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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Abhijeet ne Daya ke paass aaya aur kaha ki

....Daya, Main bore ho gaya hoon laash dekh dekhke.

daya ko bola chootiyo par jate hai

(acp enters)

ACP:ye chootiyo ki baat kaha se nikali

Abhijeet:fredricks ne phone par bataya

DAYA:woh kehi rehate ki ye idea dr salunke ne bataya

ABHIJEET: dr tarika behi anne wali hai kya ?

ACP: ye tarika ka chakar chodo case par dhan do .

Abhijeet blushing, daya giving a wicked 😉smile..."ji sir".

Then giving a wink to Daya "Sir, mujhe khabar mili hai kiLonavla mein ek laash mili hai; tehkeekaat karne humein wahanjaana padega"

ACP : Kya? Tumhe kisi kaphone aaya?

Abhijeet : Nahin sir, Freddie ko aaya.

ACP : Kyon Freddie, kiska phone tha?

Fredrciks: ummm....nahin sir....woh.....meri wife ne kaha ki Lonavla mein bhi laashein hongi...to wahan jaao.

ACP: Fredricks tum jab dekho apni wife ki baatein karte rehte ho.. wo to acha hai yaha Salunkhe nahi hai

Fredricks: Jab bhi mai apni wife ke baare mei kuch bolta hoo aap sabka dhua kyu nikal jaata hai
(Abhijeet & Daya smile )

Daya: Par ye to batao, tumhari wife aisa kah hi kyu rahi thi?

Daya: Accha ACP sir ko bolte hain ek picnic ka prayojan karne ke liye.
Abhijit: Arre, tumhara dimag to theek hai! Sir kabhi nahin manege.
Daya: Sahi kaha, ek second mere ek badiya idea aaya hai.
(calls Freddy) Freddy yahan aana. Mere ko ek idea aaya hain yaar. Tum jake ACP sir se pucho ki ek picnic ko sabko me jane ke liye.

Fredricks : Sir...

ACP : (Serious) Kya hai Freddie?

Fredricks : Sir, Daya sir ne kaha...

ACP : KYA kaha

(Daya makes a threatening gesture from behind the ACP)

Fredricks : Hmmm...woh... Yaad nahin aa raha hai Sir...

ACP : (Turning around, looking at Daya, Abhijeet and Vivek) Kya hua? Tum log kya khichdi paka rahe ho?

Vivek : Sir, Fredricks sir ki wife picnic jaana chahti hai sir.

ACP : Suddenly cooling down, hmm....bahut din ho gaya chutti par jaake...hum sab kal picnic jaayenge.

Abhijeet and Daya are suddenly shocked and look at each other with 'disappointed' expressions.

Abhijeet : Sir, aap bhi aaayenge????

ACP : Haan, kyon? Mujhe bhi chutti ki zaroorat hai. Main bhi khuli hawa mein saans lena chahta hoon.

Daya : Sir, Salunkhe aur ....................... Tarika ko bhi bulaayen???

ACP : Kyon...woh murdon se baat karne wala picnic mein kya karega?

Abhijeet : Nahin sir....aapko thoda 'company' denge...hain na Daya???

Daya : Haan haan....Sabko 'company' ki zaroorat' hai na sir.

ACP (one eyebrow raised) : Theek hai...Salunkhe aur Tarika ko bhi invite karo...

Abhijeet smiles....

ACP : Tho decide ho gaya...kal subah 7 baje hum sab yahan milenge aur ****(put some nice picnic spot near Mumbai) jaayenge. Aur Freddie... hum sab ke liye khaana tum laaoge.

And he leaves.

Abhijeet : Sha!!! Ab yeh ACP saab ko picnic aane ki kya zaroorat hai...HAIN????

