CBiansFF-Mind Killer updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Radhe Radhe CBian?? How are you all??

[FONT=Verdana][/FONT][SIZE=2][/SIZE]I was thinking of writing a FF on Dev and Radhika....

But this FF is a little different 😉

In this FF Somebody will write the 1st part and then someone else comtinues...


But I can't think of an idea of writing the first part so somebody else can write it maybe 😃 😳


SO somebody please write the first part and then somebody please continue...

Hope to see some people here...


Hotie,

Anmol 😊 😃 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello guys I hope there are people that are interested in reading this FF😕

Okay so here is Part 4 😃

Also this part was written by both Anu (Indiangirl) And me Anmol (hotie) Hope you enh=joy the next part.

Recap: Vivek quits the team but promises that he will replace himself with a much better player. That player is really late. The team waits for him there for the entire practise. Radhika gets really annoyed and starts saying bad stuff and that player😉is standing right behind her the team tries to tell her that he is standing right behind her then she faces him at last and obviously it is our Hot Dashing extremely handsome...Dev!!!!!!!!!!! Ab Aage.


Part 4


Dev stood there with a straight face. Radhika stood infront of him with a angry face.


Radhika: Dev Purohit can I ask you why are you so late for your first practise??

Dev just started whistiling and looked away.

Radhika got annoyed : Oye hello mister....Main tuhmse baat kar rahi hoon.

Dev: Personal reasons.

Radhika: what?

Dev: Haan personal reason tha to main late hogaya.

Radhika : Oh...whatever. Ab hamari practise time over hogaya. Team' turned back to the team' thank Mr.Dev .

Team just looked annoyingly at Dev.

Dev: Arre maine thodi na kahaa tha ki mere bigair tum log practise nahin kar sakte.

Radhika: Oh just shutup if you were smart you would've known theres only 1 week remaining and we need teh whole team to practise..

Dev: Oye hello You miss whatever. FYI main tumse 100 guna smart hoon.

Radhika: Really mister Dev. I never knew are you that smart I thought that you only had a brain thats about his big and made her fingers about pea sized apart.

Dev: Did you just call Me, Dev Raj Purohit, dumb?

Radhika: Maybe I did. Hmmm

Dev: FYI I have a bigger brain than you.

Radhiak was totally annoyed by now...: You uhhh!!!!!

Dev yelled while she was going: Aur mere yahaan comments bauhut ache lage muhje he said sarcastically.

And left form there cursing him.. f she stayed there longer she would've killed him.

Dev just grinned. He looked at teh team he knew how to cheer up girls. He didn't care about boys. He went to the girls and said: You girls can call me Dev. He took one girl away from the group and asked her, her number. He asked every single girl her number inclusind Deepika, Vishaka, and Mrinalini. But he as never going to call any of them. As he was not interested in any of them.

Dev and the team then left to the respectiev homes. Radhika, VIshaka and Deepika went home. And, Dev, Birju, and Arjun went to their home.

Radhiak got home.

Radhiak went striaght to her room. Radhika was annoyed by the new team member in their team.

Radhiak to VIshaka and Deepika:: God I hate that stupid idiot Dev!!! Samajta kya hai apne aap ko. "Personal reason" She mocked him. Personal reasons my foot.

Deepika: haan yaar bauhut flirtacious hai. Mera number poocha usne.

Radhika: Acha to woh uska personal reason kisi ladki ko dump hoga!! So amnoxious I dont know how im going to bear him!!! I hate being around him. At today it was just the first day I met him that too only for a little time... God help me!!

With that they started chatting and then they went to sleep.

In the meantime Dev and Birju and Arjun got home

heyw ent to their room.

Dev: Yeh Miss Mirchi kaisi ladki hai yaar. Tum usko bear kaise karte ho?

Arjun: arre yaar woh achi ladki hai bas gussa bauhut jaldi hojaati hai. adnthen left to his room along with birju returning to his room also.

It was night time. Dev was in his bedroom laying on the bed'..thinking''.yaar waise Ms Mirchi khoobsurat to bahut to hai. Bus Baolti bahut jyada hai.baaki dekhne mein bilkul Hema malini hai'..aur kaafi sexy bhi( He was saying all this to himself)'.but then there was knock at the door..It was daadi'she comes in and sees Dev smiling by himself'..


Daadi:- Dev


Dev:- Oh Heh Daadi'


Daadi:- Kya baat hai bada man hi man muskura raha hai tu'.

Dev:- Are kuch nahi Daadi..Mein to bas kuch soch raha tha..

Daadi:-Acha yeh to bata tera din kaisa tha?

Dev:- Din'..Yeah it was alright'..aaj miss Mirchi ke jo darshan hue'aur unki taazi taazi daant sun ke aaya hun mein.

Daadi:- Miss Mirchi'ab yeh kounsi nai bala hai??? Daant??//

Dev:- Kuch nahi Daadi mein to bas yeh keh raha tha ki mein basketball team mein hun'.aur waha Miss mir'.

Daadi:- Acha'.par tu yeh baar baar miss mirchi kis ko kahejaa raha hai''heh bhagwaan kahi nahi musical to mol nahi le li tune'..

Dev:- are nahi nahi Daadi..aisi koi baat nahi hai..

Daadi:- to phir baar baar Miss mirch apni budi Daadi ko keh raha tha'

Dev quickly turns his head and faced Daadi'..are nahi Daadi mein kabhi aapko aisa keh sakta hun.


Acha Daadi mujhe neend aa rahi hai'saying this he immediately lays on Daadi's lap'..and Daadi smiles and starts caressing his hair' and thinks to herself'.Kanha bas jaldi se iski jindagi mein koi aisi ladki laa de'..Jo mere dev ko responsible bana de'..Har kadam mein uska saath de'.Then she slowly looks at Dev who was sleeping soundly in her lapJ


Next morning (At Radhika's house)


Radhika was getting ready'She was spraying Tommy girl Perfume on her''and then Vish comes yawning''and then sees Radhika getting ready'Are Radhika kya baat hai badi jaldi tyaar ho gayi tu????/aur yeh kya aaj to bahut achi lag rahi ho tum'..Really like bilkul Pari jaisi'
(adhika was wearing this tank top)
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(nd she was wearing skiiny jeans and her hair were tied in a cute ponytail


Radhika:- Ohh thanks''Anyways aaj mein jaldi university jaa rahi hoon.Who mujhe ek to library kuch kaam hai aur saath hi mein gym jake practice bhi karloongi..


Vishakha:- Kya baat hai Radhika aaj tu itni jaldi tyar bhi ho gayi aur maa ko bhi pareshaan nahi kiya'hmmm I am impressed..Kahi Dev ne tujhe pehli najar mein hi pagal to nahi kar diya.

Radhika:- Shut up vishakha'aisa kuch nahi'.Alright''aur rahi baat Dev ki'..let me tell u Vishakha mera naam Radhika hai'.Radhika sabarrwaal. Aur Radhika sabarrwaal ko koi bhi predict nahi kar sakta'

Vishakha:- Haan theek hai'and then she smiles mischievously and starts singing''Pehli najar mein kaisa jaado kar diya'Tera bin baitha


Radhika interrupts Waisa yeh gaana abhi gaane ki kya jarrorat'..Mein sab samajh rahi hoon vishakha'

Vishakha:- Are mood hai mera''ab mein gaane bhi nahi gaa sakti'.

Radhika:- gaa sakti ho par yahi gaana kyon??? Anyways mein already bahut late ho gayi teri bakbak sun ke''Acha mein jaa rahi hoon'..Bye

Radhika reaches University and she directly goes to the library and gets some new interesting books for her and then she decides to go gym to do some practice by herself''

When she enters into gym'..She sees Dev shooting balls into the basket'..She gets so shocked seeing him there..

Then Dev turns around and sees Radhika with shocked face'..

And says to himself''Kya baat hai aaj to subah subah Miss mirchi ke darshan karva deeye Bhagwaan aaj to pakka din bahut kharaab jayega'

Radhika goes to him ''.Tum yaha kya kar rahe.

Dev:- Movie dekhne aaya hoon'.

Radhika:- Movie???? What the hell'

Dev:- ab gym mein main kya karne aaoonga basketball practice Karne aaya tha Actually meri kal practice nahi ho paai na to isliye yaha aa gaya ''.

