NEW FF: Confused heart Part 22( Last) page 44

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Hey guys i started a FF Its might not be as good as the other ones but I still tried .There not too much drama its a simple story I dontKnow how many parts there going to be but the main story is in my head ..I will be updating when i get the time I will try to update every 2 week .
Hope you guys enjoy my New FF THe caracters are the same in the drama .
Enjoy
Vishaka =V
Radika=R
Dev=D
teacher=T
IN a small town called vridavan lived The shastri family .Shastriji had 2 daughters .Vishaka who was studying in designing and Radika who was beautiful .innocent ,cute and intelligent. She never went to college she really wanted to go.Shastriji let her go
He Knew she wanted to go into business and work in an office. She loved education tomorrow was radikas first day Radika was going in the same college as vishaka ..Radika could nt sleep the whole night

R:aaj mera pehla din hai muhje ashirvaad dehna kanha

V: Come on radika where getting late!!
(Radika was exactly looking like the first day dev saw her in choti bahu)

V: Hum ponchgayein hain !
Chalo mein tumhe college deckadethi houn R nods her head silently and follows Vishaka

Radika got carried away looking at the old graduated picturesin the hallway .Vishaka was keep on walking and talking .. Radika was lost was and started looking for Vishaka , she was feeling so scared and lonely She bumps into a guy and all her books fall down. The boy was DEV

D: tum chalkar nahi decksakti kya? saying little rudely

R: muhje shama kardijiye..saying nerveously
Radika was picking her books up dev felt bad and helped herHe suddenly glances at herand his heart skip a beat she was the prettiest girl he ever saw he could stopgazing at her lovingly..She had such mesmerizing eyes beatiful skin a cute innocent face she was gorgeous. RAdika had her gaze low cast she was getting so nerveous about her first day..

R: shukriya (Thank you)
Dev was about to say something

V: Are radika kahan rehgathi tum ?? asking worriedly ..Are dev tum meri bahein se mile ..You met my sis ?
Radika get up and starts walking to V with her head down

D:Tumhari pass ek bahein hai ?? asking surprisingly

V : of course its her first time in college she studying business
Radika tum janjti ho ke dev Sabse popular ladka hai humare college mein or sabse handsome bhi Sare ladkian uspe maarthi hain ..saying with a chuckle

D: come on vishaka!! That Not true ..Glancing once at RAdika

V: Im serious

Radika didnt seem to care she knew that he wasthose type of guys .he was handsome but she knew that he would never fall for a girl like her ..

V: anyways see you

D: Bye radika ..saying in a loving tone

RAdika glances up motionless

R: radhe radhe

Dev didnt now why she was affecting him soo much he smiles Boyishly .Suddenly he sees her payal on the floorhe smiles cutely putting it in his pocket .
Vishaka was telling radika about dev that hes from the PUROHIT family

V: You now dev went to america to study but he didnt like it there soo he came back to
india to finish his studies The PUROHITS have the biggest business in India
They live in Dehli..

R: I know his family every summer they come to the mandir and his dadi is such a sweet heart I like her very much But I nerver saw dev ?..

V: Radika hes not that type of guy he flirts around with a lot of girls
And ..Heres your classgood luck!

Radika enters the class room everyone is looking at her she was the only one wearing a shalwar kameez .She sees few couples kissing this was making her feel very uncomfortable she sits in the frontdesk alone .The teacher came in and started his class

D: Sorry im late I had something important to do ..grinning boyishly

T: take a seat Saying annoyingly

Radika was minding her own business Dev was looking for a seat in the back but it was full his gaze fell on RAdika who was sitting in the front alone with no one beside her ..He smiles happily and joins her..
Radika glances at the person beside her curiously
R: Aap ?'App meri class mein kya kare hein? asking surprisingly

D: Ye mera class hai... giving her a boyish smile
Radika continued her work she was the first one to finish the teacher was amazed by her intelligence..

D: meri maadat karo gi muhje kuch samaj nahi ara hai (Can you help me I don't understand a thing )


Radika liked helping people out

R: sure ! smilling sweetly

Dev was amazed by her smile he would pay a millions to see her smile again
Radika was explaining dev. She smelt like fresh strawberries making him get more attracted , he couldn't stop observing her beauty ..She was finally her explanations she was really good in calculus

D: thank you soo much you explain better than the teacher
Radika smiles cutely

D: if I fail this time my whole family is going to kill me ..
Radika laughed lightly

R;Mein tumhe fail hone nahi doon gi ! saying in a soft whisper so the teacher doesnt hear her

Dev loved the way radika keeps her self positive and gives him hope too succeed It looked like she was an angel sent by god just for him .
Dev was explaining radika his plans for the future

D: When I graduate im going back home to dehli and join my dads business I want to make them proud
Radika smiled and started to tell him her plan
While she was talking he was observing her first her eyes then her beautiful lips he saw radika wearing a purpleshalwar kammeez she looked innocent the way she talked and way she was so respectful he liked everything about her when radika was done she notice dev looking in her eyes she slowly looks in his eyes they where looking in each other eyes for a moment .

