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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
Abhijit: Dr. Salunkhe kaha hai? unke sath keya kiya tumlogon ne?
Terrorist 2: Haan, use v 1 human bomb banake tumhare lab mein blust karne ke bare mein socha toh tha, par keya kare! use toh hosh nehi a rahe avitak!
Abhijit: Oh my God!
Terrorist 1: chalo, pahele tumhare CID team khatam ho jaye, phir sochenge uske bare mein! aur 1 baat! humne porsho yeh blust karenge! tumhare bureau mein!
Abhijit frightened.
Terrorist 1: ab itna pareshan hone ki keya baat hai vai? 😈 tumhe toh khush hona chahiye! porsho apni peyari CID teamse akhri bar jo milne ja rahe ho!
And they both laughing wickedly.
Abhijit felt more tensed and thought " marnese nehi darta main. par meri wajese, meri teamko... nehi, aisa nehi ho sakta! kuch toh karna hi padega! aur Salunkhe saab v, pata nehi kis haal mein honge! keya karu main is waqt?"
CID Bureau:
Daya: pata nehi yeh ACP sirko keya ho gaya! abtak Abhijit aur Salunkhe saab ke bare mein kuch pata nehi chala, aur unhe zara v parwa nehi!
Freddy: par mujhe bohot chinta ho rahi hai sir! yeh Black Spider toh bohot khatarnak gang hai na!
Vivek entered.
Vivek: sir, yeh letter bahar pada hua mila!
Daya: keya likha hai ismein?
Vivek read that aloud, " ACP sahab, shayed apko apne officers ki jan ki parwa nehi hai! humein avitak paheli chitthi ka jawab nehi mila! firvi, yeh blust toh hoga hi! aur agar humein Rajesh nehi mila, toh kuch hi dino mein apko apne officers ki kata hua sar milenge.
BLACK SPIDER
everybody was nervous. after some moments, Daya said,
Daya: jo v ho, main istarah unki jindegi khatre mein nehi dal sakta. ab mujhe hi kuch karna hoga.
and he left.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
ACP came after sometime. ACP: arey, yeh Daya kaha hai?
Vivek: sir, woh kisi kaamse bahar gaye sir.
ACP: kaam? kaisa kaam?
Vivek: pata nehi sir.
ACP(one eyebrow raised): thik hai. jaise hi woh vapas aye, kah dena ki maine use bulaya.
Vivek: ji sir.
ACP went to his cabin.
Freddy: pata nehi yeh Daya sir keya karnewale hai!😲
Central Jail:
Jailor: sir, ap is Rajesh Kumarko kiun le jana chahte hai?
Daya: humein usse kuch bohot zaruri puchtach karni hai.
Jailor: keya woh ianhape nehi sakta?
Daya: nehi. iske paas 1 aisi secret hai, jo kisiko pata nehi chalna chahiye. warna pure desh ke liye khatra ho sakta hai.
Jailor( thought something): thik hai. aap Rajeshko le ja sakte hai.
Daya: Thank you.
A man was brought by constables. Daya left with him. just then the jailor dialled a number on his mobile.
Jailor: ACP saab, avi-avi senior inspector Daya, Rajesh Kumar naamki 1 apradhiko ianhase le gaya. aisi keya puchtach karni hai uplogonko, jo ianha nehi ho sakta?
ACP(shouted with great astonishment): WHAT!😲 OH MY GOD!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
😭😭cid faces terrorism😭😭
abhijeet ne Daya ke paass aaya aur kaha ki

....Daya, Main bore ho gaya hoon laash dekh dekhke.

daya ko bola chootiyo par jate hai


(acp enters)
ACP:ye chootiyo ki baat kaha se nikali
Abhijeet:fredricks ne phone par bataya
DAYA:woh kehi rehate ki ye idea dr salunke ne bataya
ABHIJEET: dr tarika behi anne wali hai kya ?
ACP: ye tarika ka chakar chodo case par dhan do .

Abhijeet blushing, daya giving a wicked 😉smile..."ji sir".

Then giving a wink to Daya "Sir, mujhe khabar mili hai kiLonavla mein ek laash mili hai; tehkeekaat karne humein wahanjaana padega"
ACP : Kya? Tumhe kisi kaphone aaya?
Abhijeet : Nahin sir, Freddie ko aaya.
ACP : Kyon Freddie, kiska phone tha?
Fredrciks: ummm....nahin sir....woh.....meri wife ne kaha ki Lonavla mein bhi laashein hongi...to wahan jaao.


