meal… DAYA was in deep sleep… ABHIJEET covered him in blanket… and move to his room….

On next morning… both came at bearue and talk to ACP about the whole situation….

ACP: acha DAYA… kyunki main RAHUL ko khud bhi jaanta hun… is liyey main case delay karwa deta hun… magar koshish karo jaldi ye sub wrap ho jayey…. Ok…

DAYA: yes Sir…. Thank you so much… main abhi RAHUL ko batata hun….

He moves outside the ACP cabin… ABHIJEET after his exit… discuss something to ACP…

ABHIJEET(in low voice): Sir aap DAYA ko thora daant dein…

ACP(strangely): hain…. Kyun??? aur ye tum keh rahay ho ABHIJEET!!!

ABHIJEET(bit smile): Sir wo apni HEAD INJURY ko bilkul serious nahi lay raha hay…. us nay kal say BANDAGE bhi nahi karwaii hay…. aur driving bhi ker raha hay… meri baat tou sunta hee nahi hay bilkul…

ACP: tum fiker mut karo… abhi daanta hun usay… (smily tone) wesay ABHIJEET do char jhanper bhi laga dun…. agar tum kaho tou…

ABHIJEET(with smile): Sir aap bhi na….

DAYA(came): Sir RAHUL buhat thanx keh raha tha aap ko….

ACP: DAYA ek masla ho raha hay… wo DSP PANDAY hain na…. un ka kehna hay kay jub tak DAYA apnay sar ki BANDAGE nahi karwayey ga aur aaram nahi karay ga… wo case delay nahi karein gay…

DAYA(saw ABHIJEET): Sir… main aaj karwa lunga…

ACP: DAYA… aaj nahi… balkay abhi…. and its my order….

DAYA: Sir….

He took ABHIJEET with him… ABHIJEET on driving seat and DAYA sat on passenger one….

DAYA: tum nay ACP Sir say meri shikayet ki thi na…

ABHIJEET: haan… tum suntay hee nahi ho kisi ki… kal TAREEKA bhi keh rahi thi …

DAYA(smiles): TAREEKA…. hmmm… jabhi tou…. main bhi kahun… kya ho gaya hay aaj… Mr. ROMEO ko…

ABHIJEET: DAYA… pit jayey ga tu mujh say ab…

They entered in DR cabin and in the whole process of bandage… DR continuously gave them a lecture of postal care….

DR: dekhein aap log tou parhay likhay hain… pata hay na HEAD INJURY kitni nazuk hoti hay… khud care kartay nahi hain aur ilzaam DR per laga dein gay… kay treatment achi nahi dii…. aap ko khud care karni chahyey…. Medicine lay rahay hain aap ya wo bhi chor dii hay….

DAYA: jee wo…

DR: yani chor dii hay…(he turned towards ABHIJEET) ab batayey main aap kay BHAI ka kya karun…

ABHIJEET(whisper): gala daba dein….

DAYA give him an anger look…

DR: khair ab ye aap ki responsibility hay kay aap in ko dawa tou khila dein aur haan bandage aik haftay regular change karwani hay… no irregularity…. theek hay… aur plz officer… driving na karein… head buhat shake hota hay driving mein… aaraam karein… buhat tension na lein… aap hee ko nuqsaan hoga…. aur kisi ka kuch nahi jayeyga… ok…

After exit from the hospital…

DAYA: mil gayii khushi… bus daant parwao mujhay her kisi say….

ABHIJEET(with smile): achi daant ko AMRIT samajh ker pii jana chahyey… samjahy… Mr.HIMALIYA…

At afternoon… DAYA move with VIVEK for further investigation process about PARESH case… ABHIJEET ordered VIVEK to drive the quallis…. at QUALLIS...

DAYA: VIVEK chabi!!!

VIVEK: magar Sir ABHIJEET Sir nay mujhay gadi chalanay ko kaha hay….

DAYA(in anger voice): is waqt tumhara senior kaun hay VIVEK…

VIVEK(in faint voice): Sir aap…

DAYA: good…. Tou follow my orders….