T: Class is over ..walking out the class room
Radika looks away uncomfortably and leaves the class Dev was still thinking about radika

Somebody called out DEV!!!

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bravo billo i can't wait for the next part u should have been the creative...GREAT JOB 👏👍🏼
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Good start.please continue.can't wait for the next part
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good start! i really like it! can't wait for the next chapter!
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Loved it👏👏👏 ...I'm hooked....Please update soon
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Thank you to all that liked my FF 😃
And thank you for the all the wonderful commentss😊
im done writting the whole story in my note book i just have to type it
II will update part 2 soon 😊
Edited by billo77 - 15 years ago
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awesome, please update soon. Waiting for it. 👏
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Enjoy!!😊
Part 2

Dev was lost in radika thoughts someone called out DEV!!
It was Natasha devs girlfriend '

N : Why didn't you come at the back ??

D: well there was no space 'He was saying it while looking for radika

N: Are you looking for that nerdy girl ??asking with a attitude

D: she not a nerdy girl saying angrily..Stroking his hair..Shes a different kind of girl..grinning cutely

N: oh please she's wearing shawar kammez to school

D : That's what makes her different from all the girls ..glancing around for Radika
Natasha just gave attitude and left ..

In the computer lab

Radika never used a computer before in her life for dev it was his favourite class
It was the only thing he was good at 'Radika was looking at the computer screen didn't now what to do..Dev sat beside her

D:I love computer classes ..glancing at RAdika excitedly

D: What's wrong ?? frowning his brows in wonderment

R: I never used a computer before saying embarrassingly

D: Never!!

R: never ...looking around worried

D: No problem radika main hoon na And besides I owe you one for helping me in calculus class..

Radika gave a light smile ..Dev took the whole class teaching radika ..Dev was surprise radika was a fast learner'

N: Are dev poura course tumne uski madaat ki hai Ab mera saat aona ..asking lovingly

She was about to kiss dev .. He moved his head and went back to explain radika..Radika was feelingawkward especially the way Natasha was looking at her ..

R: aap jayena Who aapka intazar kari hai na .. (saying politely)
(Its ok ill do it myself she waiting for you)

Dev looks at radika and leaves .. He didn't want to go but she said it so nicely he left ..
Radika was left alone doing her work..

Radika was done school she was leaving she saw Natasha all over Dev.. He looked annoyed ..He told her to stop ..

N: what's wrong with you today

D: Your getting annoying 'He was pist off because he wanted to stay and help radika

Radika passed by them holding her books and with her gaze lingering on he floor .. Dev heart started pasting fast when she passed by him ..

D: Radika wait up !!

Natasha couldn't believe her eyes .. And just watched dev running to radika

R: Aap .. Mein zara jaldi mein hoon (Saying nervously)

D: kya hua tum itni kabrayese kyun lagri ho??
( Why do you look soo worried)

R: aisa kuch nahi hai muhje jana hoga ..radika left in a hurry

D: Bye radika

Radika looked over her shoulders and left

Dev was wondering what was wrong with her 'Radika was uncomfortable seeing Natasha all over Dev ..That made her think that she should stay away from Dev..

At Shastri House

V: how was your first day ???

R: It was ok ..At least I knew one person..

V:Who??

R: Dev he's in almost all my classes

V: radika you should stay away from him

R : I know but vishaka I see good qualities in him he might be that type of guy but I feel that inside his heart hes a really a good human being .And I want to help him ..I know
dadi would be proud if he graduates ..saying excitedly

V: Well good luck changing DEV .I would like to see how you succeed . And ya stay away from Natasha shes really possessive over Dev ..

R: I know .. It looks like Dev doesn't like her that much..frowning her brows in wonderment

V: well Radika he goes after all the prettiest girl ..I know him for 1 year

R: You never talked about him ?/

V: why would I ?? Hes just like the others

R : well..

V: Anyways im going to bed Good night

R: Good night..smiling sweetly

Radika was about to go in bed she felt something missing on her ankles she lifted her kameez seeing her payal was missing

R: meri payal kahan gi ??? saying innocently



Edited by billo77 - 15 years ago

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