ACP: Fredricks tum jab dekho apni wife ki baatein karte rehte ho.. wo to acha hai yaha Salunkhe nahi hai

Fredricks: Jab bhi mai apni wife ke baare mei kuch bolta hoo aap sabka dhua kyu nikal jaata hai
(Abhijeet & Daya smile )

Daya: Par ye to batao, tumhari wife aisa kah hi kyu rahi thi?
Daya: Accha ACP sir ko bolte hain ek picnic ka prayojan karne ke liye.
Abhijit: Arre, tumhara dimag to theek hai! Sir kabhi nahin manege.
Daya: Sahi kaha, ek second mere ek badiya idea aaya hai.
(calls Freddy) Freddy yahan aana. Mere ko ek idea aaya hain yaar. Tum jake ACP sir se pucho ki ek picnic ko sabko me jane ke liye.
Fredricks : Sir... ACP : (Serious) Kya hai Freddie? Fredricks : Sir, Daya sir ne kaha... ACP : KYA kaha (Daya makes a threatening gesture from behind the ACP) Fredricks : Hmmm...woh... Yaad nahin aa raha hai Sir... ACP : (Turning around, looking at Daya, Abhijeet and Vivek) Kya hua? Tum log kya khichdi paka rahe ho? Vivek : Sir, Fredricks sir ki wife picnic jaana chahti hai sir. ACP : Suddenly cooling down, hmm....bahut din ho gaya chutti par jaake...hum sab kal picnic jaayenge. Abhijeet and Daya are suddenly shocked and look at each other with 'disappointed' expressions. Abhijeet : Sir, aap bhi aaayenge???? ACP : Haan, kyon? Mujhe bhi chutti ki zaroorat hai. Main bhi khuli hawa mein saans lena chahta hoon. Daya : Sir, Salunkhe aur ....................... Tarika ko bhi bulaayen??? ACP : Kyon...woh murdon se baat karne wala picnic mein kya karega? Abhijeet : Nahin sir....aapko thoda 'company' denge...hain na Daya??? Daya : Haan haan....Sabko 'company' ki zaroorat' hai na sir. ACP (one eyebrow raised) : Theek hai...Salunkhe aur Tarika ko bhi invite karo... Abhijeet smiles.... ACP : Tho decide ho gaya...kal subah 7 baje hum sab yahan milenge aur mud island jaayenge. Aur Freddie... hum sab ke liye khaana tum laaoge. And he leaves. Abhijeet : Sha!!! Ab yeh ACP saab ko picnic aane ki kya zaroorat hai...HAIN???? Sunny morning...koyal singing In the distant, you hear the entire CID team laughing ACP(to Salunkhe ji): Arre Salunkhe, tumhare girlfriend ki baat karo na? kaisi hain woh? Salunkhe: Arre ACP Sahab, woh toh theek hi hain. Jawan ladki hain, only 31(everyone laughs). (Vivek gets up and goes towards Fredericks, who is playing with a flower) Fredericks: She loves me, she loves me not.... Vivek: Aaj toh Sir, aapka kya kiske ke saath.... Freddy:(Gets up agitated) Vivek, tum na aake har ek cheez mein naak aada te ho. Vivek: Sorry Sir Freddy: Mere apne biwi se jhakra ho gaya VIvek: Kyu, Sir? Apne kya kar diya? Freddy: Arre kuch nahi, yaar. Maine began ke bharta ko jala dala tha. Toh woh gussa ho gayi thi. Mein bhi gussa karke chila diya us par. Ab woh ma ke wahan jane ki soch ri he. Abhijit, calls to Vivek: Arre Vivek, kya huya? Tum log wahan kyu? Vivek: Sir, Freddy sir ka apni wife se (Freddy interrupts): Abe, tera dimag toh theek hain. Daya(comes in): Kya huya, Freddy? Kya huya, hain? Kya phirse biwi se jhakra?(freddy nods) Chalo, koi baat nahi. Main abhi unko phone lagata hu. Freddy: Nahi SIR Daya: chalo phir yahan kyun baithe ho. sabhi wait kar rahein hain
Freddy: mere wait kis liye.
Daya: Tang khichne ke liye. koi mila nahi ab tak.......... Masak kar raha hun ab chalo.