Radhika:- Haan who sab to theek hai lekin pehle tumne kya kaha tha Movie Dekhne aaya hoon'

Dev:-ab tumne itna stupid question poocha to mera dil bhi kiya tumhe stupid answer dene ka''.chalo hisaab barbar'

Radhika rolls her eyes''and turns to leave cuz she didn't want to argue wid him anymore''
But then suddenly she slips and was about to fall down but then suddenly Dev grabs her from her waist and instead they both falls on the ground'.Radhika lands over him'..Her hands were on his chest..They both felt strange kinda excitement'.Their heart was thumping very fast'.Radhika's face was in Dev's neck'..He was holding her tightly from her back'.They were stll in that postion'..They senses went numb'.They didn't know what was going on''..It was the first time they touched each other''.Although Dev had many girlfriends'But he never felt this kind of excitement before''and it was same for Radhika.( This song was playing in the background)



But then suddenly Vishakha and Deepika arrives and sees them in that postion....They look very shocked! Radhika and Dev were lost in that moment when Vishaka smiled at their cuteness and pretended to clear her throught...UhhHmm!!! Radhika and Dev were snatchd out of their own world and realised what position they were in.

Dev- Yo Miss Mirchi aap mere upar se uthengi? I know I am very attractive but please you are not my type.

Radhika suddenly turned really angry and stood up fixing her clothes. Dev also got up.

Radhika- And by the way Mr Wierdo I think aap ne description wrong person ke saath laga di. Woh description meri hai. know im attractive. But as you said you are not my type. And BTW who yopu calling Miss Mirchi? Mr Wierdo!!

Dev- Arre baap re Miss Mirchi aapko apna hi naam nahi pata? Muhje to laga ki aap mujhse zyada smart hai lekin dekho dekho aapko apna naam hi nahi pata. And BTW Get it right its Dev. Dev Raj Purohit.

Radhika- Ph just shutup you gorilla! And sorry but I did get it right. Mr Wierdo! Radhika stressed the word Wierdo.

Dev: Kya bola?? Gorilla aur woh main. Please go look at your self in the mirror and then talk. Get it.

Radhika: Oye FYI main apne aap ko mirror main har subha dekhti hoon. Yeh muhje nahi lekin tumko karna chahiye. Got it. I think I should change your name to Mr. Maggot rather than Mr. Wierdo. It fits more! Mr. Maggot!

Dev: Sach main agar tum apne aap ko mirror main har subha dekhti ho to muhje lagta hai ki tum glasses chahiye.

Radhika- Oh just shutup.

Dev mocks Radhika - Oh just shutup.

Radhika- Uhhhh!!!!!

Dev again mocks her- Uhhh!!!

Radhika takes a deep breath counts to ten and clams down then she looks at Devs face and turns red with anger again and then just turns aroung and stomps her feet exiting the gym.

Dev does the same smirking though.,

Vishaka and Deepika just stand there looking at them fight and the words that they called eachother and they just stand there completey shocked. They didnt expect them to fight after the position that they were caught in. Then they left the Gym too. They caught up with Radhika.

Radhika was standing there now calm as he wasn't in front of her. She knew that she hated that Dev.

Vishaka and Deepika- Radhika!! Radhika!! Ruk na yaar!! Radhika!!

Radhika was too busy thinking about something else, and didn't here them shouting. VIshaka and Deepika finally caught up with her. Vishaka- Radhika tu theek toh hai na ruki kyun nahi? Radhika shook as she noticed someone talking loud against her ear.

Radhika- Arre Vishaka Deepiks tum log. Oh sorry!

Vishaka- Nahi Nahi koi baat nahi. Acha tu yeh bata tum ruki kyun nahi.

Radhika- Kuch nahi main kuch soch rahi thi.

Vishaka winked at Deepika from behind Radhikas Back- Sachi main kiske baare main?? Dev ke bare main??

Radhika- Guys shutup main uske baare main kyun sochungi! Stupid idiot maggot that ******* Ke baare main mein kabhie nahi sochungi.

Vishaka and Deepikas mouth were wide open as they heard the horrible Words echoing in their ear.

Deepika- Radhika you need to give him a chance he is not as bad as you think he is, And don't call him those words. That really bad!

Radhika- Arre main toh tum logon ko bataa rahi thi what I think of him. I hat him sooo much!! Loser!!

Just then the annoucement for the basketball meeting at the basketball court right now. Radhika nd the girls had prepared that meeting. So they headed off to the basketball court.

In the meantime Dev was in the locker room changing his clothes. Arjun was also there with birju. Dev was in the changing room. He was shirtless looking completely hot! He went to his locker to get his shirt. When Arjun and Birju were talking Arjun looked at Dev and then at birju and bust out laughing. He was laughing really hard. Dev was confused and so was Birju. Birju was looking at Arjun laughing hard and he tunred his face towards Dev and then back to Arjun but slowly he turned his face back to Dev. He also burst out laughing! He was laughing as hard as Arjun. They both were laughing like Maniacs. Dev was completely confused. Was there something on his face?

Dev- Arre yaar batao to kya hua itna maniacs ki tara has kyun rahe ho?

Arjun- Are Dev yaar apni neck pe yeh jo lipstick ka nishan hai'.yeh to remove karle''.Warna agar humari sceinece teacher ne yeh dekh liya to teri kher nahi.

Dev quickly looks at the mirror and sees a pastel orange lipstick mark on his neck. He was shocked at seeing that. He then started thinking about that moment and a really small smile spread on his face. Dev then shook his head and said to himslef what was he thinking. That was the worst moment of his life he doesn't want to think of that moment again.

Arjun and Birju finally stopped laughing thats when Dev started removing the lipstick mark.

Birju- Acha bataa kya ladki ka naam kya hai?

Dev- Arre aisa kuch nahi hai, Koi ladki nahi hai.

Arjun- Toh kya tu bi lipstick lagane lagaa hai? Yaar Dev muhje tumsae ye umeed nahi thi.

Dev- Arre chup. Woh Miss Mirchi

Before he could finish Birju interrupted...

Birju- Acha ab janaab Radhika ke peeche pade hai. Kya baat hai bada tez nikla tu.

Dev- Arre chup jab main Gym main ayaa tha main practise kar raha tha aur woh agayi aur phir woh gir gayi mere upar. Bas aise hi hogaya hoga.

Arjun and Birju nodded.

Dev changed into his shirt and then the annoucement happened and then he headed off to the basketball meeting along with Birju and Arjun.

Precap: Radhika and the girls were watching Devs skills Radhika was suprised she never knew that he could play so good. Radhika still hated him alot!! She looked away and watched the other girls admiring Dev she looked at him disgusted and then looked away. She thought he is soo gross how do these girls like him like seriously. Uhhh.. and she shivered.

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There is our part hope you guys like it and please comment and me and Anu are not going to update untill we have 10 comments atleast!😆😃

Enjoy This part by Anu and I😃
Edited by hotie - 15 years ago
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Okays guys I am posting the first part since I can't seem to find Devika Di anywhere. But if she is writing it she can post her part too...
For now bear with me 😕

Part1. I think it is pretty long...Indangirl has already read this.


