SUHAANI/DRILABH'S CID STORIES - Page 4

guys i hope its better than d previous one!! i know d end had been abrupt, but due to exams.... well, do comment plz!! any suggestion? any point to be improvised upon? ure feedback is very imp for me!! lolz😳

wow!! i loved it...............specially the part wen abhi-daya escape and have a friendly chat

So many people have viewed this but no feedback😭?😭

Hey don't cry. Its sunday and everyone just enjoys. Wait for people to read and respond. I have visualized this forum in less active on sundays as compared to other days. It is active but less.

Read your story. Hats of writing in hindi. It looks that you took lot of pain to write your story in hindi and you justified as I can make out. what you want to say. Keep it up. Since you said this story was of Abhi-daya friendship and no suspense. your story was well upto it. waiting for next one. 👏👏👏

will PM you

nice one and as usual our dear abhi-daya duo rocked ,good one keep up 👍🏼

Wowwwwwwwwww........ really a nice story .... the friendship of abhi and daya projected in an awesome manner.. keep it up..

Story Removed. Sorry. Forget it please. Thanks.

I haven't read this, but I got something to feel happy about here.

Originally posted by: visrom

Edit...no Suhani...and you are again writing in parts...????

i missed all your stories. Will read it all when i am free.