Every body is enjoying. Suddenly everyone saw a young girl is moving towards she approached she smiled to someone..... every body watching towards each other and then girl she passed away giving some message with eyes to someone....... No body knows whose that every body start suspecting each other....... Abhijit : Daya, kaun hai yeh ladki? Tum jante ho ise? Daya: Arre nehi yaar! Maine toh ise paheli bar dekha! Abhijit: Par mujhe toh laga ki yeh tumse kuch kahena chahti hai. Salunkhe: Kiun vai? ab Daya par kiun iljam laga rahe ho? Mujhe toh laga ki yeh tumse baat karna chahti hai! Abhijit(confused); Mujhse kiun? main toh ise janta tak nehi! Salunkhe; Keya pata... jante ho ya nehi! shayed dr. Tarika samne hai, isliye... Tarika is blussing. ACP: par hai kaun yeh? hum meinse kisiko toh yeh janti hogi... warna... Daya; jane dijiye sir. use dekhkar toh nehi laga ki koi musibbat mein hai! usi waqt sabko 1 cheekh sunayi dee. Daya runs in the direction from which he heard the scream, but doesn't find anyone. The path ahead is a jungle.Since it is easy to get lost in a jungle, he decides not to go alone. He returns back to the picnic spot and tells the ACP that the girl has disappeared, probably into the jungle. ACP: Chalo jungle mein ladki ko dhoondte hain. Fredricks : Kya sir, hum yahan chutti manane aaye hain, aur yahan bhi aap humse kaam karva rahe hain ACP : CID ke kaam mein chutti ke liye koi jagah nahin hai. Abhijeet : Sir, ho sakta hai koi bada problem na ho...shaayad woh ladki sirf phisalkar gir gayi hogi or isliye usne cheekha hoga. Aap aur Dr Salunkhe yahin baitiye ...hum log(looking particularly at Tarika) thoda trekking karte hain aur ladki ko bhi dhoondte hain... Everyone gets ready to go. Salunkhe : Arey Tarika, tum kahan jaaa rahi ho? Tehkikaat karna tumhara kaaam nahin hai...woh jab laash ya saboot layenge, use hum analyse karenge. Abhijeet : Dr Salunkhe, hum log trekking ke liye jaa rahe hain, shaayad Tarika bhi jaana chahti hai. Hai na Tarika? Tarika : Koi baat nahin Abhijeet, aap log jaayiye, main yahin baithti hoon. Abhijeet gives a disappointed look...Daya gives that naughty smile...😉 ACP : Arey, use jaane do yaar...woh hum buddhon ke saath akele baithke kya karegi? Salunkhe gives Abhijeet a disapproving look, but says nothing. Abhijeet gets back his big smile. 😊 And the entire team minus ACP and Salunkhe go into the jungle (at treeking point) abhijeet:dr tarika app ko treeking karna atta hai kya . dr tatika:ha abhijeet batchpan mei apne papa ke sath treeking karne jati thi. daya:tum dono aarahe ho ki nahi. abhijeet:chaleya dr tarika chalte hai. abhijeet:tum log aggey jao hum dono atta hai vivek:chaliya fredricks sir fredricks:ha aaraha hoo climbing with rope (Fredricks is in hurry) daya:dhire chalo nahi to rope tooth jayega vivek :aur hum niche girkar marjange aur atma ban jayenge.
Freddy: Kisi ka to pata nahin tu zaroor buri atma banega.
Vivek: Kya sir app bhi... chalo chhodo 😊 sir valentine day a raha hai aap apni wife ko kaha leke ja rahe hai or koi gift de rahe hai ke nahin😃
Freddy: Tu mere bare me kyun pooch raha hai apne bare me bata.👏
Daya: Tum dono ek dusre ki taang kichna band karo main batata hoon...... ACP sir us din sabko busy rakhenge aur bhool ke bhi chutti ke bare main mat poochna😭 bhool jao....... har saal ki tareh Valentine Day ACP sir ke saath kyun freddy.
Abhijeet: daya kyun na is saal kuch naya ho jaye...
Daya: Matlab😕 kahin tum....
Abhijeet: bilkul sahi samja
Daya: Challenge........
Freddy: Sir aap dono kya baat kar rahein hain samaj nahi a raha.
Daya: Is bar valentine day ke din Abhi ACP sir ki maujudgi mein bahar jayega.
Freddy: Sir aap ki tabiyat teekh hai😲