Radhika is really pretty, and sexy, very modern girl...but still when she needs help she goes to her kahna for help. Every Guy in school would want to be together with Radhika...Radhika has the whole school crazy for her...Since she is popular every girl wants to be friends with her to gain some popularity....On the other hand Dev is a handsome dashing boy...girls fall for her the first time they see him...he is flirtacious type of guy, flirt with hot and sexy type girls...Has had lots of girlfriends but never had actually shared the feeling called Love with them...He is also very popular. Radhika also has had some boyfriends. Some. Deepika is Radhikas best friend, She helps her alot. Radhika is modern and very bubbly but she is friendly too and sincere. Radhika always takes Deepikas advice to take a big step in life always. Deepika and her are BFFAE, Radhika has another best friend called tamana she has the same spot as deepika in Radhikas life. Dev also has best dudes His best dudes are birju and Arjun. They also help him in big or little situations they are alwasy there for him. It is the first day of college and radhika is still sleeping. So is Vishaka. Devki does all of the chores in a huffy. She looks at the time and is shocked... Devki" Arre kahna ji in ladkiyon ka kya karoon gi main!" she then hurries to Radhika and Vishakas room. Vishaka is nice in here. she is always there for her. and she is very close to her sister. Radhika also loved Vishaka very much. Devki enters Radhika and Vishakas room and looks at the big mess they have made in the room she looks at the mess in shock." Ye baad main samaal loongi pehle ladkiyon ko utha ti hoon".....She goes over to vishaka and radhikas feet and tickles them... Radhika moved and says: Maa sone do na! Vishaka: Haan ma sone do na. Devki: arre pehle din college main late hoke jaana hai kya? But she got no reply so she thought of something she went to the bathroom and got a bucket filled it up with water and goes over to the girls and splash the girls are all wet! Both girls get up horrified radhika: Maa ye kya kar diya mere saare kapde geele ho gaye and gets up aur bed bi geela ho gaya ab to theek tara se sau bi nahi paoongi! Vishaka was too horrified to say anything. Radhika shook off the water on her. Devki: Dekha yahi nateeja hota hai jab pehli baar kahe uth ti nahi ho..Aaj college nahi jaane ka iraadha hai? Pehle hi din professer pe bad impression daal ke daant khaani hai kya? Vishaka didn't care that she was wet she just fell on the bed and went to sleep again. Radhika was yawning and listening to Devki. When she listened to the last sentence she sprang out of bed Radhika: Maa aapne pehle kyun nahi bataaya, Maa aapko pehle uthanaa chahiye tha. She goes and gets the outfit that she is going to where to college and get her bruch and towel. Radhika: Dekhiye mom agar main aaj late hogayi to its all your fault. and enters the bathroom. Devki listened to all of that without saying anything. Devki: Hey raam ye kaisi musibat hai. Then Devki sees Vishaka sleeping soundly...Devki: Ab iss ko kaise uthaun, then somehow Devki gets Vishaka too get up. Vishaka is still yawning in her PJ's and is sitting on the bed and waiting for radhika to come out so she came go and freshen up. She waits there and gets bored and gets sleepy. she is just about to close her eyes when Radhika come out. Vishaka opened her eyes wide when she came out, because she looked so pretty. Radhika was wearing these shorts justpretend that they were a little more bigger http://www.polyvore.com/abercrombie_fitch_women_new_arrivals/thing?id=584424 And she was wearing this top http://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=101&productId=38409&color=PURPLE&altImageId=1 and blue fipflops. Vishaka: Radhika you look amazing... Radhika headed off to look at herself in the mirror...while going there : I know...woh to main hamesha hi lagti hoon...bus aaj thodi zyada lag rahi hoon...because you know its the first day,there should be a good impression on the boys right...Vishka: Ya ok....And enteered the washroom to freshen up...radhika quickly did some light makeup and got her books and went out for breakfast.Radhikas family is really rich...they live in a mansion...Radhika and Vishakas room is huge. She came out into the grand dining room. There Devika was getting the breakfast ready and Brij Mohan. Im not making him a shastri in here. Brij Mohan Radhikas Dad was sitting and eating breakfast. Good morning Mom and Dad. Mom mera nashta tyar hai..muhje dher horahi hai... She was just about to take a bite of toast when she looked at the clock... Radhika: Shit muhje dher horahi...aur agar main late hogayi to muhje bauhut daanth padegi and stuffed teh toast itn her mouth took her books and starting walking towards her car. Devki: arre nashta to khake jao...Radhika: bas uhje bookh nahi hai.. And Mom its all your fault I am late!! She went in her car int he drivers seat (in here radhika can drive) put the books down and started the car. Vishaka came out of the room...and asks : MOm radhika kahaan hai ? Devki: arre beta woh to abi abi bahaar gayi ahi... Vishaka: what!!! and ran outside.. Radhika was about to drive past their mansions gate when she hears radhika!! radhika!! radhika looks back at Vish... Shit! She u-turns the car and goes back to Vish... Radhika: Arre sorry main tuhme jaldi jaldi mein bhool hi gayi... Vishaka: Woh kaunsi nayi baat hai.. Radhika: ab mera sirr mat khaa aur beth jaa dher hoerahi hai!! Vish sits in and radhika drives off. Radhika parks the car infront of the college and runs with Vish because the lecture had just begun... Radhika and Vish stood infront of the gate... catching their breath... The lecturer: Ab aapkaa time hogaya aane ka. You girls are late... Radhika adn Vish: Sorry mame. Lecturer: now sit down. Radhika and Vishaka sit down and get ready for the lecture... the lecture was going on and radhika slowly slowly was closing her eyes feeling sleeping. she yawned. she closed her eyes when vishaka nudged her... Vish: Radhika kya kar rahi ho lecture ko suno... Radika: arre pehla lectuer hai...kuch nahi sikhane waale...bauhut boring hai...ek kaam hkar tu bi sau ja nahi to tu bi bore hojayegi..Vishaka: Radhika chup kar ke lecture sun.. Radhika was annoyed and started listening to the lecture. Meanwhile at PB: Our Dev babu was still sleeping and Birju was trying to wake him up... Birju tried just about everything...Birju then scram in his ear college ke liye late horaha hai. Then Birju left for college with Arjun. Birju and Arjun were scolded but then they sat down and listened to the lecture in the same college as Radhika. Dev the finally got up and looked at the time Dev: Shit shit shit...and ran in the bathroom. He came out looking extremely dashing and handsome. he went out and started looking for Birju and Radhika. Dev: Ramu kaka Birju aur Arjun kahaan hai. RamuKaka: Beta woh to college gaye hai... Dev: unki toh main... Then just left in his car to college. he stood in front of the college and saw everybody... he saw Birju and Arjun he went towards them: Saalo muhje akela chod kar tum dono yahaan agaye muhje uthaya kyun nahi? Birju: Arre hjumne to bauhut koshihsh ki mekin tum uthe nahi! Dev:shutup. Dev realised that he missed the first lecture. Shit SHit shit!!! and pulled his hair. just then a secretary came and told him that the professer calle dhim in his office. Dev went thewre and stood infornt of the desk with his head bowed. The professer was looking extremely mad. Professer: Mr. Dev right? Dev: yes sir. Professer: Toh Mr.Dev aapka time hogaya college aane ka aur woh bi pehla din. Agar pehle din main bi yahi haal toh aage kya hoga? Dev: sir aage se yeh mistake kabhie nahi karoonga sir. Professer: aapko pata hai aap lecture miss kar gaye hai. Aur isski ye sazaa hai ki aap lunch time pe aap mere cabin mein lecture sun rahe hoge muhjse. aur aap ko question sheet bi dijayegi aur yeh aapke marks mein bi count kiyajayega. Is that clear. Dev: Yes sir and turned around to leave making faces immitating the proffeser

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Okay guys here is my part...PLease comment and tell me how it was...
I hope it wasnt bad 😕
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Okay in this part Indiangirl gave me the ideas and I wrote it down...
I hope you guys like it and please do comment!
SO that we know that people are actually enjoying it.
We will be continuing this FF after CB ends too.


Part 3!



The next day Vishaka and Deepika got up since they were excited and they obviously had to get to school and since there were 3 people and only 1 bathroom in their room. But as usual our Radhika Rani was still sleeping. Vishaka and Deepika just sighed they wondered that even though she hadn't stayed up that long yesterday night how can she still be sleeping. After thinking a while they thought of how to wake her up they wanted to wake her up in a fun way. So they took the pillows and started hitting Radhika that didn't care that they were hitting her and still sleeping. They were surprised as they thought that she would wake up all annoyed. Leave annoyed she didn't even wake up. Wow, they thought, then they started thinking some more and then thought of a perfect way. Vishaka got some whipped cream and put whipped cream on her hand and then Deepika got a feather and tickled her nose with it. Radhika iched her nose with the whipped cream and her face was noe covered with whipped cream. She felt icky she wakes up and looks in the mirror and sees the whipped cream she gets annoyed knowing that Deepika and Vishaka did that. She screams gets a pillow and starts hitting both of them. They can't help but laugh. Radhika goes inside the bathroom to freshen up. SHe comes out wearing this top

http://texere.tradeindia.com/Exporters_Suppliers/Exporter20003.335057/Trendy-Girls-Top.html


This shorts:

http://www.elitemvp.com/images/new-large-pics/shorts-black.jpg

These shoes:

http://runningshoes.guidestobuy.com/womens-running-shoes/diadora-womens-mythos-road-womens-running-shoe/


Vishaka : Radhika why aren't you wearing something hot today?

Deepika : Yeah why these normal shorts and top?

Radhika : Buddhu You know I feel more comfortable in these kinds of clothes rather than the other hot kinds of clothes. To tell you the truth I'm not even feeling comfortable right now either...I wore these because I would feel a little more comfortable. You guys know what I wear a house right. SO why ask this kind of question?

Vishaka : Yeah but I was wondering why would you wear it to college...like seriously.

Radhika : I've already told you guys I am over boys and no need t impress htem and what do you want me to do? impress girls? She giggled.

Vish, deepika, and Rads shared a smaal moment of laughter.

They ate breakfast and then went to college in Radhikas car.

They reached there and saw the papers hung up on the bulletin board about the auditions for basketball that was going to be done by them!
They were really excited... The auditions were today...This time Radhika payed attention to the what the teacher was saying because in this one they were actually teaching them something.

At the end of the college day the girls had to stay because that was when the try outs for the basketball team was happening. They sat down in their 3 chairs, Lots of people came...

The first person to come was Mrinalini. They smiled as they thought of her last night. Mrinalini started.

