TRAITOR IN CID ? - By Shagnika( 25th July )

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

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Posted: 15 years ago

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-SNEHAL-

@-SNEHAL-

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Posted: 15 years ago

Thank you so much shagnika 👏

After such a drastic weekend in CID this story really come as savior for me.

Its really great to see freddy doing much more and never elaborated before abhi-freddy relation. We know ki how much freddy cares for abhi but its the first time we have seen how abhi cares for all his team 👍🏼

This story is really good. Thanks a lot. Atleast now i can pull myself off from depression... 🤔

Edited by snehal_7s - 15 years ago

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JP22

@JP22

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Posted: 15 years ago

ha shaggy same here...thanks for writing this story atleast we got some relif after watching this weeks episodes🤢 aur apane forums ke writers unase batter hein...

baki sab thi hein...lekin malad se puna hiway 5 minute mein....abhi sir car chala rahein the ya plain? 😆😉😆

I like ki es baar fred mein target tha...lekin abjeet ko hi kyo ...sab sako hi kyo marana chahate hein ya target banate hein.....bichara target ka maara😆😆

love the way u had dipict the scene where fredy gun niche dalakar rota hein...yaar apana Fredy bahut dil ka achha aur pyar ahein...wo kabhi bhi galat kaam nahi kar sakata

over all sab kuch achha tha...and without fornsic scene.....that's better....silent memebers dekho fornsic la ke bina bhi CID ki stories likh sakate hein...

gr8 work...looking for more stuff from u.

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neelambari

@Chiinnu

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Posted: 15 years ago

hi shagee....nice one....a thrilling and complete script it was....let me tell u some points.the restaurant scene in the begining was not necessory...it can be avoided,its not part of the story.abhijit getting suspension was not so convincing.there was no clear evidence against him.the combination scenes between abhi and fred were superb.someone can be eliminated,like sachin or kajal,so that it will make ur story simple.thanks for the story....

Edited by chinnu_manikyam - 15 years ago

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Sarker Nafiz Hossain

@droidnafiz

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Posted: 15 years ago

sry. pura nahin par paya. can anyone say, abhijeet bimar rehke bhi beureau mein kisliye aya tha?

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yasha

@CAHAT320

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Posted: 15 years ago

shagnika di this story is just mind blowing........... i think an episode should be made on it.....

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

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Posted: 15 years ago

Will read in night then comment, you know

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

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Posted: 15 years ago

@snehal thanx for ur appreciation

@jiya di, thanx for the suggestions.....😆 well, i wanted to change them last night, but just dozed off!😆

@ chinnu, i know ...the story has quite a number of loopholes... taken to be as "leap of faith"😉 ...present episodes have made me like this...😕

@Cahat thanx for liking the story dear😃

@vivek_mashru i would prefer if u could read the entire story..difficult for me to give u the answer.
@sunny, read it whenever u wish...i know😃

Thanx for liking it..whatevre it is, i know the story is kind of stupid with loopholes. Better luck next time for me.😆😆

Edited by Shagnika - 15 years ago