Before any body could say something that girl is again seen.......

Vivek: Sir, woh dekhiye! woh rahi!

Daya: kaha? Vivek: woh, ped ke niche! Sabne niche dekha. us ladki 1 ped ke niche khadi hai aur uske kapde kafi dirty dikh rahe hai. Abhijit; Maine pahelehi kaha tha, jarur woh fisalke gir gayi hogi. Daya: firvi, chalo 1 bar puch lete hai! Sabne niche ki taraf vaga. par jabtak wohlog us ped ke niche pohunche, us ladki unhase gayeb thi! Freddy: arre, yeh keya? avi -avi toh iehin thi! kaha gayi? Abhijit: Freddy, Vivek! dekho as-pas! They are going to investigate. after some time. Vivek: sir! yeh dekhiye! jamin pe kitna khun pada hai! Abhijit: arre haan! aisa lagta hai, jaise iahan kisika khun kiya gaya! Daya: Arre yeh keya? Tarika: yeh toh... tire ki nishani hai. shayed iahan koi gadi khadi thi! Daya: boss, mamla kuch gadbad lagta hai! Abhijeet : Is jungle mein gaadi kahaan se aa sakti hai? Hain??? Yeh koi gaadi nahin ho sakti. Chalo sab log ladki ko dhoondo. They all reach a small clearing in the jungle where it looks like someone had camped the previos day. There were burnt logs, used paper plates etc. Daya : Abhijeet, lagta hai koi yahaan par tha, lekin ab nikal gaya hai. Abhijeet : Sab log phail jaao...main aur Tarika is taraf dekhte hain. Taasha, Vivek, tum log wahan jaao aur Daya, Tum aur Freddie yahaan koi saboot dhoondo ki kaun ho sakta hai. Daya (gives a naughty smile): Abhijeet, Salunkhe ne kaha ki Saboot dhoondna Tarika ka kaam nahin hai. Abhijeet : Koi baat nahin, Tarika kuch nahin karegi, bas mere saath chalegi 😉 They all go in different directions. After going for some distance, Abhijeet finds the shell of a gun. Abhijeet : Tarika, yahan jungle mein, shell kahaan se aaya? Kisi ne yahan goli chalayi hai. Chalo aage dekhte hain. They find that the plants have been flattened by someone's foot, so they assume that someone has walked that way. They go a bit too far. Tarika : Abhijeet, hum log bahut aage aa gaye hain...waapas jaane ka rasta bhool gaye toh.... Abhijeet: Bas toda aur aage....wahan par ek tent jaisa kuch dikhai de raha hai. Main Daya ko phone karta hoon. Abhijeet tries to call, but it is too deep in the forest and there is no mobile signal!!! Abhijeet : Tarika, main yahan inpar nazar rakhta hoon...tum waapas jaakar Daya aur baaki logon ko lekar aao. And Tarika leaves. Daya : Ab toh Vivek aur Taasha bhi waapas aa gaye...Abhijeet aur Tarika ka kuch pata nahin....5 baj gaya aur jungle mein jaldi andhera ho jaata hai...Main Abhijeet ko phone karta hoon... And Daya tries to call....but there is no mobile signal!!! Vivek: Sir ACP sir bhi pareshaan ho rahe honge. Signal bhi nahi hai
Daya: Taasha tum jaakar ACP sir to bato ki hum Abhijeet aur Tarika to dondne ke liye ja rahe hain. aur jo be evidence mile sab ke bare me bata dena.

freddy: Sir vo ladki vo bhi to kho gayi hain. Kahin vo.😕
Vivek: Bhoot to nahi.
Daya: vo bhi yahin kahin hogi.
Vivek: Kya Picnic hai.

Suddenly everyone hears some (look like) bullet fire sound.
Everybody rushes towards that direction.

Freedy: sir goli ki awaz hai
Vivek: Clearly to nahi kuch ajeeb awaz thi pata nahi kis cheez ki.

Daya: dheyan se as pass dekho kuch na kuch zarror milega. hamre pas waqt kam hai andheera ho raha hai.

Freedy: Sir yahan dekhiye kuch koon ke chiten.