Edited by visrom - 15 years ago

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tejashree

@teju_g

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

PICNIC SPOT KHONI

OR ANY DIFFERENT TITLE GIVES IDEAS

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: tgodse
PICNIC SPOT KHONI
OR ANY DIFFERENT TITLE GIVES IDEAS

Pleaaaseee guys....no murder in this story...can we have one story without a laash??? think of any other crime -kidnapping, theft, missing person, terrorism, one of our CID guys getting into trouble....no dead body here pls.

Edited by visrom - 15 years ago

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tejashree

@teju_g

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

cid faces terrorism😭😭

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: tgodse

cid faces terrorism😭😭

Ok, go ahead....pls continue the story....

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

It should go as start with the picnic and then eventually turn around to some suspense.......... ACP agreed so quickly, he is coming along and he decides the location of picnic spot...... This should turn out to be suspense.....

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: sunnyp1414
It should go as start with the picnic and then eventually turn around to some suspense.......... ACP agreed so quickly, he is coming along and he decides the location of picnic spot...... This should turn out to be suspense.....

Great....now, pls proceed with the story...

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Debayon Dutta

@debayon

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: visrom

Abhijeet ne Daya ke paass aaya aur kaha ki

....Daya, Main bore ho gaya hoon laash dekh dekhke.

daya ko bola chootiyo par jate hai

(acp enters)

ACP:ye chootiyo ki baat kaha se nikali

Abhijeet:fredricks ne phone par bataya

DAYA:woh kehi rehate ki ye idea dr salunke ne bataya

ABHIJEET: dr tarika behi anne wali hai kya ?

ACP: ye tarika ka chakar chodo case par dhan do .

Abhijeet blushing, daya giving a wicked 😉smile..."ji sir".

Then giving a wink to Daya "Sir, mujhe khabar mili hai kiLonavla mein ek laash mili hai; tehkeekaat karne humein wahanjaana padega"

ACP : Kya? Tumhe kisi kaphone aaya?

Abhijeet : Nahin sir, Freddie ko aaya.

ACP : Kyon Freddie, kiska phone tha?

Fredrciks: ummm....nahin sir....woh.....meri wife ne kaha ki Lonavla mein bhi laashein hongi...to wahan jaao.

ACP: Fredricks tum jab dekho apni wife ki baatein karte rehte ho.. wo to acha hai yaha Salunkhe nahi hai

Fredricks: Jab bhi mai apni wife ke baare mei kuch bolta hoo aap sabka dhua kyu nikal jaata hai
(Abhijeet & Daya smile )

Daya: Par ye to batao, tumhari wife aisa kah hi kyu rahi thi?

Daya: Accha ACP sir ko bolte hain ek picnic ka prayojan karne ke liye.
Abhijit: Arre, tumhara dimag to theek hai! Sir kabhi nahin manege.
Daya: Sahi kaha, ek second mere ek badiya idea aaya hai.
(calls Freddy) Freddy yahan aana. Mere ko ek idea aaya hain yaar. Tum jake ACP sir se pucho ki ek picnic ko sabko me jane ke liye.

Fredricks : Sir...

ACP : (Serious) Kya hai Freddie?

Fredricks : Sir, Daya sir ne kaha...

ACP : KYA kaha

(Daya makes a threatening gesture from behind the ACP)

Fredricks : Hmmm...woh... Yaad nahin aa raha hai Sir...

ACP : (Turning around, looking at Daya, Abhijeet and Vivek) Kya hua? Tum log kya khichdi paka rahe ho?

Vivek : Sir, Fredricks sir ki wife picnic jaana chahti hai sir.

ACP : Suddenly cooling down, hmm....bahut din ho gaya chutti par jaake...hum sab kal picnic jaayenge.

Abhijeet and Daya are suddenly shocked and look at each other with 'disappointed' expressions.

Abhijeet : Sir, aap bhi aaayenge????

ACP : Haan, kyon? Mujhe bhi chutti ki zaroorat hai. Main bhi khuli hawa mein saans lena chahta hoon.

