Random story making and other chit chat - Page 2

@ Rani: lol sorry! Had no idea about the clown phobia, I've taken it down now but 'IT' could very well do permanent damage like that at a young age.

Is the stretcher, the one the big empty holes? But the people covered with piercings are usually really nice...thank god I've only met the nice ones. If I came into contact with a mean one, he'd probably just scare me to the core😆! Haha I know what you mean, if you don't want to be noticed much, learn how to blend in (face wise).

🤣that just made me laugh, mum and dad just giving me some looks as well like what the hell's wrong with her....funny enough I can actually imagine pin face man in that scene with CC and banging his head against the wall, he'd probably pin his face to wall accidently in the process😆

Hey Bahar, clown pic taken down and out the story lol

Have you seen Alice in Wonderland? Is there a possible slot for the elder sister with BIG HEAD? I quite liked her weirdly sized head

Umm who are the holy hunters? I love the reason behind Nehas lost soul😆....very creative!

Originally posted by: Sunshine234

@ Rani: lol sorry! Had no idea about the clown phobia, I've taken it down now but 'IT' could very well do permanent damage like that at a young age.

Bless you missed our other conv when you were doing your exams. Before i forget Good luck with your results 😃

Is the stretcher, the one the big empty holes? But the people covered with piercings are usually really nice...thank god I've only met the nice ones. If I came into contact with a mean one, he'd probably just scare me to the core😆! Haha I know what you mean, if you don't want to be noticed much, learn how to blend in (face wise).

I havent meet many people/if any with crazy piercing like this....obviously not seen much of the world😆

Yup I completely agree, I'd rather see his face than just his eyes....how did you lot come up with this idea by the way? (the ninja mard and the lost soul😆). Bahar as long as during the the story his mask does come off😉

We can just leave his face exposed then 😆...or have the face exposed scene quickly.

You need to read the first thread to see our conv and how we came up with the ideas😆

🤣that just made me laugh, mum and dad just giving me some looks as well like what the hell's wrong with her....funny enough I can actually imagine pin face man in that scene with CC and banging his head against the wall, he'd probably pin his face to wall accidently in the process😆

🤣I burst out laughing with every post too 😆 Good job I am in my own room and no one is hearing me 😆

Have you seen Alice in Wonderland? Is there a possible slot for the elder sister with BIG HEAD? I quite liked her weirdly sized head

lol....thats interesting. Whos the older sister?

Umm who are the holy hunters? I love the reason behind Nehas lost soul😆....very creative!

Holy hunters are the piercing dudes😆 gang name😆 I like the Nehas losing her body story too 😆

For some reason I want a song sequence for evil cinderella trying to entice pin man 😆

Me too 🤣

Originally posted by: peacefulblossom

Pooja dont worry your in the right group. I lost my mind long time ago 😆

You just have to read my earlier post on this forum. Feel free to look through:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/chaand-chupa-badal-mein/1601458/own-creativity-just-for-fun

and

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/chaand-chupa-badal-mein/1625897/reaction-comical-analysis-just-for-fun

And you will see my mental state is LOL

P.s dont worry I'm actually a normal girl in real life 🤣

I'm back!!!... and 'wow' you two have been busy 😆..... I think this is gonna be one of those crazy long posts again!! .....this time I am going to try replying to you both on the same post 😉.....wish me luck!!

@ Bahar & Pooja 😆

Sorry for the extremely late reply..... had a crazy weekend 😃.....a super busy Saturday & today's mother's day so been busy with the family celebrating!!

I did run away Bahar 😆.....but I accidently ran in a circle & found myself back on this thread again 😆.....luckily no clowns here by then!!!😆.......... Thanks for taking the IT picture off Pooja....clowns Urghhhhh!!🤢... My brothers & sister told me IT was a comedy when I was little & made me watch it!!... They were evil back then 😆..... been scared of clowns ever since!!...

Yep the stretcher is the big empty hole one. My friend has one and I think it looks really horrid!!

I noticed the whole developing the evil characters love tales but we haven't even started on the love story of the leads 😆..... I'm a little scared of how our brains work now 😕.... were more interested in the evil characters then the lead's!!... 😆

😃 ....well just because he is a ninja & he has to play the part....I think we should show just the eyes..... by the way anyone know how good kinshuk is in his action sequences😕 .... don't wanna hurt the man with all the kung fu he's gonna have to do in his ninja outfit 😆....