Daya: freddy sample le lo aur hum age dekhte hain.
Continue from here
(tasha comes out of jungle)
tasha:sir aap chaliya mera saath
acp:kya hua tasha aur baki sab kaha hai
tasha:abhijeet sir aur tarika mil nahi rahe
acp:kya toh muze phone nahi kya.
tasha :sir jungle mei signal nahi hai .phone try karnr ki bhawat kosish ki.
tasha: sir app dono chaliya mera saath.
(fredricks pata nahi ye tasha gai kaha .kahi kho to nahi gai.)
Suddenly Tarika appears...
Daya : Tarika, Abhijeet kahan hai?
Tarika : Hum bohot door chale gaye...wahan Abhijeet ko ek goli ka shell mila aur phir ek tent dikhai diya...shaayad usme terrorists hain. Abhijeet ne phone karne ki koshish ki lekin singal nahin tha.
Woh wahan humare liye wait kar raha hai...
Daya : humein ek goli chalne ki aawaz sunai di...mujhe kuch theek nahi lag raha hai...Fredricks, Vivek, chalo chalte hain...
They walk through the jungle and reach the place where Abhijeet was waiting...but Abhijeet was not to be found there!!!
Daya : Tarika, Abhijeet yahan nahin hai... Tumhe rasta yaad hai na...
Tarika : Haan Daya....Abhijeet yahin par wait kar raha tha...tent wahan tha...lekin Abhijeet aur won tent - sab gaayab hai.
....(silence)
(ACP breaks the slience)ACP: Tarika, theek se yaad karo. Tumhe theek se pata hain na ki Abhijit yahin tha.
Tarika: Ji, Sir(sobbing a little bit)
ACP(twisting his fingers): Toh woh gaya kahan?
Vivek: Sir, main unhe ek phone lagata hu(Takes out his cell) Par sir connection nahi lag raha.
ACP: Hum, hum ek kaam karte hain, surag dhoonte hain. Freddy, tum Vivek ke saath us side jao. Main, Tasha aur Daya is side chalte, chalo. Hum yahin par 15 minute me milenge. Kuch mile toh phone ka conncetion toh nahi hai, goli chalana, hum pehuc jayege. Chalo.
(Suspicious music playing)
Suddenly Vivek sees something
Vivek: Sir yeh dekhiye. Sir woh ladki sir.
Fredericks: Hain, dekho lagta hai ladki ko goli maara gaya hain. Aur yeh kya?(Picks up a ceel phone) Yeh to Abhijit sir ka phone lagta hain. Accha, Vivek tum goli chalao
(Vivek fires a shot)
After a few minutes, ACP, Daya and Tasha arrive.
Daya: arre yeh toh wohi ladki hain. Isko toh goli lagi hain.
Vivek: Aur Sir Abhijit Sir ka phone mila hain.
Tasha: Sir, mujhe kuch gadbad laga raha hain. Ise kisne mar diya? Aur Abhijit Sir kaha gaye???
ACP: Wohi toh. Chalo, hum wapas chalte hain. Der ho rahi hain.
After returning, they find that Salunkhe saheb is missing😲😲. and a ransom letter. It says "Agar tere CID officers ki laash ki guzarish nahi hain, toh CID bureau jao. Wahan jake tume gate par ek lifafa milega. Usko kholke dekho warna kal newspaper ka headline hoga "2 CID officers ka gala kata paya gaya"
ACP: OH MY GOD!!!
In a dust-filled and old room, Abhijit wakes up with a start and realizes that someone poured water on him. He says "Huh, kaun ho tum log aur kya chahiye tumhe?"
Someone slaps him and he repeats "Kya chahiye tum logo ko? Yeh tumne theeek nahi kiya. Maine dekha uss ladki ko kya kiya tumne"
Terrorist: Abe, chup. Maine toh us tere gun se mara hain, Inspector Abhijt. Hahahahahahaha. And the terrorist brandishes Abhijit's gun.
Suddenly another terrorist comes to the room.
Terrorist 1 : Boss, iske ek saathi ko bhi laya hoon. Use doosre kamre mein baandh deta hoon.
Terrorist 2 : Bahut accha kiya....(he peeps into the other room) arey....iske sar mein chot lagi hai...
Terrorist 1: Haan, isne bhaagne ki koshish ki...to maine........
Terrorist 2 : Yeh kya kiya tumne...mar to nahin jaayega na...yeh mar gaya to hum isse 'woh' kaam kaise karvayenge? Hume iski zaroorat hai.
And they lock both the rooms and go out.
Abhijeet is tense as to who is in the other room...it could be anyone...ACP, Daya, Fredricks, Vivek(Somehow Salunkhe never enters his mind; and he said 'mar gaya to..', so he knows it is not Tarika or Tasha)....and the terrorist was mentioning 'chot lagi hai'. So he gets worried...and decides that he has to somehow reach the other room.
At the picnic-spot:
Vivek: sir, mujhe lagta hai ki humein vapas jana chahiye.
ACP: haan, ab toh aur koi chara vi nehi hai humare paas!
Daya; par sir, keya hum in gundoke darse vag jayenge? Aur Abhijit aur Salunkhe saab...
ACP: Daya, aur keya kar sakte hai hum? agar is waqt hum unlogon ki baat nehi manenge, toh pata nehi wohlog undono ke sath keya karenge! chalo, chalte hai!
everyone is ready to go. suddenly ACP said with sorrow: agar main Salunkheko akela chorke nehi jata, toh sayed aisa...
Tarika whispered : galti toh maine vi... Abhijitko akela unha chorke nehi ana chahiye tha mujhe... pata nehi kis haal mein honge woh..
ACP: nehi Tarika. agar tum us waqt unhape hoti, toh wohlog tumko vi kidnap kar lete. usse musibat aur barta.
Tarika was silent. noone noticed that her eyes were full of tears😭.
At the CID Bureau:
ACP, Daya, tasha and freddy sat very worried. Vivek came with a letter in his hand.
Vivek: sir, yeh bahar pada hua mila.
ACP; keya likha hai ismein?
Daya took it and read aloud. "ACP Sahab, agar apne officers ko zinda dekhna chahte ho toh tumhe humara 1 kaam karna padega. agle do din ke andar is shahar mein 1 bomb blust hoga. kaha hoga, yeh toh hum apko nehi batayenge! par yeh kaam karne ke liye humein humara purana member Rajesh Kumar ki zarurat hai! Rajeshko toh apko yaad hoga na? tin saal pahle aphine toh pakda tha use! ab yeh apki jimmedari hai, ki ap use jailse nikalkar humare paas le aye, warna...! agar apko manjoor hai toh bureau ke gate par 1 letter rakh dijiye, jismein likha sirf likha hoga "HAAN'.
BLACK SPIDER
Daya: Sir, yeh black spider toh bohut khatarnak terrorist gang hai!
Freddy: Ab keya hoga sir?
ACP(angry); keya hoga matlab? humare do officers ke liye hum lakho masoom logon ko maut ke muh mein to nehi vej sakte!