She was actually really good. She had good basketball skills. But nobody was better than Radhika. Mrinalini got slected but the girls were going to tell the position to everyone tmmrow. Right now were the tryouts. They had to get the poeple selected by today because they had to practise alot. The next person was Vivek. Vivek was pretty good but not as good a s mrinalini so he got slected but probably not for the leading players. The next person was Arjun. You might be wondering if Arjun came why didn't Dev well this is what happened.

Recap: The boys were standing infront of the bulletin board and were erading the basketball paper. Arjun and Birju got excited. and were surely going to tryout. Meanwhile Dev wasn't looking interesting at all.

Arjun: Arre yaar Dev tu bi chal na tu to bauhut acha khel leta hai. Khelna humare saath!

Dev: Nahin yaar main nahi jaanaa chahta! Bauhut boring hoga wahaan. Tum log chale jao.

And he walked off to his car,

The boys sighed chal Birju hum hi chalte hai.

Recap end:

Arjun had good skills he was selected.
So was birju.
Lots of people were coming and few were selected and some were not.

The try out was over the girls went home and thought about the positions.


The next day:

The Girls were at college and the were hanging the tryout positions.

The list was.

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Basketball : People that made it to the Basketball team and the positions.

Captain Radhika : Shooting gaurd.
Vishaka : Point gaurd
Deepika : Small forward.
Mrinalini: Centre.
Vivek: power forward.

Subs:

Arjun : small forward
Birju : point gaurd
Sanjana : power forward
Molly : shooting gaurd.
Josh : centre.

Bench:

Priyanka
Nashalini
Angad
Anuraj
Natasha


It was really hard for us to choose.
Everyone of you were awesome!

Signed,
Radhika,
Deepika,
Vishaka.

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With that The practises started they started practising and practising. There was something going on between Viek an Mrinalini, it was noticed by soem of them but when asked they denied. Everybody was very into practising getting ready for the game that is soming up in 1 week. When Vivek got annoyed of people that were making up rumours. He decided to leave the basketball team, he went over to his captain to tell her the news.

Vivek: Radhika I have something to tell you.

Radhika: Yes Vivek go on.

Vivek: Umm radhika I want to quit the basketball team.

Radhika was stunned: Why she asked..

Vivek : some personal reason but I promise ill get another person that can replace me.

Radhika was annoyed all that practise for nothing : Vivek look if that person is not good than I dont think that we will be able to make him good in one week than thats fine. can I ask who is this person?

Vivek : My younger brother, He is really good!

Radhika ok then send him to practise tommorow.

VIvek: Okay And left with that.



The moon hid while the sun set, adhika got up welcoming a new day, Today she woke up early because she felt excited, She didnt know why she felt excited but she just did. She had this tingly feeling in her stomach. She went off to college.


The new person was going to come today Radhika was waiting for him for over 1 hour still nho sign of him. He was late! Radhika was annoyed, She turned towards her team.

Radhika : What is wrong with this guy. Just because he comes from a big family doesn't mean that we are going to sit here like cows waiting for him. Uhh vivek was always on time. What does this brother of his think he is. While she was saying all of this another guy behind was listening to the comments he was getting, the team saw him and was trying to tell radhika by signaling. Radhika looked at one of them. Kya Kya iska kya matlab hua? She did the signal he was sending to her to be wuiet. But she kept talking. Stupid Idiot samajta kya hai apne aapko. Anyways I am going bye!

Se turned around and saw a tall dashing gu infront of her, her eyes widened, she turned to her team and gave them the gaze as if why-didn't-you-tell-me-he-was-standing-right-there ...look. She turned back to him and put her hands on her hips with a angry face. She looked at him

It was no other but over Dashing...

Dev!!!

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Part 3- Just a weird FF by me lol Recap: Radhika and Vishaka came a little late because of their laziness on the first day of college. Because of Dev's laziness he came so late that he missed a whole lecture. So he gets a punishment of listening to the lecture on his lunch time with a questionnaire. Dev came out passing Arjun and Birju who were waiting for him to come out. Dev didn't notice that they were waiting for him. Arjun and Birju saw him and ran to him. "Arre yaar kya hua Professer ne kys kaha?" birju said. Arjun "Haan yaar kya hua? Punishment milli kya" Dev" Haan muhje punishment milli lunch time pe muhje khaane ke bijaae lecture sunna padega" Birju and Arjun burst out laughing Dev " aur who bi questionnaire ke saath" Birju and Arjun were now trying to control their laughter but just couldn't seem to. Dev " Haan haan hasso iss bechare ki haalat pe hasso, aur waise bi ye sab kuch tum logo ki waja se hua hai" Birju " Kya humari wajaa se tume nahi pata hum dono ne tuhme uthane ki kitni koshish ki lekin tu to uth hi nahi raha tha, aur waise bi tu chahta hai ki hum dono ko bi punishment mille? " Dev in a low voice so Birju and Arjun couldn't hear " Milti to acha hota muhje akele to nahi daant khani padti pehle professer se aur ghar jaane ke baadh Dad se!" Arjun " Kya kahaa tune? Dev " Arre maine to kuch bi nahi kahaa. Meanwhile Radhika and Vishaka caught up with Deepika, Radhika " itna boring, lamba lecture tha" Vishaka " Radhika tum to bauhut panda chahti ho na? To tum kya sau ke padti ho?" Radhika " Shutup Vishaka muhje pata hai pehle lecture main kuch nahi sikhate okay. ( Okay so in this FF Radhika sometimes is tomboy/girly girl. I know confusing but it depends on her mind as well as how comfortable she feels. She wears clothes like a girl does when she is trying to impress someone or some special occasion. She doesn't feel as comfortable in the girly clothes than she does in her baggy pants and shirt. Shes most likely to wear a tomboy stuff. Her mind is a total tomboy mind. She doesn't like doing stuff that normal girls would want to do. When she was little Vishaka used to play with dolls and everything but she would always play sports and hang out with boy usually then as she grew up she began to impress boys with those clothes) They were all sitting down getting bored . " Guys Lets do something exciting …so boring here!" Vishaka " oh to hai lekin kar bi kya sakte hai" she said resting her chin on her hand. Radhika " Iska kya matlab hua hum yahaan bore hote hote bethe rahenge kuch to karna hi padega" She said annoyed. Deepika " Radhika rani tu hi bataa kya karna chahiye, humko to kuch idea nahin hai tu hi bataa de kya karna hai" Radhika " Theek hai tum budhu dimaag yahaan wahaan dekhte raho aur main soch tu hun " She said getting even more annoyed but then started thinking about what they can do that is exciting When her eyes opened wide as she thought of a perfect thing to do. Deepika and Vishaka were looking around at the boys judging them and comparing them. They were looking at some of them eating apples to judge them how they would kiss 😆 While they were looking around Deepika looked at Radhika and saw her eyes wide as she has thought of something she nudged Vish. Vish saw " Radhika kuch socha tune?" Radhika faced them and " Yesss!! I got the perfect plan!! Dekha mera damaag tum dono ke dimaag se dus guna zyada chalta hai" Visha and Deepika" Theek hai theek hai pehle tu bataa tera plan kya hai?" Radhika" Mera plan pure school year keliye work kar sakta hai. Mera plan yeh hai ki kyun na hum Ek basketball team banaye After all Ilove basketball!" Vishaka and Deepika thought that it wasn't a bad Idea as they weren't that bad and radhika was really really good at any sport. Vish" Lekin hum Team 3 logon se banayenge? After all 5 people should be on the court and 5 people on sub and 5 people backups." Deepika " Haan yaar hum 15 persons kahaan se layein ge?" Radhika " Tum log bilkul stupid ho dekho ye college ahi yahaan bauhut people hai in mein jo ache players hai hum daal lenge." Deepika " Theek hai good idea hum aaj hi jahaa ke professer se baat karenge After all papers bi lagane pade ge." Radhika " Haan kitna mazaa ayega soch humari ek basketball team bi hogi" she said all excited. With that the girls started talking about all of the stuff they will have to do which people they will pick. They were all excited especially Radhika s she loved! Basketball sooooo much! It was probably on her favorite and best sport also. So off they went in lunch to the professers cabin to talk about the basketball team. They knocked on the door. The professer was doing the lecture while Dev was listening to it. The professer heard the knock and told Dev to fill out the questionnaire as much as he could. Radhika was in front of them. Professer opened the door and saw 3 girls. Prof." Yess ladies" As soon as Dev heard ladies his ears were hooked on to the conversation. The Girls walked in and saw somebody filling out something but he has his back to them. Radhika and the girls started talking to the prof. about basketball. Dev heard basketball and since it was a girls and boys mix he thought about it then he thought: Nah Iwouldn't want to join this tacky basketball team and infact I bet they will lose everygame. I don't like losing so I aint going and put his head in the questionnaire and started actually doing it. Radhika and girls talked and the prof. agreed he thought that it was an awesome idea. The girls went away excited. College day was over and they went back to their house as Radhika and Devs house was close to the college. Deepika stayed over that night to talk about the stuff. Dev arjun and birju obviously lived in one house. Deepika borught her stuff to their house and was coming in to the room and saw Radhika baggy pants and a tank top. She already knew that radhika was more of a tomboy. She walked in and saw Vish on the her iphone Texting when Radhika was on the T.V. Deepika " Hey guys" Vish turned her Iphone off and Radhika turned the T.V off. They started talking about how the upcoming day was a big day for them. Had to pick the players and everything . They started talking about that stuff. SO Radhika was making a list now they had to pick. Radhika " Lets see how about Mrinalini?" Vish " Yup she seems good but what plave can she play?" Radz " We aint know yet but tomorrow will check out her skills and see if shes worthy of being the opening player. Or a sub or a back up" Deepika " Okay hmm how about VIvek?" Radz" We'll do the same as mrinalini." They started thinking of other people and thought of all of them then at night when they were about to go to sleep, they were laying on the bed chetting away, Vish " Radhika you know when we went to see prof. ther was a guy there. Form the back he seemed so hot don't you think so?" Deepika" I agree!" Radhika " Uhhh you guys are serioualy messes he did not look hot at all. After all Im over boys now, I don't like any of them I think all of them are bunch of maggots" Vish hit her with a pillow Rad " Ow what was that for?" she said rubbing her arm Vish " hmm lets see here asre the reasons 1 you didn't think that he was hot as well when us both thought he was, 2 how can you not like boys anymore I mean their all lattoo over you..3 Boys are so not maggots. Radhika " Oh please you must be having a brain fart anyways lets go to sleep after all we have a big day tomorrow okay so gud night" She faced the other way and went off too sleep. SO did Deepika and VIsh after chtting about guys 😆 Next day! I hope I aint boring you. Anyways I will post the part today it self the next one after this as I haven't been posting for a long time!! SO here is one part the next one coming up. I know this part was boring. Bear with me and do tell me if you think I boring you.. I hope im not boring you. But I know I am.
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😆Hello guys how are you guys okay I promised Palak that I will update a part on saturday but then I got too busy so now She made me do it today. So this part goes for Palak! Hope you guys enjoy it. You too Palak!

