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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 6 -

Radhia closed her and wished she had those things where she puts it on her nose so she can smell his bad breath.. She got clsoer and closer to his lips.. She was hating herelf so much.. Once they were this close to eachothers lips.. Dev started laughing out loud. Radhika got scared and quickly moved away and held her mouth! She couldn't believe it.. All of that faking of not breathing was a trick! (Guys really Who can predict Dev.. I mean he is Dev) Dev was trying not to laugh anymore because his hceeks were hurting and his sotmach was also hurting so he was holding on to it.. Finally he stopped laughing and looked at Radhikas face and then again started laughing uncontrolabally! Radhika was fuming! She wanted to say alot of bad words to him. She was going to but then she controlled her temper and told herself not to spaz out at him, Stay Cool..

Radhika - So.. This was all a joke huh? Wow what a big surprise.. I know you wanted to kiss me.. But never knew that you were that desperate I mean what a joke you are..

Dev FInally Controlled his laughter - So you mean to say that you didn't get fooled?

Radhika - Oh please you've got to try more harder to trick me.. I mean a flshing light.. Like really..

Dev - Oh yeah okay then lets say that whoever gets folled by the other person loses.. Its not just a bet but a challenge!

Radhika - Oh bring it on mister.. I am all ready for this.. I already know who is going to win..

Dev - Oh really is it that obvious.. Am I that good?

Radhika - On please who would think that you would win.. That right nobody.. So you winning.. not even possible in your dreams.. Pwned..

Dev - Please you shouldn't be so overconfident that you will cry when you lose..

Radhika - Please.. First of all it done I am all ready for this challenge and the other thing I don't want to waste my time on you so bye!

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Anu, Anmol, Shrel, Devika, Yumna all had a blast on their first day of college...

They were walking and walking Radhika with all of their sousins and soisters! When...

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Posted: 15 years ago
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This part Anu and I wrote together

The parts that Anu wrote are going to be in red and the ones thats I wrote is going to be in blue😃


Anu - Red

Anmol - Blue

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Radhika was fuming wid anger and she walked out from the gym leaving Dev behind''Dev was smling'

After she left Dev says to himself:-Kya karo Ms Mirchi agar last minute mein main hasta nahi to tum definitely tum mujhe kiss kar deti'..but My bad luck'Uff''chalo koi baat nahi next time sahi😉'.he smiles boyishly.

Radhika was walking down the stairs where she meets Karan'(Radh's ex-boyfriend'.She broke up wid him 1 year ago'but they were still good friends)

Karan:- Hey Radhika'What's up?

Radhika looks at him and smiles'.ahh Nothing much'

Karan:- Aur kaisi ho tum?

Radhika:- I am good'How about u?

Karan smiles:-Mein bhi acha hoon'.par ab thodi der pehle tum bahut gusse mein lag rahi thi''sab theek to hai na'..

Radhika:-Ya sab theek hai'..Mein bas thodi tired hoon'..aur humare exams bhi to shuru ho rahe hai to mujhe practice bhi karni'..to I think mujhe abhi ghar chalna chahiye'.Hum phir milenge theek hai!

Karan:-Ya ya No problem'.I understand'Okay babes bye see ya'.

Radhika:- Ya bye'

Radhika then goes to look for Vishakha..But she couldn't find her'She looked everywhere library, classrooms, washroom''

Radhika to herself:-Yeh vishakha kaha chali gayi'.She decides to call her'.

Vishakha picka up the phone.(She was at home)

Vishakha:- Hello?

Radhika:-Hello ki bachi'..Kaha ho tum'..Mein yaha kitna pareshan ho rahi hoon tujhe pata bhi hai?

Vishakha:- Sorry sorry meri baat to sun'Mein actually aaj jaldi ghar aa gayi thi'..vo mera sir dard kar raha tha na''bas isliye'.aur papa bhi hong kong gaye hue hai'Mom bhi akeli hai ghar mein isliye jaldi aa gayi'.

Radhika:- Ohh ok..sorry sis'Mein aise hi tumpe cheelane lag gayi'

Vishakha chuckles:- Don't worry'..vo to meri choti behen ki aadat hai'.

Radhika:-Okay vishakha ab tu mujhe tease mat kar'.mein bhi aa rahi hoon ghar.Okay

Vishakha:- Ya okay''Bye Radhika'.

Radhika goes to the parking lot where her car was parked'.But suddenly her gaze fell on the flat tyre'

Radhika:- Oh dang it'..is tyre ko bhi abhi puncture hona tha'.hey bhagwan ab mein ghar kaise jaoongi..andhera bhi ho raha hai..

Suddenly Dev comes there on his yellow bike'

Dev stops by Radhika and says:- Ohh Hi'..kya hua Ms. Mirchi'..tyre flat ho gaya..Ohh very bad'chalo mein ghar chod deta hoon tumhe'

Radhika:- Ghar aur tumhare saath forget it'.Mr. Dumbo

Dev:-Sochlo warna yehi khadi intzaar karti reh jaoogi tum'aur Yeh Nanital hai'..Raat bhi ho rahi aur tumhari dress dekhi hai'(She was wearing a purple dress'.Her dress was upto her knees)Koi fayada utha sakta hai tumhara.kaise kaise log aate hai yaha par tumhe pata bhi hai..

Radh's dress


Radhika:-Isiliye ghar tak chodne jaa rahe ho tum'

Dev:-Ofcourse mein nahi chahta ki tum musibat mein pad jaoo'

Radhika thinks to herself:- shayad sahi keh raha yeh Dumbo'.raat bhi ho rahi hai aur agar'.nahi..

Radhika to Dev:- Okay chalo'.

Dev smiles(It was all his plan)he says to her:- Hello jara jor se pakdana mujhe aage sadak kharab hai aur street lights bhi nahi hai..

Radhika makes a face and sits on his bike and uninterestingly holds him from his waist..

Dev:-jor se pakdo

Radhika:-Makes annoying face and tightened her arms around his waist'

Dev:-aur jor se

Radhika tightened her arms even more

Dev:- aur jor se

Radhika:- enough'ab tum chaloge bhi ya nahi..

Dev chuckles and starts his bike''

DEV'S BIKE
This tune was playing in the background
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w9A6awnkDi4[/YOUTUBE]






Dev and radhika reached Radhikas house.

Radhika get off of his bike Dev looks at her...

Rdhika - Thanks..

Dev - for what?

Radhika - for dropping me off..

Dev - Oh no prob..

Then radhika makes her way to her hosue and there she sees her cousins looking at her suspiciuosly..

Before she could say anything as she knew what they were going to say..

But before she could shut them up.
They started asking her questions..



Shrel di:- Kya baat hai ab yeh handsome ladka kaun tha....
Radhika:- Koi nahi Di......bas voh mujhe ghar drop karne aaya tha......vo meri car kharab ho gayi thi na bas isliye.....
Anmol:- rehne de humne kya dekha nahi kaise tightly pakda hua tha tumne use...
All starts laughing
At Dev's house..
Dev reaches home....
Daadi:-Kyon re kaha lag gayi itni der.....
Dev smiles:-Are daadi ma mein to apni friend ko drop karne chala gaya tha voh uski car kharab ho gayi thi......
Daadi:- theek hai to yeh colgate ki add kya kar raha tu......sach sach bata kisse chodne gaya tha tu?
Dev hesitates but Daadi was keep on insisting..
Dev:-Voh Radhika
Daadi:-Radhika kitna pyara naam hai......to ab ladke ka naam bhi Radhika hone laga..huh?
Dev:-Ladke😕......Daadi voh Ladki hai
Daadi chuckles:-mujhe bataya nahi tune apni.... voh kya kehte hai...apni nai girlfriend ke bare mein.....
Dev:-Voh meri girlfriend nahi hai....She's just a friend....
Daadi:-Par
Dev:-Okay daadi sawal poochna band karo mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai.....



Dev and Daadi go downstairs and Daadi gives him a meal. (lunch) Then after lunch Dev goes tot he T.V and starts watchign cartoon😆

Daadi comes to him and takes the remote and turns the T.V off..