He took the keys and signals VIVEK to sit beside him…. while reversing the quallis….

DAYA: gadi kaun chala raha hay VIVEK???

VIVEK: Sir main…..

DAYA(in smile): tum jaldi seekh letay ho VIVEK….

Suddenly he gets the call of ABHIJEET… who called him to be at bearue as early as possible….

DAYA: boss… kya hua???

ABHIJEET: abay wo DIG HITLER aaya hua hay bearue mein….

DAYA: hain… kyun???

ABHIJEET: pata nahi… ACP Sir kay cabin mein hay… mujhay tou buhat gadbad lug rahi hay DAYA…. tum foran aa jao…

DAYA: ok… main abhi VIVEK ko lay ker aata hun…

ABHIJEET(in anger): DAYA tum gadi chala rahay ho???

DAYA: nahi wo tou….

ABHIJEET dropped the call… DAYA move as fast as he can towards bearue…. Here all team were really worried… they talk though their expressions…. Quite furious as well….

FREDDIE(in low volume): Sir ye yahan kyun aa gayey hain??? Kahein ACP Sir ko hatanay ka koi plan tou nahi hay na???

ABHIJEET(in anger): FREDDIE….. koi achi baat na aati ho tou munh band rakkho… samjhy….

Suddenly the ACP and DIG SHAMSHER came out from ACP's cabin… DIG face was bright while ACP looks very gloomy….

DIG SHAMSHER: tou ACP tum apnay honahaar officers ko ye khushkhabri khud do gay ya main thori madad ker dun tumhari???

Everyone looking at ACP…. ACP have two sealed letters… he comes forward and give one letter to ABHIJEET and another to DAYA….….

ABHIJEET(after taking): ye kya hay Sir???

FREDDIE: Sir batayey na… mujh say itna suspence bardasht nahi ho raha hay…

DIG SHAMSHER(in smily tone): bhae Ins FREDRICKS tumharay ACP ko is khaber say dhakka hee itna laga hay… kay wo kya bolein gay… chalo main hee tumhara suspence khatam ker deta hun…(pointing towards DAYA n ABHIJEET) CID team kay ladlay officers DAYA aur ABHIJEET ka TRANSFER ho gaya hay….

EVERYONE(shocked): kiya!!!

DIG SHAMSHER(again in that smily way): tou is mein itna hairan honay wali kya baat hay… ye tou CID mein hota rehta hay… aik aata aur aik jaata rehta hay…

ACP: Sir main khud in ko bata dunga… aap plz ab jayey….

DIG SHAMSHER: arry ACP tum tou naraz hee ho gayey… chalo main chala jata hun… magar parsun tumharay in officers ko nayii jagah per join karna hay… yaad rakhna…

After that DIG SHAMSHER leave… while DAYA came out from shock mode….

DAYA: Sir kiya ye sach hay???

ACP(in sad voice): haan DAYA…. na sirf tum dono kay TRANSFER ORDERS hain… balkay tum dono ki posting bhi alug alug jagah hui hay….

VIVEK: kiya… matlab Sir…. ABHIJEET aur DAYA Sir dono ko alug shehrun mein post kiya gaya hay…

ACP: haan VIVEK… ABHIJEET ko DELHI HEAD QUARTERS mein… aur DAYA ko BANGLORE mein… ye sirf DIG ki shararat hay aur kuch nahi…

ABHIJEET and DAYA both are stunned… they did not understand what to say or what to do…. Its unexpected not only for them but for all CID team….

ACP: main abhi DCP say baat karta hun… ABHIJEET DAYA tum log pareshan na ho… sub theek ho jayeyga… abhi PARESH kay case per dihaan do… ok…

All left to their tasks…. While at evening… again DIG SHAMSHER present when all team at bearue…

DIG SHAMSHER: ACP buhat shaq hay tum ko ooper tak jaany ka… magar main nay bhi koi kaccha kaam nahi kiya hay… samjhay….

ACP: Sir main jitna bardasht ker raha hun… aap utna hee….

