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JP22

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Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#491

sachin ji sachin ji aap ho bade mahan

bade shiddase karate hein aap apana kaam

dekhakar use karate hein aapako hamesha salam

aur muh se nikala tha hein hamare hey Raam Haey Ram

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#492

Cool work jiya di sorry for replying late but sach mein it was very nice so now from a poet you've become a rapper ?? aur kitne chupe kala hai aapme jaldi dikhaie

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#493

shaggy,bhavana,sunny and domstar..i was trying with my friend another rap creation..she is a rapper recides in USA....we both have a pan friends since my childhood...she is original from Delhli but ab UsA mein reheti hein..she came India for attending his brothers engagemet..we met first time face to face...she told me to try this style..I have made 1 cration...it was good...so muze baad mein idea aaya ki mein CID ke liye likhu..aur likh..lekin etna jama nahi..mein aur bhi try karungi lekin aaj mere dimag etana kaam nahi kara raha hein😕

Edited by jiya1 - 15 years ago

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#494

First attempt nice attempt. RAP. ek nya talent bahar aya. wow

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#495

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neelambari

@Chiinnu

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#496

oh god...if cid people see sachin rap, they will make use of it....sachin is their sweet att. boy...........😆

Edited by chinnu_manikyam - 15 years ago

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neelambari

@Chiinnu

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#497

O DaYa o Daya tune ye kya kiya😎👍🏼

here comes rap the real.....yoyo

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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#498

hey abhi tak etna achha nahi jama hein chinn...aur nahi churayenge mere cretions CID waale..unko apana show flop karana hein kya😆😆

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sneh.

@sneh.

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#499

Jiyaji aap ke Sachin rap ko dekhkar Sachinji kiShaan mein mein kuch panktiyaan likhi hain agar aapko aitraaz naa ho toh kya main iss thread mein publish kar sakti hoon?

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#500

I dont think jiya di koi aitraz hogi sneha di! Plss post it somewhere. If not here then in ur own thred!! We r waiting to read it! 😃

jiya di, daya rao is too good!! 👏 😆 😆