Dev jumps - Kya Daadi layiye na! Spongebob Patrick se kuch kehna waalaa tha!😆

Daadi - CHup.. Ab teri umar iss Cartoon dekhne liye nahi hai.. Aur muhje Radhika ke baare main bataa kaise tum log Dost bane.😃

Dev - Theek hai agar main aapko bataaunga toh aap mera sir toh nahi kaogi na Radhik Radhika keh ke?

Daadi- Haan Haan Theek Hai Theek hai..

Dev - Okay fine.. Sadch yeh Hai That I hate her and she hates me Happy😃

Daad- Kya abhi abhi to tu kehraha tha ki tum log dost ho.. Ab kya hua? Aur tu agar uska dost anhi that to tu usko ghar kyun nahi chodke ayaa?

Dev - Daadi Main sach bol raha hoon We are enemies.. I hate her too much! Actually Muhjue bhook bauhut lagi thi to maine kuch bi boldiya.. Aur main usse iss liye ghar chodke aayaa tha kyunki uski Ghadi kharab hogayi thi😉 Ab aap T.V laayiye..

Daadi turns on the T.V

The scene shifts to The girls room😃



Vishakha:-Radhika waise Dev kitna handsome hai na...
Anmol:-Haa wahi to mein keh rahi....He is hotttt
Palak:-Aur nahi to kya....Radhika tumhari aur Dev ki jodi bahut achi lagegi....
Shrel di:-Bilkul..Radha Krishna ki jodi hai yeh to..
Radhika kept staring at them.......and finally speaks....
Radhika :-Enough...please Dev ke bare mein mujhse koi baat mat karo....I hate him....Mein use kabhi pyar nahi kar sakti...
Shrel di:-Pyar karte nahi..... ho jaata hai...Pyar ek aisi feeling hai......jise shabdo mein describe nahi kiya jaa sakta...Okay chalo yeh sab chodo.....chalo jaake fresh ho jaoo....aur dinner kar lo...
Radhika:- Ok di
Next morning at University....
Radhika was in the library reading books....But then Dev comes there with Arjun and sees Radhika.....



Radhika is at The library and Dev comes there with Arjun. Dev sees her. Arjun also sees her and walks towards her. Dev follows him as he didn't know here to go after he went to Radhika and he would look very stupid just standing there alone just like a loner😆

Arjun- Hey Radhika..

Radhika smiles when she sees Arjun - Hey Arjun..

Then once she sees Dev standing beside him her smile fades away..

Arjun - Kaisi ho tum?

Radhika - Main theek hun tum batao?

Arjun- Fit and Fine.. Actually Radhika muhje double check karna tha Umm Basketball Torunament kab hai?

Radhika - Oh Iss Friday ko.

Arjun- Oh shit muhje tuh abhi bauhut Practise ki zaroorat hai Birju ko bi main Abhi batake ayaa.

And Arjun left from there leaving Radhika and Dev alone.. Radhika Glaring at him Dev noticing but ignoring her..


Radhika felt weird....But she decides to speak up...

Radhika:- ah Dev.....

Dev jerks and looks at her.....His heart smiled because she always used to call him by different names......and it was the first time that she called him by his name.....

Dev:-yes Ms.Mir.....Radhika....

Radhika:-Mein tumhe phirse thank u kehna chahti hoon.....agar kal tum nahi hote to pata nahi meri kya halat ho jati...

Dev:- Its okay...ahh kya mein tumhare saath baith sakta hoon...

Radhika:-ya sure....go ahead

Dev sits in front of Radhika....Now they were facing each other....

Dev's gaze fell on the book Radh was reading.

Dev:-Wow tumhari book to kaafi interesting lagti hai

Radhika smiles:-ya....actually yeh meri grandma ki book hai....

Dev:-If u don't mind.....Can I borrow it.....

Radhika wasn't sure but she decides to give it to him..

Radhika:-Ya Ok....Par please isse lose mat karna....

Dev:-Ya alright......I will be careful......Thank u

Radhika:-your welcome




Radev are sitting... down Radhika was studying for her exams same with rDev. both were talking to eachother very sweetly..

Dev was suprised by the war Ms. Mirchi is behaving with him.. why is she being so nice he thgought.. " Yeh Ms. Mirchi ko toh maine bina Mirch ke bina dekha hi nahi"

After they are Done Dev is wanting to say something but keeps on asking himself if he shoudl or not.. Then he gets the guts to say it😉

Dev - Uhh Radhika I need to ask you something..

Radhika - Yes go ahead Mr. Du I mean Dev😃😆

Dev - Uhh Radhika can we be friends' He puts his arm out infront of Radhika like shaking hands..

Radhika looks confused :

Radhika - Uhh sure and then They shake hands as if they are now Friends😳

Dev - Actually I never knew that YOu could be so nice! Its like its not realy you😉

Radhika couldn't hold in anymore.. She burst out laughing,,


Radhika was holding on to her stomach trying to control her laughter..



Precap : Radev's Class decides to go on Picnic😃


Edited by hotie - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Alright this isn't a really long part also not that romantic either but promise the next one will be


Radhika was so lost in Dev's thoughts that she didn't even ate her lunch properly....
Shrel di and others were really worried for her....
Shrel di asks Vishakha to take her outside......
Shrel di whispers:-Vishakha jara Radhika ko bahar le jao.......Fresh hawa milegi to shayad wo better feel karegi.....
Vishakha:-Ok di.....
Vishakha:-Radhika chalo hum bahar chale hai....
Radhika jerks and looks at her.....
Radhika:-bahar........lekin bahar kyon.....
Vishkaha:-Dekho na kitna acha weather........andar to hum roz hi rehte hai....Kabhi kabhi bahar ka najara bhi dekhna chahiye.....
Radhika:-lekin Vishkaha
Vishkaha:-lekin wekin kuch nahi......tu mere saath chal rahi hai bas......mein aur kuch nahi sun na chahti......
Radhika:-acha...waise bhi tu manegi nahi.......theek hai chalo.....par sirf thodi der ke liye.......
Vishakha:-OK queen Elizabeth aapka hukam sar aankhon par....
Radhika smiles and goes with Vishakha....
Shrel di and others smiles......
Shrel di looks at Anmol who was eating soo much😉
Shrel di:-Are kya baat hai Anmol.....aaj to tu bade maje lekar kha rahi hai....
Anmol looks up....Kya karoon.......Tikki bahut tasty bani hai.....mujhse control hi nahi ho raha😆
Shrel di and others laughed.....
Scene shifts to Radhika......
Radhika and Vishkaha were enjoying nature's wonderful gifts....
Radhika:-Dekh na Vishakha waterfall kitna acha hai....
Radhika:-tu sach keh rahi......Mein yaha aake kaafi better feel kar rahi hoon....
Vishakha:-Dekha.......Maine kaha tha tujhse......(Suddenly Vishakha's phone rings)acha Radhika tu yahi ruk mein jara phone pe baat karke aati hoon.......
Radhika:-Haan theek hai....
Vishakha goes......
Radhika says to herself:-Kitna khoobsurat hai yeh sab...Dil karta hai bas yeh sab dekhti hi rahoon.......
Then Radhika's gaze fell on beautiful evergreen tress......and flwers....
Radhika wonders:-Pata nahi waha kya hoga.......wahan jaake dekhti hoon......
Radhika:-waha kitne ache plum trees hai.......waha jaake dekhti hoon.....
Apparently Dev was also there taking pictures of the beautifil sceneries......
Radhika spots Dev......She decides to talk to him.....
Radhika:-Dev...
Dev jerks and looks at her.......
Dev:-tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?
Radhika:-Mein to plum trees dekhne aayi thi.......dekhno na kitne ache hai.....
Dev:-Plum trees.....He chuckles......Yeh plum trees nahi Pine trees hai😆
Radhika:-Chalo plum ho ya pine tree kya farq padta hai.......saare trees to ek jaise hi dikhte hai....
Dev chuckles....
Radhika:-Dev dekho mujhe aage jungle mein jaake dekhna hai......
Dev:-What?paagal to nahi ho gayi ho....tum sirf 5 foot 5 inch ki ho.......lekin tumse bhi bade bade sher honge jungle mein...
Radhika:-yeh kaisi baat kar rahe ho tum.......ladka hoke itna darte ho....
Dev:-haan darta hoon bas?....mein to chala.....tume jaha jaana hai jaoo.
Radhika:-Dev please.....pehle to mein sirf isse bholunaath maanti thi ab to yeh Darpok naath bhi ban gaya😆.....Uhh Disgusting
Dev hears this:-Kya kaha tumne bholunaath aur Darpok naath....
Radhika:-jo sach hai woh to hai hi......ab yeh baat mein sab ko jaake bata doongi....
Dev:-tum kya mujhe blackmail kar rahi ho......
Radhika smiles naughtily:-Yehi samjhalo....
Dev:-Hai bhagwaan kaha phas gaya mein.....kisi ne sach hi kaha ladkiyaan bahut chalaak hoti hai.....Yeh Ms Mirchi to meri izzat ka kabada karke rahegi😆...(He says this to himself)
Dev:-theek hai chalo.......lekin sirf thodi dur......samjhi....
Radhika:-Haan samjh gayi....ab chalein...
Dev and Radhika both goes into the jungle...
Radhika:-Wow kitna adventerues hai na....
Dev makes a face....
Radhika looks at him.....
Radhika:-Daro mat......Main hoon na....Tigers tumhe kuch nahi kahenge....
Dev:-tum kya Shahrukh khan ho.....jo bade aaraam se "Main hoon na" keh rahi ho😆........aur tigers ko chodo....sabse jayada dar to mujhe tumhara hi hai....
Radhika:-Haha very funny...
Then they heard a spooky noise......
Radhika quickly responds and hugs Dev......
Dev looks and hestatingly wraps his arms around her slender waist.....caressing it gently.......
Radhika:-Yeh kya tha....
Dev:-Shayad hawa hogi......abhi to tum bahut Kiran bedi ban rahi thi....ab kya hua.....itni jaldi dar gayi....
Radhika:-Mein dari nahi thi acha.......Mein to bas....hmmmm experiment karke dekh rahi thi ki tum daroge ya nahi.....
Dev:-Acha....She cutely nods her head and says Hmmmm
They were still hugging each other.....But were not aware of it.....