DIG SHAMSHER: kiya… bardasht tou ab tum ko karna paray ga…. Samjahy… ab dekho is DIG aur is say panga leenay kay anjaam ko… tum sirf apnay aik officer kay TRANSFER ORDER rukwa saktay ho… choice tumhari hay…. ABHIJEET ya DAYA…. soch lo…. Koi aik… aur meri maanu tou…..

ACP(in irritation): Sir wo aik main khud kyun na ho jaon… aap ko bhi relaxment mil jayey ga….

DIG SHAMSHER(laugh): arry ACP… itni humdardi…. Khair soch lo… bus aaj raat hay tumharay pass…. ABHIJEET ya DAYA… faisla tumharay haatun mein hay… (pointing to ABHIJEET and DAYA) in dono ka…

After that he left… and now ACP really comes in trouble… he saw both of them… and move outside…

At night ABHIJEET went in ACP house… he try to convince ACP that he should take back the order for DAYA… he is quite sad… but say…

ABHIJEET(in sad and wet tone): Sir aap DAYA ko jaantay hee hain… wo buhat attach hay… yahan say… sub say… aap say… wo sub say duur nahi reh payeyga… pareshan ho jayeyga… (campose himself) main tou adjust ker hee lunga… thori takleef hogi… magar sub theek ho jayeyga… aap DAYA ko rok lein Sir… please … ye meri request hay….

After he exit… DAYA came…

DAYA: Sir aap ko koi zarurat nahi hay… ABHIJEET ki baat per gour karnay ki… aap bus us kay ORDER rukwa dein… aap tou jaantay hain na… wo kitna jazbati hay… aur jub gussay mein hota hay… tou usay control karna… aap yahan hongay… tou wo theek rahay ga… aur Sir phir wo sub say attach bhi hay… TAREEKA say us ki relation sub hee jaantay hain… aap please…

Suddenly a simple tear fall from his eye and stop as drop at ACP table…. DAYA left atonce… for ACP this tear is very valuable… because this shows and understand him that its quite impossible for him as well for CID to replace any of them… he again try his approach… but the result was same…. He does not know what he will do…. Both are very dear to him… if CID is a body…. ABHIJEET is its brain and DAYA is its heart… and ACP himself is its soul… how could he displace one of the major organs… the whole will break down…. At last he calls to SALUNKHY and discuss with him about the whole situation…

SALUNKHY: ACP ye tou buhat bari mushkil hay… yaar tum khud dono ki understanding aur attachment jaantay ho… aik ko bhi shuffle ker do gay na… doosra khud ba khud disorder ho jayeyga… aik sath honay mein hee un ki taqat hay… aur wo taqat CID ki taqat hay…

ACP: SALUNKHY… mujhay khud samajh nahi aa raha kay main kya karun… (in anger) ye DIG bhi na… jub bhi aata hay… koi na koi tamasha khara ker deta hay….

SALUNKHY: yaar ab kya karo gay….

ACP: dekho… abhi phir DCP say baat ki hay… magar un ka kehna hay kay ab jo ORDER aayein gay… un ko her haal mein follow he karna paray ga…. Kal subah pata chalay ga… kay kya ORDERS aayein gay….

SALUNKHY: chalo… itna paresha nahi ho… sub theek hee hoga….

After that ACP go to sleep… but he awake most of the night time… on next morning… he gets DCP call and after hearing his ORDER…. He was shattered…. He came to bearue… where all are waiting for him including SALUNKHY and TAREEKA…. He came forward at ABHIJEET and say…

ACP(sad tone): ABHIJEET tumhein jana hoga!!!

Everyone shocked… FREDDIE starts crying… TAREEKA have tears in her eyes… while DAYA just move outside…. ABHIJEET strongly composed himself…. He bit knew… his senses gave him that signal… coz DIG SHAMSHER was his open enemy… he has few loops of sympathy to DAYA but not with ABHIJEET because DIG SHAMSHER was always jealous with ABHIJEET intelligence…. He consoles everyone and also advice every person to take care of DAYA…. he stops against TAREEKA…. Jus saw her and say…

ABHIJEET: TAREEKA please be brave…. (move to SALUNKHY) chalein SALUNKHY sahib ab aap ko lab mein aa ker koi tang nahi karayga… SALUNKHY place his hand and compose himself…. he takes step to ACP and say…

ABHIJEET: Sir please… aap DAYA ka khayal rakhyeyga… aur apna bhi….

