STORY CONTEST- 2(CASE OF THE MYSTERIOUS KIDNAPPER)

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: bhinder.kamboj

Awwww Never seen aisi deewangi before.😆..Utilize the time and finish with it ASAP...We can't miss review by Contest Holder for too long..waiting desperately ..go for it 👍🏼 😊

Have to do full justice to everyone isn't it? Taking a lot of time actually.

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#92

Okkay finally i am done!!! Firstly i would like to say that kya stories thi yaar!! Majaa aa gaya.. Suspense in every story almost. Abhi-Daya ke scenes dekhke felt overjoyed! All writers and also Visrom pat ur backs for the success of the Story Contest! Enjoyed every bit..

Now coming to the reviews... In general, all stories had some sort of surprise elements. I wonder hoe could one plot likw this could be handled in so many ways! Some had superb plots... Some kept the newcomers out... N some very intelligently kept them away. Some used them
efficiently! Lovely work by all...

Detailed review... Here it goes!

Story 1 - Very nicely written. ACP's character very nicely shown... Overall, it was really good to start reading the stories with this one...Abhi-Daya as super cops!! Keep up the good work!

Story 2 - very nice story. Kidnapping process was really nice.Only problem was the language... But still great effort!!

Story 3 - Great plot and a very planned proceedings! Intelligent way of keeping Sachin n Kaajal away from te story. Interest level maintained all throughout! Last scene shows how much u hate Sachin an Kaajal's presence in the show.

Story 4 - Very nice story. Really wonderful effort! Suoeeb narration.Suspense alive... Abhi-Daya moments. Acp's characterisation was perfect. Great job!

Story 5 - A planned story... Very well written. Loved it... Emotional scenes were superbly shown. Was long but enjoyed it.

Story 6 - Acp's character was shown wonderfully !! Good job done with the plot. Scenes aming team
Members were perfect! Keep up the good work... Looking forward for many more from the writer.

Story 7 - It was a very nicely written story! Very nice... Enjoyed reading it!

Story 8 - very clearly written. Short n sweet! Relationships among CID team members very well shown. Politics of India shown very well! Logical story.

Story 9 - climax scene was the highlight... No forensics! But high in thrill.. Good effort.

Story 10 - Well described episode. Different from rest. Plot was very Interesting. Keep up the good work. Enjoyed reading every part!!!

Story 11 - High on suspense... Very nicely handled plot. Planned way of proceedings. Great job!!

Bas ab kya kahoon... Rating dena is the toughest job now. Tougher than writing the story! Too good... Humein CID creative team jald se jald join karna chahiye!!!

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#93

@Shagnika Waah kya Review diya hain...i am sure it will encourage all the writers to do their best next time...thanks a lot for this..you said before you won't be first one..see now 😆

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#94

People here have learnt the art of providing feedback to their own stories without letting others know which is theirs...very nice. Achche CID fans ho tum log. Saboot mitana bhi aa gaya sabko. Sab log achche crminials banoge. 😉

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#95

so Now m writing whole review of a stories

Story 1: Very nice story..excellent plot..This story impressed me more...ACP is faith on his collegues very well written..gr8 scenes...bonding between COps...gr8 dilogs

story 2: Little bit confusing but unique method of kinnapping...concept is gr8

story3: thanks for ABHI-Daya movements which won my heart..gr8 story,gr8 susppend and unexpected end...wow...jisane likhi hein he /she is one of the gr8 writer in our forum

story4:Kudos to the writer..kya story likhi hein...one of the best stoyr...well written...good plot good dilog ..gr8 efforts...another gr8 story

Story 5: lengthy but fntastic ...good emotional scenes...just love it..good plot..over all gr8 work.

Story 6: I favorite story..amezing simple amezing...well written ..suspend revolving around ACP..wow what a gr8 concept...you can join as creative for CID team...will get good stories...Kudos to you 👍🏼 simply gr8 job👏

Story 7: Again gr8 job...easy to understnd...well written..

story 8: Dipicting true face of Indias politics ..gr8 plot...one of the best story...short and sweet..have gr8 future as a story writer.. U can be proffessional writer..think over it.😃

Story 9: wow gr8 story again..nice story..no fornsic..pure investigation...to good more marks for this...very well developed...good movements between CID memebers...just superb story

story 10:excellent work again ....different from other stories...well handle plot and nicely written..again good story.

story 11: wow very good plot..unique story..love disguise scenes...nice work

to e tha sab stories pe review...all are gr8 writers...difficult to judge them..I would like to thanks visrom for handleing this competition very well ..that all from my side.

Edited by jiya1 - 15 years ago

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#96

Jiya dii with review the way you expressed you emotions and feelings kudos for you 👏 thanks a lot encouraging us and i will try to improve next time..will work on points you mentioned ..