Tarika entered.

Tarika: woh toh thik hai sir, par Abhijit aur Salunkhe sir ka keya?
ACP; woh toh hum vi soch rahe hai! par tum chinta mat karo, kuch nehi hoga undonoko.
ACP went to his cabin. others followed him. Tarika still stood there alone, and whispered,"agar Abhijitko kuch ho gaya... toh main..."he could not say anything more and ran awey from there crying.😭😭
Again in the room, where was Abhijit:
Terrorist 1: dekhte hai, ACP saabko apne right hand manse kitna pyar hai!
Abhijit: ACP sir tumlogon ki baat kavi nehi manenge!
Terrorist; Tab toh tera aur us buddheka lash hi jayega tere sir ke paas!
Abhi astonished." Buddha! kahi yeh log Salunkhe sir ki baat toh nehi kar rahe hai? Oh My God!" but he said," mere marnese koi fark nehi padnewala! pakde toh tumlog jaoge hi!"
Terrorist 2 slaped him hard😡(himmat toh dekho uski) and said: fasoge toh tum officer! kuiki is baar murder vi hum tumhare gunse kia, aur humare liye bomb vi tum aur tumhare sathi lagaoge!
Abhijit : nehi! main aisa kavi nehi karunga!
Terrorist 1: agar nehi kiya toh,... wase is duniya mein toh koi nehi hai tumhara! par woh lady doctor toh hai na! jisse tum... bohut pyaaaar karte ho!😈 Aur Insp. daya! jo tumhare liye saga bhaise badkar hai!😈 Inlogoko agar tumhare samne goli mar diya jay...😡
Abhijit:(scared): tum... unka kuch nehi bigad sakte... kuch nehi...!
both laughing wickedly😡😡.
Forensic lab:
Tarika stood silent and was thinking something deeply. Daya entered.
Daya: Dr. Tarika
Tarika did not listen to him.
Daya:(a bit aloud) Dr. Tarika!
Now she looked at him, and became concious.
Tarika: haan, Daya! kuch pata chala , av.. Abhijit aur Dr. Salunkhe ke bare mein?
Daya(hesitating): nehi, abtak toh nehi! par jald pata chal jayega...
Tarika(much worried) : par kab, Daya? Keya kar rahe hai uplog? avitak unhe doond nehi paye, agar unlogo ne kuch kar diya unke sath...
Now Daya got a bit angry.
Daya: wat do u mean Tarika? humein koi fark nehi padta, unke kidnap honese? Salunkhe sirka v hum utna hi ijjat karte hai, jitna ki ACP sir ka! aur Abhijit!(suddenly his voice chocked by imotion)mera sabse accha dost hai woh! vai jaisa hai!agar use kuch ho gaya, toh...main...mujhe..
he can't say anything more.😭😭
now Tarika felt little ashamed. She stepped closer to Daya and touched his arm gently," unhe kuch nehi hoga Daya. mujhe ap...ap sabpe pura varosa hai! i am.. I am sorry, istarah mujhe baat nehi karna chahiye tha.."
Daya controlled himself now and said gently" nehi Tarika... main samajh sakta hoon. mujhpar vi wohi beet raha hai, jo.."
both were silent for a moment. then Daya asked," is ladki ke bare mein kuch pata chala?"
Tarika: haan. iski maut sleeping peels khane ke wajese hui.
Daya(astonished): keya? par ise toh goli lagi thi na?
Tarika: haan, par iski maut peels ke wajese hi hui! aur 1 buhut ajeeb baat pata chala.
Daya: woh keya?
Tarika: iski heart body ki left nehi, balki right side pe hai!
Daya: keya?
Tarika: haan. goli heart par hi chalai gayi thi, par goli toh heart pe lagi nehi. sirf bone pe lagi. yeh dekhiye.(showed X-Ray report) iski maut sleeping-peels ke wajese hui, jo shayed isne 3 yah 4 ghante pahle khayi thi.
Daya: ooh! accha, aur kuch?
Tarika: iske kapde fata hua hai, mitti v lagi hai. shayed kisike sath hathafai hua. aur woh jo khun mila, jamin pe, woh kisi aur ka hai!
Daya: o.k. Thanks Dr. Tarika. Aur... ap chinta mat kijiye, abhijit aur salunkhe saab jaldhi mil jayenge.
He left. Tarika gazed at the door, and whispered" Iswar kare, aisa hi ho".😍
CID Bureau:
ACP: Keya? woh ladki sleeping peels ki wajese mari hai?
Daya: Haan sir.
ACP: toh phir, uski maut atmahatya hai, yeah khun? Accha, yeh pata chala ki yeh ladki hai kaun?
Daya: nehi sir. uske paas aisa kuch v nehi tha, jisse pata chale ki yeh hai kaun!
ACP: agar yeh ladki gharse gayeb hai, toh gharwalo ne toh report likhwaya hoga police mein! Missing Person's Bureause pata karo.
Tasha: par sir, Abhijit sir aur Dr.Salunkheka keya? unke bare mein abhitak kuch pata nehi chala!
ACP: woh v pata chal jayega...
Vivek entered.
Vivek; sir, maine pata laga liya. agle 2 din toh keya, is week mein hi koi function ya party-bagera nehi hai shaher mein!
ACP: kamal hai! toh phir yeh log bomb-blust karenge kaha? vid-vadwali jagah hi toh inka target hona chahiye!
Daya: sir, shayed yeh log kisi aisi jagahko apna target banana chahte hai, jaha wasehi bohut sare log hote hai! jaise, koi shopping-mall!
Tasha: koi busy road v ho sakta hai sir! jahape traffic bohut jada ho!
Freddy: koi cinema-hall?
Vivek: railwey station v toh ho sakta hai sir.
ACP: Vivek, Tasha! list banvao ki aisi vidvadwali kitne jagah hai shaher mein! aur sari police-stationko inform kar do. main avi kisi kamse bahar ja raha hoo.
He left.