Dev and Radhika were Silent and then they realised what position they were in they felt awkward.. Radhika ripped herself apart.. She looks down with her head down.. She moves a strand of hair from her face and starts playing with her hands. Dev was feeling really awkward and couldn't take it anymore so He wuickly says


Dev - Woh Dekho Kitna Khoobsurat hai.. and then Takes a picture of it..

Radhika looks towards there are smiles..

Dev was looking at the tree and then he looked at her he quickly took a snap of her. While Radhika was too busy looking at the tree.


The Sun was Dawning and it was getting closer to night... Dev noticed that..

Dev - Radhika chalo chalein dekho raat hone waali hai..

Radhika - theek hai ek minute.. She takes his camera and takes a snap of the wonderful sight.

Radhika - Muhje yeh de dena.. Main Rakhna chahti hoon theek hai ..

Dev - Okay Okay..

They both turn back to leave when they notice that they went to far deep into the Jungle unknowingly. Dev starts Paniking..

D - Umm Hum Kahaan agaye.. I mean what is the way back

Radhika hits his arms.

Radhika - Shutup muhje ya pata. Min thodi dekh rahi thi.. YEh to tumari Job thi stupid.

Dev - Oye hello this is all your fact naa hi tum muihje blackmail karti aur naa hi hum yahaan Ko gaye hote.. This is all your fault! And Stop talking to yourself your creeping me out..

Radhika was glaring at him with her nostrils flared she was moving forward when she stepped onto a prick.

Radhika - Ouch

Dev - Kya hua .. Radhika did you look in the mirror again?😆

Radhika - Ha Ha Ha very funny.. Seriously I got something in my foot..

Dev - How do I know this isn't any prank?

Radhika - Shut up Dev..

Dev - Okay Okay I'll see.

He helps her to sit on a big rock.. He bends down and slowly puts her foot on his Knee..

Radhika was feeling wierd because She had a dres on that was upto her knees..
This song starts playing in the background......

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sQlp15We0-g[/YOUTUBE]

Radhika was trying her best to stop feeling nervous.. It was only Dev nobody else I mean he wasn't a big part of her life.. So then why was she feeling so nervous,, She obviously didn't know the answer to that.. She hadn't been able to answer any of the questions she had asked herself ever since she had started knowing him..

Dev saw a prick in her foot so he slowly slowly extra carelly took it out..

Radhika was too busy looking at him that she didn't even notice that the prick was now out of her foot..

Radhika then notices that it was out after she saw him getting up.. It was like she had got knocked out of her dream world when he had got up..

Radhika got up and then tried to walk but she couldn't

Dev - Ab kya hua?? Nikaal toh diya?

R - Shutup kuch nahi hua.. Bas thoda sa Dard ho raha tha aur kuch nahi ab chalo Raat bi hogayi hai.. Kya way tha? Left Right.. Aage ya Peeche??

D- Muhje Supna ayaa hai Muhje kya pata.. Aur waise bi Yeh sab tumari wajaa se hua hai toh hal bi apne aap hi doondo!

R- Theek hai I think it is Right..

D- No it isn't it is Left

R- I think I know better okay

D- No I think I know way better than you aur waise bi ab tum mere peeche peeche aa jao nahi toh koi sher kha jayega!

R - Nahi main nahi jaoongi tumne hi toh kahaa tha na.. Iska Hal apne aap hi doondoon. Toh wahi toh kar rahi hoon..

D- Fine JO tume theek lage woh hi karna theek ahi Maha Rani jee lekin main toh Left hi jaoonga!😲


Dev heads towards Left and Radhika heads toward Right they were walking alone.. Dev was walking calmly not scared at all.. and was just removing the twigs and obstacles that were in front of him..

On the other hand Radhika was walking feeling evry scared as she was hearing these noises coming from different places! She was frightened.. Radhika was looking here and there.. In her mind she was cursing Dev fo rnot listening to her,,

Radhika was walking when she heard these noises coming from the left of her. it was coming from those bushes.. She get a stick and stands beside it..

Then someone or Something comes and she closes her eyes really tight and starts hitting the person or thing crazily..

Someone - Ouch Ouch Ouch!

Yes it was Dev..

When Radhika heard the ouches she opened her eyes and her eyes were wide! She looked at him for a little while then she started laughing like crazy..

D- Tum has kyun rahi ho.. Ek toh muhje itna peetaa aur upar se tum has rahi ho.. thats very nice of you.. Ab batao has kyun rahi ho?

R- Okay Okay sorry sorry actually there are two reasons..

Reason #1 - That was just soo funny that I just beat you up😆

Reason #2 - That when we were walking we made a whole circle and we are at the same spot we were an hour ago..

D- What! He looks around and realises that they have made circle.. He put his hand on his head and nods his head in a negative way..

R- Kya hua?

D removes his hand from his head - Kuch nahi ab chalo..

He hold her wrist and drags her with him..


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Palak Paneer Jee ab two parts tommorow Okay?

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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤪This is a very short part.. but will update a long part tommorow for sure😃



Dev and Radhika were stuck in the jungle and they were hating eachothers company... They thought that they would be better off if they werent't hear with eachother.. They hated this very much..



Radhika- Dev we have to get out of here as soon as possible and Im strating to get scared im hearing some noises.. and trust me they are very scary noises..



Dev- Shutup mere paas kya GPS hai kya.. jo main tuhme way dikhadun? Aur agar hota bi to i doubt GPS ke paas iss jungle se nikalne ke directions hote..Although a compass would've helped..



Radhika- Humein try to karna hi padega na? Hum aise thodi na yahaan bethein rahein ge? Aur woh bi tumare saath to kabhi bi nahi.. Did I ever tell you I hate you?