He hugged FREDDIE and VIVEK and console them… and move outside to meet with DAYA… he knew DAYA was really in bad state of mind but its ABHIJEET responsibility to console him forcefully…

ABHIJEET: DAYA kya bacchun ki tarah behave ker rahay ho… yaar aisa hota rehta hay… ye sub tou humari job ka hissa hay… DAYA…. chal yaar… tu tou buhat strong hay na…

DAYA hugged him… he is crying… his is not feeling good…. His every movement shows his tenshion… worry… anger…. Pain… everything….

DAYA: ABHI… mut ja… main kesay rahunga… kesay kaam karunga….tumharay bina CID kesay chalay gi???

ABHIJEET: DAYA jana tou paray ga…. kum az kum tum tou mujhay itna kamzor mut karo….

DAYA: bus… main tum ko janay nahi dunga… boss…

ABHIJEET: no bakwass… ab chalo… mujhay ghar ja ker packing bhi karni hay….

DAYA dropped him in his house… ABHIJEET offered him to come and help him in his packing… but DAYA was not interested for that… he moves…. ABHIJEET instantly said…

ABHIJEET: seedhay ghar jana… aur DAYA… koi ulti seedhi harkut mut karna… plz… aur kal mujhay AIRPORT lay ker jana hay… subah ki flight hay….

DAYA : main nahi aaonga….

He moves in hurry… he spent his night at sea side… he feels lonely… remember all special memories… here ABHIJEET also feels the same… he completed his packing… suddenly he gets TAREEKA call…

ABHIJEET: TAREEKA… soi nahi tum???

TAREEKA: neend hee nahi aa rahi… ABHIJEET kya kuch nahi ho sakta…

ABHIJEET: tumhara kya khayal hay… kuch ho sakta tou ACP sahib mujhay janay detay… mujhay yaad karogi…

TAREEKA(in low voice): haan… tum apna khayal rakhna… aur mujhay phone bhi kartay rehan… bhool nahi jana mujhay…

ABHIJEET: mera dil mujhay bhoolnay day ga tab na…. tum bhi apna khayal rakhna… ok…. Kal aao gi mujhay AIRPORT chornay…

TAREEKA: haan….

ABHIJEET: bye….

TAREEKA: bye ABHIJEET….

On next morning… when he moves outside from his house… he becomes shocked to see DAYA sitting on his door step… after seeing him… DAYA stand up…. Put his bags on his jeep…. VIVEK was there at his jeep…

ABHIJEET: chalo….

DAYA: main nahi jaonga ABHI…

ABHIJEET: kya hay DAYA… kyun aisa ker rahy ho???????? Acha chalo tou….

DAYA: nahi… main tum ko apnay say duur jaatay huay nahi dekh sakta…. Tum apna buhat khayal rakhna… aur bus… jao…

ABHIJEET come near… grab his hand… and say…

ABHIJEET: DAYA ek promise karay ga??

DAYA move his head in YES…. Few tears comes from his eyes…

ABHIJEET: job nahi chorna…. Koi fuzul harkut nahi karna… yaar DELHI kaunsa duur hay… main milnay aata rahunga…. Aur plz DAYA ro nahi… plz…

DAYA hugged him… and just run away as fast as he can…. VIVEK feel sad… ABHIJEET signal him to move… at the AIRPORT… everyone was present except DAYA…. ACP says…

ACP: DAYA nahi nazar aa raha hay…

ABHIJEET: Sir wo nahi aayeyga… aur plz agar wo aa gaya tou shayed main ja bhi na sakun… aap us ka khayal rakhyey ga Sir….

ACP: ABHIJEET tum apni care karna… main poori koshish ker rah hun kay jaldi say tum ko wapus bulwa lun… pareshan mut hona… ok… I know U r one of my brave and strong officer… ok…

ABHIJEET meet one by one with everyone…. He moves… step by step… he does not see behind his back… and enter inside the lounge….

