TRAITOR IN CID ? - By Shagnika( 25th July )

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: visrom
Missed this thread...will read now and let you know....

😃 😃

Originally posted by: sneha_fighter
Good story yaar far better than what we see in recent episodes

Thank u di... 😃

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

So at last read it. Its very refreshing one after the crap they showed to us. Far better then them. Then also you are saying loopholes are there. See this is called as dedication, passion. Why writer over their don't have this Why don't they think to improve why they don't reject their crap stories themselves.

Anyways I liked your story. I was serious all the way but when that Abhijeets death (fake on) was announced and following scenes I was laughing I don't know why but yes I was laughing.

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Aarathi R Vimal

@Aandromeda

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

hii di

forget the loopholes the story was great 🤗
and after watching this weeks" "fantastic" "episodes i really feel you are a life saver.

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raji_1000

@raji_1000

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

shggy solid hein yaar tum...kya kahani likhi hein...apani eak kahanin bhejo un creative vaalon ko...kal ka episode dekhake mera man hi ud gaya hein...aur wo AB...wo holiday ko kun nahi jaata kabhi?

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Great work Shagnika,bahut hi achcha likha tumne,very interesting,will give detailed review soon !!

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Yeah....read it and it is very good. 👏👏

As I have mentioned in your previous stories.....the narration is very clear.

Just one suggestion - you could have built up a suspense by revealing that Abhijeet is alive a bit later....Fireworks style emotional athyachar. 😆😆

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Sonia Rachel John

@awesumsonia

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

mindblowing rocking story shaggyy dii....

hatz off to u.....kya talent hai!!!!👏👏👏

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Shruti Chatterjee

@shreela

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

superb buddy,👏👏👏 jitni tariff kee jaye, woh kam hai!⭐️

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auntyno1

@auntyno1

Navigator

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Love it !Maybe there are loopholes, maybe not. But certainly there are less loopholes than many of the aired episodes. At least I did not find any.

What is the online version of "unputdownable?".

It is nice, exciting, full of twists and turns,plenty of suspense. And Oh! how nice to see freddy as a hero!

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

jeet, sunny, andromeda, bhavana, visrom, sonia, aunty_1 , shreela ....... THANK U FOR LIKING THE STORY GUYS....😃

Will try to work on the points mentioned and come up with something better next time😃

@visrom, if i would have kept the suspense abt Abhijeet being alive, then i would have got threats from people...😆😆 pehle se hi people are in a bad mood...uske upar se FIREWORKS STYLE mein emotional atyachaar...mujhe Mods yahaan se nikaal denge..permanently..😆😆😆

Kidding kidding.....😃

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