Dev- Actually i think I should be asking that to you...Anyways we do have to try so lets start

Dev- Right

Radhika- Left

They said that at the same time together..

Dev- no Im telling you we should go Right..

Radhika - No we should be going Left dummy..

Dev- Whatever I'm going my way and you go your way okay?

Radhika - What ever.. Loser.. Donkey..

Actually Radhika was feeling scared as she would rather go with Dev rather than going alone as she was really scared.. And by those sounds that were coming out of different places she was even more freaked out.. On theh other hand Dev was also very scared.. Woh Kya hai na Dev thoda Darpok sa hai.. 😆



So then Radhika and Dev went their own ways and they were walking very slowly.. Radhika was holding a stick witih her incase any animal comes near.. 😆



After 30 minutes..



Radhika was walking tired from walking for so long.. She was just about to sit down to take a short break as her legs were killing her when she heard something.. It was coming form the bushes,,, We was freaking out.. she didn't know what it was but it was comin towards her..



Rasdhika - Kaun hai??


Radhika said to herself..


Radhika - Stupid radhika yeh Janwar kya samjhe ga tuhme?? Isse hindi thodi na aati hai.. Shayad English aati ho..😆🤪

Radhika- Who is it? 🤪



She got no reply back.. She was getting scared and scared.. Then she hid behind another bush and thoguht that she was going to hit the animal when it comes out.. And sooner or later it did come out.. Once it did she started ounding the animal with her might.. But little did she knwo this wasn't any animal is was our very own Dev.


Sorry for the delay..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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If you guys don't mind can I continue?

Okay if you guys don't like my part then you could easily just ignore it and go on.. Here i go..

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Dev- Ouch Ouch Ouch!!!!!!!!

Radhika had her eyes shut tightly .. When she heard a human word "Ow" she opened on of eye slowly.. She saw that it was Dev.. She stopped pounding him and her eyes were wide.. Then after a little silence she started laughing like a maniac..

Dev- Shutup ek toh tum muhje marti ho aur upar se sorry kehne ke bijaae muj par hass rahi ho???

Radhika then finally controlled her laughter..
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Sorry I just like wrote a little part as you said that we can also write a short part?? How did you like it?? Anyways..Umm I just going through the forum and saw thsi ff and i love reading ffs so then i read it and let me tell you.. Hotie and Indiangirl09 You guys rock!! Please keep on continuing on.. Sorry I know my part sucked but you can just ignore it and go on...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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This is part 5 alltogether..


Part 5 - Welcome new entrants -

Chapter 5 ka Part 1



Recap: Radhika and Dev fights happening. Radev very cute part in the Gym. Instead of explaining what happened to their friends a fight starts. Radhikas Lip stick Mark on Dev's shirt. Cute! Basketball meeting. Both going there now lets see whats going to happen next.


Dev put his shirt on and headed off to the Basketball court where the meeting was held by the captain. He walked there with Birju and Arjun by his sides. Radhika on the other hand was getting late as she had to put her books in her locker. She was trying her best to not get late. But there were alot of books and she dropped them in a hurry. It took time to pick them up and walk over there put her books away and then walk over to the basketball court. There she saw the team waiting for her.

Radhika: Sorry guys Im late she said tying her sweater around her waist tightly.


Dev saw her slim figure while she was tieing the sweater around her waist. Dev then hit his head. Mad at himslef for thinking that way for Miss Mirchi. He barfed in his mind. Dev looked at her face and walked over to her.

Dev- Acha toh agar tum late hogayi to koi problem nahi aur agar main late hogaya to problem hai. Aur toh aur tum to captain ho na, Kaisi captain ho tum. Apne aap hi Meeting rakhi aur phir apne aap hi late hogayi. Wah Wah!

Radhika- Oye Mister Whatever. Main actual reason karke miss hui thi not "Personal Reasons" Sun liya. Aur By the way I can be a way better Captain than you.

Dev - Keep Dreaming!

Radhika- Oh god Why do you always make me have to shut his mouth up? Anyways I am not going to waste my breath and Time on Mr.Wierdo standing here...So Team What I needed to tell you guys...

Dev - Oye You got it the opposite...He looks back and all around then turns back to Radhika...Im sorry where is Mr.Wierdo cause I am not seeing him....Oh wait See your always say the opposite stuff I think you should get it checked from the doctor...Its Mrs.Wierdo and She standing right in front of me...Oh wait I neevr knew you were a man!

Radhika Glares at him but then she remembers not to waste time...

Radhika - Anyways Team We only have About Untill our Tournament...The finals Are not in this Tournament We have made the Final in this College..Extra Special..So we have to practise practise practise...So we have to practise alot..That means that we are going for a practise right now... As you guys know there is a newbie in our team... We have to see hsi skills to fix his position .........


Radhika turns to Dev...She smiles...and makes a gesture saying go ahead...Dev smiles back... Obioulsy those were fake smiles...De walks up to the Court...

Dev- Gimme the Rock!

Radhika understand him...She picks up a rock and is about to throw it to him... Dev ducks pretecting his head...Meanwhile Radhika starts laughing histarically...

Dev - shutup and give me the Basketball if you know what I mean...

Radhika stops and passes the Ball to him.

Dev starts showing them his skills the team is surprised all of the girls are just looking at him thinking how hot he looks and all of the boys start feeling jealous wanting to be Dev right then...But most of all Everybody was suprised even Radhika!

Deepika - Wow he looks sooo hot and he is sooo good!!

Vishaka - I totally agree with you.

Radhika looks at Deepika and then Vishaka and then at Dev and almost peuks as she tried to find him hot.. But she couldn't anywhere.

They saw his skills a little more..

Radhika- Okay stop...Team which position should he be?

Team Mem. 1. - I think that he is really good...I think that You and Dev are exact good! So I think that you both should be captain what dop you say team!!

Team - Yeah that A good idea!!

Radhika's Chin Dropped open! Dev Smiled! He looks at Radhika...He closes her mouth...

Radhika turns towards Dev and shows him a angry face and then leaves from there stomping away..

The rest of the team started Practising.

Next Day.

[ I posted a topic of who wanted to be in the FF..So these are the following people.

Shrel Di, Anu, Yumna Di, Devika Di, Sonali, Priya, Vasha, Abhilasha, Radhika23, Minajay, Sunita, Liashna, AvinaRadev48, I...




Name in IF Name in FF

Radev24 Shrel

Indiangirl09 Anu

Billo Yumna

Devika Devika

Palak Sonali

Nycsweetie Priya

SugarSpice Vasha

Abhilasha_Dreamz Abhilasha

Radhika23 Rina

Minajay Mini

Chalhov Sunita

Liashna Liashna

AvinaRadev48 Jia


]






Radhika feels something on her Feet she wiggled a bit.. The thing was tickly...She feels it again..She moves her feet... She feels it again Finally she get up and looks at her feet...She sees someones hand with a feather. She kind of Recognizes that hand... She thinks a bit and then widens her eyes in Surprise and Happiness!


Radhika jumps out of bed and goes hugs that person

Radhika - Di!!!! Aap kab aayi?

That person was just laughing...

Radhika pulls out of the hug and looks at her face...

Radhika - Aap has Kyun rahi hai Anu di!!!

Anu has entered!!

Anu - Kuch nahi Kuch nahi.. Acha tu bata-

Before she could finish she Hea Radhika take a deep breath and

Radhika - Lekin Shrel Di, Anu Di, Yumna Di, Devika Di, Sonali Di, Priya Di, Vasha Di, Abhilasha Do , Rina Di, Mini,Sunita, Liashna kaha hai?

Radhika said that all in one breath.

Anu - Arre Arre pehle Saans lelo phir bataati hoon... Actually Hum abhi Abhi aaye hai Yahaan hamesha keliye rahene!!! She said with a wide smile on her face... Aur woh log Apne Luggage nikaal rahe hai.. Toh maine socha ki tumse Mil loon..Lekin yahaan toh maharani so rahi thi.

Radhika was jumping with joy. All of them were Radhikas Cousins... Radhika's Tayaa and Chacha's Daughters. They lived far awa. But now they were going to be with her every second.