He joins at DELHI… he combines with a guy called ASHOKE… ASHOKE was not happy after ABHIJEET joins him because ABHIJEET intelligence cuts his marks… ABHIJEET still not adjust there but tried…. He talks to everyone on VOICE or CALL… everyone missing him and he misses everyone… but DAYA never talked to him… ABHIJEET was tired to call him but….. he asked about him from everyone… but no one give him any better answer… internally he feels any wrong with DAYA… but!!! At last ACP calls him…

ACP: ABHIJEET tum yahan aa jao… do din ki chutti lay ker… jaldi… kal FREDDIE aur VIVEK tum ko pick ker lein gay AIR PORT say… ok…

ABHIJEET: Sir magar hua kiya hay??? DAYA tou theek hay na???

ACP: tum aao tou!!!

ABHIJEET will be at bearue … he asked in his whole way to FREDDIE and VIVEK… but they did not give him any answer…

ABHIJEET: Sir… kya hua??? Aap nay mujhay itni emergency mein kyun bulwaya hay??? sub theek hay na??? DAYA kahan hay??

ACP(in tension): ABHIJEET… DAYA nay DIG SHAMSHER ko kidnap ker liya hay….

ABHIJEET(shocked): kiya!!!

ACP(irritate): haan ABHIJEET… aur DAYA nay apnay liyey itni bari musibat khari ker li hay… kuch samajh nahi aa raha … main kya karun…

ABHIJEET: Sir aap log kesay keh saktay hain kay DAYA nay DIG ko kidnap kiya hay??/

ACP: DAYA nay khud hum sub ko bataya hay….

ABHIJEET: abhi DAYA kahan hay???

ACP: malum nahi… us nay apna mobile bhi switch off ker liya hay…. ABHIJEET ab tum hee us ko samjha saktay ho…. hum kal akhbaar mein tumharay yahan aany ki khabar lagwa detay hain… DAYA tum say milnay zarur aayeyga…

ABHIJEET move his head in YES… he was worried about DAYA… he knew DAYA was not hyper like him so why he did that xtreme act…. He asks queries with the team… and FREDDIE dig out…

FREDDIE: ABHIJEET Sir…. DIG SHAMSHER nay yahan aa ker aap ko aur ACP Sir ko buhat bura bhala kaha tha… aur unhun nay DAYA Sir per ye bhi ilzaam lagaya tha kay aap ki yaaddasht kay jaanay mein DAYA Sir ka hath hay… DAYA Sir wesay hee aap kay jaany kay baad buhat upset thay… bus un ko gussa aa gaya aur DIG kay yahan say janay kay baad wo pehlay tou buhat royey… phir kisi ko kuch bhi kahy bina chalay gayey… aur raat ko phone ker kay kaha kay DIG ko unhun nay kidnap ker liya hay… unhun nay DIG say humari baat bhi karwaii… jub say hum sub pareshan hain… ACP Sir ko tou buhat daant bhi pari hay DCP sahab say magar unhun nay DCP ko bataya nahi hay kay DAYA Sir nay DIG ko kidnap kiya hay….

ABHIJEET: hmmmm… yani DIG nay apnay pairun per khud hee kulhaari maar di hay….

At night….

His house door bell rings… he knew the guest… so open the door…. Both hi-five and hugged each other….

ABHIJEET: kamal ker diya tum nay….

DAYA: maantay ho na… boss

ABHIJEET: kya haal hay HITLER ka ???

DAYA(with smile): arry bolti band ho gayii hay… becharay ki tou….

ABHIJEET: haan tumhari acting bhi tou shandaar hogi….

DAYA(wink him): boss… tum tou jaantay hee ho… I m a superb actor….

ABHIJEET: hmmmm… tou ab kiya karna hay… aagay???

DAYA: bus kal ka din…. Dara dhamka kay chor dein gay…. Wesay ABHI is baar tou main nay pakka soch liya tha… kay is kay sath kuch bara karna hay… humaray saamnay ACP Sir ko itna bura bhala kaha….