Daya : Sir, Salunkhe aur ....................... Tarika ko bhi bulaayen???

ACP : Kyon...woh murdon se baat karne wala picnic mein kya karega?

Abhijeet : Nahin sir....aapko thoda 'company' denge...hain na Daya???

Daya : Haan haan....Sabko 'company' ki zaroorat' hai na sir.

ACP (one eyebrow raised) : Theek hai...Salunkhe aur Tarika ko bhi invite karo...

Abhijeet smiles....

ACP : Tho decide ho gaya...kal subah 7 baje hum sab yahan milenge aur ****(put some nice picnic spot near Mumbai) jaayenge. Aur Freddie... hum sab ke liye khaana tum laaoge.

And he leaves.

Abhijeet : Sha!!! Ab yeh ACP saab ko picnic aane ki kya zaroorat hai...HAIN????

Sunny morning...koyal singing

In the distant, you hear the entire CID team laughing

ACP(to Salunkhe ji): Arre Salunkhe, tumhare girlfriend ki baat karo na? kaisi hain woh?

Salunkhe: Arre ACP Sahab, woh toh theek hi hain. Jawan ladki hain, only 31(everyone laughs).

(Vivek gets up and goes towards Fredericks, who is playing with a flower)

Fredericks: She loves me, she loves me not....

Vivek: Aaj toh Sir, aapka kya kiske ke saath....

Freddy:(Gets up agitated) Vivek, tum na aake har ek cheez mein naak aada te ho.

Vivek: Sorry Sir

Freddy: Mere apne biwi se jhakra ho gaya

VIvek: Kyu, Sir? Apne kya kar diya?

Freddy: Arre kuch nahi, yaar. Maine began ke bharta ko jala dala tha. Toh woh gussa ho gayi thi. Mein bhi gussa karke chila diya us par. Ab woh ma ke wahan jane ki soch ri he.

Abhijit, calls to Vivek: Arre Vivek, kya huya? Tum log wahan kyu?

Vivek: Sir, Freddy sir ka apni wife se

(Freddy interrupts): Abe, tera dimag toh theek hain.

Daya(comes in): Kya huya, Freddy? Kya huya, hain? Kya phirse biwi se jhakra?(freddy nods) Chalo, koi baat nahi. Main abhi unko phone lagata hu.

Freddy: Nahi SIR

Plz continue

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sunny

@sunnyp1414

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Daya: chalo phir yahan kyun baithe ho. sabhi wait kar rahein hain
Freddy: mere wait kis liye.
Daya: Tang khichne ke liye. koi mila nahi ab tak.......... Masak kar raha hun ab chalo.

Every body is enjoying. Suddenly everyone saw a young girl is moving towards she approached she smiled to someone..... every body watching towards each other and then girl she passed away giving some message with eyes to someone....... No body knows whose that every body start suspecting each other....... After this conversation starts

continue from here

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tejashree

@teju_g

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

😭😭cid faces terrorism😭😭

Abhijeet ne Daya ke paass aaya aur kaha ki

....Daya, Main bore ho gaya hoon laash dekh dekhke.

daya ko bola chootiyo par jate hai

(acp enters)

ACP:ye chootiyo ki baat kaha se nikali

Abhijeet:fredricks ne phone par bataya

DAYA:woh kehi rehate ki ye idea dr salunke ne bataya

ABHIJEET: dr tarika behi anne wali hai kya ?

ACP: ye tarika ka chakar chodo case par dhan do .

Abhijeet blushing, daya giving a wicked 😉smile..."ji sir".

Then giving a wink to Daya "Sir, mujhe khabar mili hai kiLonavla mein ek laash mili hai; tehkeekaat karne humein wahanjaana padega"

ACP : Kya? Tumhe kisi kaphone aaya?

Abhijeet : Nahin sir, Freddie ko aaya.

ACP : Kyon Freddie, kiska phone tha?