Radhika -- Ahhhh!!!! I can't believe aap yahaan Move horahe hai!! She hugs Anu tightly..


[ I posted a topic of who wanted to be in the FF..So these are the following people.
Shrel Di, Anu, Yumna Di, Devika Di, Sonali, Priya, Vasha, Abhilasha, Radhika23, Minajay, Sunita, Liashna, AvinaRadev48, I...
Name in IF Name in FF
Radev24 Shrel
Indiangirl09 Anu
Billo Yumna
Devika Devika
Palak Sonali
Nycsweetie Priya
SugarSpice Vasha
Abhilasha_Dreamz Abhilasha
Radhika23 Rina
Minajay Mini
Chalhov Sunita
Liashna Liashna
AvinaRadev48 Jia ]




While she was huggin Anu tightly she saw all of the other girls coming carrying their luggage looking very tired. She pulled out of the hug and smiled at Anu. She ran to the other girls. Anu just smiled at her. She hugged Shrel, Yumna, Devika, Sonali, Priya, Vasha, Abilasha, Rina, Mini, Sunita, Liashna, Jia..Then she invited Anu over and they all hugged eachother in a big huge 13som hug!...

Radhika's Dad Vinod ( I named him differently) Devki, (No amma this time 😉) heard all of the "Shor" and went out of their room sleepily to see what was going. When they went outside they were totally taken back. They smiled. They were also very happy to see all of them together.

Vinod : Arre Bacho!

All of the girls got into a line 😆 and started taking blessings of both of the elders.

Girls - Peri Paina, Chacha Ji..Chachi Ji ( they all call them Chachaji same as Radhika)

Vishaka And deepika were also sleeping and they also heard all of the screaming and everything.They both put a pillow on their head but didn't quite help. So they got off of the bed and went towards the living room..

Vishaka Sleepily says " Kya hua Radhika Tu Itna shor kyun macharahi hai.. She barely had her eyes open same with Deepika who was standing next to her...They didn't see who had came.. All of the girls go behind them.. When Vishaka and Deepika didn't get a reply

Vishaka and Deepika " Radhika kya hua ?"

Suddenly " BOOOOOOO!!!!!"

Vishaka and Deepika both jump out of their slippers and cling on to eachother for dear life. They Scream for a while " AHHHHHHHHHHH!!" But then They open their eyes noticing girls laughing.. They widen their eyes and a wide smile spread their face and they hugged all of them together...Radhika was still laughing..

( I will tell everyone who was wearing what I know this is going to be long but oh well.. )

Radhika was wearing :

https://www.sleepyheads.com/Frankie_and_Johnny_bSoft_Flannel_Cupcakes_Lounger_Pajama






Vishaka was wearing :

https://www.sleepyheads.com/Hello_Kitty_Brainy_Cutie_Green_Tank_and_Pant_Set

Deepika was wearing :

https://www.sleepyheads.com/Hello_Kitty_Brainy_Cutie_Green_Tank_and_Pant_Set

Shrel was wearing :

https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=101&productId=39235&color=IVORY&altImageId=1
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=102&subCategoryId=118&productId=36508
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=109&subCategoryId=206&productId=39078

Anu was wearing :

https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=176&subCategoryId=185&productId=38883
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=451&subCategoryId=452&productId=39171
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?productId=38590
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?productId=38151
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?productId=38151

Yumna was wearing :

https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=101&subCategoryId=115&productId=39240
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?productId=38770
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?productId=38960
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?productId=39059

Devika was wearing :

https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=101&subCategoryId=115&productId=39241
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=102&subCategoryId=118&productId=1301
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=109&subCategoryId=206&productId=37436

Anmol was wearing :

https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=176&subCategoryId=185&productId=39249
https://intl.wetseal.com/catalog/product.jsp?categoryId=102&subCategoryId=1057&productId=33500

The others were outside, They were on the phone. They got a phone call from their college. They enter the house with their faces looking glum. ( Guys Im sorry I just realized I both be able to manage all of these characters I am not like Sonali Palak 😉But I promise you guys that are going to leave the FF that you guys will be concluded in a very special occasion. I will let your imagination guess what that "Special" Occasion will be. ) They enter with Glum expression on their Faces. Radhika walks up to them,,

Radhika – Kya hua aap log itne Sad kyun lag rahe ho?

Priya – Radhia hume College se phone Aayaa hai who keh rahe hai ki hum Uss College main 1 saal aur rehna padega! I don't know why they didn't tell us the reason I hope you understand.

Radhika smiles at them – Koi baat nahi Di, Lekin promise keejiye. Jb aap log uss College se free hongi toh pehle yahi aayengi?

They all say – Sure my sweet little Sister!

Sonali – Okay phir hume nikal na chahiye,

Although Radhika was sad that they were leaving she thought about her other cousins that were here to stay. She got excited by that thought. Also her other cousins will be coming only here after their College ends. She saw them leave into the car that they came in. They all seemed disappointed they came so far and then they had to leave.

Shrel – Offo Radhika don't be sad hum sab toh yahaan hai na.

Radhika – I know Shrel DI That's why I am not as sad as I would've been if you guys left with them too..

Yumna – Then What are we waiting for lets have some fun!

They all run in to Radhika room and get them selves comfortable on Radhika's Bed!

Devika – Okay Okay lekin Hum rahenge kahaan? I mean where will we sleep?

Radhika – Aap sab yahaanmere kamre main rahenge …

Anmol – What I mean I know your room is huge. But How are we going to pull this off. How we going to get so many beds in here?

They all started thinking. Radhika was thinking and then she started smiling..

Radhika – Store room Main ek queen size bed hai aur 2 bunk beds. So we could join this bed which is queen sized bed and the other queen sized bed and we could use the Bunk beds also…4 people on this bed which will expand and 2 people on each bunk bed. Hows hat sound,

Everyone was happy with the idea, So they all made plan on a piece of paper.

Two Queen Sized put together – 4 people

Two Bunk Beds – 4 people.

Week 1 on the bed – Yumna, Anmol, Devika, Shrel.

Week 1 on the Bunk Beds – Radhika, Anu, Vishaka, Deepika.

Week 2 on the Bed – Radhika, Anu, Vishaka, Deepika.

Week 2 on the bunk beds – Yumna, Anmol, Devika, Shrel

And so on..

Everyone was so excited!


The girls all Go to the store room they take the Bunkbeds. The Bunkbeds were not put together they still had to make it. The Qween sized bed was taken by all tehe girls...They now had to give the bedroom a mak over.. A whole new look.. They were excited. Meanwhile the elders were talking among themselves... It was Great sunny day making the day even more beautiful was the Girls Smiles.

The Girls put the Qween Sized beds together making a big bed to fit about 4 people. They started buliding the Bunkbeds... They take out all of the pieces out of the box. They were really confused.

Anmol - Yeh Kya hai Yaar... Kaisa BunkBed hai... Jud hi nahi raha!

Radhika - Haan Di.. Pata nahi kya art Kis part ke saath jataa hai..

They thought about it for a little while.. Thinking Thinking about how they are going to complete this... So they started putting different parts together.. Miraculousy they actually Completed the Part! So they were jumping with joy...

Next comes the make over... After they completed putting the beds into places, The girls that came got their luggage. How were they going to do this.. How are they going to Fit the clothing. So then Radhika brought the dresser that was in the storeroom. Anu's clothes are going to be in the top three dresser drawers Anmols clothes are going to be in the next 3 dresser drawers.. The other drawer.. 1st 3 : Shrel Other 3 : Yumna Devika gets the closet and shares it with Radhika.. The other closet Deepika and Vishaka share. Then they started adding posters.. Sceneries, and other stuff.. It was night now and all of the girls got in their Jammies (Night wear ). They were impressed by their doings this day. Radhika was excited That they will be joining her college.

Anu, Anmol, Shrel, Yumna, Devika, Radhika, Vishaka, Deepika were all in their spots. They were chit chatting..
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Anu - So Radika how had your College been so far.. I mean koi Boyfriend Shoyfriend mila kai nahi..