Part 5 - Welcome new entrants -

Chapter 5 ka Part 1



Recap: Radhika and Dev fights happening. Radev very cute part in the Gym. Instead of explaining what happened to their friends a fight starts. Radhikas Lip stick Mark on Dev's shirt. Cute! Basketball meeting. Both going there now lets see whats going to happen next.


Dev put his shirt on and headed off to the Basketball court where the meeting was held by the captain. He walked there with Birju and Arjun by his sides. Radhika on the other hand was getting late as she had to put her books in her locker. She was trying her best to not get late. But there were alot of books and she dropped them in a hurry. It took time to pick them up and walk over there put her books away and then walk over to the basketball court. There she saw the team waiting for her.

Radhika: Sorry guys Im late she said tying her sweater around her waist tightly.


Dev saw her slim figure while she was tieing the sweater around her waist. Dev then hit his head. Mad at himslef for thinking that way for Miss Mirchi. He barfed in his mind. Dev looked at her face and walked over to her.

Dev- Acha toh agar tum late hogayi to koi problem nahi aur agar main late hogaya to problem hai. Aur toh aur tum to captain ho na, Kaisi captain ho tum. Apne aap hi Meeting rakhi aur phir apne aap hi late hogayi. Wah Wah!

Radhika- Oye Mister Whatever. Main actual reason karke miss hui thi not "Personal Reasons" Sun liya. Aur By the way I can be a way better Captain than you.

Dev - Keep Dreaming!

Radhika- Oh god Why do you always make me have to shut his mouth up? Anyways I am not going to waste my breath and Time on Mr.Wierdo standing here...So Team What I needed to tell you guys...

Dev - Oye You got it the opposite...He looks back and all around then turns back to Radhika...Im sorry where is Mr.Wierdo cause I am not seeing him....Oh wait See your always say the opposite stuff I think you should get it checked from the doctor...Its Mrs.Wierdo and She standing right in front of me...Oh wait I neevr knew you were a man!

Radhika Glares at him but then she remembers not to waste time...

Radhika - Anyways Team We only have About Untill our Tournament...The finals Are not in this Tournament We have made the Final in this College..Extra Special..So we have to practise practise practise...So we have to practise alot..That means that we are going for a practise right now... As you guys know there is a newbie in our team... We have to see hsi skills to fix his position .........


Radhika turns to Dev...She smiles...and makes a gesture saying go ahead...Dev smiles back... Obioulsy those were fake smiles...De walks up to the Court...

Dev- Gimme the Rock!

Radhika understand him...She picks up a rock and is about to throw it to him... Dev ducks pretecting his head...Meanwhile Radhika starts laughing histarically...

Dev - shutup and give me the Basketball if you know what I mean...

Radhika stops and passes the Ball to him.

Dev starts showing them his skills the team is surprised all of the girls are just looking at him thinking how hot he looks and all of the boys start feeling jealous wanting to be Dev right then...But most of all Everybody was suprised even Radhika!

Deepika - Wow he looks sooo hot and he is sooo good!!

Vishaka - I totally agree with you.

Radhika looks at Deepika and then Vishaka and then at Dev and almost peuks as she tried to find him hot.. But she couldn't anywhere.

They saw his skills a little more..

Radhika- Okay stop...Team which position should he be?

Team Mem. 1. - I think that he is really good...I think that You and Dev are exact good! So I think that you both should be captain what dop you say team!!

Team - Yeah that A good idea!!

Radhika's Chin Dropped open! Dev Smiled! He looks at Radhika...He closes her mouth...

Radhika turns towards Dev and shows him a angry face and then leaves from there stomping away..

The rest of the team started Practising.

Next Day.

[ I posted a topic of who wanted to be in the FF..So these are the following people.

Shrel Di, Anu, Yumna Di, Devika Di, Sonali, Priya, Vasha, Abhilasha, Radhika23, Minajay, Sunita, Liashna, AvinaRadev48, I...




Name in IF Name in FF

Radev24 Shrel

Indiangirl09 Anu

Billo Yumna

Devika Devika

Palak Sonali

Nycsweetie Priya

SugarSpice Vasha

Abhilasha_Dreamz Abhilasha

Radhika23 Rina

Minajay Mini

Chalhov Sunita

Liashna Liashna

AvinaRadev48 Jia


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Radhika feels something on her Feet she wiggled a bit.. The thing was tickly...She feels it again..She moves her feet... She feels it again Finally she get up and looks at her feet...She sees someones hand with a feather. She kind of Recognizes that hand... She thinks a bit and then widens her eyes in Surprise and Happiness!


Radhika jumps out of bed and goes hugs that person

Radhika - Di!!!! Aap kab aayi?

That person was just laughing...

Radhika pulls out of the hug and looks at her face...

Radhika - Aap has Kyun rahi hai Anu di!!!

Anu has entered!!

Anu - Kuch nahi Kuch nahi.. Acha tu bata-

Before she could finish she Hea Radhika take a deep breath and

Radhika - Lekin Shrel Di, Anu Di, Yumna Di, Devika Di, Sonali Di, Priya Di, Vasha Di, Abhilasha Do , Rina Di, Mini,Sunita, Liashna kaha hai?

Radhika said that all in one breath.

Anu - Arre Arre pehle Saans lelo phir bataati hoon... Actually Hum abhi Abhi aaye hai Yahaan hamesha keliye rahene!!! She said with a wide smile on her face... Aur woh log Apne Luggage nikaal rahe hai.. Toh maine socha ki tumse Mil loon..Lekin yahaan toh maharani so rahi thi.

Radhika was jumping with joy. All of them were Radhikas Cousins... Radhika's Tayaa and Chacha's Daughters. They lived far awa. But now they were going to be with her every second.

Radhika -- Ahhhh!!!! I can't believe aap yahaan Move horahe hai!! She hugs Anu tightly..

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Guys this is Part 5 but it is going to be much longer so this is just Part 1 of Part 5. Hope its not confusing😃
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Im 😃 Back 😃

Part 3 of Part 5!

I am going to try to make it super long~

The girls all Go to the store room they take the Bunkbeds. The Bunkbeds were not put together they still had to make it. The Qween sized bed was taken by all tehe girls...They now had to give the bedroom a mak over.. A whole new look.. They were excited. Meanwhile the elders were talking among themselves... It was Great sunny day making the day even more beautiful was the Girls Smiles.

