FRIENDSHIP MARK!!! - Page 2

Nice try. But some parts confused me. I felt something like sinister plot was missing. Still all the best.

hi to all...


wowwwwwwwww.... wat a pleasent surprise....
i dont have WORDS.... how to THANK all of YOU people....
specially notepad697, dr.fahmi, aadrika01, tanniSDaya
star571, m_kal2011, nimi697, shreela, sagnika, mallikaBalu
and all those who only READ my story but did not give their
precious FEEDBACK....
i have WRITING SKILLS... i think we all have... cz we do this
from our BACHPAN.... exams.... school... college... universities...
so WRINTING is NO BIG DEAL.... but STORY WRITING.... buhat bara kaam...😉
i m really a BEGINNER in this kind of WRITING... cz i fist join any
kind of FORUM... even earlier i dont know wat is forum or blogs....
i jus open my mail account... and jus chk my meals.... ohhhhh... i
mean mails.... hehehe😉😛
so.... its a big task for me.... in WRITE A SCENE CONTEST... where my SCENE got 2ND RUNNER UP... its really boost me... to write something in DIALOUGE FORMAT..
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now... first according to my own words...
CRITICISM will entertain on prior basis....
dr.fahmi Sir, Sagnika jee (cz she does not like MAA'M)
and all others.....
ya guys... i knew my story have no STORY!!!! hahahah😆
i mean it have no PROPER case.... no DETECTION...
even no hand and foot... RIGHT....
basically few weeks back... i wanted to make a SIGGIE for DAYA Sir
BIRTHDAY CONTEST.... and for that i ask in ASK ME THREAD that could any
one have a PIC of DAYA Sir n ABHI Sir hugged each other...
obviously responce came in negitive....
that click something in my mind.... may be ABHI Sir does not like!!!
or may be DAYA Sir did not do this act earlier....
just to use this click into double click....
i wrote that story... which only highlight this point....

abot CHILDISH BEHAVIOUR.... hmmmmmmm.... 😊
yaar we all also did that CHILDISH BEHAVIOUR in last month
at DAYA KI SHADI.... hahaha.... 😆 remember all those post
all comments.... i think sometime CHIDISH BEHAVIOUR bhi chal hee
jata hay...

related to my WRITING SKILLS.... first my HINDI is really weak...
and ENGLISH too..... hehehehe....😃

but i feel... everyone like SOMETHING.... some people like
the conversation b/w DAYA n ABHI.... some like HOSPITAL
SCENE.... some like the LAST LINE and some like that AWESOME SMILE.... so after ADDING all these TINY LIKES... i feel... kuch acha ho
he gaya... MUJH say..... hAIN NA!!!!!!!👍🏼

lastly.... after reading all ur SUGGESTIONS... i have a new story which is at WIND UP stage... i dunt want to change its mood... so could u think i'll post it... i m puzzled guys...❓
plz help me....
ya i missed one name (thanks to SAGNIKA jee post) VISROM MAA'M.... i'll wait for two MASTER MIND comments... CHINNU MAA'M and VISROM MAA'M... but!!!!!!!!!!😔

again i m very THANKFUL to all people who extract some precious time from their busy skedule...
and yes if i hurt anyones intentions.... delibrately/undelibrately.... i say EXTREMELY SORRY to all of them....

tons of THANKS with profound REGARDS...

Gadhadada !!! Very nice to know that you're too interested in writing stories !!! A new addition to our writers gang !!! Well I'm yet to read your story !! Will provide detailed review then !!!
Can I give you a suggestion ?? Just add My story to your title !!! otherwise I thought it was another common topic and was skipping it !!!

Well I'll definitely read it !! and by the way do participate in story contest 3 this time !!!!

Originally posted by: gadhadada

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now... first according to my own words...
CRITICISM will entertain on prior basis....
dr.fahmi Sir, Sagnika jee (cz she does not like MAA'M)
and all others.....

🤣
better say dr. fahmi ma'm.

Originally posted by: m_kal2011

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better say dr. fahmi ma'm.

ehmm hmm...🤣🤣

What's that supposed to mean? Dr Fahmi, are you laughing at m-Kal or Gadhadada?

@visrom both of them. this is not the first time someone has addressed me as "sir"😆

Ok, thanks for the info....till now even I was not sure about you.😆

Originally posted by: visrom

Ok, thanks for the info....till now even I was not sure about you.😆

😲😲 VISROM!!!! i dont believe this.😆😆 now i tell u why i was laughing at m_kal's post. becoz she too once asked me this🤣🤣 how about editting my name "lady dr.fahmi"😆😆

Dr Fahmi.....I've had a few heart attacks here on IF. Some people have still not revealed some dark secrets on the forum. So, I don't take anything for granted now.