And then later I like Bahars idea of the whole face being shown scene & agree with Pooja have a face revealed quick like in the first 15 minutes of the character being introduced 👍🏼..... eye contact & slow motion are good 😃... but no dramatic shots of anyone else that's in the place & no lightening noises ..... I always wonder why serials make background lightening noises in dramatic scenes!! 😕... see am going evil again 😆...instead of thinking that Viren is going to take his mask of & show his face to Nivi in a lovely dovey way.....I think something bad is going to happen & then Virens face is going to be exposed in a dramatic way......😆

By the way any of you two notice we have way to many bad people!! 😆..... Freddy, Evil Cinderella, The Vampire (well he's actually grey!! 😃), Pin man & his holy hunters!! ... In the serial world our story could last about 10 years!! .......🤣

Haha I forgot about all the pins in his head ....... now I'm imagining him stuck to a wall.😆 ......poor man stuck to the wall so he can't even escape CC 🤣

Evil CC trying to entice the Pin man (is this part horror or comedy??😆).... I would pay serious money to see that ........ 🤣

'Munni Badnam Hui' would probably suit her more for Pin Man...along with attempting the dance moves...that would just have me on the floor laughing if we ever get to see that. Imagine the look on Pin face...what the hell??? And then Rani's idea of banging his head in the wall

That scene would be epic...I'm laughing so much 😆

I haven't seen Alice in wonderland....but a sister with a big head sounds cool.... I think she'll fit right in!! & Bahar I like your Divya idea... I love how everyone is cursed 😆.... Is sid cursed too?? 😕.... he should be.... don't want the poor man to feel left out... like he is in CCBM 😆.... Maybe he could be the vampire & he's attached to Viren but he's actually following Nivi!!

Talking about innies & outies.... am more of an outie 😃.... I'm almost always out!!..... and dragging people out too!!... Only bad thing is the weather .... it's kind of crap here!!... but then I take my car & go for a drive.... I love just leaving the house... with no plans & no idea what I'm going to do.... I've ended up seeing some amazing places!!.... not been out the country recently though 😔...I love going travelling & I'm more of a 'we paid money so we gotta see & experience as much of this country life as possible'... people say I'm way too hyperactive on holiday!! 😆

I will write my bit into the story on the next post!!... will quote from you Bahar!!... then Pooja if you like can write your section in to the story by quoting my post (with my added bits in it)....... does this make sense??...this 😕 ya this 😃....

My parts are in red... feel free to change anything you like... I really don't mind!!

Originally posted by: peacefulblossom

This unusual tale started many years ago with soul...A soul (Neha/Nivi) looking for her body and her journey far across the realms of the 13 lost worlds. Unknown to her the Pin man & his gang of holy hunters are following her. This gang using their unique style and magical piercings to capture and destroy their victims, have become known throughout the 13 world as the most fierce and deadly bounty hunters that ever lived. Tthey were following her for her mysterious powers that she is yet to know of.

In her lonely quest of body searching she gets trapped between the blades of the wolverine of the gang and to her luck....and ninja wearing black comes to her rescue.

With a few ninja kicks the gang member is thrown through several walls (true 70/80/90s style Indian action)

"Are you ok? Ninja guy ask

"You can see me?" Nivi back

"Did you hit your head...ofcourse I can see you"

"I'm ok thanks" She replies in shock and confusion to why he can see her. The gang member had special weapons to catch souls but he seems normal why can he see her.

She decides to keep it to herself and doesnt want to enclose her weakness to a stranger even if the stranger helped her. After some talking Nivi decides to ask the ninija to become her bodyguard...because she is worried that attacks on her were increasing... Ninja disagree first but when he finds out about her ability to cross realms, he readily agree.

Because he too has a secret curse he wants to get rid of...and travelling the realms could help him.

On the corner of the screen a pair of red eyes flash...someone or something is closly following the ninija.

The red eyes focus on the direction of the Nivi and Ninja and then the eyes fade into the shadows.

As Nivi and the Ninja slowly walk towards the direction of the Sun knowing it would lead them to where the Ocean, Earth and Sky meets.... where this world ends and the 1^st lost world known as Shahkaj (Short for shahruck & Kajol () begins.

The Ninja, confused as to how Nivi gained her ability to cross in to the lost worlds decided to ask her questions, hoping she would reveal her secrets....

"Ermm" said the Ninja

Nivi looks towards the Ninja.