The Girls put the Qween Sized beds together making a big bed to fit about 4 people. They started buliding the Bunkbeds... They take out all of the pieces out of the box. They were really confused.

Anmol - Yeh Kya hai Yaar... Kaisa BunkBed hai... Jud hi nahi raha!

Radhika - Haan Di.. Pata nahi kya art Kis part ke saath jataa hai..

They thought about it for a little while.. Thinking Thinking about how they are going to complete this... So they started putting different parts together.. Miraculousy they actually Completed the Part! So they were jumping with joy...

Next comes the make over... After they completed putting the beds into places, The girls that came got their luggage. How were they going to do this.. How are they going to Fit the clothing. So then Radhika brought the dresser that was in the storeroom. Anu's clothes are going to be in the top three dresser drawers Anmols clothes are going to be in the next 3 dresser drawers.. The other drawer.. 1st 3 : Shrel Other 3 : Yumna Devika gets the closet and shares it with Radhika.. The other closet Deepika and Vishaka share. Then they started adding posters.. Sceneries, and other stuff.. It was night now and all of the girls got in their Jammies (Night wear ). They were impressed by their doings this day. Radhika was excited That they will be joining her college.

Anu, Anmol, Shrel, Yumna, Devika, Radhika, Vishaka, Deepika were all in their spots. They were chit chatting..
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Anu - So Radika how had your College been so far.. I mean koi Boyfriend Shoyfriend mila kai nahi..

Radhika - Nahi Di Im over boys now 😃

Vishaka - Arre Arre Anu main tuhme bataati hoon yeh kya batayegi. Actually Anu there is someone.. Aur uska naam Hai.. Dev!

Radhikas jaw dropped as she glared a Vishaka

Radhika - Kya bola tumne Vishaka I like Him Eww!! (Making Barfing sounds)

Vishaka : Aur kya!!

Radhika : Acha Acha toh main usse like karti hoon.. Di's don't believe her.. Uhh!! .. Aur haan I wanted to tell you something Vishaka told me that she is starting to like Birju like like 😉

Vishaka Blushed like crazy... She told Radhika not to tell anyone but she did. Now she regretted telling a lie about her liking Dev!

Shrel - Ooooohhh!! Toh yeh Birju kaun hai.. Aur tuhmare Purab ko kya hua?

Vishaka - Diii!! Aur pucho mat... Purab toh Vishakasss Issss Lovesss Yousss Keta rehta hai.. At first I didn't mind anad thought that it was cute but now it is too annoying!

Devki comes to the girls room and looks at the girls sitting on the bed chatting.

Devki - Bachon Ab sau jao.. Kal College bi janaa hai!

Radhika, Shrel, Vishaka, Deepika just layed down on the bed. Anmol and Auny jumped on to their Bunkbed. Devika and Yumna did the same. Then they all went to sleep and had sweet dreams. Radhika couldn't sleep all night because she kept on dreaming about Him.. Dev.. She was totally mad at herself. Then she started thinking about her happy spot.. Her playing all kinds of sports and all..

The Next Morning :

The Girls all got ready and were ready to go.. They Run to Radhikas car. Fortunately Radhikas car was a Pilot.. It could seat 8 people. Anu, Anmol, Shrel were sitting and Chit Chatting in the far back seat. In the seat in front of them was Devika, Deepika, and Yumna also Chit Chatting. Radhika was driving but also was chit chatting with Vishaka who was right beside her..

They got off and went to the college and learned and learned...

After College ended. Radhika was walking through the library she needed to return a book.. The Library was peaceful there was nobody there at all. SHe was walking and she bumps in to someone. Radhika Tries to help herself but the person that she bumped into caught her in his arms. She sqeezed her eyes together as she was scared that she will fall.. But frotunately that mans Arms were there.. The arms had a strong grip against her waist. They were strong. She felt really secure in those hands.. She slowly opens her eyes not feeling sore from anywhere and not feeling herself fall onto the floor. WHen she opens her eyes and she sees the person whos Arms she was in.. Her eyes Widened!! It was Dev!! They both kept on looking at eachother. They were lost in eachothers eyes. They were masmerized. Radhika and Dev tried to keep their gaze away but they couldn't they felt this strong urge to keep looking at the bautiful eyes that were looking at him/her. Finally Radhika Forced herself and snatched away her gaze from his. She pushed him away from her.

Radhika - Kya? Yahaan aas paas koi nahi hai toh faida utha rahe the... Sorry but you got the wrong girl.. I will not let anybody just make me dance on their tunes.

Dev - Oye hello... Miss Mirchi.. Main aisi gandhi harqat karne ki soch bi nahi sakte.. Ek to tume girne se bachaye aur upar se tum hi muhje taane deh rahi ho! Kya baat hai!

Radhika - Just shut up!! Kisne kaha tha? Kissne kaha tha muhje bachane keliye.. Kissne? Idiot! Duffer! Doofus! Just get away form here!

Dev - Pichli baar tum gayi thi aur iss baar main jaaoonga!


Dev thinking to himself.. Whoa what was that all about Dev! You gotta say SHe is pretty hot! Man I so wanted to kiss those rosy lips of hers! Idea!! Dev you are brilliant! Ab dekhna Radhika Tum mujje kaise kiss karti ho :)
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Hello guys we have taken forever to update I know I am very sorry! But here is another update from me and Anu.. Actually me and Anu are like the only ones who are free enough to update😆


Teacher:-Ok guys we r going to Water place.......yeh Nanital ki sabse khoobsurat jagah hai
Class cheers......everyone was soo happy.....
Vishakha whispers to Radhika:- Radhika tumhe yeh jagah yaad hai peechle baar tumhara birthday celebrate karne hum wahan gaye the........kitna maja aaya tha......waha kitni hariyali hai.....kitne khoobsurat pahad hai......Nadi hai......O my god.......I can't wait.....mera to abhi jaane ka man kar raha hai wahan....
Radhika whispers back.....:-haan yaad hai mujhe.......abhi tu chup karke baithi reh......warna tujhe detention mil jayegi.....
Vishakha:-Ya ok.par......
Radhika:- shhhhh
Then suddenly Radhika's gaze fell on Dev who was continounsly staring at her for no reason......
She rolls her eyes......Dev turns his face and looks at teacher.......
Next day.....
Radhika was getting ready..
She was wearing this light pink colour dress......She was looking really beautiful with her hair open......
Vishakha comes and sees Radhika brushing her hair
Vishkaha:- Radhika hum picnic par jaa rahe hai Party mein nahin...
Radhika looks:- Kya matlab...
Vishakha:- tumhari dress....I mean u look pretty.....par tumne dress kyon peheni I mean koi jeans wagera pehen leti....
Radhika:- Well mera man kar raha tha.......isliye pehen li.......I mean palak ne peechli baar mere birthday pe mujhe yeh dress gift ki thi.........aur mein isse ek baar bhi nahi pehen saki....
Vishakha:-hmm I see.....well u look gorgoeus....
Radhika smiles:- Thanks.......tum ready to ho na.......I think hume der ho rahi hai.........ab hume chalna chahiye.......
Vishkha:-Haan mein to ready hoon........lekin
Radhika:- Lekin kya
Vishakha:-mujhe Perfume chahiye
Radhika:-Hey bhagwaan........yeh lo jaldi karo....warna tumhare yeh sajne sawarne ke chakkar mein hum dono late ho jaeenge......aur bus bhi chali jaaegi.......
Vishakha:- haha look who's talking.........sabse jayada to tum time lagati ho sajne sawarne mein.....
Radhika makes annoyed face:_Ya Ok ab tum chalogi bhi ya nahi
Vishakha: haan haan chalo chalo
They both reached university just on time.....
humari bus kahan hai.....Vishakha asks...
Radhika:- Wahan......udhar dekho...
Vishkaha:-haan jaldi chalo kahin bus na chali jaaye.....
They both gets into the bus......
Vishkaha quickly goes and sits beside Shrel di....
Radhika:- ab mein kahan baithoon
Tecaher comes:- huh Radhika tum aisa karo wo waha ek seat hai...wahan jaake baith jaoo
Radhika:- OK
Radhika goes and sits on her seat.......When suddenly she sees Dev seatin beside her......
Radhika rolls her eyes.......tum
Dev doesn't reaply back and instead kept staring at the window
Bus starts.......
People started playing Antakshri.......But Dev and Radhika were quiet
Radhika starts feeling dizzy.....
Radhika:- Dev
Dev looks at her
Radhika:- Wo mujhe chakkar aa raha.....and I feel like puking....
Dev:- kya?to mein kya karoon?
Radhika:- nahi wo tum mujhe window wali seat dedo please.......shayad mein thoda better feel karoon.....wo mujhe bus mein travel karne ki aadat nahi hai...
Dev:- Ohh I see.....lekin sorry mein tumhe window seat nahi de sakta
Radhika:-Kyon?

