Come on Guys ... Let's write a story

Hello Everyone,

Originally posted by: prasunamurty_85

Hello Everyone,

Lets unleash our creativity by writing a story based on the CID characters and the crimes involved.

Rules of the game

The first person (it's me in this case) should write a sentence or two and then the next person should tag it along. We will see how our story ends 😊

I hope this thread will get a huge response.

P.S. I dont know whether a thread with this concept is already existing or not.

I will be starting with 'Abhijeet ne Daya ke paass aaya aur kaha ki'

daya ko bola chootiyo par jate hai

'Abhijeet ne Daya ke paass aaya aur kaha ki'

daya ko bola chootiyo par jate hai

Abhijeet ne Daya ke paass aaya aur kaha ki

daya ko bola chootiyo par jate hai

ACP: Fredricks tum jab dekho apni wife ki baatein karte rehte ho.. wo to acha hai yaha Salunkhe nahi hai

Fredricks: Jab bhi mai apni wife ke baare mei kuch bolta hoo aap sabka dhua kyu nikal jaata hai
(Abhijeet & Daya smile )

Daya: Par ye to batao, tumhari wife aisa kah hi kyu rahi thi?

Originally posted by: gengarjetty2

in english :(

Now, we can't help it...dialogues have to be in Hindi isn't it? Ok, you need not write dialogues...write the narrative...take the story forward from here in English.

Originally posted by: gengarjetty2

in english :(

kya gengu bhai, angezi main kyu? Aap toh samajh te ho Hindi?

Originally posted by: visrom

'Abhijeet ne Daya ke paass aaya aur kaha ki'

....Daya, Main bore ho gaya hoon laash dekh dekhke.

daya ko bola chootiyo par jate hai

(acp enters)

ACP: ye chootiyo ki baat kaha se nikali

Abhijeet:fredricks ne phone par bataya

DAYA: woh kehi rehate ki ye idea dr salunke ne bataya

ABHIJEET: dr tarika behi anne wali hai kya ?

ACP: ye tarika ka chakar chodo case par dhan do .

Abhijeet blushing, daya giving a wicked 😉 smile..."ji sir".

Then giving a wink to Daya "Sir, mujhe khabar mili hai ki Lonavla mein ek laash mili hai; tehkeekaat karne humein wahan jaana padega "

ACP : Kya? Tumhe kisi ka phone aaya?

Abhijeet : Nahin sir, Freddie ko aaya.

ACP : Kyon Freddie, kiska phone tha?

Fredrciks: ummm....nahin sir....woh.....meri wife ne kaha ki Lonavla mein bhi laashein hongi...to wahan jaao.

They enter the crime scene. A lady is dead with her thorat slit. Abhijit opens the kit while Freddy and Daya investigate the cirme scene and Tasha and Vivek question the witness.

Originally posted by: debayon

They enter the crime scene. A lady is dead with her thorat slit. Abhijit opens the kit while Freddy and Daya investigate the cirme scene and Tasha and Vivek question the witness.

Vivek: Inko sabse pehle kisne dekha tha?

Servant: Saab maine dekha tha.

Vivek: Accha batao kya huya tha?

S(in tears): Saab subhe subhe maine jab madam ke liye chai leke aaya, toh darwaza khola aur dekha k...kii...(burst into tears)

Tasha: Toh tumne koi cheek vagera nahi sunai diye?

S: Nahi, Maam

Daya(intervening): Yeh kaise ho sakta hain, eh? Ghar main tumhare alava koi nahi tha aur tumhe kuch nahi sunai diya. Kamal hai!!! Dekho hum CID se hain, humse jhoot bolne ki koshish bhi mat karna.

S: Saab main such bol raha hu, maine kuch nahin suna saab

Abhijit(to ACP): Sir, pehle toh uske sir pe vaar kiya gaya, yeh dekhiye uske sir ka piche yeh jo chot hain. Uske baad usko 1.5 inch ke nukili chaku se mara gaya. Kafi gusse main tha khoni. Usna iss bechari par baar baar vaar kiya.

ACP: Bechari. Paar tum chitna mat karo, CID se koi nahi bach sakta hain.

Interval(plz continue)

C'mon guys....no laash again...when Abhijeet said that he doesn't want to see laash again, it didn't mean that there is a laash. And his wife was just an excuse to get himself a holiday....try something new.

Daya: Accha ACP sir ko bolte hain ek picnic ka prayojan karne ke liye.
Abhijit: Arre, tumhara dimag to theek hai! Sir kabhi nahin manege.
Daya: Sahi kaha, ek second mere ek badiya idea aaya hai.
(calls Freddy) Freddy yahan aana. Mere ko ek idea aaya hain yaar. Tum jake ACP sir se pucho ki ek picnic ko sabko me jane ke liye.

Plz continue