Radhika - Nahi Di Im over boys now 😃

Vishaka - Arre Arre Anu main tuhme bataati hoon yeh kya batayegi. Actually Anu there is someone.. Aur uska naam Hai.. Dev!

Radhikas jaw dropped as she glared a Vishaka

Radhika - Kya bola tumne Vishaka I like Him Eww!! (Making Barfing sounds)

Vishaka : Aur kya!!

Radhika : Acha Acha toh main usse like karti hoon.. Di's don't believe her.. Uhh!! .. Aur haan I wanted to tell you something Vishaka told me that she is starting to like Birju like like 😉

Vishaka Blushed like crazy... She told Radhika not to tell anyone but she did. Now she regretted telling a lie about her liking Dev!

Shrel - Ooooohhh!! Toh yeh Birju kaun hai.. Aur tuhmare Purab ko kya hua?

Vishaka - Diii!! Aur pucho mat... Purab toh Vishakasss Issss Lovesss Yousss Keta rehta hai.. At first I didn't mind anad thought that it was cute but now it is too annoying!

Devki comes to the girls room and looks at the girls sitting on the bed chatting.

Devki - Bachon Ab sau jao.. Kal College bi janaa hai!

Radhika, Shrel, Vishaka, Deepika just layed down on the bed. Anmol and Auny jumped on to their Bunkbed. Devika and Yumna did the same. Then they all went to sleep and had sweet dreams. Radhika couldn't sleep all night because she kept on dreaming about Him.. Dev.. She was totally mad at herself. Then she started thinking about her happy spot.. Her playing all kinds of sports and all..

The Next Morning :

The Girls all got ready and were ready to go.. They Run to Radhikas car. Fortunately Radhikas car was a Pilot.. It could seat 8 people. Anu, Anmol, Shrel were sitting and Chit Chatting in the far back seat. In the seat in front of them was Devika, Deepika, and Yumna also Chit Chatting. Radhika was driving but also was chit chatting with Vishaka who was right beside her..

They got off and went to the college and learned and learned...

After College ended. Radhika was walking through the library she needed to return a book.. The Library was peaceful there was nobody there at all. SHe was walking and she bumps in to someone. Radhika Tries to help herself but the person that she bumped into caught her in his arms. She sqeezed her eyes together as she was scared that she will fall.. But frotunately that mans Arms were there.. The arms had a strong grip against her waist. They were strong. She felt really secure in those hands.. She slowly opens her eyes not feeling sore from anywhere and not feeling herself fall onto the floor. WHen she opens her eyes and she sees the person whos Arms she was in.. Her eyes Widened!! It was Dev!! They both kept on looking at eachother. They were lost in eachothers eyes. They were masmerized. Radhika and Dev tried to keep their gaze away but they couldn't they felt this strong urge to keep looking at the bautiful eyes that were looking at him/her. Finally Radhika Forced herself and snatched away her gaze from his. She pushed him away from her.

Radhika - Kya? Yahaan aas paas koi nahi hai toh faida utha rahe the... Sorry but you got the wrong girl.. I will not let anybody just make me dance on their tunes.

Dev - Oye hello... Miss Mirchi.. Main aisi gandhi harqat karne ki soch bi nahi sakte.. Ek to tume girne se bachaye aur upar se tum hi muhje taane deh rahi ho! Kya baat hai!

Radhika - Just shut up!! Kisne kaha tha? Kissne kaha tha muhje bachane keliye.. Kissne? Idiot! Duffer! Doofus! Just get away form here!

Dev - Pichli baar tum gayi thi aur iss baar main jaaoonga!


Dev thinking to himself.. Whoa what was that all about Dev! You gotta say SHe is pretty hot! Man I so wanted to kiss those rosy lips of hers! Idea!! Dev you are brilliant! Ab dekhna Radhika Tum mujje kaise kiss karti ho :)


Radhika was at the basketball court outside and Dev saw her and thought that it was the perfect moment to get that kiss that he wanted.. He smiled boyishly thinking about the kiss he will be getting from her. He grinned and walked towards her. Radhika turned around as she felt someone behind her. She looked back and to her dissapintment it was him, She knew she had to stay calm so she walked over to him.

Radhika - Hi tum bi yahaan Practise karne aaye ho? She smiled to him..

Dev - Umm Yeah.. He wondered why she was not spazzing out and being so nice... " Oh well" He thought...

Radhika was smiliing at him still then all of a sudden she sees a spark in her eye... A light that was really shiny.. She put her hand in front of her eyes but it didn't help so she turned her face away. Then after a little while she looks back and saw that the light was gone.. But along with that weird light someone else was gone too. Dev! She started looking for him.. She was walking and she tripped over something. She fell on top of Dev. She saw Dev laying there with his eyes closed. Radhikas head hit his chest and she layed her head on his chest. Then she got up.

Radhika - Idiot Pagal ho kya yahaan paye kyun ho?

She get no reply..

Radhika - Hello! You Im talking to you!

Still she get no reply at all.. What the hell is wrong with him she thought.. Then she recalled that light. She thougt that it was Lighting!!!!

Radhika - O shit!!

She looked at his stomach but it wasn't moving which meant he wasn't breathing.. Her eyes widened with Fright! She checked near his wrist and Neck to listen to his pulse. His heart was still pumping. She recalled what she learned in that health class. When someones heart is beating but that person is not breathing what to do. They taught her that she had to Push on his chest. She did that but no He still wasn't breathing. She tried to remember that if that doesn't work what else she had to do. Her eyes widened again but this time it wasn't becasue she was frightened but it was because she was grossed out! No she couldn't do this. She couldn't go mouth to mouth with him. But she also couldn't just leave him here to die. She knew she had to go mouth to mouth with him.. She took a deep breath.. Counted to ten and then got ready.. Dev was trying not to laugh or smile.


Radhia closed her and wished she had those things where she puts it on her nose so she can smell his bad breath.. She got clsoer and closer to his lips.. She was hating herelf so much.. Once they were this close to eachothers lips.. Dev started laughing out loud. Radhika got scared and quickly moved away and held her mouth! She couldn't believe it.. All of that faking of not breathing was a trick! (Guys really Who can predict Dev.. I mean he is Dev) Dev was trying not to laugh anymore because his hceeks were hurting and his sotmach was also hurting so he was holding on to it.. Finally he stopped laughing and looked at Radhikas face and then again started laughing uncontrolabally! Radhika was fuming! She wanted to say alot of bad words to him. She was going to but then she controlled her temper and told herself not to spaz out at him, Stay Cool..

Radhika - So.. This was all a joke huh? Wow what a big surprise.. I know you wanted to kiss me.. But never knew that you were that desperate I mean what a joke you are..

Dev FInally Controlled his laughter - So you mean to say that you didn't get fooled?

Radhika - Oh please you've got to try more harder to trick me.. I mean a flshing light.. Like really..

Dev - Oh yeah okay then lets say that whoever gets folled by the other person loses.. Its not just a bet but a challenge!

Radhika - Oh bring it on mister.. I am all ready for this.. I already know who is going to win..

Dev - Oh really is it that obvious.. Am I that good?

Radhika - On please who would think that you would win.. That right nobody.. So you winning.. not even possible in your dreams.. Pwned..

Dev - Please you shouldn't be so overconfident that you will cry when you lose..

Radhika - Please.. First of all it done I am all ready for this challenge and the other thing I don't want to waste my time on you so bye!




Anu - Red

Anmol - Blue

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Radhika was fuming wid anger and she walked out from the gym leaving Dev behind''Dev was smling'

After she left Dev says to himself:-Kya karo Ms Mirchi agar last minute mein main hasta nahi to tum definitely tum mujhe kiss kar deti'..but My bad luck'Uff''chalo koi baat nahi next time sahi😉'.he smiles boyishly.

Radhika was walking down the stairs where she meets Karan'(Radh's ex-boyfriend'.She broke up wid him 1 year ago'but they were still good friends)

Karan:- Hey Radhika'What's up?

Radhika looks at him and smiles'.ahh Nothing much'

Karan:- Aur kaisi ho tum?