Radhika - Kyun Nahi baithne deh sakte?

Dev - Kyunki.. He was trying to think of a excuse now.. Kyunki ... haan, Kyunki main bi acha feel nahi kar rahaa.. I think im going to peuk too should I do it on you.. 'and put his mouth near her'


Radhika - Ewww Eww get away you feak.. Sooo disgusting..

Dev just laughs,,


Radhika and Dev are still quiet and everybody was playing antakshri so Anu asks Hey Dev Radhika tum log bi khelona haan haan tum bi khelona..


Class- Yeah tum log bi kheloge..


Anmol - Okay start at "p" Radhika


Radhika starts thinking..


Radhika - pyaar hua ikraar hua jeena yahaan marna yahaan in rahoon in bahoon chod chaliya jaaye kahaan.. maanaa dil toh anaari yeh awaaraa hi sahi aare bol radha bol sangam hoga ke nahi. Har janam main Rang badal ke khaabon ke padton main hum khilte hum hai raahi pyaar ke phir milenge chalte chalte


Start with a song in "e" for dev )

Radhika - Okay then Dev start with "e"


Dev starts thinking and says yaar mujhe koi gaana waana nahi aata....
Anmol:- C'mon Dev gaoo na please please
Dev:- Nahi nahi Anmol mujhe koi gaana nahi aata..
Anmol makes annoyed face...Vishakha laughs...
Anmol:- Tum kyon has rahi ho....
Vishakha:- Sorry wo tumhare facial expressions bahut funny the.....
Anmol gently hits vishakha on her arm
Vishakha:- Ok baba nahi hasti bas....
They kept forcing Dev...........But Dev didn't agree....
Radhika takes a big sigh.....and finally speaks:-chodo na kyon force kar rahe ho tum log.....
Palak:- chalo theek hai tumhari marji......
Everyone continued playing and chatting......
Dev looks at Radhika......
Radhika looks at him too.
They kept staring at each other.....They were lost in each others eyes.......
They couldn't take their eyes off form each other......

They reached at this beautiful place called Waterplace.......Radhika happily gets out of the bus.....She sees the beautiful place........

Radhika talking to herself:-O my God........This place is beautiful........It looks like a heaven on earth......

Vishakha:-Radhika chalo na wahan chalte hai.....Dekho wahan kitne tarah ke phool hai.......

Radhika:-Haan chalo

Vishakha and Radhika kept looking at the flowers.....

Dev was standing far away from them.....He kept looking at Radhika.....

But then Arjun comes....Arjun noticed that Dev was staring at Radhika.

Arjun:-Kya baat hai janab aap to iss jagah ko chod kar Radhika madam ko dekhne mein busy ho gaye......

Dev:-HUH?Kya matlab.....

Arjun laughs:-matlab to tum achi tarah se jaante ho......I think u r in love with Ms.Mirchi.....

Dev:-What?No way......

Arjun:-Acha to kyon baar baar usse dekhe jaa rahe ho.......Bus mein bhi tum log yahi karne mein busy the.....

Dev:-Shut up Arjun..........Mein Radhika ko nahi mein to wo......ahh.....wo Pahadon ko dekh raha tha......

Arjun smiles naughtily:-Ya right..

Dev:-Arjun ab tu bas kar.....samjha......warna teri kher nahi.......

Arjun:-acha chod yeh sab.....yeh dekh mein camera leke aaya hoon.....Dev tu photography mein bahut acha hai......Iss khoobsurat si jagah ki achi se photos le lo...phir ghar jaake Dadima ko bhi to dikhani hai...

Dev:-theek hai.....
Arjun:-Ya Ok I will be back.....jab tak tum photos lo.....
Dev turns to take photos But his gaze fell on Radhika who was busy observing the mountains...
Then He starts taking pictures of Radhika......
This song starts playing in the background......
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uXkzaCffc0A[/YOUTUBE]


He then again snatched his gaze away. He was mad at himself. He was thinking.
Could it possicly be that Arjun was right?? Am I really falling in .. No No no way That too with Miss Mirchi No way!

Then the teacher asked for their attention. They all moved towards the teacher.

Teacher - So how did you guys like the place. I mean how do you think it looks.

Radhika - Yes mame we all loved it atleast I loved it.. The place is soo beautiful I have never seen any other place like thsi ever before it is just perfect!

The class agreed with her. The teacher just smiled at that comment. Then everyone strted looking around at the beautiful place. They look around and everywhere there was green. It was beautiful with the flowers making it perfect. The Great tall mountains stand tall looking absulutely great. with the sun behind it making it a beutiful scene. It was a nice sunny morning. The wind was blowing slightly.

Because of the wind Radhika's hair was coming in front of her face making her look very beautiful. Dev's eyes got attracted to it. He just couldn't stop looking at her. Radhika was too busy looking at the beautiful place.

Everyone left to an other place to look around leaving Radhika and Dev alone. Dev didn't know what he was doing or where he was. All he knew was Radhika was there.He had this urge to go and remove the strands of hair off of Radhika's beautiful face.

Unknowingly he started moving forward towards Radhika. He didn't knwo what he was doing his heart took control of his mind. He was behind her and he slowly goes in front of her.

Radhika - Dev move away from ..

Radhika looked into his eyes and just got lost into his deep Brown eyes! She couldn't takeher eyes away. What was happening. Dev was in his own little world which only had Radhika and Dev in it, He took Radhika into his little world too.

]He then slowly lifted his hand up to remove the strands of hair. He moves them away slowly. Radhika didn't reject. She was too lost to reject. Then Radhika realized what was happening she quickly snatched her gaze away,

Dev also came out of his world and what happened. He was going to say something to Radhika but before he could say something Radhika just left from there. She didn't know what just happened there why did she just feel a sudden current in her body when he touched her face. This never happened to her. What was that emotion..

On the other hand Dev was totally feeling weird . He was thinking about what just happened he had just moved the strands away from her face.. But why did he feel like not going away from her for just even 1 minute.. And why did she not stop him earlier. He was confused, What feeling was funning through him/ why couldn't he rocognize the feeling..




Vishakha comes to Dev and says:-Hi Dev Kya hua.......Meri behen ko dekhne mein busy ho...vo kya baat hai na ki vo hai hi itni khoobsurat.....Ki koi bhi ladka uspe latoo ho hata hai..

Dev:-Dekho Vishkha mujhe tumhari behen mein bilkul bhi interest nahi hai......Do u get that....(He leaves from there)
Vishaka says to herself:-Yeh to aane wala wakt hi bataye ga Dev....
Dev was confused, shocked and mad at himself.....Then Arjun and Birju comes to him.....
Arjun and birju looks at each other....
Arjun:-Kya hua tum itna pareshan kyon ho Dev?Sab theek to hai na?
Dev:-Pata nahi mujhe kya ho raha hai......Mein itni ajeeb ajeeb si harkatein kyon kar raha hoon..
Arjun:-Matlab?aisa kya kar diya tune.....Koi problem hai kya?
Dev:-Maine wo Ms. Mi....I........I mean........Ok suppose karo agar koi ladka kisi ladki ki taraf continously dekhta rahe............to iska kya matlab hua?
Arjun understands and smiles:-Iska matlab hua ki wo ladka uss ladki ko pasand karne laga hai......baaki pyar isse agli seedi hai.......
Dev:-Pasand????
Birju couldn't understand anything.......he kept listening to them....and finally speaks......
Birju:-Dev bhaiya yeh pasand na pasand......ladkiyon ki baatein hum baad mein karenge abhi mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai.........chalo na kuch khaane chalte hai.....
Dev sighs:-theek hai....chalo.....
Scene shifts to Radhika....
Radhika:-yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai......She holds her head.....Shayad chakkar aane ki wajah se mera dimaag hi kaam nahi kar raha.........Puri tarah se pagal hoti jaa rahi hoon mein......
She closes her eyes.....thinking......
Shrel di comes:-are Radhika kya hua.....sab wahan itni masti kar rahe hai aur tu yahan aa raha tha......chal wahan ek chotta sa restaurant hai.......wahan chalte hai........aur tujhe chakkar bhi aa raha tha..........tu kuch khaati nahi hai...........aaj kal ki ladkiyan bhi na khaana peena chod deti hai patli hone ke chakkar mein.........tu chal mere saath aur kuch khaa le......
Radhika nods and goes with Shrel di......
They went to Amrit Restaurant......
Dev, Birju and Arjun were also there.....
Radhika orders Mango shake for her....\



Alright.. heres the part..
We tried to make it longer but we didn't have time so here it is😃


Please comment. and me and Anu decided that we wont update another part until we get 15 comments but note that one person can't comment more than 3 times😉 We got smarter thsi time😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Okay guys I am back with another part for yoy guys actually it is Part 2 of part 5...Confusing na? 😆
Part 2 of Part 5...