ABHIJEET: aur jub ACP Sir ko pata chalay ga… phir???

DAYA: arry ACP Sir ki daant bhi qabul hay… magar is SHAMSHER ki koi achi baat bhi nahi… wesay boss… thanx… warna tumhari madad kay bina main kuch nahi ker sakta tha….

ABHIJEET: DAYA tu nay promise kiya tha na kay apna khayal rakkhay ga…. haal dekha hay??? kub say bandage nahi karwai???

DAYA: ab tum aa gayey ho na… bus main ek dum saheh ho jaon ga… dekhna….

ABHIJEET: aagay kya karogay…

DAYA: pehlay tumharay ORDER cancel karwaon ga… aur phir boss… do chaar hath laga dunga… halkay say aur chor dunga….

ABHIJEET: DAYA…. no maar dhaar…. samjahy…. ACP Sir na khoon ker dein gay tumhara…

DAYA(wink in smile): tumhara!!! Ya humara….

ABHIJEET: hmmmm… aur agar ACP Sir nay kisi ko hum per nazar rakhnay ka kaha ho tou???

DAYA: FREDDIE aur VIVEK yahein aas pass ghoom rahay hain… boss….

ABHIJEET(bit anger): aur phir bhi tum aa gayey ho…. agar un logun nay bata diay tou!!!

DAYA: batayein gay tab na…. khair… bus kal last day hay….

ABHIJEET: DAYA kya HITLER bahar aa ker humein chor day ga???

DAYA: kya boss…. chor na… itnay dino baad milein hain aur tum ko usi ki fiker hay bus… meri koi parwah hee nahi hay??? adjust ho gayey ho kya!!!

ABHIJEET: pata nahi DAYA…. buhat mushkil hay… (bit anger) aur jo meray sath hay na ASHOKE…. Aik number ka duffer hay… mujhay wahan kay areas ka bhi pata nahi hay… kabhi kabhi dil karta hay sub chor ker aa jaon… ya kum az kum us HITLER ka gala hee daba dun….

DAYA: chalo abhi chaltay hain…. Gala dabany….

Both smiles… DAYA spent whole night with ABHIJEET… both feel relax… happy and peaceful… at morning… DAYA leave the place…. On next day DIG SHAMSHER released… he was not good both in state of mind and health…. For showing ACP that its only DAYA's plan… ABHIJEET meet and talk to DAYA and convinced DAYA after a long process to release DIG… now ACP takes a class of DAYA and ABHIJEET both at bearue….

ACP: DAYA tumhein malum hay… tum nay kya kiya hay???... tum kya samjahtay ho aisa ker kay tum nay koi bara kaam kiya hay…. wo SHAMSHER chup nahi bethay ga….

DAYA: magar Sir us kay pass kya sabut hay kay main nay us ko kidnap kiya tha… main aik baar bhi us kay saamnay nahi aaya… na apni aawaz ka use kiya… koi CLUE nahi hay un kay pass aur sub jaantay hain kay AAp say… ABHIJEET say aur mujh say us ki dushmani kitni purani aur gehri hay….

ABHIJEET: Sir wo DCP sahib ka phone nahi aaya???

ACP: abhi aa jayeyga… tum kya samjh rahay ho wo DIG hangama nahi karay ga….

DAYA and ABHIJEET see each other… they sent the take back order of TRANSFER of ABHIJEET directly to DCP with the SIGNATURE of DIG… ABHIJEET and DAYA waiting for that news…. Suddenly DIG comes… he looks really angry….

DIG SHAMSHER: ACP ye tum nay acha nahi kiya…. Tumharay in do officers ka anjaam buhat bura hoga… sar pakar ker ro gay tum sub…. Tum log DIG SHAMSHER ko jaantay nahi ho….

ABHIJEET(whisper): haaan kuttay ki tehri dum ko bhala kaun jaanay ga!!!

ACP(interrupts): Sir aap kay pass koi sabut hay kay aap ka apaharan meray officers nay kiya hay… agar hay tou aap shauq say court mein jayey… hum aap ko wahein milein gay… aur ab aap jayey… warna shayed ab ye kuch karein gay ya nahi… main zarur ker lunga….

