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Today while I was watching the last section of promo and saw Vishaka leaping through the window.........a poem called Lochinver by Sir Walter Scot came into my mind. I have modified it and Lochinver has become our very own Purab or Loony Cuties Bear. So here it is...............I am hoping that like all the literary greats Sir Scot will also forgive me 😉




O, Young Cuties is come out of the west;

Through all the wide Vrindavan his bike was the best;

And save his good brain he weapon had none;

He rode all unarmed, and he rode all alone.

So faithful in duty, and so dauntless in friendship,

There never was braveheart like the young Cuties.

He staid not for brake, and he stopped not for stone;

He swam the Yamuna river, where ford there was none;

But, ere he alighted at Shastri gate,

The bride had sulked, the cuties came late:

For an idiot with no brains, and a fool off beauty,

Was to wed the sly Vishaka friend of loony Cuties.

So quietly he crept in the Shastri Kuthi,

'Mong bridesmen, and kinsmen, and brothers, and all;

Then spoke amma, her hands joint to plead ,

( For the poor craven bridegroom said never a word, )

"O come ye kanha here, or come ye thakurji,

O please save our bride, O Lord of all seas"

"I long prayed to you, my suit you denied ---

My faith swells like the mountains, never ebbs like the tide ---

And now I am come, with this immense faith of mine,

To plead for my hearts desire, for Vishaka who is mine;

There is no maiden in Vrindavan more lovely by far,

That would gladly beat Vishaka, oh heart off mine."

The bride sulked in fury, she stormed around;

She made loads off faces, and looked like a clown.

She looked ready to burst, her seams undone,

With a pout on her face, and a frown between her eye.

She wrung her soft hand, moaned when none could hear ---

"Oh where are you ! " my loony cuties bear .

So pompous his form, and so wily her face,

That never a hall such a braveheart did grace;

While her mother did cry and her father did fume,

And the bridegroom stood dangling his bonnet and plume;

And the fair Radhika whispered, " 'T were better by far

To have matched my fair sister with the loony cuties bear. "

One touch to her hand and one word in her ear,

When she jumped through the window, and the Cuties stood near

So quickly the wily fox ran to the bike,

And leapt up the seat before cuties ran !

"She is gone ! they are gone, over bank, bush, and river;

They'll have party at IF," quoth young Cuties bear

There was clapping among the friends in the IF clan;

Gardes, Rajsri, and Misti, they danced and they sang

There was laughing and singing on IF circle,

For the wily daughter of Shastri ne'er do they want to see.

So faithful in duty, and so dauntless in friendship,

There never was braveheart like the young Cuties?

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Absolutely perfect .... loved it loved it .... I think we should put this up along with today's written update
Purab as young Lochinvar ... Poor Walter Scott ... you are making all these poets turn in their grave !!!!

Misti my dear ... this is by far one of your best ...
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OMG, OMG, Misti strikes again! Such an apt selection and oh how you parody! I can't get over it! Thanks for rejoicing with Rajsri, me and the IFers!
:D :D :D
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You are the best Misti. LOL
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Misti - This probably has some people turning in their graves!!!!!
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Misti, perfect. In fact I was thinking that Vishaka should get married to Purab. He is not romantically interested in her anyway. Once she has her baby, she would also have a live-in baby sitter. He would be a great baby sitter. In between, Vishaka can run away with Vikram, and others then come back and then do that again and so on. He is a perfect knight in shining motorcycle for her. The standards have improved also. Previously, it was rickshaw and now it is motorbike.
Some observations from the show:
Vishaka is wearing Radhika's wedding dress. Didn't it get burnt in the fire? It is kind of amazing that only Radhika got burnt, but all the clothes etc are intact. I mean, is Kanha really with her or she is hallucinating?
Why is Radhika looking so dowdy especially in that pink outfit? Dev is always shown in front of the mirror combining his hair, adjusting his scarf etc. but Radhika doesn't even a full mirror. Is Dev hogging all the mirrors in their room? That's why Radhika is an ideal wife for him. Ever since he got married to Radhika, he is looking so hot. When he was with Vishaka, he had to sleep on a couch for all those months and never had a mirror to himself until Vishaka ran away.
This marriage should go on. As many of you have mentioned, Bela would be perfect for this guy. Also, Devki used to be Bela's mausi in the first wedding, became her mami in the second wedding and is now back to being her mausi in the third wedding.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow first wordsworth now lochinvar. What / who next, I wonder? ;-) hats off to you, Mistiji! My fav poets too! One request - how about Elizabeth Barrett Browning's How do I love thee, a desi interpretation for RaDev???? Please?
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Originally posted by: rajsri

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Absolutely perfect .... loved it loved it .... I think we should put this up along with today's written update
Purab as young Lochinvar ... Poor Walter Scott ... you are making all these poets turn in their grave !!!!

Misti my dear ... this is by far one of your best ...


Thanks Rajsri.............I know .........I have a lot of dues to pay to a long list of illustrious authors and poets 😆😉
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Originally posted by: gardes

OMG, OMG, Misti strikes again! Such an apt selection and oh how you parody! I can't get over it! Thanks for rejoicing with Rajsri, me and the IFers!

:D :D :D



You are welcome.......I think now is my high school english teachers turn to run away from me 😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sigrid

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You are the best Misti. LOL



I know that I am the best 😉😃😃

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