[ I posted a topic of who wanted to be in the FF..So these are the following people.
Shrel Di, Anu, Yumna Di, Devika Di, Sonali, Priya, Vasha, Abhilasha, Radhika23, Minajay, Sunita, Liashna, AvinaRadev48, I...
Name in IF Name in FF
Radev24 Shrel
Indiangirl09 Anu
Billo Yumna
Devika Devika
Palak Sonali
Nycsweetie Priya
SugarSpice Vasha
Abhilasha_Dreamz Abhilasha
Radhika23 Rina
Minajay Mini
Chalhov Sunita
Liashna Liashna
AvinaRadev48 Jia ]




While she was huggin Anu tightly she saw all of the other girls coming carrying their luggage looking very tired. She pulled out of the hug and smiled at Anu. She ran to the other girls. Anu just smiled at her. She hugged Shrel, Yumna, Devika, Sonali, Priya, Vasha, Abilasha, Rina, Mini, Sunita, Liashna, Jia..Then she invited Anu over and they all hugged eachother in a big huge 13som hug!...

Radhika's Dad Vinod ( I named him differently) Devki, (No amma this time 😉) heard all of the "Shor" and went out of their room sleepily to see what was going. When they went outside they were totally taken back. They smiled. They were also very happy to see all of them together.

Vinod : Arre Bacho!

All of the girls got into a line 😆 and started taking blessings of both of the elders.

Girls - Peri Paina, Chacha Ji..Chachi Ji ( they all call them Chachaji same as Radhika)

Vishaka And deepika were also sleeping and they also heard all of the screaming and everything.They both put a pillow on their head but didn't quite help. So they got off of the bed and went towards the living room..

Vishaka Sleepily says " Kya hua Radhika Tu Itna shor kyun macharahi hai.. She barely had her eyes open same with Deepika who was standing next to her...They didn't see who had came.. All of the girls go behind them.. When Vishaka and Deepika didn't get a reply

Vishaka and Deepika " Radhika kya hua ?"

Suddenly " BOOOOOOO!!!!!"

Vishaka and Deepika both jump out of their slippers and cling on to eachother for dear life. They Scream for a while " AHHHHHHHHHHH!!" But then They open their eyes noticing girls laughing.. They widen their eyes and a wide smile spread their face and they hugged all of them together...Radhika was still laughing..

( I will tell everyone who was wearing what I know this is going to be long but oh well.. )

Radhika was wearing :

https://www.sleepyheads.com/Frankie_and_Johnny_bSoft_Flannel_Cupcakes_Lounger_Pajama






Vishaka was wearing :

https://www.sleepyheads.com/Hello_Kitty_Brainy_Cutie_Green_Tank_and_Pant_Set

Deepika was wearing :

https://www.sleepyheads.com/Hello_Kitty_Brainy_Cutie_Green_Tank_and_Pant_Set

Shrel was wearing :

https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=101&productId=39235&color=IVORY&altImageId=1
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=102&subCategoryId=118&productId=36508
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=109&subCategoryId=206&productId=39078

Anu was wearing :

https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=176&subCategoryId=185&productId=38883
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=451&subCategoryId=452&productId=39171
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?productId=38590
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?productId=38151
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?productId=38151

Yumna was wearing :

https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=101&subCategoryId=115&productId=39240
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?productId=38770
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?productId=38960
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?productId=39059

Devika was wearing :

https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=101&subCategoryId=115&productId=39241
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=102&subCategoryId=118&productId=1301
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=109&subCategoryId=206&productId=37436

Anmol was wearing :

https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=176&subCategoryId=185&productId=39249
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=102&subCategoryId=1057&productId=33500

The others were outside, They were on the phone. They got a phone call from their college. They enter the house with their faces looking glum. ( Guys Im sorry I just realized I both be able to manage all of these characters I am not like Sonali Palak 😉 But I promise you guys that are going to leave the FF that you guys will be concluded in a very special occasion. I will let your imagination guess what that "Special" Occasion will be. ) They enter with Glum expression on their Faces. Radhika walks up to them,,

Radhika – Kya hua aap log itne Sad kyun lag rahe ho?

Priya – Radhia hume College se phone Aayaa hai who keh rahe hai ki hum Uss College main 1 saal aur rehna padega! I don't know why they didn't tell us the reason I hope you understand.

Radhika smiles at them – Koi baat nahi Di, Lekin promise keejiye. Jb aap log uss College se free hongi toh pehle yahi aayengi?

They all say – Sure my sweet little Sister!

Sonali – Okay phir hume nikal na chahiye,

Although Radhika was sad that they were leaving she thought about her other cousins that were here to stay. She got excited by that thought. Also her other cousins will be coming only here after their College ends. She saw them leave into the car that they came in. They all seemed disappointed they came so far and then they had to leave.

Shrel – Offo Radhika don't be sad hum sab toh yahaan hai na.

Radhika – I know Shrel DI That's why I am not as sad as I would've been if you guys left with them too..

Yumna – Then What are we waiting for lets have some fun!

They all run in to Radhika room and get them selves comfortable on Radhika's Bed!

Devika – Okay Okay lekin Hum rahenge kahaan? I mean where will we sleep?

Radhika – Aap sab yahaanmere kamre main rahenge …

Anmol – What I mean I know your room is huge. But How are we going to pull this off. How we going to get so many beds in here?

They all started thinking. Radhika was thinking and then she started smiling..

Radhika – Store room Main ek queen size bed hai aur 2 bunk beds. So we could join this bed which is queen sized bed and the other queen sized bed and we could use the Bunk beds also…4 people on this bed which will expand and 2 people on each bunk bed. Hows hat sound,

Everyone was happy with the idea, So they all made plan on a piece of paper.

Two Queen Sized put together – 4 people

Two Bunk Beds – 4 people.

Week 1 on the bed – Yumna, Anmol, Devika, Shrel.

Week 1 on the Bunk Beds – Radhika, Anu, Vishaka, Deepika.

Week 2 on the Bed – Radhika, Anu, Vishaka, Deepika.

Week 2 on the bunk beds – Yumna, Anmol, Devika, Shrel

And so on..

Everyone was so excited!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#10
Recap : Some chit chatting between all of the cousins.. Radev little bump.. Dev is going to make Radhika kiss him..


Ab aage!!


Radhika was at the basketball court outside and Dev saw her and thought that it was the perfect moment to get that kiss that he wanted.. He smiled boyishly thinking about the kiss he will be getting from her. He grinned and walked towards her. Radhika turned around as she felt someone behind her. She looked back and to her dissapintment it was him, She knew she had to stay calm so she walked over to him.

Radhika - Hi tum bi yahaan Practise karne aaye ho? She smiled to him..

Dev - Umm Yeah.. He wondered why she was not spazzing out and being so nice... " Oh well" He thought...

Radhika was smiliing at him still then all of a sudden she sees a spark in her eye... A light that was really shiny.. She put her hand in front of her eyes but it didn't help so she turned her face away. Then after a little while she looks back and saw that the light was gone.. But along with that weird light someone else was gone too. Dev! She started looking for him.. She was walking and she tripped over something. She fell on top of Dev. She saw Dev laying there with his eyes closed. Radhikas head hit his chest and she layed her head on his chest. Then she got up.

Radhika - Idiot Pagal ho kya yahaan paye kyun ho?

She get no reply..

Radhika - Hello! You Im talking to you!

Still she get no reply at all.. What the hell is wrong with him she thought.. Then she recalled that light. She thougt that it was Lighting!!!!

Radhika - O shit!!

She looked at his stomach but it wasn't moving which meant he wasn't breathing.. Her eyes widened with Fright! She checked near his wrist and Neck to listen to his pulse. His heart was still pumping. She recalled what she learned in that health class. When someones heart is beating but that person is not breathing what to do. They taught her that she had to Push on his chest. She did that but no He still wasn't breathing. She tried to remember that if that doesn't work what else she had to do. Her eyes widened again but this time it wasn't becasue she was frightened but it was because she was grossed out! No she couldn't do this. She couldn't go mouth to mouth with him. But she also couldn't just leave him here to die. She knew she had to go mouth to mouth with him.. She took a deep breath.. Counted to ten and then got ready.. Dev was trying not to laugh or smile.

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