Radhika:- I am good'How about u?

Karan smiles:-Mein bhi acha hoon'.par ab thodi der pehle tum bahut gusse mein lag rahi thi''sab theek to hai na'..

Radhika:-Ya sab theek hai'..Mein bas thodi tired hoon'..aur humare exams bhi to shuru ho rahe hai to mujhe practice bhi karni'..to I think mujhe abhi ghar chalna chahiye'.Hum phir milenge theek hai!

Karan:-Ya ya No problem'.I understand'Okay babes bye see ya'.

Radhika:- Ya bye'

Radhika then goes to look for Vishakha..But she couldn't find her'She looked everywhere library, classrooms, washroom''

Radhika to herself:-Yeh vishakha kaha chali gayi'.She decides to call her'.

Vishakha picka up the phone.(She was at home)

Vishakha:- Hello?

Radhika:-Hello ki bachi'..Kaha ho tum'..Mein yaha kitna pareshan ho rahi hoon tujhe pata bhi hai?

Vishakha:- Sorry sorry meri baat to sun'Mein actually aaj jaldi ghar aa gayi thi'..vo mera sir dard kar raha tha na''bas isliye'.aur papa bhi hong kong gaye hue hai'Mom bhi akeli hai ghar mein isliye jaldi aa gayi'.

Radhika:- Ohh ok..sorry sis'Mein aise hi tumpe cheelane lag gayi'

Vishakha chuckles:- Don't worry'..vo to meri choti behen ki aadat hai'.

Radhika:-Okay vishakha ab tu mujhe tease mat kar'.mein bhi aa rahi hoon ghar.Okay

Vishakha:- Ya okay''Bye Radhika'.

Radhika goes to the parking lot where her car was parked'.But suddenly her gaze fell on the flat tyre'

Radhika:- Oh dang it'..is tyre ko bhi abhi puncture hona tha'.hey bhagwan ab mein ghar kaise jaoongi..andhera bhi ho raha hai..

Suddenly Dev comes there on his yellow bike'

Dev stops by Radhika and says:- Ohh Hi'..kya hua Ms. Mirchi'..tyre flat ho gaya..Ohh very bad'chalo mein ghar chod deta hoon tumhe'

Radhika:- Ghar aur tumhare saath forget it'.Mr. Dumbo

Dev:-Sochlo warna yehi khadi intzaar karti reh jaoogi tum'aur Yeh Nanital hai'..Raat bhi ho rahi aur tumhari dress dekhi hai'(She was wearing a purple dress'.Her dress was upto her knees)Koi fayada utha sakta hai tumhara.kaise kaise log aate hai yaha par tumhe pata bhi hai..

Radh's dress


Radhika:-Isiliye ghar tak chodne jaa rahe ho tum'

Dev:-Ofcourse mein nahi chahta ki tum musibat mein pad jaoo'

Radhika thinks to herself:- shayad sahi keh raha yeh Dumbo'.raat bhi ho rahi hai aur agar'.nahi..

Radhika to Dev:- Okay chalo'.

Dev smiles(It was all his plan)he says to her:- Hello jara jor se pakdana mujhe aage sadak kharab hai aur street lights bhi nahi hai..

Radhika makes a face and sits on his bike and uninterestingly holds him from his waist..

Dev:-jor se pakdo

Radhika:-Makes annoying face and tightened her arms around his waist'

Dev:-aur jor se

Radhika tightened her arms even more

Dev:- aur jor se

Radhika:- enough'ab tum chaloge bhi ya nahi..

Dev chuckles and starts his bike''

DEV'S BIKE
This tune was playing in the background








Dev and radhika reached Radhikas house.

Radhika get off of his bike Dev looks at her...

Rdhika - Thanks..

Dev - for what?

Radhika - for dropping me off..

Dev - Oh no prob..

Then radhika makes her way to her hosue and there she sees her cousins looking at her suspiciuosly..

Before she could say anything as she knew what they were going to say..

But before she could shut them up.
They started asking her questions..



Shrel di:- Kya baat hai ab yeh handsome ladka kaun tha....
Radhika:- Koi nahi Di......bas voh mujhe ghar drop karne aaya tha......vo meri car kharab ho gayi thi na bas isliye.....
Anmol:- rehne de humne kya dekha nahi kaise tightly pakda hua tha tumne use...
All starts laughing
At Dev's house..
Dev reaches home....
Daadi:-Kyon re kaha lag gayi itni der.....
Dev smiles:-Are daadi ma mein to apni friend ko drop karne chala gaya tha voh uski car kharab ho gayi thi......
Daadi:- theek hai to yeh colgate ki add kya kar raha tu......sach sach bata kisse chodne gaya tha tu?
Dev hesitates but Daadi was keep on insisting..
Dev:-Voh Radhika
Daadi:-Radhika kitna pyara naam hai......to ab ladke ka naam bhi Radhika hone laga..huh?
Dev:-Ladke😕......Daadi voh Ladki hai
Daadi chuckles:-mujhe bataya nahi tune apni.... voh kya kehte hai...apni nai girlfriend ke bare mein.....
Dev:-Voh meri girlfriend nahi hai....She's just a friend....
Daadi:-Par
Dev:-Okay daadi sawal poochna band karo mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai.....



Dev and Daadi go downstairs and Daadi gives him a meal. (lunch) Then after lunch Dev goes tot he T.V and starts watchign cartoon😆

Daadi comes to him and takes the remote and turns the T.V off..

Dev jumps - Kya Daadi layiye na! Spongebob Patrick se kuch kehna waalaa tha!😆

Daadi - CHup.. Ab teri umar iss Cartoon dekhne liye nahi hai.. Aur muhje Radhika ke baare main bataa kaise tum log Dost bane.😃

Dev - Theek hai agar main aapko bataaunga toh aap mera sir toh nahi kaogi na Radhik Radhika keh ke?

Daadi- Haan Haan Theek Hai Theek hai..

Dev - Okay fine.. Sadch yeh Hai That I hate her and she hates me Happy😃

Daad- Kya abhi abhi to tu kehraha tha ki tum log dost ho.. Ab kya hua? Aur tu agar uska dost anhi that to tu usko ghar kyun nahi chodke ayaa?

Dev - Daadi Main sach bol raha hoon We are enemies.. I hate her too much! Actually Muhjue bhook bauhut lagi thi to maine kuch bi boldiya.. Aur main usse iss liye ghar chodke aayaa tha kyunki uski Ghadi kharab hogayi thi😉 Ab aap T.V laayiye..

Daadi turns on the T.V

The scene shifts to The girls room😃



Vishakha:-Radhika waise Dev kitna handsome hai na...
Anmol:-Haa wahi to mein keh rahi....He is hotttt
Palak:-Aur nahi to kya....Radhika tumhari aur Dev ki jodi bahut achi lagegi....
Shrel di:-Bilkul..Radha Krishna ki jodi hai yeh to..
Radhika kept staring at them.......and finally speaks....
Radhika :-Enough...please Dev ke bare mein mujhse koi baat mat karo....I hate him....Mein use kabhi pyar nahi kar sakti...
Shrel di:-Pyar karte nahi..... ho jaata hai...Pyar ek aisi feeling hai......jise shabdo mein describe nahi kiya jaa sakta...Okay chalo yeh sab chodo.....chalo jaake fresh ho jaoo....aur dinner kar lo...
Radhika:- Ok di
Next morning at University....
Radhika was in the library reading books....But then Dev comes there with Arjun and sees Radhika.....



Radhika is at The library and Dev comes there with Arjun. Dev sees her. Arjun also sees her and walks towards her. Dev follows him as he didn't know here to go after he went to Radhika and he would look very stupid just standing there alone just like a loner😆

Arjun- Hey Radhika..

Radhika smiles when she sees Arjun - Hey Arjun..

Then once she sees Dev standing beside him her smile fades away..

Arjun - Kaisi ho tum?

Radhika - Main theek hun tum batao?

Arjun- Fit and Fine.. Actually Radhika muhje double check karna tha Umm Basketball Torunament kab hai?