next scene:

Daya entered ACP's cabin. Daya: sir, us ladki ke bare mein pata chal gaya. uska naam Suhana hai. woh fridayko gharse gayeb hui thi. uske gharwaloka kahena hai ki uski dimagi halat kuch thik nehi thi. ACP: achha! uske gharwale aye hain? Daya: haan sir. they came there, where a man, a lady and a young girl sat. The man was crying badly, the girl also weeping. the lady was trying to console them. Freddy and tasha stood there.
Daya: sir, yeh hai Mohitji. Suhana ke chacha.
ACP; maff kigjiyega, is waqt aplogonko taklif de rahe hai, par yeh toh humari duty hai! Mohitji, Suhana apki vatiji thi?
Mohit: ji haan sir! woh toh humari beti jaisi thi, bhaiya-bhabike gujar jane ke baad, main aur Jaya ne hi pala use! Yeh sab kaise hua sir... meri phul-si bacchi, kaise...
ACP patted his arms gently and said: woh toh hum v pata lagane ki koshish kar rahe hai. accha, woh gharse gayeb hui kaise?
Jaya(the lady): sir, uski dimagi halat thik nehi thi! accident mein jab uske parents ki maut ho gayi, tabse...! kavi kavi karti thi woh aisa, isliye hum kavi use akele nehi chorte the. uska ilaj vi chal raha tha. par shukravarko, yeh toh subehi office ke liye nikal gaye the, aur Tina v collage chali gayi.(pointing the girl) yeh hai humari beti, Tina. aur, mujhe achanak 1 phone aya ki meri maaki tabiyat kuch thik nehi hai, isliye main jaldbaji mein nikal gayi gharse, karib 12.30 baje!. jab vapas ayi, tab Suhana gharpe nehi thi. kisiko kuch pata nehi tha ki woh kaha gayi! humne aspas sab jagah dekha, par woh kahi vi nehi thi. phir humne police mein complain likhwai.
ACP: o.k. achha, woh sleeping peels leti thi keya?
Mohit: sleeping peels? nehi toh! doctor ne toh kavi use sleeping peels lene ke liye nehi kaha!
ACP; par uski maut sleeping-peels ke wajese hi hui hai.
Tina: keya? didi ki maut sleeping peels ki wajese?
Daya: haan. aur humein shak hai ki usne peels ghar mein hi khayi thi.
Mohit: par,aisa kaise ho sakta hai sir? hu..humare ghar mein koi sleeping-peels nehi leta!
ACP:(an eyebrow raised): ap tino ke alawa aur kaun hai ghar mein?
Jaya: humari maid hai, Sima.
ACP: woh ghar par thi pura din?
Jaya: haan, bas 1 bar 15 minute ke liye market mein gayi thi, paas hi mein.
Tasha: kitne baje?
Jaya: karib 2.30 baje!
Tasha: tab Suhana gharpe thi?
Jaya: haan, usi waqt Simane use akhri baar dekha.
ACP: hmm, thik hai, aplog ja sakte hai. Freddy, inhe bahartak chor aao.
Freddy: aiye.
They left.
In the locked room:
Terrorist: chalo, thik hai! unke sath hum kuch nehi karenge! par tumhare sath toh kar sakte hai na!😈
Terrorist 2: dekho, apne pith par!
Abhijit moved his neck and looked under his shirt, and shocked!😲 terrorists laughed wickedly.
Terrorist 1: dekha? ab tum 1 human bomb ho, samjhe! aur is bomb ki control humare hath mein! isiliye ab tum wahi koroge jo hum chahte hai! ab, tum toh moroge hi, sath-sath puri CID team v khatam! kiunki hum toh yeh blust tumhare bureau mein karenge!😈
Abhijit: Dr. Salunkhe kaha hai? unke sath keya kiya tumlogon ne?
Terrorist 2: Haan, use v 1 human bomb banake tumhare lab mein blust karne ke bare mein socha toh tha, par keya kare! use toh hosh nehi a rahe avitak!
Abhijit: Oh my God!
Terrorist 1: chalo, pahele tumhare CID team khatam ho jaye, phir sochenge uske bare mein! aur 1 baat! humne porsho yeh blust karenge! tumhare bureau mein!
Abhijit frightened.
Terrorist 1: ab itna pareshan hone ki keya baat hai vai? 😈 tumhe toh khush hona chahiye! porsho apni peyari CID teamse akhri bar jo milne ja rahe ho!
And they both laughing wickedly.
Abhijit felt more tensed and thought " marnese nehi darta main. par meri wajese, meri teamko... nehi, aisa nehi ho sakta! kuch toh karna hi padega! aur Salunkhe saab v, pata nehi kis haal mein honge! keya karu main is waqt?"