Fredrciks: ummm....nahin sir....woh.....meri wife ne kaha ki Lonavla mein bhi laashein hongi...to wahan jaao.

Fredricks : Sir...

ACP : (Serious) Kya hai Freddie?

Fredricks : Sir, Daya sir ne kaha...

ACP : KYA kaha

(Daya makes a threatening gesture from behind the ACP)

Fredricks : Hmmm...woh... Yaad nahin aa raha hai Sir...

ACP : (Turning around, looking at Daya, Abhijeet and Vivek) Kya hua? Tum log kya khichdi paka rahe ho?

Vivek : Sir, Fredricks sir ki wife picnic jaana chahti hai sir.

ACP : Suddenly cooling down, hmm....bahut din ho gaya chutti par jaake...hum sab kal picnic jaayenge.

Abhijeet and Daya are suddenly shocked and look at each other with 'disappointed' expressions.

Abhijeet : Sir, aap bhi aaayenge????

ACP : Haan, kyon? Mujhe bhi chutti ki zaroorat hai. Main bhi khuli hawa mein saans lena chahta hoon.

Daya : Sir, Salunkhe aur ....................... Tarika ko bhi bulaayen???

ACP : Kyon...woh murdon se baat karne wala picnic mein kya karega?

Abhijeet : Nahin sir....aapko thoda 'company' denge...hain na Daya???

Daya : Haan haan....Sabko 'company' ki zaroorat' hai na sir.

ACP (one eyebrow raised) : Theek hai...Salunkhe aur Tarika ko bhi invite karo...

Abhijeet smiles....

ACP : Tho decide ho gaya...kal subah 7 baje hum sab yahan milenge aur mud island jaayenge. Aur Freddie... hum sab ke liye khaana tum laaoge.

And he leaves.

Abhijeet : Sha!!! Ab yeh ACP saab ko picnic aane ki kya zaroorat hai...HAIN????

Sunny morning...koyal singing

In the distant, you hear the entire CID team laughing

ACP(to Salunkhe ji): Arre Salunkhe, tumhare girlfriend ki baat karo na? kaisi hain woh?

Salunkhe: Arre ACP Sahab, woh toh theek hi hain. Jawan ladki hain, only 31(everyone laughs).

(Vivek gets up and goes towards Fredericks, who is playing with a flower)

Fredericks: She loves me, she loves me not....

Vivek: Aaj toh Sir, aapka kya kiske ke saath....

Freddy:(Gets up agitated) Vivek, tum na aake har ek cheez mein naak aada te ho.

Vivek: Sorry Sir

Freddy: Mere apne biwi se jhakra ho gaya

VIvek: Kyu, Sir? Apne kya kar diya?

Freddy: Arre kuch nahi, yaar. Maine began ke bharta ko jala dala tha. Toh woh gussa ho gayi thi. Mein bhi gussa karke chila diya us par. Ab woh ma ke wahan jane ki soch ri he.

Abhijit, calls to Vivek: Arre Vivek, kya huya? Tum log wahan kyu?

Vivek: Sir, Freddy sir ka apni wife se

(Freddy interrupts): Abe, tera dimag toh theek hain.

Daya(comes in): Kya huya, Freddy? Kya huya, hain? Kya phirse biwi se jhakra?(freddy nods) Chalo, koi baat nahi. Main abhi unko phone lagata hu.

Freddy: Nahi SIR

Daya: chalo phir yahan kyun baithe ho. sabhi wait kar rahein hain
Freddy: mere wait kis liye.
Daya: Tang khichne ke liye. koi mila nahi ab tak.......... Masak kar raha hun ab chalo.
Every body is enjoying. Suddenly everyone saw a young girl is moving towards she approached she smiled to someone..... every body watching towards each other and then girl she passed away giving some message with eyes to someone....... No body knows whose that every body start suspecting each other....... After this conversation starts
continue from here.

Edited by tgodse - 15 years ago

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