Radhika - Oh Iss Friday ko.

Arjun- Oh shit muhje tuh abhi bauhut Practise ki zaroorat hai Birju ko bi main Abhi batake ayaa.

And Arjun left from there leaving Radhika and Dev alone.. Radhika Glaring at him Dev noticing but ignoring her..


Radhika felt weird....But she decides to speak up...

Radhika:- ah Dev.....

Dev jerks and looks at her.....His heart smiled because she always used to call him by different names......and it was the first time that she called him by his name.....

Dev:-yes Ms.Mir.....Radhika....

Radhika:-Mein tumhe phirse thank u kehna chahti hoon.....agar kal tum nahi hote to pata nahi meri kya halat ho jati...

Dev:- Its okay...ahh kya mein tumhare saath baith sakta hoon...

Radhika:-ya sure....go ahead

Dev sits in front of Radhika....Now they were facing each other....

Dev's gaze fell on the book Radh was reading.

Dev:-Wow tumhari book to kaafi interesting lagti hai

Radhika smiles:-ya....actually yeh meri grandma ki book hai....

Dev:-If u don't mind.....Can I borrow it.....

Radhika wasn't sure but she decides to give it to him..

Radhika:-Ya Ok....Par please isse lose mat karna....

Dev:-Ya alright......I will be careful......Thank u

Radhika:-your welcome




Radev are sitting... down Radhika was studying for her exams same with rDev. both were talking to eachother very sweetly..

Dev was suprised by the war Ms. Mirchi is behaving with him.. why is she being so nice he thgought.. " Yeh Ms. Mirchi ko toh maine bina Mirch ke bina dekha hi nahi"

After they are Done Dev is wanting to say something but keeps on asking himself if he shoudl or not.. Then he gets the guts to say it😉

Dev - Uhh Radhika I need to ask you something..

Radhika - Yes go ahead Mr. Du I mean Dev😃😆

Dev - Uhh Radhika can we be friends' He puts his arm out infront of Radhika like shaking hands..

Radhika looks confused :

Radhika - Uhh sure and then They shake hands as if they are now Friends😳

Dev - Actually I never knew that YOu could be so nice! Its like its not realy you😉

Radhika couldn't hold in anymore.. She burst out laughing,,


Radhika was holding on to her stomach trying to control her laughter..



Precap : Radev's Class decides to go on Picnic😃

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Hello guys I hope there are people that are interested in reading this FF😕
This part is written by me and Anmol.....I hope u guys like it.....
Dev:-Tumne hasne ka bahut shonk hai na? ek kaam karo jaake comedy circus join karlo...He said with an angry tone.

Radhika felt hurt:- Fine itna gussa kyon ho rahe ho..Amitabh bachan ke fan ho......Angry young man....huh? acha tumhara favourite hero kaun hai..she replied...

Dev controlled his anger and looked down running his hand in his lustrous hair.....

dEV said changing the topic:-Sorry, Mujhe tumse aise baat nahi karni chahiye thi.....

Radhika smiled girlishly......Its Ok Mister......Bade bade deshon (countries) mein aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehti hai.....She said winking an eye at him....

Dev was surprised by her action.......

He smiled friendly.....

Radhika:-Freinds...

Dev:-What????

Radhika:-Haan pichli baar maine tumhari friendship reject ki thi.......Par shayad mein galat thi.....I am sorry.........

Dev didn't know how to react......

Dev:-Radhika mera majak karne ka bilkul mood nahi hai......So please stop it Ok??......Suddenly itna change kaise aagaya tum me.......

Radhika:-aisi koi baat nahi hai.....bas mujhe tum me ek acha insaan dikhayi diya to....

Dev:-Ohh really????

Radhika:-Stop it......Hum yeh argument baad mein kar lenge......Par abhi hume iss jungle se nikalne ka koi rasta dhoondna hoga.......

Dev:-Hmm sahi keh rahi ho tum...pehli baar koi akal ki baat kahi hai tumne....

Radhika :-Shut up......She said girlishly.....

Dev chucked and he grabbed her hand.....The moment she felt his warm hand on her's....Her body tremeled.....Dev also felt ecstatic holding her soft beautiful hand.....

They both looked at each other at the same time.....

The moment he met her big, deep coffee brown eyes.....He got lost in them........He kept staring at her without blinking.......

Radhika was also staring at him......But she felt really weird seeing Dev looking at her with an intense emotion of affection, warmth, and fondness......

This song started playing in the background.........

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HuTKp3x11a8[/YOUTUBE]

They didn't realize what they were doing .....they were in a trance.......where no one existed apart from them......Dev starts moving towards her and she kept moving back until she hit a tree..But Dev kept advancing towards her without any fear......

Radhika:-Dev.......

Dev didn't bother to answer her......and he moved more closer to her........

He felt her warm breath on him and gazed at her rosy lips..She parted her lips to say something....but He slowly smothered his lips with hers....Kissing her gently......... Suddenly Radhikas realized what they were doing.. and it sure felt right but she knew it wasn't right at all.. she quickly parted.. and slightly pushed him away. Dev realized hwat had just happened.. he had just kissed her.. He was cursing himself for taking this big huge step.. What if she thoguht wrong of him..They had just become friends.., Now what if this ended up to be a end to their relationship... But it just felt so right.. He had never kissed a girl before.. yes he had been in many relationships.. but never ever had kissed a girl before.. which made this kiss so special.. as this was his first kiss, this wasn't only his first kiss but it was radhikas first kiss too. Their firsst kiss was with the person that they hated hte most just few days ago.. and now they just became friends few minutes ago and then a kiss.. Radhika was very stunned

Dev- Radhika Im- he was interupted by Radhika

Radhika- Dev.. Yeh sahi nahi tha.. yeh sab nahi hona chahiye tha..

Dev- Ya radhika - He was again interupted by radhika

Radhika- Im sorry Dev.. This was all my fault.. i shouldn't had asked you for friendship.. I only meant friendship.. but you took it hte wrong way.. im sorry Dev there has been a misunderstanding..

Dev- Radhika there hasn't been any misunderstanding.. Believe me I never - he was interupted again But this time it wasn't by Radhika..

Voice- Radhika... Radhika Dev.. Guys where are you??

Radhika- Dev thats.. Thats Shrel Di's voice... Shrel Diii!!!!!

Shrel- Radhika..

They both started walking towards the direction the voice of Shrel was coming from..They finally met with Shrel..and The rest of the Gang..With Devs Gang too...

they started asking a bunch of questions saying if they were alright.. Then they started walking since the gang had been smart and left a trail to find their way back to the opening.. They finally got out of the jungle.. All the way through.. radhika didn't take even one glance at Dev.. Dev knew he had to talk to her some way.. had to get this misundertanding out of the way..

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Edited by Indiangirl09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hotie and all other lovely readers... do you have anything specific in mind? I think may be we can have them, normal Dev and Radhika ...no amma blashes, no vishaka's eyes... all charactors good and well....... what you guys think..
anyother point, let me know... a totally naughty Radhika.. with handsome Dev... I mean thru out.😲..
What you think.... and when can we start??????😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Indiangirl09

Yaaaa great idea and whoever is starting Can u make Radh modern and educated please😛

ofcourse... that's what i am thinking... let us have a modern RAdhika... 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Heres a promo...



Promo # 1


Dev and the team then left to the respectiev homes. Radhika, VIshaka and Deepika went home. And, Dev, Birju, and Arjun went to their home.

Radhiak got home.

Radhiak went striaght to her room. Radhika was annoyed by the new team member in their team.

Radhiak to VIshaka and Deepika:: God I hate that stupid idiot Dev!!! Samajta kya hai apne aap ko. "Personal reason" She mocked him. Personal reasons my foot.

Deepika: haan yaar bauhut flirtacious hai. Mera number poocha usne.

Radhika: Acha to woh uska personal reason kisi ladki ko dump hoga!! So amnoxious I dont know how im going to bear him!!! I hate being around him. At today it was just the first day I met him that too only for a little time... God help me!!

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