CID Bureau:
Daya: pata nehi yeh ACP sirko keya ho gaya! abtak Abhijit aur Salunkhe saab ke bare mein kuch pata nehi chala, aur unhe zara v parwa nehi!
Freddy: par mujhe bohot chinta ho rahi hai sir! yeh Black Spider toh bohot khatarnak gang hai na!
Vivek entered.
Vivek: sir, yeh letter bahar pada hua mila!
Daya: keya likha hai ismein?
Vivek read that aloud, " ACP sahab, shayed apko apne officers ki jan ki parwa nehi hai! humein avitak paheli chitthi ka jawab nehi mila! firvi, yeh blust toh hoga hi! aur agar humein Rajesh nehi mila, toh kuch hi dino mein apko apne officers ki kata hua sar milenge.
BLACK SPIDER
everybody was nervous. after some moments, Daya said,
Daya: jo v ho, main istarah unki jindegi khatre mein nehi dal sakta. ab mujhe hi kuch karna hoga.
and he left.
ACP came after sometime. ACP: arey, yeh Daya kaha hai?
Vivek: sir, woh kisi kaamse bahar gaye sir.
ACP: kaam? kaisa kaam?
Vivek: pata nehi sir.
ACP(one eyebrow raised): thik hai. jaise hi woh vapas aye, kah dena ki maine use bulaya.
Vivek: ji sir.
ACP went to his cabin.
Freddy: pata nehi yeh Daya sir keya karnewale hai!😲
Central Jail:
Jailor: sir, ap is Rajesh Kumarko kiun le jana chahte hai?
Daya: humein usse kuch bohot zaruri puchtach karni hai.
Jailor: keya woh ianhape nehi sakta?
Daya: nehi. iske paas 1 aisi secret hai, jo kisiko pata nehi chalna chahiye. warna pure desh ke liye khatra ho sakta hai.
Jailor( thought something): thik hai. aap Rajeshko le ja sakte hai.
Daya: Thank you.
A man was brought by constables. Daya left with him. just then the jailor dialled a number on his mobile.
Jailor: ACP saab, avi-avi senior inspector Daya, Rajesh Kumar naamki 1 apradhiko ianhase le gaya. aisi keya puchtach karni hai uplogonko, jo ianha nehi ho sakta?
ACP(shouted with great astonishment): WHAT!😲 OH MY GOD!
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what next people ?? please continue its getting very interesting
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Hey tgodse nice work
pls continue the story its really interestingand try to post this story to the setindia to B.P>singh
this story would really work i promise , only a little correction
if u hve any connection send this story tro them
thank u latha
but pls write the full n complete it love to read it.
ASctually to say the story is as wat i use to imagine n think of
really tremendous work keep it up

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hey jst take of the line where u wroted line DR. Tasrika holding Daya sir hand is somthing awkward
if feel i said somthing wrong pls 4give mde
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Originally posted by: nishalpvsk

hey jst take of the line where u wroted line DR. Tasrika holding Daya sir hand is somthing awkward
if feel i said somthing wrong pls 4give mde

If u have any instruction, that wat should be done there, plz tell me. But Dr. Tarika is friendly with Daya sir, so...
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Originally posted by: tgodse

continue continues continue

I will complete the story soon. now-a-days, busy with exams.
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Originally posted by nishalpvsk

hey jst take of the line where u wroted line DR. Tasrika holding Daya sir hand is somthing awkward
if feel i said somthing wrong pls 4give mde
If u have any instruction, that wat should be done there, plz tell me. But Dr. Tarika is friendly with Daya sir, so...
ur r right
u show the frnd shp but show it in diff manner.I m not able express it how
but pls
srry not to full idea any other help
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and all the best 4 ur exams work hard
n thank u

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