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hi, I started reading yesterday.It is beautiful.Waiting for the next part.
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This FF is just tooooo good
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Wow, I started to read your FF today, and I couldn't stop until I had finished reading all the parts!!

Great and unique story, please continue soon!!!
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👏great .fantastic job on part 4 it was just amazing
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Posted: 15 years ago
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HEy guys thank you so much for the beautiful comments 😊 You guys dont now happy i am 😃
I cant update until Friday you guys have to wait😕
Does anyone now palak13 she asked me to pm her but it does int work
It writes that her pm box is full 😕
if anyone could get her too empty her pm box or give her the message that i posted part 2.3.4
thank you
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 5

Dev was in the boys locker room 'all his team was going crazy , cheering for him in the locker room .Dev was the man of the match ..Dev was packing up his equipement his hair were wet he was looking really fresh

Rahul: Yaar you were on FIRE when you saw Radika!!!

Dev just smiled a little shyly ..

Dev: Well I guess that shes my lucky charm Saying pensively

Rahul: its kinda obvious that you love her saying teasingly

Dev still pensively saying

Dev : I fell in love when I first saw her .she had those eyes that made you fall for her , her perfect lips , her smile , her dark brun hair , her singing , her talking , her laughing everything about her is just soo special for me ..she's engraved in my heart forever . I could never forget her ..She made me a different person 'She's sent by god just for me ..
I would do anything for her


Rahul hold dev shoulder

Rahul: Wow..dev you really do love her .But does she love you as much as you do ??

Dev was surprised at his question..

Dev: I don't know ' were best friend and I don't now if she feels the same way as me..

Rahul : Well all the girls fall for you ..why would it be different for Radika?/

Dev was thinking at his question'

Rahul :Anyways See you around

Dev : Take care man

Dev does his hand shake with Rahul'

Dev came out of the locker room 'He was disappointed to not see radika anywhere he starts walking in the silent hall way ..He though that she would be waiting for him ..Radika was hiding behind the wall
She sees Dev walking ..

R: BOOO

Dev jumped and drops his sport bag ..his hand was on his heart ..

D: RADIKA!! You really scared me

Radika was laughing

R: well you did the same too me yesterday ..I didn't want to miss the perfect opportunity for revenge 'Saying with a cute smile

Dev gave her a boyish smile

D: You were waiting for me ?? asking happily
R: Of course ..how could I leave without congratulating you ..But what took you soo long I was waiting for 1:30 hour

D: Sorry I made you wait it was the last day to see my team..(looking a little sad )

Radika just smiled : I understand

R:I cant belive that 2 years passed so quickly and your almost finishing your studies ..Saying proudly. And next week are your final exams

D: Yours too

Radika looking down sadly

R: No im taking an extra semester

D: what !! But why?? I wanted to get graduated with you
Dev crosses his arms like a kid , he was upset

Radika purses her lips sadly .

R: Me too but its really important that I take those classes ..And you waited 2 years for this please don't be upset ..

Radika was trying to cheer him up

D: Tum meri maadad karogi na final exam karleye ??

Radika was surprised at his question

R: when was the last time I never helped you??

Radika and dev started laughing

The next day dev and radika met at the ghat to study ..It was almost sunset..
Suddenly radika hears the raas leela she quickly gets up..

D: Kya hua ??

Radika took devs wrist

R; Jaldi

D: Par kahan ??
R: Just come..dev and radika where running ..they finally arrived at the raas leela it was colour full in the beautiful tress were swinging away .

Dev just smiled at radika

D: Itni door se tumne raaslela sunliya??

Radika smiled shyly '

They were watching the raaslela ..Then suddenly radika closed her eyes and started to go in circles Dev turns to radika 'Dev was just mesmerized by her beauty ..Dev quickly takes out his cell phone and was waiting for the perfect shot .He took the picture without radika knowing ..It was a beautiful picture of radika .She had her amazing smile . Her eyes were closed but her eyelashes were long and soo pretty she was wearing a baby bleu shalwar kammez with her dupatta , she had her perfect braid coming to the front ..her face was glowing ..The sunset was in the back . Dev never saw such beautiful picture in his life..he was just lost in radika he couldn't take his eyes of her..The raasleela was finished ..Radika slowly opens her eyes..and sees dev looking at her with a smile
She got embarrassed . Her cheeks turned pink..she bites her lower lips

D: Tum kahan kogayithi ??

Radika replies shyly

R: Muhje raaslela bohut acha lagtha hai 'I get into it

She had her head down she was really shy ..

Dev was looking at her lovingly

D: You looked soo beautiful

R: Kya ??

Dev just realised what he just said

D: No I mean its nice that you get into it ..

Radika just smiled shyly

R: Chalein ?(Lets go)

Dev nods his head ..


Shastri place

Radika was in her room studying'.vishaka was doing her designing work

V: Radika you really did change dev..I mean hes really not the same as before .. I cant believe that hes already at his final exams..He never really cared about college .after you came .I think you gave him big lecture didn't t you??

Radika laughs :How did you know?? saying with a cute chuckle

V: Well Radika you give really good lecture ..and im sure he listen to every word you told him..

R: I just bough him to the right path..

V: Well I wouldn't be surprised if he fell in love it you ..

Radika was shocked at what vishaka said ..

Radika talking to herself..:Why would he like me ..I mean im not like the other girls that he dated and hes so handsome and such a sweet guy 'I don't want dev to love me ..I want dev only as my best friend I did all this for him and for his family 'But deep down her heart she did have feeling for him ..But she was never going to show them ..It was better if they just stayed good friend ..


Edited by billo77 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
loved it! It was really sweet!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was awesome......continue soon.....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks expecting the next one soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Too good..loved it..was really sweet...please post the next part soon

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