DIG move with bad language…. ACP phone rings… he moves to his cabin… everyone anxiously waiting for him…. he be back after few minutes….

ACP: DIG kay SIGN kesay liyey thay???

DAYA(in low voice): blank paper per… dara dhamka ker….

ACP: hmmm… magar DAYA tumhara koi bhi kaam DCP per asar nahi ker saka… ABHIJEET kay TRANSFER ORDER wapus nahi huay hain… usay wahein per kaam karna hoga….

ABHIJEET shocked… and DAYA… he looks like totally in sane… he feels a bad pain in his head… he try to grab anything… but its not possible for him… ABHIJEET… FREDDIE grabs him and sat him on chair…. ACP watched them keenly…. Now he blows the balloon….

ACP: ABHIJEET aur DAYA…. yahan kharay ho jao….

Both stand up infront of ACP….

ACP: apnay kaan pakro… (smiles)TRANSFER ORDER wapis ho gayey hain….

ABHIJEET and DAYA feel really happy… ACP signals them to grab their ears… DAYA do this instantly while ABHIJEET…

ABHIJEET(whisper to DAYA): abay main nahi pakrun ga…. dekh saamnay say TAREEKA aa rahi hay… kitna bura impression paray ga….

DAYA unexpectidely laugh… ACP in angery voice…

ACP: kya baat hay DAYA… itni hansi kyun aa rahi hay… hansi wala kaam tou tum nay kiya nahi hay….

DAYA: nahi Sir… wo main keh raha tha kay ABHIJEET kay hissay kay kaan bhi main pakar lun…

Everyone smiles….

ACP: khair… tum dono ki saza ye hay kay tum dono teen din kay liyey suspend raho gay…

ABHIJEET(careless tone): chalay ga…

ACP: kiya!!!

BOTH: nahi Sir… kuch nahi… kuch bhi tou nahi….

Both leave the bearue…. VIVEK asked about that decision of suspending them….

VIVEK: Sir kya DCP Sir nay DAYA Sir aur ABHIJEET Sir ko suspend karnay ka order diya hay….

ACP: nahi VIVEK… magar saza deni chahyey…. lekin jis tarah ye khush khush gayey hain na…. mujhay lagta hay koi khas faida nahi hoga….

Everybody move to their work with smile… both celebrate and spent happiness and time with each other… everyone becomes happy after ABHIJEET join his position back…. ABHIJEET took DAYA to the DR… and now DR totally rejects to give treatment to DAYA… he was very angry and washed out both of them…. They listens him with real patients… on way out….

ABHIJEET: kitni bak bak karta hay ye DR….

DAYA(wink him): boss… tum kaho…. isay bhi utha na lein… zara hath saaf ho jayeyga….

Both shares a big laugh….


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Posted: 14 years ago
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i really really like ur attemptaion...both stories are nice..............
nice line abhijeet-brain, daya-heart, acp-soul......
vechara DIG😆😆😆

please write something on valentine day's special...........

its heartly request from me............
m waiting for ur valentine day's special...........

a big hug from me.................
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Edited by Shivani24 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very nice, i like one thing about ur all stories is alotttttttttt.
And, that is ur story is based on daya & Abhijeet frendshp.thier Concern,emotions and love.
Very nice story. Keep it up👏👏👏 👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#5
hey ppl....


i m really obliged to all of U ppl... who take out sum time from their skedules and read my STORIES.... thank YOU all..... i really admire
those who really give their precious FEED BACK..... specially
SHIVANI24, NEEME, NIMI697, POOJA83, RASHIDA13, MOONLIGHT5 and last but not least AANDROMEDA DII..... thanx alotttttttt....
i hope U all will give URs support and encouragement to me in future too....


thanx really.... no words to appreciate U all....
take care
byeee
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very cool stories....no words to say....beautifully written 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@gadhadada--you are really quick at writing stories...overall,a nice attempt at story writing👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I don't know what to say, u are soooo sweet!😳 all stories are well-written. u r inproving day by day. keep it up.👍🏼

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