"Did you say something?" ask's Nivi

"Yeah... I did... how did you exactly lose your body? ... I mean how does that happen?" replied the Ninja

Nivi looks at the Ninja....staring deeply into his eyes wondering... thinking... should she trust him?... a man who saved her life, a man whose helping her still, a man who she's mysteriously drawn to. As she continued to stare hypnotically into his eyes, the Ninja cheekily said "i only asked because your body might have run away and if that's what happened I'd like to be warned in case it happens to me"

Nivi smiled back saying "no that's not what happened"

"I lost my body because I thought I was doing a good deed and it all went wrong. A forth night ago I went to sleep and dreamt the strangest dream. In this dream there was a man named Freddy who asked me if I was willing to sacrifice a small unimportant part of me that I wouldn't miss in exchange for eternal happiness. Although I didn't need it for myself I thought that my sister whose sad face I can never see could do with some happiness so I said ok. He took me to a room where in front of him was a tattered book, he started reading and I heard him chant that to gain eternal happiness my soul would be traded... I shouted my body needs my soul and so do i.... how do I live without my soul?... he smiled and then I knew I was never going to leave this place.... I prayed I woke up, I screamed, I shouted but nothing!.... no one came to help me... I knew then that I was alone.... I ran up to him hitting him with all my power he shouted your ruining my chant, if its broken now I don't know what will happen but it won't be good I promise you!.... suddenly I woke up, panting, shivering I felt a little better thinking it was all a dream... only to find out my dream wasn't a dream it was a nightmare and now my nightmare had become real... I had no body and nobody could help me."

The ninja looked at her with a slight sadness in his eyes like he knew what it was like to have his life ruined.

My parts pretty serious 😆... i though I'd start the Pyar Ki Kahani...😆...& adventure... will add comedy next time!!

Feel free to delete & change what you want👍🏼....

I go a little crazy expressive at times...😆.....today I am J K Rowling!!😆

Hey Rani, Bahar! Good weekends??

🤣Bahar I loved Divya having the big head (I can actually imagine it) and smallish body'.everyone's cursed and I forgot about Sid, and I agree Rani he should definitely have a key role in this story as CCBM haven't done much for him. So will Sid be Virens relative or no? I like him being a vampire'he can finally have the transition period from GOOD to EVIL (the guy needs some attention) and back to good if you want😊

'instead of thinking that Viren is going to take his mask of & show his face to Nivi in a lovely dovey way.....I think something bad is going to happen & then Virens face is going to be exposed in a dramatic way......'

Like they did in spider man? Well I can't remember all his face being revealed but I remember the scene when he gets stuck and Kristen Dunst sort of lifts his mask a little and then it's all smoochey smoochey from there😳. Can't imagine Nivi doing that though'.she's unfortunately not besharam enough😆

I love Shahkaj as the first lost world'.this is truly Bollywood inspired 😃

Originally posted by: Kahani_Ki_Rani

The red eyes focus on the direction of the Nivi and Ninja and then the eyes fade into the shadows.

As Nivi and the Ninja slowly walk towards the direction of the Sun knowing it would lead them to where the Ocean, Earth and Sky meets.... where this world ends and the 1^st lost world known as Shahkaj (Short for shahruck & Kajol () begins.

The Ninja, confused as to how Nivi gained her ability to cross in to the lost worlds decided to ask her questions, hoping she would reveal her secrets....

"Ermm" said the Ninja

Nivi looks towards the Ninja.

"Did you say something?" ask's Nivi

"Yeah... I did... how did you exactly lose your body? ... I mean how does that happen?" replied the Ninja

Nivi looks at the Ninja....staring deeply into his eyes wondering... thinking... should she trust him?... a man who saved her life, a man whose helping her still, a man who she's mysteriously drawn to. As she continued to stare hypnotically into his eyes, the Ninja cheekily said "i only asked because your body might have run away and if that's what happened I'd like to be warned in case it happens to me"

Nivi smiled back saying "no that's not what happened"

"I lost my body because I thought I was doing a good deed and it all went wrong. A forth night ago I went to sleep and dreamt the strangest dream. In this dream there was a man named Freddy who asked me if I was willing to sacrifice a small unimportant part of me that I wouldn't miss in exchange for eternal happiness. Although I didn't need it for myself I thought that my sister whose sad face I can never see could do with some happiness so I said ok. He took me to a room where in front of him was a tattered book, he started reading and I heard him chant that to gain eternal happiness my soul would be traded... I shouted my body needs my soul and so do i.... how do I live without my soul?... he smiled and then I knew I was never going to leave this place.... I prayed I woke up, I screamed, I shouted but nothing!.... no one came to help me... I knew then that I was alone.... I ran up to him hitting him with all my power he shouted your ruining my chant, if its broken now I don't know what will happen but it won't be good I promise you!.... suddenly I woke up, panting, shivering I felt a little better thinking it was all a dream... only to find out my dream wasn't a dream it was a nightmare and now my nightmare had become real... I had no body and nobody could help me."

The ninja looked at her with a slight sadness in his eyes like he knew what it was like to have his life ruined.